20-09-2019, 08:37 AM
स्टोरी ठीक है
सबको आशा थी
Interfaith basis होगी ।
ऐसा कुछ नहीं हुआ इसलिए ।
बहुत मज़ा nahin आ रहा हैं ।
सबको आशा थी
Interfaith basis होगी ।
ऐसा कुछ नहीं हुआ इसलिए ।
बहुत मज़ा nahin आ रहा हैं ।
Asha (ek kaam ki Devi )
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20-09-2019, 08:58 AM
Excellent update! Wonderful development!keep writing this way and gradually turns this story into a hardcore interfaith illicit affairs.
20-09-2019, 02:18 PM
(20-09-2019, 08:37 AM)Nasn3432 Wrote: स्टोरी ठीक है
सबको आशा थी
Interfaith basis होगी ।
ऐसा कुछ नहीं हुआ इसलिए ।
बहुत मज़ा nahin आ रहा हैं ।
Story interfaith basis pe hi h..bt aaplog ko pehle hi din se chudai Chahiye story me...sbka Bari aayega thoda wait kr lo..thodi kahani ko aage bdhne do asha koi Rand thodi h Jo ek hi din me sbse chudwa le
20-09-2019, 02:19 PM
20-09-2019, 02:29 PM
Wow! Wonderfully delicious writing! The is developing to the right direction. Please consider the readers expectation that means the interfaith theme.
20-09-2019, 02:35 PM
कहानी आपकी सुपरहिट
अपडेट जबरदस्त है।।
आशा का अफेयर किसी
Old highclass ग़ैर मज़हबी
से1 low low चलवाओ..
लव स्टोरी की तरह अलग लुफ्त आएगा ।
अपडेट जबरदस्त है।।
आशा का अफेयर किसी
Old highclass ग़ैर मज़हबी
से1 low low चलवाओ..
लव स्टोरी की तरह अलग लुफ्त आएगा ।
20-09-2019, 04:59 PM
excellent update! Brother, please don't turn this into devar-bhabhi incest which is so boring.Hope this story will be an interfaith adultery.
20-09-2019, 05:29 PM
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20-09-2019, 08:30 PM
Sare chutiye pehle update se hi chudai chahte hain.... Wo bhi mulle se.....
Kahani ko age to badhne do.... Agar sabr nahi ho raha to bahar niklo ghar se aur kisi mulle ko lakar apni maa, behan, biwi, beti jo bhi ho unhein chudwao.....
Jab tak kahani bhi buildup hokar chudai par pahuch jayeigi
Great narration.... Keep it up
Kahani ko age to badhne do.... Agar sabr nahi ho raha to bahar niklo ghar se aur kisi mulle ko lakar apni maa, behan, biwi, beti jo bhi ho unhein chudwao.....
Jab tak kahani bhi buildup hokar chudai par pahuch jayeigi
Great narration.... Keep it up
20-09-2019, 08:38 PM
(20-09-2019, 08:30 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: Sare chutiye pehle update se hi chudai chahte hain.... Wo bhi mulle se.....
Kahani ko age to badhne do.... Agar sabr nahi ho raha to bahar niklo ghar se aur kisi mulle ko lakar apni maa, behan, biwi, beti jo bhi ho unhein chudwao.....
Jab tak kahani bhi buildup hokar chudai par pahuch jayeigi
Great narration.... Keep it up
you mother fucker, will the writer give importance on only a moron like you or millions of readers? I know it very well that you are super flop writer. You surely feel jealous of the popularity of other writers.
20-09-2019, 08:44 PM
(20-09-2019, 08:30 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: Sare chutiye pehle update se hi chudai chahte hain.... Wo bhi mulle se.....
Kahani ko age to badhne do.... Agar sabr nahi ho raha to bahar niklo ghar se aur kisi mulle ko lakar apni maa, behan, biwi, beti jo bhi ho unhein chudwao.....
Jab tak kahani bhi buildup hokar chudai par pahuch jayeigi
Great narration.... Keep it up
You have no right to offend all the viewers of this story.If the writer will not notice this ,then almost all the readers will not read this story and also will not comment on this story.
20-09-2019, 08:49 PM
(20-09-2019, 08:30 PM)kamdev99008 Wrote: Sare chutiye pehle update se hi chudai chahte hain.... Wo bhi mulle se.....
Kahani ko age to badhne do.... Agar sabr nahi ho raha to bahar niklo ghar se aur kisi mulle ko lakar apni maa, behan, biwi, beti jo bhi ho unhein chudwao.....
Jab tak kahani bhi buildup hokar chudai par pahuch jayeigi
Great narration.... Keep it up
your comment is extremely offensive to the viewers. Dear writer, let this moron alone read your story and comment.
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