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UPDATE 119

Mama aur maasi ki chusai chataai ho chuki thhi, dono alag hoke apne ghutnon pe khade hoke ek dusre se badan sataake kiss karne lage.

Maasi: Maza aa gaya..

Mama: Tu jhadi na ek baar..

Maasi: Haan aapke moonh mein..

Babuji aur chachi bhi alag ho gaye, babuji ka lund ab bhi chachi ke haath mein thha, dono ek dusre ke honth choos rahe thhe.

Sasur: Kaise legi Radhika..

Chachi: Aapko kaise chodna hai, chodiye..

Mama: Bhaiyya, Radhika ko yahaan dijiye, aap Kalpana ko chodiye..Paniya gayi hai yeh bhi..

Chachi: Chaliye, aap Kalpana ko hi le lijiye, main raat ko chudwaaungi aapse..

Chachi Mama ke paas aa gayi aur maasi babuji ke paas.

Sasur: Kalpana, mere lund pe baitth jaa..

Maasi ne chit lete huey babuji ke lund pe baitthna shuru kiya, chachi mama ke neeche aa gayi.

Mama: Radhika, apni taangein baandh de meri kamar se, kass ke lene milega..

Chachi: Aap ghusaaiyye, main baandh dungi..

Mama chachi ki chut mein apne lund ko dubo diye, chachi ne taangein baandh di, babuji bhi maasi ko neeche se pelne lage. 

Mayuri bhabhi papa ki gotiyaan nigal rahi thhi, papa bhi sursuraake uski chut paniya rahe thhe. Dono ke moonh ek saath hatt gaye, Mayuri bhabhi utthi.

Mayuri: Baitthoon aapke lund pe..

Papa: Tu neeche aati toh jamm ke chodta tujhe..

Raunak: Mayuri ko baitthne dijiye aapke lund pe bhaiyya, kum mehnat lagegi..

Maa: Haan, baitthne dijiye Mayuri ko..

Sasur: Arre Devika ab theek lag raha hai Deepak, chodne de Mayuri ke upar aake..

Papa: Ho gaya faisla tum sab mein ke main Mayuri ko kaise loon..Bol Mayuri, kya karoon..

Mayuri: Upar se hi lijiye bhaiyya..Mujhe bhi maza aayega..

Papa ne samay barbaad nahin kiya, Mayuri pe chadh gaye, maa ke upar Raunak chadh gaya, maa papa ki taraf dekhi.

Maa: Theek lag raha hai na aapko..

Papa: Mayuri se poocch use kaise lag raha hai..

Raunak: Kaise lag raha hai Mayuri..

Mayuri: Maza aa raha hai bhaiyya ke lund se..Aap bhi bhabhi ko maza dijiye..

Maa: Yeh toh de hi raha hai..

Mami utthi chacha ke lund se.

Mami: Rohit chod de, ab raha nahin jaata..

Meri saas ne Rohit ke lund ko chhod diya, Rohit utthke Mami ki taangon ko chauda karke apna supaada chut pe ghasne laga, Beena chacha ke moonh se unke lund pe aa gayi, aur meri saas unse alag hoke unke bhai, yaane mama ke paas aa gayi, Maasi jhadd rahi thhi, mama use jhada rahe thhe, meri saas unki bagal mein let gayi, mama maasi ko jhada chuke thhe.

Maasi: Goli khaake aaye ho kya? Jhada diya jhatke mein..

Mama: Ab didi ki baari hai, use bhi jhada doon..

Saas: Aaja Deepesh, zara mera kaam bhi bana de..

Mama Maasi ki chut se lund nikaalke meri saas mein ghused diye, babuji chachi ko jhada chuke thhe, unka kaam hua nahin thha, papa aur Mayuri saath jhadne waale thhe, maa bhi jhad rahi thhi, Maa ka ho gaya, Raunak ne apna lund baahar kheench liya, maa papa aur Mayuri ko dekhne lagi, dono jhad rahe thhe. Beena chacha ke upar thhi, Raunak uske peechhe gaya.

Raunak: Beena, daal doon gaand mein..

Beena: Daal dijiye, bhaiyya..

Raunak Beena ki gaand mein ghus gaya, ek ek karke sab jhad gaye thhe, sab gaadiyon pe, thak ke pade huey thhe, babuji utthke baitth gaye.

Sasur: Raunak, shaam ko kuch whisky ka intezaam hai kya..

Raunak: Hai bhaiyya, sab laake rakh diye hain..Aapka dil jab kare tab keh dijiye..

Sasur: Deepak, tut oh nahin lega na..

Papa: Devika lene degi toh lunga..

Maa: Do peg le hi lijiye, ab aap pehle jaise theek lag rahein hain..

Mama meri saas ke upar lete huey thhe, Rohit aur mami ek dusre ki baahon mein thhe, yahaan ab sab ko thoda aaraam karna thha, saadhe teen baj rahe thhe dopahar ke.

Mere ghar pe Prem aur Seema apne kamre mein thhe, Pulkit aur bhabhi andar aaye.

Pulkit: Kya kar rahein hain jab se tum dono..Hum neechhe intezaar kar rahe thhe..

Seema: Bhaiyya, aise hi baitthe thhe..Humein laga aap dono khaane ke baad thoda aaraam karenge..

Bhabhi: Aaraam kya karna Seema, in dono ne thakaaya kahaan hai abhi tak..

Pulkit aur bhabhi bistar pe aa gaye. 

Prem: Shekhar bhaiyya ka phone aaya thha bhaiyya, woh aur didi, Purab aur Neha, Apu aur Janak sab saath mein aayenge shaam ko..Chhe saath bajj jaayenge..

Pulkit: Theek hai, aane de jab aana hai, papa ki tabiyat bhi theek hai, sab lage huey hain wahaan..

Seema: Hum chaaron ko ek saath chudai kare huey kaafi samay ho gaya na..

Bhabhi: Usi ke liye toh aayein hain..Mera devar yahaan de, aur tu inhein sambhaal..

Pulkit: Priya hi bula na, hum chaaron ke beech kya sharam yaar..Naam le..

Prem: Inhe chalega..

Bhabhi: Ek baar bula toh sahi..

Prem: Priya..

Bhabhi aur Seema hans pade.

Seema: Itna darr darr ke bola, ab darr ke chudai mat karna..

Bhabhi kapde utaarne lagi, baaki teeno ne bhi jaldi dikhaayi. Prem ghutnon ke bal bhabhi ke paas aaya aur uski chuchiyaan dono haathon se ek dusre ke kareeb laake dono nipples baari baari choosne ur chaatne laga, bhabhi ne uske baal kass liye.

Bhabhi: Kaat..Sirf choos mat, aur daba zor se..

Seema apni shorts utaarne khadi ho gayi bistar pe, Pulkit nanga ho chuka thha, usne Seema ko paltaaya aur uski taangon se uski shorts nikaal di, uski gaand ko halke se choomte huey, Seema samajh gayi aur waise hi rahi, Pulkit ne uske peeche ghutnon ke bal Seema ko thoda jhukaaya aur uski gaand pe haath rakhke khol diya, apni naak usne daraar mein ghusedi, Seema kasmasa gayi, Pulkit ne apni zabaan nikaali aur usi chut ke honthon pe phiraayi.

Prem bhabhi ko chit lita chuka thha, bhabhi ne apni taangein phailaake ek uski peetth pe rakh di thhi, Prem ab pet ke bal let ke uski chut soongh raha thha aur uske honth choom raha thha, bhabhi ka badan uske iss chhedne se hilne laga thha.

Bhabhi: Prem khol de meri chut ko, daal de apni zabaan andar, ragad de usse…

Prem: Shhhhh, bhabhi relax, maze lijiye..Kahin jaana hai kya…

Bhabhi: Jhaddna express pakadni hai…

Prem: Uss gaadi ko toh time hai…Kum se kum ek ghanta..

Bhabhi: Toh apna ghanta mere moonh ke paas kar de, main bhi kaam pe lag jaati hoon..

Prem uska chehra dekhke muskuraaya aur bistar pe apna nichhla badan bhabhi ke moonh ke paas laa diya, bhabhi ne uska aadha tana hua lund mutthi mein bhar diya. Aur uske supaade pe zabaan phiraayi.

Bhabhi: Jhaddna express ki confirmed ticket ab mere haath mein hai…

Bhabhi ki cell phone ki ghanti baji, lund moonh se nikla aur phone answer hua, Main thhi.

Main: Bhabhi, kitni der se ghanti baja rahi hoon, moonh mein kuch hona chaahiye, kaan mein nahin…

Bhabhi: Sunaayi nahin diya kuch Veena, ruk kholti hoon..Shekhar hai saath ya tu akeli hai..

Main: Akeli..

Bhabhi towel baandh ke neeche aayi aur main andar aa saki.

Main: Towel mein..Kya scene hai..

Bhabhi: Shaam ke main show se pehle trailer chal raha thha..

Main: Tum chaaron mein?

Bhabhi: Aur kya..Chal upar, Shekhar kyun nahin aaya..

Main: Shaam ko sab ko leke aayega, Purab ke saath koi kaam se gaya hai..

Bhabhi: Acchha, Purab jiju aur uski acchhi ban rahi hai..Hai na?

Main: Haan, jum gaye hain dono..Apu bhi saath gaya hai, koi property ka scene hai..

Bhabhi: Chal apna scene banaate hain…

Hum andar aaye kamre mein, Pulkit laga pada thha Seema ki daraar mein, par mere aate moonh nikaal liya, Prem nanga bistar pe pade un dono ko dekh raha thha.

Pulkit: Hi Veena, Baaki sab kahaan hain…

Main: Aayenge shaam ko ikatthe, main akeli bore ho rahi thhi, isiliye aa gayi..

Prem: Acchha kiya didi, chaar se bhale paanch..

Main: Arre tum chaaron lage raho..

Seema: C,mon didi, join karo naa, ek baar ho jaaye..

Ab itna zidd kar rahe thhe sab, aur mujhe bhi kahaan nahin join karna thha, bhabhi khud hi mere kapde utaarne lagi.

Bhabhi: Chal abhi naatak mat kar..Chadh jaa bistar pe, bahut dino se tujhe chakha nahin hai..

Prem chit leta hua thha, Maine uski taangon ke beech position le li, Pulkit aur Seema bhi ab let chuke thhe, Bhabhi mere peeche aayi aur meri gaand khol di aur apna moonh meri daraar mein ghusa di. Maine Prem ko choosna shuru kiya. Pulkit ka lund Seema choosne lagi.

Pulkit: Prem, sharaab ka kya scene hai..

Prem: Yeh khatam karke jaata hoon lene bhaiyya..Thode snacks bhi le aata hoon..

Pulkit: Gaanja???

Bhabhi: Tum log gaanja peene waale ho!!!!!

Seema: Sharaab aur gaanja, zyaada nahin hoga…

Pulkit: Thoda thoda, aaj sirf hum hi hai naa..Thoda enjoy kartein hain..Purab aur Apu bhi letein hain, aaj mamaji gaon mein hai toh Apu ko chance milega maarne..

Pulkit ka lund tan chuka thha, Seema utthi uski taangon ke beech se utthi.

Seema: Bhaiyya, peecche se lo, aapki patni ko chaatna hai…

Pulkit: Ghoom jaa..

Seema ghoomi aur ghodi ban gayi, Prem Pulkit ko peechhe usmein ghusaate dekh raha thha, Seema jhuki bhabhi ki taangon ke beech, bhabhi uske liye ghoom chuki thhi, meri chut pe chipke huey. Ek hisaab se hum paanchon judd gaye thhe.

Kuch der Seema ki thhukaai chalti rahi Pulkit ke lund se, woh ek baar jhadd bhi chuki thhi, dono alag huey, Pulkit ko alag hote dekh main bhi Prem se alag hui, main bistar pe sarak ke Pulkit ke paas chali gayi, woh chit tan ke leta hua thha, main uske kamar pe chadhi uska lund pakde huey. Prem utth gaya aur apna lund bhabhi ke moonh mein ghused diya. Pulkit ka lund ab mere andar thha, aur main uspe jhuki hui thhi. Uski aankhon mein dekhte huey, muskuraa rahi thhi.

Pulkit: Kya, Kyun muskuraa rahi hai..?

Main: Khush ho na bhaiyya aaj Janak aa rahi hai…

Pulkit muskuraaya aur haan mein sar hila diya.

Pulkit: Haan yaar Veena..Kamaal ki hai..

Main: Bhabhi ko bolun..

Pulkit: Teri bhabhi ko kya bolegi, woh toh Apu aur Purab ke aane ka intezaar kar rahi hai..

Main: Tum dono mast Jodi ho..

Pulkit: Hum sab hi mast hain..Gaanja peeke aur ho jaayenge..

Main: Chodo mujhe bhaiyya, Janak ke baare mein sochke..

Pulkit: Tujhe aur teri bhabhi ko main kisi aur ke baare mein sochke chod hi nahin sakta hoon..

Main upar neechhe karne lagi, aankhein bandh ho gayi meri, bas maze ka ehsaas thha. Prem, bhabhi aur Seema ne bhi position badal di, Prem chit let gaya, bhabhi uske lund pe chadh gayi aur Seema uske moonh pe. Uh Uh Uh huhn Aaaaahhh oooohhh ki aawaazein kamre mein gunhjne lagi, ek ek karke sab jhaddne lage.

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UPDATE 120

Subah hui whatsapp ke message se. Padha, phir padha, dimaag hila, utth ke baitth gayi. Aise hi bhaag ke Pulkit ke room mein gayi aur apne kapde pehen liye, shorts zameen pe thhi aur T-shirt shaayad bistar ke neeche. Bhabhi toh shaayad rasoi mein thhi, time dekha toh gyaarah baj rahe thhe, Pulkit bathroom se nikla.

Pulkit: Arre subah subah yahaan..Chhutti le liya maine..

Main daudke uske paas chali gayi aur use message bataaya. Usne padha, “Reached Mumbai, taking connecting flight to Kanpur, will reach late tonight”.

Pulkit: Arre waah..Yeh toh acchhi khabar hai..Shekhar Mumbai pahunch gaya..

Pulkit mera chehra dekh raha thha, main chup chaap nikli wahaan se, laash jaisi. Prem ke kamre mein gayi aur naha dho liya, haath pair mein taakat nahin thhi. Change karke seedha chhat pe chali gayi. Chup chaap, bahut kuch, aur kuch bhi nahin sochte khadi rahi. Dimaag ghoom raha thha. Pulkit bhaiyya mujhe dhoondhte dhoondhte upar aa gaye. Mere paas, chhat ki deewaar se tek ke khadi hog aye, mere chehre ko dekhte.

Pulkit: Kya hua..Tu khush nahin hai Shekhar aaj raat aa raha hai..?

Main chup rahi, saamne dekhte.

Pulkit: Kya baat hai..

Main ab bhi chup rahi.

Pulkit: Tujhe aisa toh nahin lag raha ke tu ne koi galti kar di..

Maine Pulkit ke chehre ko dekha aur naa mein sar hila di.

Pulkit: Dekh meri baat Aakash se hui thhi, usne kaha usme, Shekhar aur Sandhya mein threesome hua thha..

Main: Bhaiyya main Shekhar se koi badla nahin le rahi thhi..Mujhe yeh sab acchha laga, isiliye maine kiya..

Pulkit: Toh problem kya hai..

Main: Mujhe bataana padega Shekhar ko..Kaise bataaun, samajh mein nahin aa raha hai..

Seema: Nahi bataaogi..

Main peecchhe mudi toh Seema aur uske saath bhabhi khadi thhi.

Main: Paagal ho gayi hai tu..Mujhe bataana padega..

Pulkit: Sahi keh rahi hai Veena..Bataana padega use..Hamaare beech kuch chhupa nahin rehna chaahiye..

Seema: Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye..

Pulkit: Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye..Badi se badi baat hum share karenge ek dusre se..Aur agar kuch bura hota hai, toh uska sudhaar bhi karenge..Sudhaar hi sabse badi maafi hoti hai..

Bhabhi: Pehle uski baat toh sun lo..

Hum teeno bhabi ke taraf dekhe.

Bhabhi: Veena, tum Shekhar ke saath sirf do mahina rahi ho, phir woh America chala gaya..Uske baare mein tum itna nahin jaanti jitna Seema jaanti hai..

Main: Joh bhi ho..Mujhe bataana hai bhabhi..Phir uski marzi..

Seema: Kya bataaogi bhabhi..Ke tum Prem, Pulkit bhaiyya, apne papa aur mere papa ke saath..

Pulkit: Tumhaare papa matlab..Iske sasur..Yeh kab hua..

Bhabhi: Ab maine poochhna chhod diya hai yeh sawaal..

Seema: Bhabhi…

Bhabhi: Sorry..

Seema: Pulkit bhaiyya aap hi kaho, agar aisi sachhaai aapko bhabhi bataaye, toh aapka kya reaction hoga..Aur aapka hi kyun, Prem ka bhi reaction waisa hi hota..Kahiye..

Pulkit: Pata nahin main kaise react karta..

Seema: Dekha Veena bhabhi..Sacchhaai acchhi hai, aur hamaare beech kuch chhupa nahin hona chaahiye, par sach kab aur kaise bataana, woh samajhna zaroori hai, taaki rishte sambhle..Ek jhatke mein tootein nahin..Main aapko rok nahin rahin hoon, aap sach bataaiyye Shekhar bhaiyya ko, par abhi nahin..Mere bolne pe..

Main: Aur tu kya karegi tab tak..

Seema: Apne pariwaar pe chhod do bhabhi..

Pulkit: Pariwaar..Pariwaar matlab main bhi..Mujhe kya karna hoga..

Bhabhi: Aap ko bata denge..Filhaal chup rahiye..

Main: Dekho Seema, yeh sab plan wagairaah, yeh sab fail ho jaatein hain..Sach sach hota hai..Aur use samay pe hi bataana chaahiye..

Seema: Toh theek hai bata dena..Main kuch nahin kahungi..Phir joh hota hai dekha jaayega, par kya meri ek baat rakhogi bhabhi..

Main: Bol..

Seema: Sunday ko maa babuji farmhouse jaa rahein hain aur hum sab bhi, Prem aur meri baat karne..Kya aap Sunday ke baad bata sakti hain bhaiyya ko..

Main: Agar Shekhar mujhse naaraaz ho gaya toh woh tumhaari aur Prem ki shaadi bhi nahin hone dega..

Seema: Woh Prem aur mujhpe chhod dijiye..Bas aap apni baat Sunday ke baad bataaiyye bhaiyya ko..

Maine haan mein sar hila diya. Seema mere paas aayi aur mere gaal pe haath rakkha.

Seema: Aap ne mere papa aur maa ki zindagi lautaayi hai..Unki beti kya aapka bura hone degi..

Main bas uska chehra dekhte reh gayi, saala hum sach mein ek thhe. Bas Shekhar ka judna baaki thha. Aur yeh samajhna thha ke meri nanad ke dimaag mein kya chal raha hai.

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UPDATE 121

Hum ne thodaaaraam kiya, Prem nahaake dhoke snacks aur sharaab ka intezaam karne gaya, peechhe ka room bhabhi, main aur Seema set kar rahe thhe, AC on kar diya thha, Pulkit toh sota hi raha.

Gaon mein sab ne lambi neend ki, ek ek karke sab chhe baje tak utth gaye aur fresh hone lage, Rohit ne car ka intezaam kiya thha, sab sair ke liye nikle. Gaon se thodi door nadi thhi, wahi sab shaam ko jaa baithhe, snacks saath liye thhe. Acchhi outing ho gayi.

Saath baje Shekhar aa gaya Purab aur Neha, aur Apu aur Janak ko leke, maine hi darwaaza khola, bhabhi aur Seema aangan mein hi thhe Pulkit aur Prem ke saath. Shekhar ne gaal pe kiss kiya aur gaya seedha bhabhi aur Seema se milne, Purab mere gale laga.

Main: Kaise hain Jiju, aaj itne busy ke yahaan bhi late..

Purab: Sab kaam nipta diye Veena, taaki koi disturb na kare..

Apu ne bhi gale lagaaya mujhe. Purab chala baaki sab se milne.

Apu: Need a bath sis! Saara din ghooma hoon, change of clothes bhi laaya hoon…

Main: Kisi bhi kamre mein le lo..No problem..

Prem: Hey dude yeh dekh..

Apu: Baap re..Gaanja..Yeh toh kamaal ho gaya..

Prem: Baap ko mat yaad kar, nahin toh aa jaayenge..

Apu: Nahi aayenge bhai, aaj koi hisaab se nahin aayenge, wahaan bhi poora intezaam hai…Suna maasi bhi wahaan hai, toh koi chance nahin..

Pulkit: Ghar mein aur ek shaadi hone waali hai, Pratima ki..Get ready..

Purab: Priya, shower toh mujhe bhi lena hai, fresh ho jaaunga..

Bhabhi: Aao jiju, mere kamre mein naha lo..

Neha: Yeh nahin kaha, saath nehla bhi dena..

Bhabhi: Yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai didi..Utna toh karna padega..

Janak: Veena bhi toh gayi hai Apu ke saath, ab sab ek dusre ko nehlaane baitth jaayenge toh ho gayi party…

Pulkit: Tumhein toh nahin nahaana na Janak..

Janak: Nahin bhaiyya, yahaan aayi hoon sab nipta ke..

Bhabhi ne shower on kar diya, Purab kapde utaarne laga, bhabhi shorts aur T-shirt mein thhi, Purab ko nanga hote dekh rahi thhi.

Purab: Dekh rahi kya ho Priya..Aaao na..

Bhabhi: Maine naha liya thha..

Purab: Nahaane ke liye thodi na keh raha hoon..Come..

Bhabhi: Arre ruko, kapde bheeg jaayenge..Utaarne do jiju..

Purab: Baad mein kapdon ki kya zaroorat padegi..Hum peechhe ke kamre mein toh jaane waale hain..

Bhabhi: Haan par utaarne toh do…

Bhabhi bhi nangi ho gayi, Purab shower ke neeche khada thha, bhabhi ne use join kiya, usne bhabhi ko paltaaya aur uske peeche khada hoke uske kandhe ko choomne laga, bhabhi ne apna haath peeche leke uska lund pakad liya.

Purab: You’re beautiful Priya..

Bhabhi: Aap bhi toh bade sexy ho jiju..

Dono ke honth mile, Purab ka ek haath bhabhi ki chuchiyon se utar ke uske jhaanton mein gaya.

Purab: Shave..

Bhabhi: Aaj nahin, kal..

Purab: Theek hai..Fuck..Ya woh bhi kal..

Bhabhi muskuraayi.

Bhabhi: Phir baad mein kya karoge, baad ke liye kuch rakkho..Ab bas masti karo jiju..

Purab: Theek hai, jaisa saali kahe..

Dono bas ek dusre ke badan se khelte rahe.

Maine Apu ko shower on karke de diya, usne mujhe andar kheencha, main shorts aur sleeveless t-shirt mein thhi, hum dono kiss karne lage.

Main: Tumhaari patni aa gayi toh..

Apu: Tumhaara pati chhodega use..

Main: Nahin..Mera bhai aur pati dono chodenge use, chhodenge nahin..

Apu: Wahi toh woh chaahti hai, aur main bhi..Aaj sahi mein enjoy karna hai..

Main: Acchha ab mujhe chhodo, kaam hai..

Apu meri gaand shorts ke andar haath ghusaake pakad liya thha, meri baahein ab bhi uske gale mein bandhi thhi aur uska lund tan chuka thha, baar baar woh mere honthon ko choome jaa raha thha.

Apu: Chaddi utaaro na Veena, ek baar let me feel you..

Main: Kitni baar toh feel kar chuke ho, baad mein chodo na, poori raat padi hai…

Apu: Theek hai..

Main: Naaraaz ho..?

Apu: Nahi baba, Par sabun toh laga do..

Main: Theek hai..

Maine sabun liya aur uske seene pe lagaane lagi, woh mujhe ghoor raha thha, meri T-shirt ab chuchiyon se chipak chuki thhi, usne ek side se meri ek chuchi baahar nikaal li aur mere nipple ko do ungliyon mein meesne laga.

Main: Tum nahin maanoge naa..

Apu: Main toh bas nipple daba raha hoon..Aur kya, tum sabun lagaao..

Main ab neeche uske lund pe sabun lagaane lagi, usne meri T-shirt utaarna shuru ki.

Main:Ab yeh kya hai..

Apu: Utaarna toh padegi tumhe bhi, bheeg joh gayi hai..

Main: Phir tum chaddi bhi yehi kehke utaaroge naa..

Apu: Na, uske liye jhukna padega, agar maine jhukke nikaali toh mera moonh tumhaari chut mein ghus jaayega, phir tum kahogi ki baad mein..

Main: Tum hai na bade kharaab ho..Nikaalo chaddi..Jhukke..

Apu muskuraake mere honthon ko choom liya aur meri nipple ko chooste huey apn e haathon se meri chaddi utaarne laga, ghutnon ke bal ho gaya aur apna moonh meri chut se sata diya, maine apni ek taang uske kandhe pe Chadha di aur uska ek haath upar meri ek chuchi pe aa gaya. Woh ab mujhe pyaar se chaatne laga aur main uske baalon ko pakadke uske honth apni chut ke honthon pe daba rahi thhi. 

Neeche aangan mein Pulkit, Neha aur Janak baitthe huey thhe. Pulkit shorts mein hi thha, Neha aur Janak bhi waise hi thhe, Pulkit dono ke beech mein baittha hua thha ek sofe pe aur Prem saamne Seema ki madad leke gaanja bhar raha thha cigarettes mein. Pulkit ka ek haath Janak ke T-shirt ke andar uski peetth sehla raha thha, aur neha ka haath Pulkit ki jaangh sehla raha thha. Teeno Prem ko dekh rahe thhe.

Janak: Prem humein gaanja pila ke tunn na kar de, phir sex ka maza nahin aayega..

Prem: O bhabhi, yeh sab Pulkit bhaiyya aur aapke pati ka idea hai, mera nahin, main toh chudai mein hi khush hoon..

Neha: Theek hai na Janak, Pulkit aur Apu tunn ho gaye toh Prem hai na..Sab ko sambhaal lega..

Seema: Shaayad isiliye Prem bhi zyaada hi bhar raha hai sab ke cigarette mein..

Sab hans pade, Purab aur bhabhi baahar aaye, dono nange thhe, Purab ka haath bhabhi ki kamar mein thha.

Pulkit: Ek round ho gaya kya?

Bhabhi: Sirf masti..Aur kuch nahin..Chalo na sab peechhe, ek round ho hi jaaye..Janak ke kapde abhi tak nahin utaare Pulkit..Itna yaad kar rahe thhe use aur Neha ko..

Janak: Bhaiyya humein yaad kar rahe thhe?

Purab: Yaad kiya dil se, toh beech mein baitthein hain dono ke, dua kabool ho gayi, baaki ki dua peechhe ke kamre mein poori hogi..

Janak: Apu aur Veena bhabhi kea aye tak main inki thodi si dua yahin kabool karwaati hoon..

Bhabhi: Haan shuru ho jaao, hum toh samjhe thhe chudai shuru ho gayi hogi, isiliye nange hi baahar aaye..

Janak jhuk ke Pulkit ka lund shorts se baahar nikaal di aur choosne lagi, Purab aur bhabhi Prem aur Seema ke paas baitth gaye, Neha ne Pulkit ki shorts unki taangon se aazaad kar di, aur khud ka T-shirt utaar di, kisi ne na bra na panty pehni thhi.

Pulkit: Shorts bhi utaar do Neha..Aur Janak ki bhi…

Purab bhi khada ho gaya bhabhi ke saamne.

Purab: Suck my cock Priya..

Bhabhi ne Purab ka lund moonh mein liya aur uski gaand pe dono haath rakh diye.

Seema: Prem yahaan sab shuru ho gayein hain, main Apu aur didi ko laati hoon..

Itne mein main aur Apu aa hi gaye thhe, nange.

Apu: Arre hamaare bagair..

Janak: Tum toh maze kar ke aa gaye ho humein yahaan bitthaake..

Apu: Arre kuch nahin kiya, sirf chaata Veena ko..

Neha: Prem ka hota hai toh peechhe chaltein hain, I’m hot…

Prem: Mera ho gaya Neha didi, chaliye..

Shekhar bhi fresh hoke aa gaya aur Prem ki madad karne laga.

Apu Seema aur Prem ke paas aaya, Seema ko sofe pe haath deke khada kar diya aur uske kamar mein haath baandh diye.

Apu: Prem, don’t mind na..

Prem: Enjoy..

Main Prem ko haath deke uttha diya aur Shekhar ko bhi.

Main: Chal bhai, garam ho gayi hoon..Aaj bhai aur pati se saath chudana hai..

Prem khada ho gaya, cigarettes le liye, Pulkit ne Janak aur Neha ko khada kiya aur dono ke kamar mein haath baandh ke peechhe jaane laga, Purab aur bhabhi bhi jaane lage, Prem aur Shekhar ki baahein meri kamar mein thhi. Kamra thanda ho gaya thha. Gaadiyaan bicchhi hui thhi. Bhabhi aur Purab garam ho chuke thhe, Purab chit letke bhabhi ko ulta karke apne upar le liya aur 69 ke position mein apna kaam shuru kar diya. Seema aur Apu bhi usi position mein let gaye ek gaadi pe. Pulkit chit let gaya aur Janak uski taangon ke beech aake uska lund choosne lagi, Neha Pulkit ke moonh pe baitthi thhi, main chit let gayi aur Prem mujhe chaatne laga, Shekhar ghutnon ke bal mere moonh ke paas aake mujhse chuswaane laga. 

Kamre mein chusai aur chataai ki aawaazein gunjhne lagi. Slrrrp slrrrppp karke sabke moonh chal rahe thhe, Shekhar meri chuchiyaan daba raha thha.

Wahaan gaon mein sab ghar aa gaye thhe sair karke, drinks ban na shuru ho gaye thhe.

Pratima aur Gaurav shaam ko ghar laute, Gaurav ke pita Vikram Singh ne Gaurav ko bata diya ke Dilli ka program cancel hua. Panchami apne bedroom mein thhi aur Vikram Singh Aangan mein, Pratima Panchami se milne aayi.

Panchami: Aa, yeh necklace aakhri baar pehen ke dekh rahi thhi…

Pratima: Aakhri baar kyun maa…

Panchami: Shaadi ke baad tu pehnegi…

Pratima: Saare zevar mujhe de dogi maa, toh aap kya pehnogi…

Panchami: Khushi…Sirf khushi..Kya zevar usse zyaada kimti hai…

Pratima: Main bhi toh wahi chaahti hoon maa, yeh zevar se kya hoga..Aapke paas rahein ya mere paas, kya farak padhta hai, rahenge toh ghar mein hi naa..

Panchami: Kahaan se seekhi hai aisi baatein karna…

Pratima: Aapse..

Panchami: Mere se? Maine kab…

Pratima apni hone waali saas ke kandhe pe haath rakh di peeche se.

Pratima: Maa..Chhodna..Kya baatein leke baitthi hain aap bhi..Gaurav apne neele rang waale blazer ko dhoondh raha thha…

Panchami: Woh toh cupboard mein hai uske..Jaana kahaan hai use..

Pratima: Uske dost ki bachelor party..

Panchami: Bachelor party?

Pratima: Maa jab bhi kisi ladke ya ladki ki shaadi hone waali rehti hai toh ladka ya ladki apni aazaadi ka aakhri din party deke manaatein hain..

Panchami: Pata hai, par tu itni aazaadi kyun de rahi hai Gaurav ko, pata hai na waisi partiyon mein kya hota hai..

Pratima: Kya hota hai maa..

Panchami: Ladkiyaan aati hai, sharaab peeya jaata hai, aur pata nahin kya kya..

Pratima: Toh…?

Panchami: Toh tu apne pati ko baant sakti hai…?

Pratima: Maa baanta toh aapne bhi hai naa..

Panchami: Maine kya baanta..?\

Pratima: Papa ko…

Panchami: Kya?

Pratima: Haan maa aaj subah jab papa aur aap ne mujhe aur Gaurav ko dekha, toh aap baant hi toh rahi thhi papa ko..Kyunki mujhe dekhne ke baad aap dono ke beech hua, woh meri wajah se hua, hai naa..Papa ne mera hi chehra dekhke…

Panchami soch mein padh gayi use dekhte huey.

Pratima: Maa baanta kayi tareekon se jaaya jaata hai..

Panchami: Par main unhein..

Pratima: Kya maa, khul ke bol na..

Panchami: Dekh, agar aaj raat uss party mein Gaurav kisi ladki ke saath…Toh…Woh baantna alag hoga naa, tera…

Pratima: Maa baantna baantna hota hai, aisa khaao ya waisa…

Panchami: Nahi, Gaurav shareer se kisi ke saath kuch karega…

Pratima: Maa aisa khaao ya waisa..Shareer toh aapka thha, phir bhi papa mere baare mein soch rahe thhe, Gaurav shaayad mere baare mein soche kisi aur ke saath kuch karte huey…Baandh toh aap papa ki soch ko bhi nahin sakte, naa hi main main Gaurav ki soch ko, toh hum baandhe hi kyun, khula chhod de naa…

Panchami: Tu sach mein Gaurav ko baant sakti hai..

Pratima: Haan maa, agar woh chaahta hai toh…Agar main use baandh ke rakhungi, ya har lamhe ka hisaab loongi, toh use ghutan hogi, jhooth bolne lagega woh mujhse, phir door ho jaayega, aahista aahista hamaare beech sab bandh ho jaayega..Kya faayda hai aise rishte ka jahaan pati apni patni ko hisaab de aur patni uske pati ko..Bandish hai woh, rishta nahin..

Panchami: Tu kehna kya chaahti hai Pratima…

Pratima: Kehna nahin, sawaal poochhna chaahti hoon maa…

Panchami: Poochh…

Pratima: Maa, aapko papa ne mujhe dekh ke haath lagaaya, paanch saalon se aap dono ke beech kuch nahin hua thha…Kya aap nahin chaahengi ke papa hamesha aapke saath chipke rahein, aapko shaareerik such dein, aur khud maze lein…

Panchami: Chaahungi..Hamesha chaahungi…

Pratima: Toh mujhe ek ladki ki tarah dekhiye, bahu ki tarah nahin, Gaurav ko ek ladke ki tarah dekhiye, bete ki tarah nahi, aur papa ko apne premi ki tarah dekhiye, pati ki tarah nahin..Sab sahi ho jaayega..

Panchami: Theek se samjha Pratima..Jalebi mat bana..

Pratima: Maa aap Kolkata mein ek girls hostel mein rehti thhi naa..

Panchami: Haan toh..

Pratima ne apne honth uske honthon ke paas le gayi, Panchami peechhe hui.

Pratima: Maa itna toh tu ne hostel mein kiya hi hoga..Mujhe karne de..

Pratima apne honth uske honth pe rakh di. Panchami pehle toh hichkichaayi, phir chipki rahi. Pratima ne uski zabaan uske moonh mein daali, dono ne ek dusre ki zabaan choosi, phir alag huey.

Pratima: Maa, ab tu ne mujhe sirf ek ladki samajh ke kiss kiya…Bahu nahin, isiliye tu kiss kar saki..Ab Gaurav ko ek ladka samajh, beta nahin, aur apne pati ko premi, pati nahin..Phir dekh zindagi ka kitna maza aata hai..

Panchami: Tu chaahti hai main Gaurav ko..

Pratima: Maa, jab hamaare beech mein itni baatein hui hain, toh sab bol doon…

Panchami: Bol de..

Pratima: Maa tu in baaton se mera rishta chaahe tod de Gaurav ke saath, par main bol ke rahungi..

Panchami: Bol Pratima…

Pratima: Maa, Gaurav ke mobile mein bahut saare videos hain..Gaurav normal sirf tab hota thha jab woh apne mobile pe maa bete ke videos dekhta thha..Nahin toh woh kuch nahin kar paata..Jis din usne mere saath kuch kiya, uss din uske dimaag mein tu thhi..Main nahin, aur yehi sach hai..

Panchami: Kya…

Pratima: Haan maa..Maine bas uska saath diya, maan liya ke uske theek hone mein mujhe iss baat ka saath dena hoga..Woh mere andar thha, par dimaag mein uske tu thhi…

Panchami: Main…Main thhi…

Pratima: Haan maa, main use aapke saath baant sakti hoon, kya aap apne pati ko baant sakti hain..?

Panchami: Mera dimaag ghoom raha hai bahu..

Pratima: Maa..Dimaag se sochna bandh kar de, dil se soch..Tu aur main Gaurav aur papa ka acchha chaahtein hain..Bas..Aur maa, na Gaurav na papa humein kabhi bhi sach bataayenge apne baare mein..Jab tu mall mein jaati hai papa ke saath, kya woh dusri auraton ko nahin dekhte..?

Panchami: Dekhtein hain…

Pratima: Aur aap naaraaz hoti hain, hai naa..

Panchami: Haan..

Pratima: Maa ab yeh soch, agar woh kisi ladki ke baare mein sochein aur tub hi unka saath de, aur kahe, “Kaash hum teeno nange ek hi bistar mein hote”…Socha hai kabhi uss raat papa tujhe kitni zor se…

[b]Panchami chup rahi, sochne lagi, Pratima ko ghoorne lagi, Pratima ka haath uske blouse ke upar se uski chuchi sehla raha thha, nipple kadak ho chuke thhe.[/b]

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UPDATE 122

Pratima aur Panchami ab bhi dressing table ke paas baatein kar rahe thhe, Panchami dressing table ke stool pe baitthi thhi aur Pratima uske saamne usse chhote waale stool pe baitthi thhi. Panchami ke mann mein shaayad itna sab sunne aur samajhne ki kshamta nahin thhi, par woh koshishi kar rahi thhi, kisi bhi baat ko nakaara nahin kar rahi thhi. 

Panchami: Gaurav kya sach mein aise videos..

Pratima: Maa shaayad har ladka aisa karta hai..Ghar se hi toh seekhne aur samajhne ki shuruaat hoti hai..Koi apni behen ko kareeb se dekhta hai toh koi apni bhabhi ko, koi mami ko toh koi maasi ko..Aur maa isme galat kya hai..

Panchami: Tujhe ismein kuch galat nahin lagta? Ek ladka apni maa, behen ya bhabhi ke baare mein sochke..

Pratima: Maa kya yeh sahi hai ke wahi ladka kisi aur ke maa behen ya bhabhi ko dekhke galat kaam kare?

Panchami: Woh bhi sahi nahin hai Pratima…

Pratima: Toh tu bata maa, sahi kya hai…Kum se kum mujhse jhooth mat bol..

Panchami: Main jhootth bol rahi hoon tujhse…? Kya bol rahi hai tu..

Pratima: Maa tu jab hostel mein thhi, kya ladkon ki baat nahin hoti thhi, kya tere badan mein kuch hota nahin thha..Uss samay tu kya karti thhi maa..

Panchami chup rahi.

Pratima: Maa..Aaj tu khush hui ke tere aur papa ke beech kuch hua, joh paanch saal tak nahin hua thha…Par kal phir yeh ruk sakta hai naa..Gaurav aur mere saath bhi toh aisa kuch ho sakta hai jaisa papa aur tere beech hua..

Panchami: Haan..Shaadi ke baad kuch saal aakarshan rehta hai, phir zimmedaariyaan zindagi badal deti hain..Dheere dheere sab badal jaata hai..

Pratima: Aur agar na badle toh..

Panchami: Kaise nahin badlega..Ek mard ek aurat ke saath zindagi bhar toh aakarshit nahin rahega na, ek aurat bhi kab tak…

Pratima: Ab ki na asli baat maa..Reh saktein hain dono aakarshit, agar zindagi mein romaanch ho toh..Badlaav ho toh…

Panchami: Tu kya kehna chaahti hai meri maa, theek se bolegi..

Pratima ne Panchami ki tani hui nipple do ungliyon mein kass di aur phirse se uske honthon ko choom li, dono kuch second uljhe rahe, Panchami poora saath de rahi thhi, garam ho rahi thhi, usne apne honth alag kiye, uski aankhein madhosh thhi.

Panchami: Mat bhadka Pratima..Tere papa ka bharosa nahin hai, main jallti rahoongi, sambhaal nahin paaungi apne aap ko..

Pratima: Toh main hoon naa..

Panchami: Ab bol kya bolna chaahti thhi tu..

Pratima: Sunn paaogi maa..

Panchami: Haan, sunn paaungi…Maine yeh kabhi nahin socha thha ki meri hone waali bahu mere badan ko aise haath lagaayegi aur kiss..Par maine tera saath diya na ek saheli ki tarah..Toh sunn paaungi, suna..

Pratima: Maa, mere mausa aur mausi ki zindagi bhi papa aur tere jaisi ho gayi thhi..Phir sab badal gaya, aaj woh dono itna enjoy kartein hain ke maano woh abhi abhi shaadi kiye hain..Ya college mein hi hain..

Panchami: Aisa kya hua ke..?

Pratima: Maa tu ne mujhe saheli kaha, aur shaayad maana bhi, par yeh baat meri Gaurav se shaadi tudwa sakti hai..Tu ise hazam nahin kar paayegi..Shaayad mere pariwaar waalon ke prati teri soch gir jaaye maa..Tu galat soch baitthe..Par agar tu ne baat samajh ke apna li, toh zindagi itni khoobsoorat ban sakti hai, ke tu soch bhi nahin sakti..

Panchami: Kya tu yeh baat bata ke apni shaadi ko daav pe laga sakti hai..? 

Pratima: Maa meri shaadi daav pe lagegi, par agar teri aur papa ki zindagi badal jaaye, sudhar jaaye, tum dono khul ke sex kar sako, aur tu yeh na kahe ke “papa ka bharosa nahin, main jallti rahoongi”, toh yeh sauda mujhe manzoor hai..

Panchami ne Pratima ke honthon pe apne honth rakh diye, dono phir ek lambi kiss mein judd gaye, Pratima ne uski chuchi dabaayi aur uska haath apni chuchi pe rakh diya. Dono kuch second lage rahe, phir alag huey.

Pratima: Maa, aap chaahti hai naa ke papa aapko roz..

Panchami: Bol na..

Pratima: Chodein..

Panchami ne haan mein sar hilaaya, dheere se.

Pratima: Main bhi roz Gaurav se chudwaana chaahti hoon, subah utthte hi uske lund ko choosna chaahti hoon..Har aurat yehi chaahti hai..Aur mard yehi chaahta hai ki uski patni sab ko aakarshit kare..Hamesha..Jab tak use lagega ke baahar har mard uski patni ko dekhke mutth maarta hoga, tab hi woh ghar aake apni patni se aakarshit hoke chodega, yeh sochke ke use koi dusra chod raha hai..Ek mard ko romaanchit yehi baat sabse zyaada karti hai ke koi aur uski patni se aakarshit hota hai..Har mard ki yeh fantasy hoti hai ke life mein woh ek baar apni patni ko kisi dusre mard se chudwaate dekhe..Par har mard yeh haqeeqat mein badal nahin sakta..Par kuch mard aisa kartein hain..Iss soch ko haqeeqat mein badal ke enjoy kartein hain…

Panchami: Tere mausa mausi aisa kartein hain? Hai naa..

Pratima: Haan maa..

Panchami: Adla badli kartein hain baahar ke logon ke saath..? Hai naa?

Pratima: Baahar ke logon ke saath nahin..

Panchami ki aankhein badi ho gayi, kayi sawaal thhe uske chehre pe.

Panchami: Toh…? Kiske saath..?

Pratima: Ghar hi mein…

Panchami ka dimaag ghoomne laga, woh chup ho gayi, dang reh gayi, Pratima ka chehra ghoorne lagi.

Pratima: Kya tu aur main ek ghar ke nahin hain..Saas bahi nahi hai?

Panchami dekhte rahi, sunte rahi.

Pratima: Jab hum dono aisa kar saktein hain, toh ghar mein kisi aur ke saath kyun nahin…?

Panchami: Kiske saath?

Pratima: Sab ke saath..Koi baahar nahin hai, sab mile huey hain…Har ek…Maa tujhe kya lagta hai jab papa mere baare mein sochke tere saath thhe, toh kya woh wahi nahin kar rahe thhe..Kya tujhe nahin lagta ke unke dil mein yeh chaah jaagi hogi ke woh mujhe chodein…

Itne mein Gaurav kamre mein khatkhata ke aa gaya.

Gaurav: Maa woh neela waala blazer mil hi nahin raha hai, aana zara, late ho raha hai mujhe..

Panchami utthi aur ek nazar Pratima ko dekhke Gaurav ki madad karne chali gayi, Panchami kuch second baitthke baahar hall mein aayi, Vikram Singh T.V. pe news dekh rahe thhe.

Vikram: Pratima, tu bhi jaa rahi hai Gaurav ke saath..

Pratima: Nahi papa, bachelor party hai, main ghar chali jaaungi…

Panchami Gaurav ka blazer dhoondhke baahar aayi.

Panchami: Gaurav ko chhodke koi kahin nahin jaayega, itna acchha khaana bana hai ghar mein, aur waise bhi, Kalpana toh gaon gayi hai na, tu akeli ghar pe kya karegi, yahin ruk jaa..

Vikram: Haan Pratima, yahin ruk jaao, khaane ke baad ice cream khaane chalenge..

Panchami: Main khaana lagaati hoon, tum dono baatein karo…

Pratima ne Panchami ka chehra dekha, kuch alag sa swabhaav thha ab uska. 

Gaurav baahar aaya blazer pehne huey, party ke liye taiyyaar.

Vikram: Chalo Gaurav bhi aa gaya, khaana khaa lete hain..

Gaurav: Papa khaana toh Vishaal ke ghar hi hoga…Aap teeno khaa lijiye..Main raat bhar wahin rukunga..

Vikram: Theek hai bhai, agar teri patni ko koi objection nahin hai toh..

Gaurav: Papa use toh koi objection hai hi nahin, kaash shaadi ke baad bhi aisa hi rahe..

Pratima: Tumhein shaque hai kya?

Gaurav: Thodasa..

Vikram: Thoda toh pakad ke rakhna hi padega bahu ise..

Pratima: Nahi papa, zabardasti ki pakad mein nuksaan hai…Apni cheez hai, waapas yahin aana hai, bas main chaahti hoon key eh jab bhi mere paas aaye, toh khushi se aaye, yeh sochke nahin aaye ke “Yaar ghar pe maar padegi”…

Baap bete hans dete hain, Panchami khaana leke table pe aati hai.

Panchami: Thoda toh khaa ke jaa..

Gaurav: Nahin maa, wahin khaa loonga…

Pratima: Woh le liya..?

Gaurav: Kya?

Pratima: Woh…

Sab Pratima ki taraf dekhne lagtein hain.

Pratima: Arre mere purse mein reh gaye, main deti hoon..

Pratima ne apna purse khola aur bandh mutthi mein ek packet baahar nikaala, par woh uske haath se gir gaya, jaan boojh ke. Vikram aur Panchami ne woh zameen peg ire packet ko dekha, condoms thhe, Gaurav hadbada gaya, Pratima ne aaraam se use utthaaya aur Gaurav ke haath mein diya, Gaurav thoda gusse se Pratima ko dekh raha thha, Vikram aur Panchami toh nazrein churaane lage.

Pratima: Jaao enjoy karo..Yahaan sab bade hain..Koi bacchha nahin hai, enjoy yourself…

Gaurav chup chaap nazrein neechi rakkhke chala gaya, teeno table pe baitthke khaane lage, Panchami ka cell phone baja aur apni badi behen ka naam dekhke woh aadhe khaane pe se utthi aura lag hoke baat karne lagi. Vikram ab bhi Pratima se nazrein chura raha thha, aakhir kaar usne Pratima ki taraf dekha.

Vikram: I’m sorry…

Pratima ne aascharya se unka chehra dekha, phir apna haath unki hatheli pe rakkha.

Pratima: Kyun papa..?

Vikram: Woh…Woh..Main aur Panchami dekhna chaahte thhe Gaurav theek hai ya nahin, isiliye tumhein..Aur use…

Pratima: It’s okay papa..Main aapki bahu hoon, hum ek ghar mein rehtein hain, hum ek dusre se kuch bhi nahin chhupa saktein..Aapne toh sirf mera badan dekha hai papa, main toh har baat ko waise hi, bina jhijhak ke, bina sharmaaye aapke saamne rakhhna chaahti hoon..Aapke aur mere beech mein jhooth kabhi nahin aayega…Sab saamne, rahega..Khuli kitaab ki tarah…Jaise aapne woh condom ka packet dekha, waise hi…

Vikram: Tu ne khud se Gaurav ko woh packet diya…Agar woh use..

Pratima: Istemaal hi toh karne diya hai papa..

Vikram: Aur agar woh…

Pratima: Papa, aap Gaurav ki tarah sochiye…Hamaari shaadi nahin hui hai abhi tak, woh free hai kuch bhi karne ke liye..Agar main use chhootth doon aur condom bhi, toh kal subah use koi jhootth nahin kehna padega mujhse..

Vikram: Par shaadi ke baad toh aisa nahin karogi naa..?

Pratima: Kyun nahin karoongi papa, tab bhi aisa hi karoongi..Par shaayad woh kisi ke saath nahin jaaye..Aur agar gaya, toh bhi koi baat nahin…Insaan baahar hamesha toh nahin khaa sakta naa, par baahar khaayega toh hi toh pata chalega ke ghar ka khaana kitna swaadisht hai…

Panchami laut ke waapas aayi table pe.

Vikram: Sab theek…?

Panchami: Haan, theek hi hai, ghoomne jaa rahe hain Dilli Neena ki family…

Vikram: Hum bhi chalein Gaurav aur Pratima ki shaadi ke baad kahin..

Panchami: Haan chalenge in dono ko honeymoon pe bhejke..

Pratima: Saath chalenge sab maa..Aap dono bhi mana lena..

Panchami: Tere sasur chalenge toh mujhe kya problem hain..

Pratima: Kyun nahin chalenge papa maa…Papa abhi bhi chaalees ke upar ke nahin lagte..

Vikram ka seena chauda hua, unhonein Panchami ki taraf dekha, woh muskuraayi.

Panchami: Zyaada khush hone ki zaroorat nahin hai, bahu ki baat sunke..Asli baat toh mujhe pata hai..

Vikram: Kya asli baat bhai..Abhi bhi fit hoon, koi shikaayat hai kya mujhse?

Panchami: Ab bahu ke saamne moonh nahin khulwaayein..

Mazaak ki tarah hi baatein chal rahi thhi.

Pratima: Arre maa moonh kholo naa..Aap dono ko toh humse zyaada enjoy karna chaahiye, ek level zyaada, aap experienced ho…

Vikram: Arre ise apne bete se fursat mile toh na hum enjoy karenge..

Pratima: Bete ko toh maine sambhaal liya, ab toh kijiye..

Panchami: Haan aapko badi fursat hai apne business se, din bhar toh wahi lage pade rehtein hain..

Pratima: Arre par raat toh hai..

Ek dum se sab chup ho gaye. Pratima ne dono ke chehre dekhe, Vikram neeche dekh rahe thhe. Pratima ne himmat karke apna haath phirse Vikram ke haath pe rakh diya. Panchami dekh rahi thhi.

Pratima: Papa, Gaurav aur mujhe toh dekh liya aapne, ab bhi koi pardaah hai kya hamaare beech…?

Vikram ne uska chehra dekha, phir Panchami ka.

Panchami: Aaj hum dono ko hamaari hi bahu paatth padha rahi hai, itne toh ganwaar nahin hain na hum…

Vikram: Kahin na kahin zimmedaariyon aur Gaurav ke normal na hone ke tension mein humne apne aap ko aur ek dusre ko kho diya bahu…

Pratima: Papa ab toh woh tension nahin hai naa..Ab toh maa aur aap khulke maze le saktein hain naa..

Panchami: Khaana ho gaya, ice cream khaane chalein..

Pratima: Maa mujhe fresh hoke change karna hai..

Panchami: Ho jaa..Gaurav ke kamre ka geyser kharaab hai, hamaare kamre mein naha le..Kapde wahin le aa..

Pratima: Maa ek shorts aur t-shirt hi laayi thhi emergency ke liye..

Panchami: Haan toh pehen le, gaadi mein toh baitthna hai humein, ice cream parlour se yeh laa denge..Towel hai bathroom mein naya waala…

Pratima: Maa aap aise chalengi ice cream khaane..Saadi mein..

Panchami: Toh kya main bhi shorts pehen loon..

Vikram: Pehen leti toh…

Panchami: Shaadi ke baad se aaj tak maine kabhi pehni nahin hoon, naa hi hai mere paas..

Vikram: Mere hain naa…

Panchami: Tum dono kya paagal ho gaye ho…

Pratima: Haan maa, tu bhi thoda paagal ho jaa naa..Papa bhi pehenenge…

Panchami: Jaa pehle tu nahaale..Phir dekhtein hain…

Pratima: Main Gaurav ke kamre se apne kapde le jaati hoon..

Pratima gay, Panchami aur Vikram ne ek dusre ka chehra dekha.

Vikram: Kya kal pehle jaisa nahin thha..

Panchami: Aap bhi kya leke baitth gaye..Hamaari umar hai kya ab..

Vikram: Kyun nahin hai Panchami..Hum kya boodhe ho gayein hain..?

Panchami: Aap kehna kya chaahtein hain..

Vikram: Wahi joh bahu keh gayi..

Panchami: Aap chaliye, haath moonh dho lijiye phir chaltein hain..

Vikram naaraaz hoke apne kamre mein gaye, Pratima andar thhi bathroom mein, Panchami bhi aayi aur cupboard kholke apne kapde dekhti rahi. Vikram uske peechhe aake uske badan se satt gaye, uski chuchiyaan pakad li.

Panchami: Aap kya kar rahein hain, bahu andar hai..

Vikram: Rehne de..

Vikram ne peeche se uske gaal aur gardan choomna shuru kar diya, kass ke uski chuchiyaan daba rahe thhe aur apna lund uski gaand pe daba rahe thhe.

Panchami: Dekhiya ice cream khaa ke aatein hain, phir joh karna hai kar lijiye..

Vikram ne naaraaz hoke use chhod diya aur bistar pe jaa baitthe, Panchami unhe dekhke unke paas aayi, unke kareeb baitth gayi.

Panchami: Kya hua hai aapko..

Vikram: Hamaare beech mein na Panchami, formalities reh gayi hain..Hum doson ki tarah nahin, bas ek pati patni hi reh gayein hain..

Panchami: Saara dosh mera toh nahin hai naa..

Vikram: Dosh ki baat hi nahin hai…Par joh hua so hua naa..Hum zinda hai na, jawaan hai na..Toh kyun na ek premi premika ban ke rahein..Jaise Gaurav aur Pratima hain..

Panchami: Aap reh paayenge?

Vikram: Tu ne jaana hi kahaan hai mujhe..Main kya chaahta hoon bandh kamre mein, tujhe kahaan pata hai..

Panchami: Toh bataaya kyun nahin..

Vikram: Darrta thha tu mere baare mein kya sochegi, tu har baat maanegi kya…Isiliye bas formality nibhaayi shaadi ke baad, kabhi maze nahin liye..

Panchami: Toh yeh baat aap ab bata rahein hain mujhe..Ke hum dono ne sirf ek formality nibhaayi..

Vikram: Kal jab hum Gaurav aur Pratima ko dekhke yahaan aaye, tab maza aaya, aur maine kuch second ke liye hi sirf Pratima ka chehra dekha…Uske baad sirf tu thhi meri nazar aur dil mein..Woh nahin..

Pratima ek towel baandh ke baahar aayi, dono use dekhne lage, woh phir andar chali gayi, darwaaze ke peechhe.

Panchami: Aaja Pratima…Ab kya sharmaana..Aaja..

Pratima baahar aayi.

Pratima: Tu ne change nahin kiya maa..

Panchami: Nahin..Tu kar le..

Vikram: Mere liye bhi nahin karogi…

Panchami: Mere paas hai nahin kuch..

Pratima: Papa aapke paas thhi naa..

Vikram: Hai toh..Ek ya do chhoti ho gayi thhi, ise aayegi..

Pratima: Maa please, peheniye naa..

Panchami: Tum dono bilkul paagal ho gaye ho..Laao do mujhe..Aur agar maine pehna, toh aap bhi pehnoge, samjhe..Aur aise hi chaddi mein utarke ice cream parlour mein jaaoge..

Vikram: Main toh khushi khushi chale jaaun..Aa cupboard mein hi hai..

Vikram Singh ne khule cupboard mein se apni ek pooraani chhoti shorts aur ek t-shirt nikaali aur dikhaayi Panchami ko, Pratima ne uska haath pakad ke use cupboard ke dono darwaazon ke beech laaya, Vikram bhi wahin khade thhe.

Pratima: Maa peheniye..

Panchami: Pehen rahin hoon na andar jaake..

Pratima: Mujhe kaha sharam mat kar, aur khud mujhse aur papa se hi sharma rahi hai tu..

Panchami: Toh kya tum dono ke saamne hi pehnu..

Vikram: Pehen naa..

Panchami ne dono ki taraf dekha, dono muskuraaye, Panchami ne haar ke sar hila diya aur saadi utaarne lagi, Pratima ne saadi li aur bistar pe phenk diya, Panchami blouse nikaalne lagi.

Pratima: Papa help kijiye na maa ko, unka ghagra utaariye…

Panchami: Bahu….

Vikram: Kya bahu bahu kar rahi hai, sahi toh kaha, laa…

Vikram ne uska ghagra gira diya, Panchami sirf bra aur chaddi mein khadi thhi. Peeche Pratima thhi aura age Vikram Singh. Usne t-shirt liya Vikram ke haath se, itne mein Pratima uski bra kholne lagi.

Panchami: Arre bra kyun utaar rahi hai..

Pratima: Aap hi ne kaha gaadi se utarna nahin hai, aur waapas aake toh aap yeh bhi nahin pehnengi, toh bra rakhke kya faayda maa..

Panchami: Toh ab kya chaddi bhi utaaroon…Nange hi chalein..

Vikram: Idea bura nahin hain..

Panchami: Acchha..Toh tum dono ko masti chadhi hai na…Toh ab aap bhi shorts ke andar kuch nahin pehenenge samjhe, aur tu bhi…

Pratima: Maa main toh waise bhi kuch nahin pehenne waali hoon..

Panchami: Theek hai, main ise bhi utaar deti hoonh..

Pratima: Papa ko utaarne dijiye..

Vikram Singh turant apne ghutne pe ho gaye aur uski chaddi utaarne lage, Panchami ke halke halke jhaante ab unki nazaron ke saamne thhe, peeche se Pratima ne Panchami ki dono chuchi kass li, Panchami ne use aankhein dikhaayi, Pratima ne apne honthon se uske honth chipka diya, Vikram ne apni naak Panchami ke jhaanton se bhida di. Panchami ne Pratima ke honthon se apne honth alag kiya.

Panchami: Aap yeh kya kar rahein hain..

Vikram ne apni zabaan uske daane pe bhida di, Panchami ka badan hil gaya, uski gardan peeche Pratima ke kaandhe pe giri aur aankhein bandh hui, Pratima ne uski chuchi kass li aur uske gaal choom liye, Vikram ne Panchami ki gaand dono haathon se kass li, Pratima ne Vikram ka ek haath Panchami ki gaand se chhudaaya aur apne towel ke andar, apni chut pe rakh diya, Vikram ab uski chut sehlaane laga apni zabaan Panchami ki chut mein ghusaake.

Panchami: Ahhhhhhh Vikram….Kyaaaaa kar rahe ho tum donooooo….Huhhhhhhh..

Pratima: Maa Vicky bula unhein…

Panchami: Aaaaaahhhhh Vicky…Basssssss…Huhhhhh…Vickyyyyyy…

Vikram ne uski zabaan baahar nikaali, uske pet ko chooma, phir chuchiyon ko, phir uske honthon ko, Panchami bhi poori tarah uska saath de rahi thhi, Pratima ne shorts pehenna shuru kiya aur un dono ko kiss karte huey apni T-shirt pehen rahi thhi, phir dono ke kareeb aayi.

Pratima: Ice cream khaane chalein ya, aap dono ko bhiddna hai..

Woh dono alag huey, Pratima ko dekh muskuraaye, Panchami ne ek baanh mein Pratima ko liya aur apne honthon se kiss karne lagi, Vikram bhi dono se satt gaya aur Pratima ki chaddi mein peeche se haath ghusaake uski gaand sehlaane laga. Pratima ne Vikram ka lund unke trouser ke baahar se sehlaaya.

Pratima: Maa inki haalat dekh..Yeh ice cream kaise khaayenge aisi haalat mein..

Vikram ne Pratima ke honthon pe apne honth rakh diye, Panchami aur Pratima ab dono trouser ke baahar se unka lund sehla rahe thhe.

Vikram: Ab khaane mein zyaada maza aayega yeh sochke ke ghar waapas aake kitna maza aane waala hai..

Pratima: Jab itna maza ghar mein aayega toh baahar kyun koi jaayega…

Vikram: Samajh mein aaya Panchami..

Panchami: Main toh samajh gayi, aap zara samajhiye..

Pratima: Papa aapka lund….

Vikram: Phirse bol bahu..Kya kaha..

Pratima: Aapka lund kitna kadak ho gaya hai..

Vikram: Ab tu bol Panchami..

Panchami: Aaj aapka lund sahi mein kuch zyaada hi..

Vikram: Teri chut bhi toh aaj kuch zyaada hi baras rahi hai Panchami..

Panchami: Aur boliye naa..

Vikram: Tu bhi bol na Panchami..

Teeno ke haath ek dusre ke badan pe reng rahe thhe, Pratima ne unka trouser kholke unka lund baahar nikaala.

[Nasheeliaankhein]

UPDATE 123

Apni bahu ke haath mein apne pati ka lund dekhke Panchami thodi si hichkichaayi, baaton mein aur asliyat mein farak hota hai, Pratima ne iss hichkichaahat ko mehsoos kiya.

Pratima: Kya hua maa, ab tak toh aap har baat mein saath de rahi thhi, aur ab….

Panchami ne uske gaal ko haath lagaaya.

Panchami: Pehli baar inko kisine haath..

Pratima: Ek pal mein hi gair bana diya…

Vikram: Bahu, yahin ruk jaatein hain, isse pehle ke kuch galat ho jaaye…Shaayad hum iske liye taiyyaar nahin hain..

Pratima ne haath hata diya, Vikram murjha chuka thha Panchami ke reaction ko dekhke, Panchami ab bhi soch mein thhi, Vikram hatt gaya wahaan se, Pratima ne Panchami ki taraf dekha.

Pratima: I’m sorry maa..Main aaj se apni hadd mein rahungi, maaf kar dijiye…

Pratima palat ke jaane lagi, phir kuch jaise yaad aaya, woh palti.

Pratima: Hum ice cream toh khaa hi sakte hai naa?

Vikram aur Panchami ki nazrein mili, Panchami kapde pehen rahi thhi, Panchami ne haan mein sar hila diya. Pratima muskuraaya.

Pratima: Thanks maa..Main shalwar kameez pehen ke aati hoon…

Panchami: Aise hi chal, main bhi shorts hi pehen rahi hoon…

Teeno ke chehre uss chhote se tension bhare lamhe ke baad halke huey, ek muskuraahat aa gayi, teeno neeche aaye, Vikram Singh ne gaadi nikaali. SUV thhi, Panchami unke bagal mein baitthi aur Pratima peeche ki seat mein beech mein baitthke apni koniyaan dono ke seat pe rakkhke aage hoke baitthi thhi. 

Panchami: Mall ke parlor mein mat chaliye..

Vikram: Nazdeek hai woh Panchami…

Panchami: Lambi drive pe chaltein hain naa..Woh INOX jahaan hai wahaan…

Vikram: Kuch zyaada lamba drive nahin hai woh…

Panchami: Theek hai, yahin chaliye..

Vikram: Naaraaz kyun hoti hai, chal, teri waali mein chaltein hain…

Pratima: Papa Music…

Vikram ne channel change karne lage.

Vikram: Kya lagaaun…

Panchami: Kuch bhi lagaaiyye, par pooraane gaane nahin, unka mood nahin hai..

Vikram: Toh kiska mood hai..?

Panchami: Ghazalon ka…Aapke paas CD hai naa, ghazalon ki..

Vikram: Tujhe toh pasand nahin di ghazalein, aaj kya hua…?

Panchami: Lagaaiyye na..

Pratima chup rahi, Vikram ne CD player mein ghazalein lagaayi. Pankaj Udhas ki thhi, sab se pehle chali, “Aur aahista, kije baatein, dhadkane koi sun na le”. Romantic thhi, music bhi acchha thha, mood sahi aur halka karne ke liye sab se pyaari ghazal thhi. Vikram Singh ghazalon ke hi aashiq thhe. 

Vikram: Tujhe pata hai na, main jab ghazal suntan hoon toh kya karta hoon..

Panchami: Peetein hain aap, par aaj ice cream khaaiyye…

Vikram: Ice cream aur Ghazalon ka mel nahin hai Panchami…

Panchami: Gaadi chalaate huey kaise peeyenge, aur sharaab hai kahaan..

Vikram: Jaane de…Ice cream hi khaa letein hain..Chhod..

Pratima peechhe ho gayi, soch mein thhi, Panchami ka attitude bahut bossy thha, bechaara Vikram Singh uski ungli ke neeche daba hua thha, bilkul enjoy nahin karne deti thhi. Pratima ne chup chaap apne mobile pe ek missed call diya Gaurav ko, phir whatsapp pe ek lamba message likkha, Gaurav ne paanch minute ke baad phone kiya, Pratima ne phone speaker pe rakkha. Peechhe se music ki aawaazein aa rahi thhi.

Pratima: Hi..Gaurav, kaise chal rahi hai party…

Gaurav: Yaar dhamaal…Yeh saalon ne college ke saari ladkiyon ko bula liya hai yaar..

Pratima: Koi pasand aayi…

Gaurav: Ek toh hai..Line bhi de rahi hai..

Pratima: Toh le lo line..Kaun rok raha hai..

Gaurav: Maa papa kahin nazdeek nahin hai naa..

Pratima: Main akeli hoon..Kyun kya hua..?

Gaurav: Arre pata hai na maa kaisi hai, ek dum bacchhe ki tarah treat karti hai yaar..Mujhe bhi aur papa ko bhi..Kabhi kabhi ghutan hoti hai..

Panchami ne Vikram ki taraf dekha, uske chehre pe halki si muskuraahat thhi. 

Pratima: Ruk jaao, main phone speaker se hataati hoon, kahin baahar sun na le..

Panchami jhatke se peechhe palti aur nazron se ishaara kiya ke Pratima phone ko speaker pe hi rehne de.

Gaurav: Tum teeno toh bore ho rahe honge ghar pe, hai naa..

Pratima: Nahin aisa kuch nahin hai..

Gaurav: Ab tu bataayegi mujhe Pratima, main nahin jaanta kya apni maa ko..Papa darr k eek drink peeke so gaye honge, aur maa magazine padhke sone ki koshish kar rahi hogi..Ek dum boring life…

Pratima: Acchha tum yeh bataao khaana waana hain wahaan…

Gaurav: Arre mast hai, starters hain, main course hai, bhar bhar ke sharaab hai, woh bhi premium brands, chaalu waale nahin..Full dhamaal hai, DJ bhi hai..Pratima, ek baat kahoon..

Pratima: Meri permission chaahiye mujhe hi kuch kehne ke liye?

Gaurav: Baat kuch aisi hai..

Pratima: Jaisi bhi ho Gaurav..Hamaare beech mein koi pardaah nahin hai, bolo..

Gaurav: Pratima, tumne joh condom diye, agar main sach mein unhein use karoon toh..

Pratima: Toh khushi hogi..Ab meri ek baat suno Gaurav, jis din hum ek dusre se darrne ya ek dusre ko daraane lagenge na, toh hamaara rishhta ek formality ho jaayega…Aur Gaurav, tumne apne problem ki wajah se yeh saari cheezein enjoy nahin kar paaye thhe, ab theek huey ho toh meri wajah se in sab se door mat raho, enjoy karo Gaurav, mere liye, kyunke jab tum khush rahoge, toh main khush rahungi..Bas drink karke drive mat karna..Taxi le lena subah, baaki joh bhi karo, main subah tumse sunna chaahti hoon, har ek detail, condom waali detail bhi…

Gaurav: I love you…

Pratima: I love you too Gaurav..Enjoy yourself..

Gaurav: I will..

Kuch der gaadi mein shaanti rahi, ghazalein chal rahi thhi, Panchami thodi serious lag rahi thhi.

Panchami: Kya aapko ghutan lagti hai mere saath?

Vikram chup thhe, kuch kaha nahin, gaadi chalaate rahe, Panchami ko apna jawaab mil gaya. 

Panchami: Pratima ne bhi Gaurav se kaha peeke gaadi mat chalaana, mai bhi toh wahi keh rahi thhi aapse..Ismein bhi aapko ghutan lagti hai..

Vikram: Kal baat kartein hain Panchami..

Panchami: Kyun, abhi kyun nahin..Aapko peeke gaadi chalaani hai? 

Vikram: Haan..Peeke gaadi chalaani hai, halki si chadhi, toh gaadi rok ke tere saath beech raaste dance karna hai, wahin tujhe kiss karna hai..Kisi ne humein dekhke objection liya na, toh uske daant todne hain..Phir kahin jungle mein rok ke tere saath gaadi mein masti karna hai..Aur agar baat badhi, toh baat badhaana hai..Tu meri patni hai, kisi ka baap mujhe rok nahin sakta…Aur sunegi…

Panchami toh dang reh gayi, Pratima khush thhi ke sher jaag gaya thha. Panchami chup thhi, baahar dekhne lagi, Vikram Singh ne uski taraf dekha.

Vikram: Pratima ne Gaurav ko theek kaise kiya pata hai?

Panchami sawaaliya nazron se Vikram ko ghoorne lagi.

Vikram: Pratima ne pehle Gaurav ko yeh yakeen dilaaya ke woh usse sacchha pyaar karti hai aur woh uski problem ke bawajood usse shaadi karna chaahti hai..Bina koi matlab ke..Phir usne Gaurav ko yeh yakeen dilaaya ke shaadi koi kaid nahin hai..Gaurav ne hamaari shaadi dekhi hai Panchami…Woh jaanta hai ke main teri har baat rakkhta hoon, kisi baat ko mana nahin karta hoon..Partiyon mein bhi jab tu kehti hai toh peena chhod deta hoon..Par kabhi kabhi dil karta hai zyaada peene ka, hosh khone ka, par tu aisa hone nahin deti..Gaurav ne yeh sab dekha hai..Darrta hai woh shaadi ke naam se bhi..Uske do problem thhe, ek toh woh normal nahin thha, aur dusra hamaare rishhte ko dekhke use shaadi ke naam se nafrat thhi…

Gaadi mein phir shaanti ho gayi, INOX kareeb aane laga. Gaadi ruki aur Vikram Singh, Pratima ki taraf dekhe.

Vikram: Kaun si ice cream khaao gi Pratima..

Pratima: Papa, black currant, badi waali…Cone mein…Aur maa?

Vikram: Woh strawberry hi khaati hai..

Panchami: Aaj kuch aur laaiyye, aaj taste change karna hai…

Vikram ne uska chehra dekha, phir Pratima ka. Muskuraaye aur ice cream parlor ki taraf chalne lage. Panchami ne peeche dekha.

Panchami: Main inka aur Gaurav ka bura toh nahin chaahti naa..Toh in dono ko kyun aisa lagta hai..

Pratima: Maa, aap ki koi baat galat nahin hai..Bas kabhi kabhi dono ko apne dil ka karne dijiye..Aapne mujhe kiss karne diya, aapko haath lagaane diya, phir apne aapko rok liya..Aapko acchha lag raha thha, par aap bahut saari baatein sochne lagi, joh baat acchhi lage na maa, use kariye, aur dusron ko apne dil ka karne dijiye..Angrezi mein ek kahaawat hai maa, “Live and let live, Jeeyo aur jeene do”…

Panchami ghoor rahi thhi Pratima ko.

Pratima: Maa papa bahut samajhdaar hain aur Gaurav bhi..Papa agar ek drink pee bhi lenge na gaadi mein, toh woh bas itna peeyenge ke unhein thrill mehsoos ho, behosh hone ke liye nahin peeyenge kyunki aap baitthi hain gaadi mein..Woh zimmedaar hain maa aura apse pyaar kartein hain, bas uss pyaar ko baandhe mat rakhiye, kyunke koi bhi ek samay tak bardaasht karega, uske baad use ghutan mehsoos hone lagegi… 

Panchami palat gayi, soch mein padhke, Vikram aa gaye, sirf do hi ice cream thhe unke haath mein, ek Pratima ko di aur ek Panchami ki taraf badhaayi.

Panchami: Aapki kahaan hai..?

Vikram: Mera dil nahin kar raha hai, tum dono khaao..

Panchami: Aap nahin khaayenge toh main bhi nahin khaaungi..

Vikram: Toh phenk do..

Panchami dang reh gayi Vikram Singh ke jawaab se.

Vikram: Yahi toh baat hai Panchami, har baar sirf tumhaari baat hi rakkhni padhti hai, dusre ke koi maayne nahin..Hai naa..Chalo ghar chaltein hain, bas ho gaya..

Pratima: Papa, hamaara ghar bhi raaste mein hi padhta hai, mujhe ghar chhod dijiye..Please..

Vikram Singh ne koi jawaab nahin diya, sab chup rahe, pandrah minute baad gaadi Pratima ke ghar ruki, Pratima chup chaap utarne lagi.

Panchami: Agar tujhe rokne ki koshish ki toh tujhe aisa toh nahin lagega na ke main tujhpe bhi zabardasti kar rahi hoon..

Pratima palti par darwaaza aadha khula hi rakkha.

Pratima: Maa mujhe sochne ka samay chaahiye..Main Gaurav se bahut pyaar karti hoon, aur papa hain nahin mere, bahut chhoti thhi jab woh mujhe aur maa ko chhod ke chale gaye…Main ab inhi ko apne papa maan ne lagi thhi..Meri maa ne mujhe sikhaaya ke jis baat se apne dil ko khushi mile aur kisi ka nuksaan nahin ho na, toh woh baat kar deni chaahiye..Phir chaahe woh baat samaaj ko buri lage, usse koi farak nahin padhta hai…Samaaj bure samay mein kisi ka saath nahin deta hai maa, isiliye samaaj ko jitni door rakh sako, rakkho..Use apni zindagi chalaane ka haq mat do..

Panchami uska chehra gaur se dekh rahi thhi, Vikram bhi sunn rahe thhe, par chup thhe.

Pratima: Meri maa aur mere paas rehne ke liye chhat nahi thha maa..Khaane ko khaana nahin thha..Jis pados mein hum rehte thhe woh khamosh raha, hamaara ghar maalik ek bada thekedaar aur samaaj ka ek bada aadmi thha, woh bhi chup raha, humein ek raat bhi uss ghar mein rehne nahin diya..Mere mausa ji ne hamaare liye ghar khareeda, aapke pati ke mall mein ek dukaan bhaade pe dilaayi, ek saal tak uska bhaada bharte rahe..Meri padhaayi ke paise diye, humein himmat di, sahaara diya..Meri maa se kabhi koi ummeed nahin rakkhi, unka faayda nahin utthaaya…Aaj meri maasi hi mere mausaji aur meri maa ke saath soti hai, teeno enjoy kartein hain, aur agar samaaj ko iss baat se objection hai toh, unki maa ki chut…Main khush hoon un teeno ko dekhke, mujhe maaf karna maine gaali di, par kabhi kabhi dil bhar aata hai maa..Main chalti hoon..

Pratima ab utarne lagi, Vikram ne apna darwaaza khola.

Vikram: Main chhod aata hoon andar tak beta…

Panchami apni taraf se utarke dono ke paas aayi.

Panchami: Baitth jaa gaadi mein..Please..Inhein toh papa maanti hai, mujhe maa nahin maanegi..? 

Vikram: Pehli baar main iski baat se sehmat hoon bahu..Baithh jaa..Ghar pe baitthke baatein karenge..Khush hoon ke ek suljhi hui ladki mere Gaurav ki zindagi mein hai..Tu mere bete ko bahut khush rakhegi..Ek baap aur kya chaahega..

Panchami: Baitth jaa Bahu..Ghar chaltein hain..

Pratima chup chaap darwaaza khol ke andar baitth gayi, gaadi chal padi. Teeno ghar pahunche, Vikram Singh ne dono ko utaara aur gaadi park karne lage garage mein. Pratima aur Panchami andar aa gaye, kuch der baad Vikram Singh bhi aa gaye. Pratima washroom gayi hui thhi aur Panchami ghar mein bani bar mein chali gayi. Ek glass mein drink banaaya, Vikram dekh raha thha use.

Vikram: Mera dil nahin kar raha hai Panchami, rehne de..

Panchami: Main apne liye bana rahi hoon..Mera dil kar raha hai..

Vikram: Not bad..Aaj main do drink ke baad tujhe tokunga…

Panchami: Aap tok nahin paayenge, woh mera kaam hai, par aaj se main tokna chhod dungi..”Jeeyo aur jeene do”…Samaaj ki maa ki…

Vikram: Poora toh bol nahin paayi, jaise Pratima ne bola thha..

Panchami: Do drink ke baad bol paaungi, aur kuch zyaada bhi bol dungi…

Dono hansne lage, dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekh rahe thhe.

Panchami: Pratima sach hi toh keh rahi thhi..Yaad hai na aapka doctor dost..Mehra…

Vikram: Uska naam mat lo Panchami..Aaj bhi gaali nikalti hai uske liye..

Panchami: Aapne uske saath Gaurav ka problem share kiya thha, madad maangi thhi Gaurav ko theek karne ke liye, aur usne saare Kanpur mein dhindhora peeta thha..Gaurav ko kitni takleef hui thhi, usne baat karna chhod diya thha humse..

Vikram: Bhool jaao Panchami, woh ek bura samay thha, par aaj sab theek hai, mera beta khush hai..

Panchami: Par main kaise bhool gayi ke samaaj ne hi hamaara tamaasha banaaya thha…Aaj jab Pratima ne aapka..

Vikram: Ab bhi sankoch karegi..Pati hoon main tera..

Panchami: Aaj jab bahu ne aapka lund pakda, toh main samaaj ka hi sochne lagi, kya sochega samaaj agar yeh baat baahar aayi toh..Samaaj iss baat ko galat maanta hai..Samaaj hai kaun galat ya sahi maan ne waala..Aur unhein pata kaise chalega agar hum unhein bataayenge hi nahin, bas aapas mein khush rahenge toh…Samaaj ki maa ki chut Vikram..

Vikram: Chalo aaj yeh bhi deewaar tod di, ab naam se hi pukaarna, please..O ya inke unke keh ke nahin, samjhi..Acchha khaasa naam hai mera…

Panchami unke paas aayi, Vikram ne use apni jaangh pe bitthaaya aur uski peetth sehlaane lage, Panchami ne apna glass unke honthon ke paas laaya, Vikram Singh aage badhe, Panchami ne unhe ek sip lene diya, aur phir glass peechhe kheench liya. Unhonein Panchami ko apne badan pe kheench liya aur uski T-shirt utaarne lage, Panchami ne jhoottha nakhra dikhaaya, par utaarne mein madad bhi ki, andar kuch nahin thha, Vikram Singh apni patni ki chuchiyaan ghoorne lagi. Pratima baahar aayi aur dono ko dekhi.

Pratima: Yeh sab kab hua..Samaaj kya sochega..Kya kahega..

Panchami: Yeh mere pati hain, hum kuch bhi karein..Yeh chaahein toh yahi chod dein mujhe..

Pratima: Haan magar apni bahu ke saamne? Yeh toh samaaj….

Panchami: Samaaj ki maa ki chut..Mujhe acchha lag raha hai apni bahu ke saamne yeh sab karna..Toh main karoongi..

Pratima Vikram Singh ke ghutne ke paas aayi aur baitth gayi apne hatheliyaan unpe rakkhte huey.

Pratima: Nahi baba..Ek baar inke lund ko haath mein li thhi, bhaari padh gaya thha..Ab nahin, main sone jaa rahi hoon..

Panchami ne Vikram Singh ki shorts aage se neeche karke unke lund ko baahar nikaala aur utthke khadi ho gayi, apni shorts khud utaarke nangi ho gayi Vikram Singh ko glass thamaate huey. 

Panchami: Ab hum dono phirse ice cream khaayenge aur Vikram drink peeyenge..

Pratima: Baap re..Ek drive ke baad duniya hi badal gayi, maine kuch miss kiya kya..?

Panchami: Ab tu kapde khud utaaregi ya main phaad doon..

Pratima: Upar chalein maa..Aapke bedroom ka bed bada acchha hai chudai ke liya, naram naram…

Panchami: Toh tera aur Gaurav ka waisa hi bana dein…

Pratima muskuraate huey kapde utaarne lagi, Vikram Singh bhi khade lund ko liye khade ho gaye, Panchami ne Pratima ka haath unke lund pe rakh diya.

Panchami: Baat yahin se shuru hui thhi, ab uss adhoori baat ko poora kartein hain teeno mil ke..Chal naram naram bed pe…

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UPDATE 124

Teeno nange, ghutnon ke bal ek trikon mein baitthe thhe Vikram aur Panchami ke bedroom ke bed par. Vikram Singh ka daanya haath Pratima ki baanyi chuchi ko sehla raha thha, Panchami ka baanya haath Vikram ke tane huey lund pe thha aur Pratima ka baanya haath Vikram ke seene ko sehla raha thha.

Vikram: Kitni khoobsoorat hai hamaari bahu Panchami..

Panchami: Saara shrey ise mat dijiye, hum ne bhi koi acchha kaam kiya hoga tab yeh hamaare ghar aayi hai…

Vikram aur Pratima uski baat pe muskura diye.

Vikram: Saas hone ka character nibha rahi hai yeh Pratima…

Pratima: Meri saas bhi kum khoobsoorat nahin hai Papa…Isiliye Gaurav inhi ke baare mein fantasize karta thha..

Vikram: Karta thha? Aur ab kya tumhe dekhke..?

Pratima: Mere baare mein fantasize karne ki zaroorat hi nahin hai na papa..

Panchami: Yahaan aa…

Panchami khud ghutnon ke bal khadi ho gayi, Pratima bhi, dono sarak ke kareeb aaye, dono ki chuchiyaan bhid gayi, dono ke honth mil gaye, Vikram baitthe dono ko dekh rahe thhe, dono ki gaand sehla rahe thhe, unke haath neeche sark ke dono ki chut sehlaane lage, dono ka badan sihar gaya.

Panchami: Aaaaahahhhhhh Vikrammmmmm….

Pratima: Maa, papa ko akela pan mehsoos ho raha hai…

Panchami: Hum unhi ke paas hain, joh chaahe kar lein…

Vikram Singh uttkhe ghutnon ke bal sarak ke Pratima ke peechhe aake apna lund uski gaand ki daraar mein ghusaake satt gaye, uski aur Panchami dono ki chuchiyaan daba rahe thhe peechhe se, Panchami aur Pratima dono chumban mein bandh gaye phirse. Teeno ke badan chipke thhe. Panchami kuch der baad Pratima ke honthon se alag hui.

Panchami: Mujhe chaat Pratima…

Yeh kehke Panchami peeche ki tarah peetth ke bal let gayi, Pratima aage jhuki aur uski taangon ko phailaake apne honth uski chut se sata di, uske jhukne pe Vikram Pratima ke peechhe jhukke Pratima ki gaand ko choom rahe thhe halke se. Pratima ne Panchami ki chut ke honth khol diye, aur apni zabaan ki nokh se uska daana dhoondhne lagi, Vikram Singh ab Pratima ki gaand ki daraar mein apna moonh ghusaake uski gaand ka chhed chaat rahe thhe, Pratima ka nicchhla badan hilne laga unke prahaar se. Vikram Singh ek haath se apna lund sehlaane lage. 

Pratima apni saas ko paagal kar rahi thhi, Panchami ka badan kaanpne laga thha, ek naye anubhav ka poora maza le rahi thhi woh lehra lehra ke. Peeche Vikram Singh apni bahu ki chut ke chaske le rahe thhe, Pratima geeli ho chuki thhi aur Vikram taiyyaar thhe, woh ghutnon ke bal ho gaye aur apna lund pakad ke Pratima ki chut ke honthon pe apna supaada ghumaane lage, Pratima peeche dekhi.

Pratima: Sataaiyye mat papa, daal dijiye…

Panchami: Pratima moonh mat utthha, chalaate reh, main pahunch rahi hoon…

Pratima apne kaam pe lag gayi aur Vikram Singh apni bahu mein ghus gaye, Panchami apni manzil pe pahunch rahi thhi, Pratima bhi dhakke pe dhakka khaake taiyyaar hone lagi, Vikram Singh Pratima ki gaand pakadke maze se dhakke maar rahe thhe. Teeno poora maza le rahe thhe, jhool aur jhoola rahe thhe. Panchami ki kamar utth utth ke girne lagi, Vikram Singh ke dhakke ghamaasaan ho gaye, Pratima bhi gaand ghuma ghumaake maze de aur le rahi thhi, Panchami ki kamar ab lehra gayi aur zor se bistar pe giri, behne lagi woh apni taangon ke beech se, Vikram Singh apna saara load Pratima mein chhodne lage, Pratima bhi unka saath di aur apna rass unke lund pe bahaane lagi, Vikram Singh uske badan pe gir gaye aur dono Panchami pe. 

Saansein tez thhi, ab sambhalne lagi thhi, Vikram Singh ne apna lund baahar nikaal liye aur bathroom chale gaye, phir Pratima aur Panchami. Jab tak woh dono baahar aate, Vikram Singh ne teen drinks bana liye thhe aur bistar pe lete thhe, kamre mein dheemi roshni thhi, Panchami aur Pratima nange hi bistar pe aaye.

Vikram: Kahaan reh gaye thhe tum dono…

Panchami: Naha liye zara sa…

Panchami aur Pratima unke ek ek baanh mein aa gaye, Pratima ne chaadar teeno ke badan pe daal di, kamra thanda ho gaya thha, Pratima aur Panchami ki ek ek taang Vikram Singh ki jaangh pe thhi, unhone Pratima ke maathe ko choom liya.

Vikram: Maza aa gaya bahu..

Pratima: Maza tab aayega jab hum chaaron iss bistar pe aise lete honge..

Panchami: Uss baat ko samay lagega, aur pata bhi nahin woh ho bhi paayega ya nahin…

Pratima: Kya aapko pata thha yeh sab hum teeno ke beech hoga maa…?

Panchami: Nahi thha..Par…

Pratima: Mere pe chhod dijiye maa..

Vikram ke lund ko Pratima sehlaane lagi, Vikram Singh bhi uski nangi peetth sehlaane lage. Panchami unke seene ko sehla rahi thhi, Vikram tan rahe thhe phirse. Unhonein apni taangein thodi phailaadi.

Panchami: Aap kya phirse taiyyaar ho rahein hain?

Vikram: Ab yeh chhed rahi hai toh…

Pratima: Maa ab aap chudwa lijiye…

Panchami: Nahin, mera toh kota poora ho gaya aajka…

Pratima: Agar aisa kahengi toh mere baaki ke pariwaar ke saath kaise ghul milengi aap…?

Panchami: Pariwaar matlab, tu ne sirf mausa aur mausi ke baare mein bataaya, aur kaun kaun hai ismein…?

Pratima: Sab…

Panchami: Sab matlab…?

Pratima: Maa sab, aap jitnon se milengi, sab hain ismein…Mausaji ke farmhouse pe jaake sab maza lete hain ek dusre ke saath…

Vikram: Panchami se nahin ho paayega..

Panchami: Aap mera naam kyun beech mein laa rahein hain…

Pratima: Maa, sunne mein acchha lagta hai, par karne ke liye bahut himmat aur bharosa zaroori hai…

Vikram: Panchami toh mujhe kisiko ghoorte dekhti hai toh problem ho jaata hai, yahaan toh…

Pratima: Ek dusre ko baandhiye mat papa…Ek dusre pe bharosa rakhke maze lijiye aur lene dijiye…Kisise rishhte thodi na jodne hai ya pyaar ke chakkar chalaana hai…Sirf sex papa..Khule aam chudaai, woh bhi jamke, sab ke saath…

Vikram ka lund tan chuka thha, Pratima chaadar ke andar chali gayi aur unka tana huey choosne lagi.

Panchami: Lagta hai yeh hum dono ko chudwa ke hi rahegi..

Vikram: Bahu joh keh rahi hai, kya tu uske liye taiyyaar hai..?

Panchami: Saamuhik chudai…?

Vikram: Saamuhik chudai…

Panchami: Kya aap taiyyaar hain?

Vikram: Ek baar tujhe kisi aur ke saath dekhna chaahta hoon…

Pratima: Kaha thha na maine maa..Har mard ki ek fantasy hoti hai..

Panchami: Tu lage reh, main baat kar rahi hoon naa..

Vikram: Kya kaha thha isne…?

Panchami: Yahi ke har mard ki ek fantasy hoti hai ke woh apni patni ko kisi aur mard ke saath chudte dekhe…

Pratima chaadar samet utth gayi Vikram ka tana hua lund mutthi mein daboche huey.

Pratima: Papa, ab aur karoongi toh aap jhadd jaayenge..

Vikram Singh muskuraaye aur Pratima ki taraf dekhe.

Vikram: Tere mausaji ka naam kya hai…?

Pratima: Deepak Mausa…

Vikram: Deepak keh ke pukaar mujhe…

Panchami bina Pratima ki taraf dekhe huey, Vikram ko hi dekh rahi thhi.

Panchami: Teri mausi ka kya naam hai Pratima…?

Pratima: Devika Mausi…

Panchami: Samjhe?

Vikram Singh ne haan mein sar hilaaya aur Panchami ki taangon ke beech aa gaye, peeche se Pratima ne unka lund Panchami ki chut se sataaya, unhone baaki ka kaam kar diya., chudai shuru ho gayi, Pratima Panchami ke bagal mein aa gayi.

Vikram: Huh Huh Devi…

Pratima: Devika papa…

Vikram: Haaaaannnn Devika…

Panchami: Chodo Deepak…Zor se chodo…

Pratima Panchami ke kaan ke bilkul paas chali gayi aur kuch phusphusaayi, Panchami ne ek dum aascharya se uska chehra dekha.

Pratima: Mere liye, please..Aankhein bandh karke..

Panchami ne aankhein bandh kar li aur apni baahein Vikram ke gale mein baandh li, apni taangein unki kamar se baandh li.

Panchami: Chodo Gaurav..Chodo apni maa ko…Zor se..

Vikram Singh ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi, unhonein Pratima ka chehra dekha, woh muskuraayi, unka lund aur tan gaya, Panchami aur zyaada maze lene lagi, Vikram Singh ne aake sarak ke Pratima ke honth choom liye aur Panchami ko dekhke apni aankhein bandh kar li.

Vikram: Kalpana, jakad le mere lund ko…Kass ke chodne de…

Pratima aur Panchami dono ek dum se Vikram Singh ko ghoorne lage, phir Pratima mukuraayi.

Pratima: Meri maa hai aapke dimaag mein!!!

Panchami: Aapko samdhan jee ko..?

Pratima: Maa problem kya hai? Asli baat toh ab baahar nikalne lagi hai, aur koi hai aap dono ke dimaag mein toh naam lete rahiye aur maze bhi…

Vikram: Abhi ke liye itna hi kaafi hai…

Pratima: Maa, mujhe nahi chakhegi?

Panchami: Aaja, baitthja…

Pratima utthi bistar pe, Vikram Singh seedhe ho gaye, Pratima Panchami ke moonh pe baitth gayi, Vikram ne uski chuchiyaan haath mein le li. Yahaan teeno ki ghamaasaan phir shuru ho gayi. 

Gaon mein action let thha, sab shaam ko ghoomne gaye, aate aate nau bajj gaye aur phir shuru hua peene ka program. Sab ko peene ka mood thha, Mayuri aur Beena ne hall mein hi intezaam kar diya thha, namkeen bhi sajaaya thha, baahar bhi thoda bahut snacks khaa liya thha sab ne, bhookh nahin thhi, sirf pyaas thhi sabko, sharaab aur ek dusre ki. 

Sabse pehle mama aur Kalpana maasi ne hi drink banaaya table pe, maasi toh saadi mein thhi, mama kurte pyjama mein. Baaki sab hall mein baitthe thhe. Mama ne maasi ki kamar mein haath rakhke use cheers kaha aur gaalon ko choom liya. Maasi ne bhi unhe choom liya.

Maasi: Aapka dil bharta hi nahin hai, hai naa…

Mama: Joh dil bhar gaya, woh marr gaya…

Maasi muskuraake unke saath sab ke paas chal di.

Maasi: Aap sab ko badi pyaas lagi thhi, ab kisi ke haath mein glass nahin hai…

Mere ghar pe ek round ho gaya thha, khaana bhi thoda thoda khaa liya thha sab ne. Fresh hoke sab waapas peechhe waale kamre mein aa gaye, gaadiyon pe, cigarette jale, ek Prem ne jalaaya, ek Pulkit ne aur ek ek Purab aur Apu ne. Kash lagne lage, koi do toh koi teen laga raha thha, sab ek circle mein nange baitthe thhe. AC on thha, roshni dheemi thhi. Maahoul yahaan bhi ban hi raha thha, nashe waala aur chudai waala. Sab barabar ke kash lagaa rahe thhe, mood udne ka sabka thha. 

Prem: Chaar cigarette do round mein hi khatam, pee rahe hain ya khaa rahein hain..

Pulkit: Aur jala, chaahiye toh…

Neha: Mujhe chaahiye…

Apu: Kya?

Neha: Tera lund…

Prem: Lagta hai aur jalaane ki zaroorat nahin padegi…

Pulkit ne apna lund dekha, tan chuka thha.

Pulkit: Ispe bhi asar ho gaya yaar Prem..Ab toh teri patni ko lena hi padega…

Prem: Bhabhi toh apne jija pe lattoo hai, pata nahin mera number kab lagega…

Apu: Janak ko bhi bhabhi hi maanta hai na…

Bhabhi: Aaj humein faisla karne do hum kiska lenge…Aaj dene ka mood nahin hai…

Main: Lene ka hai…Hai na bhabhi..

Janak: Yeh theek hai, har baar yeh sab kyun decide karenge…

Neha: Toh tujhe kiska lena hai Janak…

Janak: Hmmmm…Shekhar bhaiyya ka…Ab tu bol Neha…

Neha: Dekhne de…Hmmmmm main tere pati ka leti hoon…Priya tu…?

Bhabhi: Mera devar naaraaz hai mujhse…Use manaana padega..Veena tu…?

Main: Toh main aapke jiju ka leti hoon…

Sab aise hi gaadi pe ghutnon ke bal rengte huey apne apne partners ke paas chale gaye. Wahaan gaon mein kapde utar chuke thhe dheere dheere, par kuch shuru nahin hua thha, sab pehle drink pe hi thhe, baatein chal rahi thhi neeche kaaleen pe baitthke sabki.

Mere sasur mami se sattke baitthe thhe, mami ke haath mein unka lund sehle jaa raha thha aur sasur ka haath mami ki chuchi daba raha thha. 

Mayuri bhabhi chacha aur Rohit ke beech mein baitthi hui thhi, maa aur mama saath thhe, chachi Raunak ke paas thhi aur Beena papa ke paas. 

Halki halki garmi chadh rahi thhi, kyunki baatein rangeen chal rahi thhi.

Sasur: Bacchhein bhi kuch aise hi baitthein honge ghar pe..

Papa: Baitthein kahaan honge…Ek dusre pe chadhe honge..

Maa: Ab toh unka second round shuru ho raha hoga…

Saas: Yahaan toh pehla bhi shuru nahin hua hai..

Papa: Arre subah hamaara ek round ho gaya thha, wahaan toh sab shaam ko milne waale thhe..

Chacha: Lagta hai auraton ko jaldi hai…

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BYE GUYS  . . . . . . 

I WAS THINKING TO START NEW HINDI STORY BUT LOOKING AT THE POOR RESPONSE BY READERS . . .  . . . . . .

MY EXPERIENCE WHILE POSTING THIS STORY WAS . . LIKE

I WAS READY TO POST UPDATES ON DAILY BASIS  . . . EVEN READY FOR POSTING TWICE A DAY AS I WAS NOT WRITING THE STORY. THE WHOLE STORY WAS THERE WITH ME IN A FILE SAVED FROM OLD XOSSIP.

IT WAS READERS WHO COULD NOT OR NOT WILLING TO ADD REPPS.

I WOULD SAY SILENT PEOPLE ARE MORE HERE . . . .  

I WOULD ALSO SUGGEST THE ADMIN TO REMOVE ALL THE MEMBERS WHO ARE JUST SILENT AND NOT WILLING TO COMMENT ON ANY STORY. IT SHOULD BE A MANDATORY RULE FOR ALL READERS TO COMMENT MINIMUM ONCE IN A WEEK TO ANY STORY. THIS IS THE ONLY WAY WRITERS WILL GET BETTER RESPONSE. 

ANYWAY . . . A BIG THANK YOU TO ALL WHO VISITED THIS THREAD. . . . WHETHER THEY RESPONDED OR NOT.

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@ JAMES SUIZA

sorry bro .... pls come back with new updates

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BYE GUYS  . . . . . . 

I WAS THINKING TO START NEW HINDI STORY BUT LOOKING AT THE POOR RESPONSE BY READERS . . .  . . . . . .

MY EXPERIENCE WHILE POSTING THIS STORY WAS . . LIKE

I WAS READY TO POST UPDATES ON DAILY BASIS  . . . EVEN READY FOR POSTING TWICE A DAY AS I WAS NOT WRITING THE STORY. THE WHOLE STORY WAS THERE WITH ME IN A FILE SAVED FROM OLD XOSSIP.

IT WAS READERS WHO COULD NOT OR NOT WILLING TO ADD REPPS.

I WOULD SAY SILENT PEOPLE ARE MORE HERE . . . .  

I WOULD ALSO SUGGEST THE ADMIN TO REMOVE ALL THE MEMBERS WHO ARE JUST SILENT AND NOT WILLING TO COMMENT ON ANY STORY. IT SHOULD BE A MANDATORY RULE FOR ALL READERS TO COMMENT MINIMUM ONCE IN A WEEK TO ANY STORY. THIS IS THE ONLY WAY WRITERS WILL GET BETTER RESPONSE. 

ANYWAY . . . A BIG THANK YOU TO ALL WHO VISITED THIS THREAD. . . . WHETHER THEY RESPONDED OR NOT.

THANK YOU ALL

Ek padi hui story pe responce kabhi bhi jayada nahi milega,
Agar main apni hi koi story dubara post karun, to sirf vahi readers jawab denge jinhone padi nahi, aur vaise bhi forum naya hai aur kuch probs bhi hain running mein. To hosla mat haaro iskani ko ek naya roop dekar aage bada sakte ho aur chao to apni khud ki story kyun nahi likhte.

[Tharkibhaiya]

Hoottttt story

[naughtydicku]

PURE PORRRNNNN STOORYY

[Jignesh Rana]

New update please....