Poll: 7 Female charectar and 7 dufferent stories which u like the most
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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA
15.53%
93 15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION
18.53%
111 18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED
34.06%
204 34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY
10.85%
65 10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE
6.01%
36 6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE
5.68%
34 5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION
9.35%
56 9.35%
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A wedding ceremony in village
(07-10-2019, 07:21 PM)abhi_mishra_91 Wrote: Wow Logan Bro...
Unbelievable twist and imagination..
Hats up to you...
Really appreciate it.
Appla ye Update bahut hi badhiya tha..
Waiting for your next update

Thanks abhi
Thats why don't gave that what others expected. 
Twist and turn are the essential part of my story.
Thanks again. 
Mujhe bahut khushi hoti hai
Jab vineeta ki story ko appreciation milta hai.
Kyuki seduction ke thode bahut moment hone ke bawjood agar ye story shabana neha garima ke parallel khadi reh pa rahi hai to inhi twists ki wajah se.
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(08-10-2019, 12:47 AM)ajay.star123 Wrote: Super update

Thanns bro
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(08-10-2019, 02:45 AM)asha10783 Wrote: बहोत खूब जी यही वजह है कि मन को जोड़कर प्यार का इजहार करने के लिए प्रवृत्त करना मान गए आपको जी।

शुक्रिया आशा जी आपके इतने अच्छे कमैंट्स पड़ कर आपको अपनी किसी स्टोरी का पात्र बनाने का मन करता फिलहाल इस स्टोरी में तो सारे फीमेल स्पॉट बुक हैँ पर आगे किसी और स्टोरी में अगर आपको सूट करता कोई किरदार मेरे दिमाग में आए तो क्या आप मेरी स्टोरी का कोई किरदार बनना पसंद करेंगी.
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(08-10-2019, 07:58 AM)Nasn3432 Wrote: बहुत ही जबरदस्त twist...

Thanks bro for ur  liking.
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Superb
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Super work bro...
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Wonderful writing.......
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Super
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Haweli me

Chhat se apna parcel utha kar neha jab tak neeche aati Lalu kamre se nikal gaya tha. Neha ne apna parcel apne peeche chhupa liya aur kamre me aa gai. Dono hi ek doosre se thoda jhep rahi thi neha apne parcel ki wajah se aur shabana kuchh minute pehle hi kamre se bahar gae Lalu ki wajah se. Shabana ki nazre kuchh pal ko hati aur neha ne wo parcel apne bag me chhupa diya. Par shabana ko ab bhi aaj bahar jane ke bare me neha ko ek mangadant story sunani thi jaisa ki lalu ne kaha tha.

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Shabana: Neha
Neha: Ha di
Shabana normal si dikhte hue: Tujhe pata hai aaj kya hua aaj maine facebook par yaha shaadi ki pics daali aur likha mai is gaanv me hu to bachpan me mere ghar ke bagal me jo nargis aapa rehti thi unki beti chandni ka whatsapp par msg aya "Ki aap yaha aai ho". Bachpan me hum bahut sath me khele hai aur maze ki baat uska nikah yahi do gaanv chhod kar hua hai. Aur aaj uske bachhe ka janmdin hai ab jab use pata chala ki mai yaha aai hui hu to wo zid karne lagi ki mujhe ek din uske yaha rukna hoga.
Neha: Achha to aap aaj waha jaogi phir to mai yaha akeli reh jaungi. Garima aur Vineeta di to pehle hi nahi the Neetu Aarti bhi apne rishtedaar ke yaha chale gae aur ab aap bhi ja rahi hai. Aur shobha di to apni rasmo me busy rehti hai.
Shabana: Bus ek raat ki baat hai kal subah wapas aa jaungi. '. family hai isliye tujhe sath nahi le ja sakti.
Neha: Chalo koi na par aap unke yaha jaogi kaise mai shobha di se keh kar gadi arrange karwau.
Shabana: Nahi jab maine Chandni ko bayaya ki mai yaha hu to wo mujhse milne ko itni utawli ho gai ki apno car se mujhe yaha lene aa rahi hai. To mai uske sath chali jaungi.
Neha: Badiya to kitne baje aa rahi hai apki ye chandni.
Shabana: Keh to rahi thi ki wo nikal gai hai kisi bhi waqt aati hogi.
Neha: To aap apna bag laga lo raat ko pehenne ke kapde rakh lo tab tak mai bhi haath muh dho leti hu. Badi excited hogi apni bachpan ki saheli se milne ke liye.

Ab shabana neha ko kya batati ki jise wo apni bachpan ki saheli bata rahi hai use to wo pehchanti bhi nahi ye to uski majboori hai jo use jhoot bolne aur uske saath jane ko majboor kar rahi hai. Neha bathroom me chali gai aur uske bathroom me jane ke kuch minute baad hi shabana ke mobile par lalu ka msg aya.
Lalu: Chandni haweli ke gate par pahuchne wali hai tu gate par use lene pahuch ja. Wo burkhe me hogi taki yaha koi use pehchaan na le. Tu seedha use lekar apne kamre me aa ja. Aur apni saheli se milwa kar thodi bahut der baith kar chandni ke sath yaha se nikal le baki sab chandni sambhal legi. Samajh gai
Shabana: Hmm
Lalu ka msg milte hi shabana haweli ke gate par pahuch gai. Wo gate par pahuchi hi thi ki kuchh hi der baad haweli ke gate par ek safed car aakar ruki. Aur usme se ek burkhanasheen aurat utri jisne burkhe ke andar se idhar udhar dekha aur phir aage bad kar shabana shabana karte hue shabana ko gale se laga liya. Shabana to uski ye acting dekh hairaan thi. Wo ladki shabana ke gale lage thi aur gale lage lage usne shabana ke kaan me phusphusa kar kaha.

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Chandni: Itna jada shock mat ho meri jaan mai hi chandni hu jo tujhe apne sath le jane aai hu. Sach me is baar to sahab logo ne bada chokha maal phasaya hai. Tu to ekdum makkhan malai jaisi lagti hai ki hath laga do to maili ho jae aur tere kabootar bhi kitne bade bade hai kaise kaid rakhti hai inhe pinjre me. Tere kabootra to kisi ka bhi kela paka de. Chal abhi jaldi yaha ka drama khatam kar apne ko nikalne ka bhi hai.
Shabana: Ha mere kamre me chaliye.
Chandni: Aae hae meri rasmalai kya patli si awaaz hai teri badan itna gadraya hua aur awaaz itni patli. Aur badi jaldi hai mujhe apne kamre me le jane ki tu kahi us type ki to nahi hai wo kya kehte hai firangi use lebansiya.
Shabana: Lesbian....
Chandni: Ha ha wahi wahi Lebansiya
Shabana: Jee nahi mai waisi nahi hu. Ab hum yaha se chale wo lalu ne kaha tha ki yaha se apko seedha apne kamre me le jau aur apni saheli se milwa du taki use koi doubt na rahe. Aur yaha apko koi pehchaan bhi sakta hai isliye hume chalna chahiye.
Chandni: Ha to chal na khali peeli time khoti kaeku kar reli hai.

Shabana chandni ko lekar apne kamre ki taraf chal di.
Shabana: Dekho neha ke saamne ye kaeku time khoti kar reli hai jaise shabd mat boliyega use shaq ho jaega aap par mujhe jada baat karne dena aap kum se kum bolna.
Chandni: Ek shart par mujhe apne hontho par chummi degi. (Shabana ne ghoor kar dekha) Hahaha tension nako le mazaak kar reli hai apun. Ok apun chup rahega tuhich bolna ok.
Shabana chandni ko lekar jaise hi kamre me andar jati hai andar dakhil wo shock reh gai kyuki andar neha ke sath sath shobha bhi thi.
Neha: Oh di aa gai apki friend maine shobha di ko bhi bata diya ki aapki friend aa rahi hai to wo bhi milne chali aai.
Shabana ko dar tha ki chandni bhi isi area ki hai to kahi shobha ise pehchanti na ho.

Shabana fusfusate hue: Apna burka dhak ke rakhna ye shobha yahi ki hai kahi pehchanti na ho tumhe.
Chandni fusfusate hue: Chandni ko yaha ke mard pehchante hai aurate nahi.
Shabana: Phir bhi hum risk nahi le sakte.
Chandni: Ok
Neha: Ye aap log kya fusfusa rahe hai aaiye na.
Shabana: Nahi hum zada der baithenge nahi chandni ko ghar par bahut kaam hai.
Shobha: Are kaam to sabko rehte hai par tumhari friend mere ghar tak aae aur bina kuchh khae pie chali jae achha nahi lagta.
Shobha ramu kaka ko call karte hai aur unse kuchh chai nashta shabana ke kamre me pahuchane ko kehti hai.
Shobha: Aap apna veil hata sakti hai yaha hum sab aurate hi hai.
Chandni: Nahi theek hai.
Shobha: Ok as u wish, To aap yahi pados wale gaanv me rehti hai kaunsa gaanv hai aapka.
Chandni: Jee Fareedpur
Shobha: Achha aap fareedpur se hai wo to yaha se bus 10 km ki doori par hai.
Shobha: Aur aapke shauhar kya karte hai.
Chandni: Wo thekedaari ka kaam karte hai.

Shobha chandni se sawal pe sawal pooche ja rahi thi aur shabana ka dil dhak dhak kar raha tha ki kahi chandni kuchh ant shant na bak de aur pakdi na jae kyuki ab uski image bhi chandni ke sath jud gai thi aur chandni me pakde jane ka matlab tha uska pakde jana. Tab tak kallu nashte ki tray lekar kamre me aa gaya. Pehle to usne neha ko ghoorkar dekha jiske sath us din ke baad dubara maza karne ka use mauka hi nahi mila tha. Bed par nashta rakhte hue achanak uski nazar burke me baithi us mahila ke haatho me pehni angoothi par gai jisme ek bada sa heera jada tha.
Shobha: Nashta rakh diya na ab jao yaha se.
Kallu kamre se bahar aa gaya par bahar akar wo sochne laga.
Kallu man me: Sala ye angoothi maine kahi dekhi hai kaha dekhi hai are ha ye angoothi to maine us nachaniya chandni bai ke hatho me dekhi thi ekdum same to same. Jab Pratap singh ke yaha jalse me usne naacha tha par ye angoothi is burke wali ke haath me. Are ho sakta hai iske paas bhi same to same waisi hi angoothi ho warna wo naachne wali yaha burke me kyu aaegi.

Shobha: Leejiye na kuchh.
Chandni: Jee nahi wo darasal aaj mera vrat hai.
Shobha: Vrat _o me bhi vrat rakha jata hai.
Chandni ko apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya ki wo kuchh galat bol gai hai par shabana ne mauke ko sambhal liya.
Shabana: Vrat nahi darasal aaj ye apne bachhe ka tika karne ke baad khaegi uski lumbi umar ke liye iski ammi bhi yahi karti thi to wahi adat ise bhi lag gai hai na.
Chandni: Ha waise kaafi der ho rahi hai ab hume chalna chahiye ghar par jaldi aane ka bol kar aai thi.
Shabana: Ha chalte hai. To hum chale.
Shabana ne apna bag utha liya.
Neha: Chalo mai apko neeche gaadi tak chhod aau. Shobha di mai inhe gaadi tak chhod kar aati hu.
Shobha: Ha theek hai tu chhod aa.

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Neha unhe chhodne neeche chali gai aur idhar kamre me maujood shobha neha ke kapdo me aaj raat ko pehenne ke liye koi sexy si dress doondne lagi. Shobha ki nazar neha ki us dress par gai jo neha ne sbaadi wali raat pehni thi red double strip wali par wo neha ke jaisa bold aur hot to banna chahti thi par uski nakal nahi banna chahti thi aur ye dress neha pehen chuki thi isliye wo ye pehene kar vikram ko ye nahi jatana chahti thi ki wo neha ki pehni hui dress pehen kar uski nakal kar rahi hai. Neha ka bag ek se bad kar ek sexy kapdo se bhara tha shobha ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya le aur neha bhi kisi waqt wapas aa sakti thi aur wo uske saamne ye nahi jatana chahti thi ki apne pati ko impress karne ke liye use uske jaise kapdo ki zarurat hai. Neha ke bag me tight fitting leggy, behad sexy shorts, chhoti chhoti chhoti skirt top, sexy lingrie, thong panties lace bra kya kuchh nahi tha neha ke paas. Confusion clear na hone par shobha ne neha ke kapdo me alag alag tarah ke 4-5 kapde nikal liye ek chhoti si shorts ek skirt top ek sexy lingerie ek mini skirt gown aur ek sexy transparent bra panty set bhi nikal liya aur unhe ek polybag me daal kar kamre se nikal gai aur apne kamre me jakar chhupa diya.

Udhar neha ne unko car tak chhod diya shabana ka dil dhak dhak kar raha tha wo ab bhi sure nahi thi ki use jana chahiye ki nahi par jane ke alawa uske paas koi dusra chara bhi nahi tha. Shabana aur Chandni car me baith gae aur car waha se chal di. Car me baith kar chandni ne apna hinaab utar liya.
Chandni: Uff kaise pehne rehte ho tum log ye mai to kuchh der me hi pak gai.

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Chandni ne to car ke andar akar hi apna hijaab utara tha par use nahi pata tha ki kallu ek ped ke peeche se unki car par hi nazar gadae tha aur hijaab utarte hi usne chandni ka chehra dekh liya aur wo use dekhte hi pehchaan gaya.
Kallu: Oh teri ye to sach me wo nachne wali chandni hai mai to bus andaza laga raha tha ye to sach me wo nikli par ye chikni _ti kya karne gai hai iske saath. Iska ek naachne wali se kya rishta hai. Ye baat to pata lagani hogi.

Neha wapas apne kamre me aa gai tab tak shobha apna kaam kar ke ja chuki thi neha ko andaza bhi nahi tha ki shobha uske kuchh kapde le gai hai. Aur na ye andaza tha ki ye chhoti si ghatna unke aane wale samay me kya toofan lane wali thi. Wahi ek nachne wali ko shabana ki rishtedaar ke roop me dekhkar kallu ke man me shabana ke charectar par sandeh utpann ho gaya tha ab pata nahi ye sandeh kis nae ghatnakram ko janm dene wala tha.
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Bhaaii.... bann problem hai to kya abhi khul gaya hai... isiliye update kar paa rahe ho ya phir uc se upload kia?
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(12-10-2019, 12:10 AM)Baban Wrote: Bhaaii.... bann problem hai to kya abhi khul gaya hai... isiliye update kar paa rahe ho ya phir uc se upload kia?

Pata nahi logout karne par wo msg dubara show hota hai.
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Great update.....
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अगले अपडेट के इंतजार मे हु जी।
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Achcha buildup ho raha hai. Agle update ka besabri se intezaar rahega
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Nice build-up
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Super bro
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Mast yarra
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Fantastic
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Nice upadate
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Super update.
Lagta he shabana ke sath kallu ko bhi set karne ka irada he.
Shobha ke role me kuch interesting lavo na jese baki 6 characters ki story he us tarha. Sobha ki story itni interesting nahi lag rahi, jitni baki characters ki he.

Next update ka besabri se intjaar rahega.
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