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Asha (ek kaam ki Devi )
#61
(20-09-2019, 08:49 PM)TedBundy Wrote: your comment is extremely offensive to the viewers. Dear writer, let this moron alone read your story and comment.

Why you all are fighting with each other.. it's based on totally interfaith..just wait n let me write in my way...I will gradually start sex bw Aslam n asha.let me clear one thing there is no any incest sex in story so please don't fight on this topic...thanks to all for such a great respond..
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#62
(20-09-2019, 02:35 PM)Nasn3432 Wrote: कहानी आपकी सुपरहिट
अपडेट जबरदस्त है।।
आशा का अफेयर किसी
Old highclass ग़ैर मज़हबी
से1 low low चलवाओ..
लव स्टोरी की तरह अलग लुफ्त आएगा ।

Bilkul aisa hi Hoga ..n thanx
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#63
(20-09-2019, 04:59 PM)TedBundy Wrote: excellent update! Brother, please don't turn this into devar-bhabhi incest which is so boring.Hope this story will be an interfaith adultery.

Bro it's not a devar Bhabhi incest story... it's totally based on interfaith..just wait n enjoy..thank you so much
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#64
Nice update bro
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#65
(20-09-2019, 08:38 PM)Ron007 Wrote: you mother fucker, will the writer give importance on only a moron like  you or millions of readers? I know it very well that you are super flop writer. You surely feel jealous of the popularity of other writers.

(20-09-2019, 08:44 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: You have no right to offend all the viewers of this story.If the writer will not notice this ,then almost all the readers will not read this story and also will not comment on this story.

(20-09-2019, 08:49 PM)TedBundy Wrote: your comment is extremely offensive to the viewers. Dear writer, let this moron alone read your story and comment.
so you are trying to impose yourself by English comments....ha ha ha ha.... let me clear i am not offending all readers but the impatient ones not letting the story run in flow ..... 
and don't threat ... you all will walkout and left me alone to read and comment on this thread......... world is not ending with you.. there are millions of readers..... yet to come...........

writer dear....... write as you wish ............. i will not disturb you further

i am here for stories not for mindless sex escapades...... so supported your story buildup..... instead of fucking requests

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#66
I decided to stop this story ...Will meet soon with a powerful interfaith story
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#67
(22-09-2019, 02:11 AM)Anshmade4love Wrote: I decided to stop this story ...Will meet soon with a powerful interfaith story

Brother, please  don't stop this story. This story has been developed nicely so far. The female members of this story are extremely hot and beautiful. So you can turn this story into an extremely exciting and hardcore interfaith theme. Just add a suitable old servant of opposite mazab to this family and let him take care of all beauties of this family and by one like the Karim of buddha tailor. Brother, you should also careful of a reader who is using abusive languages against all the fans of you. please ignore this guy.
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#68
(18-09-2019, 07:40 AM)Anshmade4love Wrote: Hi mera Naam Ansh hai Main kaafi saalon se incest/ Adultery padh rha hoon.
Main Kaafi saalon  se soch raha tha Ek Story likhne ki .
Lekin har baar jab likhne ki sochta toh  ek darr ki wajah se ruk jata .

Lekin fir aaj maine decide kiya hai ki mai apni story likh kr rahunga[Image: wink.png] toh isliye  mai yeh story ki shuruwat kar rha hu.

Mujhe likhne ka koi experience nahi  hai ,aur naa hi meri hindi pure hai so main iss story ko apne natural tareeke se “Hinglish” mei likhunga.
Toh chaliye shuru karte hai!!!
 
Story Intro
Yeh story hai Ash's ki, Asha ek chote sehar mei middle class family mei pali badi hai, uske papa ka aacha khasa business tha toh ghar mei sukh suvidhaon ki kami nahi thi.
Waqt guzarta gya aur  jald hi Asha 20 saal ki ho gayi. Padhai likhayi mei achi hi thi aur shuru se hi pdhane ka shauk that uske isliye usne simple BA ka graduation karke fir teacher ka job join kar liya.
Chota seher tha toh maa baap hi decide karte the ki kaha ladki ki shaadi hongi . Asha ke pita ne apne Khaas dost Mr khurana ke bete  Ajay se Nisha ki Shaadi Tey kardi  , Mr khurana ko toh yakeen hi nahi hua jab saamne se asha ke pita  khud rishte ki baat ki . Ajay 25 saal ka tha, Asha se 5 saal bada tha. Ajay dikhne mei bahot hi sadharan tha uski tond bhi kaafi nikli hui thi sar pe aage se baal bhi udd chuke the , anup ke chasme ka number toh itna tez tha ki  usse durr ka kuch dikhaayi nhi deta tha aur paas ka bhi usse dhundla hi dikhayi deta tha bina chashme ke issi wajah se uski shaadi nhi ho paa rahi thi.
Ajay waise mehnati tha aur apne Papa ka Business wahi dekhta tha.
Ajay ke pariwar mei Ajay ke Maa Baap ke alawa ek badi behen thi jiski shadi hogayi thi aur who dusre seher mei  apne pati aur 2 bacho ke sath rehti thi aur Ajay ko do Bhai hair:-
Vijay ye Ajay ka bada Bhai hai ...
Wife:-rashmi 36-34-38
Shadi ko 2 saal ho gaye lekin abhi koi bachha ni hua hai..
Rakesh Ajay ka chhota Bhai
Achhi khasi body bna rkhi hai abhi college me his aur ek no. Ka tharki ldka hai.
Ye to ho gyi introduction ab chlte hai kahani ki or
 

(18-09-2019, 02:28 PM)Anshmade4love Wrote: Dono pariwar wale Shaadi ki taiyariyon me lag Gaye aur akhirkaar woh shaadi ka din bhi agya aur sare rasmo riwaj ke sath shadi huyi.ab wo waqt aa chuka tha jiska intezar har mard ko rehta hai.
Raat ke 12 baje ka waqt tha.  Asha ghunghat odhe hui saze hue bed pe baithi thi.
Asha ne apne college ke Dino me kafi maze liye the to use sex Uske liye koi nayi baat thi Nahi. ,porn bhi dekh rakha tha usne apni saheliyon ke sath.. usse pata tha suhagraat pe kya hota hai.uski choot me to abhi se hi Pani bahana shuru kr Diya tha Ajay ke Lund k bare me Soch kr.sex ki wo ek jeeti jagti Devi thi.wo imagine kr rhi thi Ajay Ka Kitna bada aur mota hoga.ajay kese kese use ragar ke chodega.lekin Ajay Uske Soch ke ekdam Ulta tha. Ye baat use aage pta chlegi.

Ajay aaya , woh kaafi nervous tha ussne bhi kabhi kisi ladki ke sath kuch nahi kiya tha.
Ajay bed par aa kar baith gya aur Fir Usne Asha ko comfort feel krane ke liye idhar udhar ki baatein ki. Asha dheere-dheere comfortable hone lagi.
Baatein karte karte Asha ki khilkhilahat uss room mei chaar chand laga rahi thi.
Baaton -baton mei Asha ka dhyan nahi raha ki kab uske lehenge ka dupatta sarak gaya.
Asha ne ek tight choli pehn rkhi this jo ki uske 34 size bade boobs ko samet nahi pa rha tha.
Ajay ki nazar jab choli se jhankte chuchiyo pe padi to uska land uske pant me ufan Marne LGA. Usne aise chuche bas pornstaro ke vdos me hi dekhe hue the.usne kabhi imagine nahi kiya tha ki uske khud ke ghar mei uski khudki biwi  ke aise jaanleva chuche  honge.
Asha ki jaise hi nazar ajay se mili aur usne jaise hi uski nazar ka peecha kiya toh uske chehre pe shaitaani mushkan chamak uthi. Usse pata tha ajay kaha dekh raha hai. Usne Ajay se nazar churaake apne blouse ke upar ke do button dheele kardiye aur  usse aur sataane ke liye dono hath upar karke ek zordaar angdai li jsse uske boobs ke dabaav se blouse ke dono already dheele kiye hue buttons khul gaye
Ab Ajay ki halat khrab ho chuki  thi uske sherwani ke pyajamei mei tamboo dikh rha tha
Jisse dekh asha ne apne laal lipstick lage hotho ko daanton se kaat ke Ajay ko ishara kiya .
Yeh Ajay ke liye green signal tha lekin uss murkh ko samajh nahi aaya.
Asha  ajay ki nazron mei apni Nasheeli nazre daali hui thi aur  aur uske chehre pe kaam vaasna wali smile thi. Ajay sharma rha tha aur nazare nahi mila paa raha tha.
Fir asha ne Apne pair bed ke upar liye aur  apne right pair se salwar dheere dheere upar khiskane lagi
Aur jaise uski Gori gori  janghe nangi hui Ajay ke muh se lar tapakne laga.
Fir asha ne Mantr Mugdh Ajay ke chehre ke saaamne Chutki bajayi aur khilkhiyi “Ae Kaha kho gaye aap?, aur apni gori gori chikni thighs ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha  - “ aap hi ki Biwi hoon dekhte rehna jitna mann chahe” .
December ke mahine mei AC hote hue bhi Ajay ko pasine chut rahe the who bhi  Apni hi biwi ke saamne.
Akhir karta bhi kya bechara , usne sapne mei bhi nahi socha tha aisi “SEX Bomb”  se shaadi hogi uski
Aur woh bhi iss chote se seher mein.
Ajay bed ke  ek kone mein baitha hua tha aur asha bade aaraam se bed pe apne dono pair upar kiye hue baithi hui thi
Ajay ne aakhirkaar  kisi tarah asha se kaha – Main tumhari taangon ko chuna chahta hoon.
 
Asha  yeh sunn kar muskarayi aur ajay ki  aakhon mei dekhte hue apni dono baahe piche bed pe tikka di aur apna pao ajay ki god mein  rakh diya.
Uske gore  pairon ki pindliyon  pe bhi mehendi lagi hui thi.ajay ne kaampte hue haatho se uss pair ko sahlaya aur fir himmat karke pair ko upar utha liye aur dheere se chum liya jisspe asha ki ek kamuk siskari nikal gayi usse ajay ka honsla badha gya aur who dheere dheere asha ke pair  ki saari ungliyaan chaatne choosne lag gaye .
Ek mard ke sparsh se asha ki bhi ab halat kharab ho rahi thi aur uske muh se behad hi kamuk siskariya nikalne lgi.
Ab tk Ajay ka lund bilkul tight ho chuka tha.usne asha ke chehre ko dekha,  asha  apne lab daanton se chabake muskurayi aur fir jaan bujhkar apne pairon ki unglioyon se ajay ka lund sehlane lag gayi.. Siskaarne ki baari ab ajay ki  thi.
Jiss tarike se asha  Ajay  ka lund apne pairon se sehla rahi thi usse ajay ka lund ika blood pressure itna badh gya tha maano phat hi jaayega.
Ajay se raha nahi gaya aur usne bistar par asha ke upar chalaang laga di ,..
 
Asha khilkhilaati hui  areee areee areee karti reh gayi aur Ajay sand ki tarah asha pe chad gya.
Asha ke chehra ab bilkul lal ho Chuka tha.
ajay ne asha ke laal labon pe kiss kiya toh asha ne usse usse jawabi kiss diya , asha ne apni jabaan ajay ke muh mei daal di aur use chusne lgi. Ajay ki nazar asha ke chuchiyo pe gayi aur usne dheere se cleavage pe kiss Karne laga  aur fir jitna blouse ke bahar chuchiya dikh rhe the use baari baari  se chaatne lag gya.
Asha bas apne daanton tale hoth kaatke apni siskariyon pe kaabu paa rahi thi.
Ajay ne asha ke chuchiyo ko chus chus Mar laal kar diye . fir usne chuchiyo ko azaad karne ki koshish kari aur zorse blouse ko keencha jisse asha ke blouse ka ek button tut gya aur asha ke boobs pe zor ka pressure padha jisse dard mein karahke asha Chiki "ahhh ”  aur shikayati chehre ke sath  Ajay ki traf dekh ke kaha yeh kyaa kar rahe ho ? Aise kaun karta hai apni bibi ke sath.
Ajay ne batishhi dikhayi , uske  peele peele daant dekh ke asha ko hasi agayi aur boli ruko main karti hu. Aur bed pe baithke apne blouse ke bache  hue saare button khol diye aur blouse ghadi karke bed ke kinare rakh diya ,jab  ajay ne Bra mei aadhe nange boobs dekhe toh uski haalat aur kaharab ho gyi.
Uski halat dekh asha muskurayi aur kaha “kya dekh rahe ho”
Ajay ne jawab diya bahot sundar hai
Asha ne khilkhilate hue apne boobs ke upar laal nishaano ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha   
“Isliye tumne inki yeh haalat kardi ? aur toh toh itni zor ka blouse keencha ki ek pal ke liye laga inhe (boobs ki ore isshara karke ) ukhaad hi donge  “
 
Ajay bas batisi dikhata hua bola ki control hi nahi hua .aur fir se asha ko bed pe dhakal diya ab bra ke upar se nipple chusne laga  aur asha apne lab kaatte hue tadapti rahi .
thodi der baad  usne hath asha ki  chikni peeth pe le jaake uski red color ki bra kholne ki koshish kari . Asha muskurati rahi usse pata tha yeh buddhu nahi khol payenga , asha ne Ajay se kaha ruko Kholti hu aur fir haath pieeche le jaake bra khol di aur usse apne boobs se bra nikaal ke ek aur bed pe rakh di.
Ab mahol bahot garam tha . Asha upar se puri nangi thi..
Uske boobs chamak rahe the pasine aur ajay ke chaatne aur Choosne ki wajah  se jama hue thook se  ..
Pasina toh aana hi tha  ajay jaisa  sand  jo itne der se uske Sexy patle shareer ke upar chada hua tha .
 
Ajay bas dekhta reh gya pehli baar usne nange chuchiya dekhe the . Asha ke nipples puri tarah kadak hue the iss waqt.
Asha Ajay ko aur tadpaane ke liye zor se saans li jisse boobs aur bhi kamuk style mei uthne girne lage . Ajay fir doodh peeta bacha bangya aur nipples ka ras nichodne laga .usne dono nipples ko zor zor se choosna shuru kardiya.
Asha tadap uthi aur thodi der baad uth ke baith gyi aur sexy andaz mei bed se niche utarke khadi hogyi aur khilkhiltate hue usne apne lehnge ki salwar ka naada khol diya aur salwar wahi gir gayi .
Uski chikni taange chamak rahi thi iss waqt .usne ispe bhi bas nhi ki aur apna akhri vastr panty pe nikal di.
Saamne jo nazara tha woh qayamt tha - 36 Boobs 32 Waist: or 38 ki gand kyamat dha rhi this.
Socho kya halat hui hogi Ajay ke lund ki ??
Aur kamuk smile liye hue jaake ajay ki god mein baith gayi .ajay ke liye yeh bahot hi jyada tha uska lund phate jaa rha tha.
Asha ne Ajay ke hothon ko apne hothon ki qaid mein kiya aur uske sherwani ke buttons kholne lag gayi aur fir sherwani utaar di , ab usne ajay ke pyajame ka naada khola aur pyajama niche gir pada.
Fir usne kiss karte hue hi ajay ke lund ko underwear ke upar se hi apne nakhuno se sehlanaa shuru kardiya. Ajay ki haalat bahot kharab thi  iss maze aur anand ke kaaran  who zor zor se siskaare jaa raha tha, jisse dekh asha ko hasi agayi aur ussne shikayati andaz mei Ajay ko dheere awaaze nikaalne ko kaha. Jiski wajah se Ajay  ne  waha  bagal mei padi hui Nisha ki panty leke apne muhh mei daal di awaaz dabaane ke liye.
Fir asha ne dheere dheere Ajay ki underwear niche kari aur ajay ka lund dekh ke usski hasi chut padi .lund kaafi average size tha.usne jese Lund ke sapne dekhe the wo uske bilkul opposite tha..man masks kar usne uss lund ko apne haatho se dheere dheere sehlaya aur fir usse ek masti sujhi woh god se niche utari aur farsh pe ghutno ke bal baith gayi aur dheere se ajay ki ankhon mein ankhen daalen hue uske lund ki taraf jhuki  aur lund ko kiss kiya Ajay ke lund mei jahtke aane lage .. Ajay ke muh se siskari chhut gyi.yeh sun asha iss garam mahoul mei bhi hase bina nahi reh paayi.
Asha ne fir Ajay ke lund ko dheere dheere apne Muh mei li aur  lolypop ki tarah chusne lgi
Asha ke choosne se Ajay ka lund geela ho gya tha aur thoda laal bhi – kuch toh asha ki lipstick ka asar aur kuch lund ka blood pressure.
Asha ko lund ka taste aacha laga usne fir se lund apne garam muh mei leliya aur iss baar zor zor se choosne lagi. Ajay Siskarta rha Ajay se bardaast nahi ho rha tha usne  asha ko zor se haafte hue kaha  -" asha mei aur nahi sehen kar paaunga bas karo  aaahhhh aaahhh ahhhh" lekin asha ne masti mei usse bed pe peeche dhakal ke lita diya. Ajay bed pe apna sar patakne laga usse maza itna jyada aa rha tha ki pucho mat aur use asha ka garam muh aisa lag rha tha jaise garam bhati me koi lund dal ho ..us se sehan nahi ho paaya aur asha ke muh mei ek tez dhaar dhaar safed rang ki pichari chut gayi …jo seedhe asha ke halak tak gayi.
Asha ko iss aachanak hue hamle se sambhalne ka mauka nahi mila aur woh zor zor se khaasne lgi. asha Anup ki taraf shikayati nazaro se dekhti huyi boli .
Yeh kya kiya aapne – saara Virya halak se hota hua  mere pait mein chala gya.
Ajay batishhi dikhaata hua bola Sorry - agli baar mei isse sahi jagah se pait mei pahuchaunga
Chalo So jaate hai  raat ke 3 baj rahe hai  aaj tak mei kabhi bhi 12 baje se jyada nahi jaaga
 
Asha ne mann hi mann apne pati ko kosha “ hai meri maa , yeh toh mujhe pyasa hi chod ke so raha “. Ajay ke murjhaaye  lund ki taraf dekh ke usse samajh agaya ki yeh Maharaj toh already so chuke hai ab aaj aur kuch nahi hona . Toh usne Ajay ko good night kaha aur nighty leke bathroom chali gayi aur apne ungli se apni chut ki garmi ko shant krne lgi.
Jab tak wo bathroom se bahar aayi , room mei Charon taraf andhera tha. ajay so chuka tha.
Asha bas man masos kr reh gyi aur jaake ajay ki bagal me so gyi aur apne aane wale kal ke bare me sochne lgi.asha ne jesa socha tha Ajay k bare  me aaj aisa kuch nahi hua tha ..Ye sb sochte sochte kB uski aankh lg gyi ye use pta hi nahi chla.

Agli subah 10 baje ke kareeb Nisha ki ankh khuli toh wo bed pe akele hi thi.wo bathroom ja kr fresh huyi aur aakar bed pe baithi hi thi kind uski Nanand  chai leke aayi room mei, aur asha ko dekhte huge shararati andaaz mein pucha  “Aur Bhabhi  neend aayi aapko aache se raat me.
Jisse sunn Nisha ne ek ek jhoothi hasi ke sath kaha  Haanji bahot aachi nind aayi.

Nanand bhi hasi aur usne kaha aap ready hoke dinning mein aajaye  Nashte ke liye sab wait kar rahe hai .. asha ne ha me sar hila diya.
nisha abhi sirf ek nighty me thi..wo sheeshe ki taraf badhi aur apni nighty utaar ke seeshe ke saamne apne aap ko nihaarne lagi toh uski nazar apne boobs pe gayi , boobs ab bhi lal the aur unpe daanton ka nishaan tha, halka meetha dard bhi ho raha tha. Nisha bas dekh ke hasdi aur apne dono boobs ko hathon se upar uthaake unpe fakar karne lagi. Fir usne shower liya aur  apne suitcase mei se shaadi mei mila hua ek shaandar sa heavy sa suit nikaalke pehen liya aur fir dressing table ke saamne khade hoke halka sa makeup karke dinning ki traf badh gayi.

Jaise hi asha dinning mei pahuhchi toh uski Saans ne bahot hi pyar se usko gale lagake swagat kiya. Dinning mein Nisha ke saas-sasur ke alawa Nisha ki nanad priya aur uske do bacche jo abhi chota the Ajay ke bare Bhai vijay aur uski Bibi rashmi aur uska devar bathe the.
asha ne bhi Sanskari bahu ki tarah sabko Namaste kiya aur sabke Pao padke aashirwaad liya aur Ajay ke bagal me ja baithi aur sb breakfast krte huye idhr udhr ki bate hone lgi..
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Ohhhhhhhh Fuckkkkkk...word to word meri story ka copy paste kar Raha yeh Chu....

Religious character wale update 3 Ko chodke

Update 1 and update 2, update 6  word to word meri story ka copy Kiya...
https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=12664


Chu..story  toh ki hi ki ..atleast khud ka intro toh original rakhta ??

Agla update yeh mere character ka name change karke AAP sab Ko khush karenga Angry Angry

@Moderators please look into this ..need your attention asap..
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#69
(18-09-2019, 08:51 AM)Aurora Wrote: Congrats for the new story! Hope it will be a pure interfaith adult story in which a low class man of opposite mazab will seduce a loving and faithful house wife and at last she gives in his seduction and begins to cheat on her husband and continue her illicit affairs.

(19-09-2019, 11:09 AM)Mafiadon Wrote: Excellent update !very much well thought writing.keep going.

(20-09-2019, 02:29 PM)Introvert Wrote: Wow! Wonderfully delicious writing! The is developing to the right direction. Please consider the readers expectation that means the interfaith theme.


Guys as genuine readers I request you to stop promoting Piracy 
I observed the same things in Xossip days with Pinkbaby and Evil..never thought this will happen me too...

Please Read the original and decide yourself

https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=15833

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#70
(19-09-2019, 11:26 AM)TedBundy Wrote: Awesome update. Incredible writing style.It will be more exciting if only aslam takes care all the beauties of this family.Please let aslam become as a permanent housekeeper .

(19-09-2019, 11:52 AM)Terminator Wrote: Wow!wow! this update is very meticulously written by the very special pen of you.
just awesome, sensual, wonderful update.
appreciated this very much my dear,please give importance only on aslam as a hero then this story will be one of the most erotic and pure interfaith adultery.

(19-09-2019, 12:03 PM)Dahlia Wrote: bahut hi mast kahaani, bahut badhiya tharia se likha aapne.

(19-09-2019, 01:33 PM)Ghosthunter Wrote: Wooooowwww!!!!!!! Fantastic, fabulous, very very nice and wonderful update.

(19-09-2019, 04:15 PM)Vampire Wrote: lajawab kahaani,bahut khoob!


Guys ...  ... 
Request you all to stop promoting this Fake moroon..
It has taken me 6- 8 hrs of hard work to imagine  think & write each  of  those updates

Will  appreciate your appreciation s there
https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=12664
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#71
(20-09-2019, 10:23 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: so you are trying to impose yourself by English comments....ha ha ha ha.... let me clear i am not offending all readers but the impatient ones not letting the story run in flow ..... 
and don't threat ... you all will walkout and left me alone to read and comment on this thread......... world is not ending with you.. there are millions of readers..... yet to come...........

writer dear....... write as you wish ............. i will not disturb you further

i am here for stories not for mindless sex escapades...... so supported your story buildup..... instead of fucking requests

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Friend , you are fighting on a Copy pasted story..
Sorry to disappoint you but what  you want/expect from  in this story has already been already written months
 back...
Since u r in my buddy list When  I had started I had personally  pm'd you ABT it too..
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#72
yes i have seen it and as a writer and reader im totally against this... if you want to write and wanna do such things you should took permits/acknowledgment of the original writer. First of all you should write your own stuff and be proud of yourself. don't do this type of shitty things
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#73
Dude ...you were going good.. please continue
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#74
watinggggggggggggggggggg
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#75
watinggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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