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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
Very nice and sexy update kavita Ji.
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Don't discourage writers.
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Awesome mam
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(12-01-2019, 07:17 PM)SARFARAZ Wrote: Don't discourage writers.

Thanks for ur view

But i will humbly say  i had not ask u or invited u to read this story

Don't  know why u waisted ur precious time for reading this bull shit


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(12-01-2019, 09:14 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Thanks for ur view

But i will humbly say  i had not ask u or invited u to read this story

Don't  know why u waisted ur precious time for reading this bull shit

Don't discourage writers.
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(12-01-2019, 09:21 PM)SARFARAZ Wrote: Don't discourage writers.

Where is my attitude  just thanks keha tuhadey views lyi


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(12-01-2019, 09:22 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Where is my attitude  just thanks keha tuhadey views lyi

Don't discourage writers.
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(12-01-2019, 09:25 PM)SARFARAZ Wrote: Don't discourage writers.

U know wat 

Mera dil karda c k tuhanu kahan 

Get lost go to hell i dont care about silent readers like u jehrey munh chuk  acount bna kuch b kadi b bhaunk dindey ney par 



fer sochea tuhanu eh sab keh kyoun apna mood upset karna ... kuttey tan bhaunkdey rehndey n nwa jameya katura kayi baar jyada e choon choon krda ...
 Eslyi tuhadey comment n views tey no comment bs ehi kahungi dnt read n also edan react na karo jiven pay krkey story read kr rahey o its a free site jo just chill


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(12-01-2019, 09:32 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: U know wat 

Mera dil karda c k tuhanu kahan 

Get lost go to hell i dont care about silent readers like u jehrey munh chuk  acount bna kuch b kadi b bhaunk dindey ney par 



fer sochea tuhanu eh sab keh kyoun apna mood upset karna ... kuttey tan bhaunkdey rehndey n nwa jameya katura kayi baar jyada e choon choon krda ...
 Eslyi tuhadey comment n views tey no comment bs ehi kahungi dnt read n also edan react na karo jiven pay krkey story read kr rahey o its a free site jo just chill


Don't discourage writers.
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very nice update ji....keep it up
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Hey kavitta don't spoil your mood because of Sarfrazz the ass hole..
You know your worth already,thwdiyaan storied sirf stories nahin blki thwade readers di life da eham part hai.
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Sarfrazz behnchood chotti lulli aale silent reader maachod. Je Inna sikllfull haiga na tu likh k wkha kuj pelaan ghussi deya.
Bneya firda critic.
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(12-01-2019, 10:45 PM)Minister Wrote: Hey kavitta don't spoil your mood because of Sarfrazz the ass hole..
You know your worth already,thwdiyaan storied sirf stories nahin blki thwade readers di life da eham part hai.

Don't discourage writers.
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(12-01-2019, 10:50 PM)Minister Wrote: Sarfrazz behnchood chotti lulli aale silent reader maachod. Je Inna sikllfull haiga na tu likh k wkha kuj pelaan ghussi deya.
Bneya firda critic.

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Fudi lan ghasseHor kee hove sexy storie with,  Vadhiaa keep it up l
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(12-01-2019, 10:59 PM)Gilly Wrote: Fudi lan ghasseHor kee hove sexy storie with,  Vadhiaa keep it up l

Don't discourage writers.
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 'Bas ho gya  bhabhiiiii...' puri ruh nal gassa mar jeetu apney patt preet dey chittadn nal jod lun fudi ch gol gol ghuma apna pani kadn lyi jor laa hauka lenda bolea
 'Hye jeetu jaldi kr lay ' ghut k ganney dono hathn ch fdi preet di hun har gassey nal hichki nikldi ...lattan thakn lagea kaudi hoyi dean. . fudi chud k sarur ch dubi tang hundi har gassey nal machldi behal hon lgi.. dar nal bura hall c koi kamaad andr na aa javey.
 bund chuk jeetu dey lun tey gassa mardi machldi hoyi boli  'kad lay jeetu hun ..'
 'Bs thori der hor bhabhi vohat swad aa riha'  preet da lak fad  fudi dey nikley pani nal bhijiya  lun pura andr dhak dhur tak puja  machlda hoyea siskia' bs hon wala mera..'
 'Hye kr na fer apna    um.mhhh ahhhh jeetu hor nyi kaudi ho hunda thak gyi mein chad dey menu minnat ali gal a .'gardan  ghuma jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  mein tan fas gyi tere nal kammaad andr  aa k' 
 'Ho gya bhabhi  'khali kahli ch tika tika gassey marda jeetu aukhey sah lenda preet di grm fudi ch ghutey lun nu gassa mar dhur tak puja machlda hoyea bolea'  hon lga..'
 'Ahhh hunda tan hay nyi ...  'bund upr nu chuk hauka lay siskardi preet jeetu da lun apni fudi ch ghutdi aukhey aukhey sah lendi boli  'jaldi kr lay es ton pehlan koi labhda hoyea kammaad andr aa javey ... dil dhark riha c usda kini der ho gyi c usnu jeetu naal kammaad ch wadi nu .. kahli kshli ch ghabrandi hoyi  gardan ghuma us rah wal vekhn lgi jidron o tey jeetu kammaad andr wadey c  .. hye rabba j koi aa gya sochdi dean lattan hun dr nal kambn lagea
 'Nyi anda ..  ' bull ghut assmaan wal vekhda jeetu  hauka lay siskar utheya lun bekabu ho sath chadn lga bdi muskil nal apney tey kabu paan lyi rukeya e c k bhabhi ney picheyo tika k lun tey fudi da gassa mar usdi jaan e kad lyi machlda hoyea cheek utheya'  ahhhhhh bhabhiiii mar ditta menu tusi 
.'

 'Shabaash shabbash  kad kad'  apna lak hila jeetu dey lun vichon nikldi dhar  nal nihal hundi preet haukey bharya sah lendi chehak e uthi. . 
 'Ummmmh bhabhiiii'  puri jaan la gassa  marda jeetu preet da lak fad usnal chimbd e gya saho sahi hoyea apney lun nu usdi fudi ch nichoda hauka lenda volea ' voht mja aa riha c bhabhi ...'
 'Mjey dey lagdya j kiran didi sanu labhdi edr aa jandi  'gardan ghuma jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli sara mja vich e reh jana c ...tun tan edan liti jiven mud kadi milni e na hovey...'
 'Puchu na bhabhi  ' agey nu ho fer gsssa marn di kosis krda jeetu machlda hoyea bolea' khulley aasmaan ch hildey ganneya vich menu tan har jhaktey nal enj lag riha c jiven mera hon lga .. 
 'Meinu puch dar nal mera kinna burra hal c ..tere nal kammaad andr wad tan gyi ... 'lak hila jeetu da lun apni fudi ch ghut nichordi preet apney sah sambhldi boli'  j didi vekh lendi ja fer awaz maar lendi ...'
 'Shukr a kisi ney nyi..' lamba sah lay preet di fudi vichon lun bahr kad khet ch edr udr vekhda bolea jeetu'  hye kammaad ch  kinni andr aa gye asin....




 'Bhukad jeha'  apney kapdey jhad sar dey wall theek  kar gutt pichey nu sutt hik tey  chunni lendi jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Kyoun  'apney bull ghut preet wal vekh jeetu apney kapdeya wal vekhda hasda masoom jeha bn   bolea
 'Hor  ki...' jeetu nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekh bull chabdi preet boli'  tun tan edan chimbdeya menu   jidan mud k kadi milni nyi hundi .. '
 'Sabr nyu hunda c'  preet wal vekhda jeetu angrayi lainda  bolea  'swad e ena aa riha c' 
 'Sabr kri da hunda kaka ji'  apni kameej da palla fad jhardi preet hasdi hoyi  boli' tun tan edan lga jiven bhabhi nayi koi beigani hath aa gyi hovey tey  mud k milni na hovey' 
' hun tusi aap tan bhaj k kammaad andr wadey c '  preet dean akhn ch vekh akh marda jeetu bolea'  menu ki pta c tusi  ..'
 Oh ho acha ji ...... Eni der nyi layidi kammadi ch kudi nal kaka ji .' jeetu da hath fad  kammaad dey khet ton bahr nu nikldi preet usnu cherdi voli'  nyi tan mud k nayi jandi kudi kammaad andr ..'

Chekhki hasdi jeetu nal gallan krdi kammaad dey khet ton bahr andi ek dum chup kr gyi  preet..
 'Ki hoyea bhabhi'  preet nu chup vekh hasda hoyea jeetu us wal vekh bolea
 'Didi edr nu andi pyi a  'jeetu da hath chad bhaj k kammaad ton nikl watt tey khad ganneya wal edn vekhn lgi jiven usney kiran nu vekheya e na hovey ...
Tey jeetu o tan Kiran bhabhi nu apney wal andi vekh kammaad di watt tey preet ton thora dur khada ho  apni ghabrahat luko  us wal vekhda bolea'   'ayo bhabhi.. ganna chupna..' 
 'Nyi preet nu chup wa ganna .. 'hasdi hoyi jeetu wal vekh fer preet wal vekh sharart ch akh mar preet nu  cherdi kiran  boli'  sadey tan apney khet ch   batherey ganney lagey ney ...' 
 'Chup layo didi'  kiran wal vekh preet b usnu cherdi akhan matkandi voli'  deor eney pyar naal keh riha ..'
 'Koi  na ...tun choop  '  jeetu ton akh bacha preet dey lak tey chundi wad di kiran hasdi hoyi usdey kan kol bull lya holi jehi boli'  lagda jatt ney khich  ditta kanda jatti da kammaad ch lija k ...'
 'Ghat kaun krda  'jeetu nu ganney todan ch lga vekh preet b kiran dey moddey tey modda maar hasdi hoyi boli' lagda saag da pura mull mod k aye o tusi b jatt nu ..'
 'Edan e a'  preet wal vekh hasdi hoyi kiran  boli'  kehra jatt khet ch ayi jatti nu muft ch saag todn dayouga ...'
 'Oye hoye ...' hasdi hoyi preet kuch kehn e lgi c k jeetu nu ganna tod kol anda vekh gal badldi boli'  chaleya didi ...'
 ' haan'  kuch sochdi hath ch  fadeya saag vekhdi kiran boli'  tun tan nyi lay k jana saag .'
' nyi didi ..' kiran nal turdi preet usnu cherdi boli'  bda mehnga saag a tusi e rakho..'
 'Aho ..' preet wal vekh akhn matkandi kiran b usnu cherdi dhukwa jwaab dindi boli'  tenu ki lord.. taja taja ganna chup k ayi a kammaad ch wad ..'
 'Edan e a ..' kiran wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi  kuch kehn e lgi c jeetu nu apney wal vekhda vekh  chup e kr gyi 
fer kuch sochdi hoyi boli'  chalea ghar bibi udeek di honi ..'
 'Haan mein cycle lay awan'  cycle wal janda jeetu bolea 
 Mein b tere jeejey nu keh k ayi jaldi aa jawey ghar'  inder wal jandi  kiran hasdi hoyi boli'  sara sara din khetan ch e lga rehnda.....


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kya baat hai kavita ji swaaad e aa gea....... thanks and happy Lohri....
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(12-01-2019, 09:32 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: U know wat 

Mera dil karda c k tuhanu kahan 

Get lost go to hell i dont care about silent readers like u jehrey munh chuk  acount bna kuch b kadi b bhaunk dindey ney par 



fer sochea tuhanu eh sab keh kyoun apna mood upset karna ... kuttey tan bhaunkdey rehndey n nwa jameya katura kayi baar jyada e choon choon krda ...
 Eslyi tuhadey comment n views tey no comment bs ehi kahungi dnt read n also edan react na karo jiven pay krkey story read kr rahey o its a free site jo just chill

Best reply ever.... hun agla cover  karan lai  jo marji karda rahe par ik var ta pooori lassi karti Kavita ji.....
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Bahut hi garma garma te vadhiya sawad vi chokha aya . lage raho
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