25-09-2019, 12:16 PM
Jaya started thinking more about Rahim than anyone. where is the second part bro.
Adultery Jaya - young college teacher
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25-09-2019, 12:16 PM
Jaya started thinking more about Rahim than anyone. where is the second part bro.
26-09-2019, 12:29 PM
Please continue
26-09-2019, 01:12 PM
Continue the story
26-09-2019, 01:48 PM
(This post was last modified: 26-09-2019, 01:49 PM by kuttoosan009. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(25-09-2019, 03:20 AM)sauronthenecromancer Wrote: Hands down this is the best erotica I've ever read in many years. Kudos! Your story telling is absolutely mind blowing and you have great talent for story writing. Please continue. (This is my first comment in this website) (23-09-2019, 08:36 PM)prady12191 Wrote: Nice updat (25-09-2019, 06:40 AM)opheliyaa Wrote: good one. waiting for next update. Thanks :D
26-09-2019, 01:57 PM
I need one suggestion from readers.......
Did I explain about the incidents related to Jaya till her in laws went to UK or skip those days by describe in one or two paragraphs? I need to know about this.
26-09-2019, 03:30 PM
Bro I think it's good to skip those incidents..
26-09-2019, 07:01 PM
Dear writer
If you will with that guy it will bore to readers some extent whenever it requires that msn you can introduce. But we need another men sex episodeswith Ramya. And introduce new characters which gives new dimension to sex this is my suggestion. With love _68
26-09-2019, 08:03 PM
Skip tht
Continue main
26-09-2019, 10:41 PM
(26-09-2019, 01:57 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Skip those days bro, this is a erotic story, obviously readers are expecting a steamy session. Last update doesn't have any session, people are eagerly waiting for it. Better not to drag anymore. It's up to you ultimately, you are the author, you know the best.
27-09-2019, 01:40 AM
You are the god of this story.. pls dont ask our suggestions
27-09-2019, 04:28 PM
If you think you need one update to introduce new character and to get going between chotu and Jaya, you can spare a update, let them close to each other. Meanwhile have a small session with Rahim as well to keep the readers on toes.
28-09-2019, 03:54 AM
so nice. continue
28-09-2019, 06:00 AM
continue with your own plans, do not ask opinion.
28-09-2019, 01:38 PM
Lovely story. please continue bro
28-09-2019, 07:15 PM
I think sharma uncle has a bigger role in this story..
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29-09-2019, 12:09 PM
Any update
29-09-2019, 01:19 PM
what happened to part 2 bro?
30-09-2019, 11:40 AM
I think author itself lost interest in this story
30-09-2019, 08:12 PM
9th page... Still no direct fuck
30-09-2019, 10:17 PM
waiting for part 2 indefinitely?
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