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Angrakshak Parivar Ka .........MAHI
(08-09-2019, 09:24 PM)omkarkumar2001 Wrote: Bhai updates please


Sorry friends update dene mei thoda delay ho raha hai ..... UPDATE 18 Jo 4 part mei hai usko ek saath poora upload karunga .... Toh adjust karo .

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(09-09-2019, 04:26 PM)Dmahi19 Wrote: Sorry friends update dene mei thoda delay ho raha hai ..... UPDATE 18 Jo 4 part mei hai usko ek saath poora upload karunga .... Toh adjust karo .

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(09-09-2019, 04:26 PM)Dmahi19 Wrote: Sorry friends update dene mei thoda delay ho raha hai ..... UPDATE 18 Jo 4 part mei hai usko ek saath poora upload karunga .... Toh adjust karo .

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Ok Bhai .hum wait kar rahe hai bhai
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Great update..waiting for next...
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Bhai updates
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Intajar
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Updates plz
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(11-09-2019, 06:32 PM)omkarkumar2001 Wrote: Updates plz

Next update will be posted today after 11 pm ...

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Intjaar hai update ka
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Wait kar rahe hai bhai
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(11-09-2019, 09:29 PM)Dmahi19 Wrote: Next update will be posted today after 11 pm ...

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2bej re Hain update nai aye.m
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(12-09-2019, 02:05 AM)akii_789 Wrote: 2bej re Hain update nai aye.m

Bhai 2 baar try Kiya ya toh site hang ho jaati ya phir almost pura upload huya Update post karne ke baad gayab ....
Na page open ho raha hai  apni hi story ka ...

I again try in in 30 mins to upload
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Bhai ab to try kar lo
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UPDATE - 18 

PART - 1 


Kuldeep ko Garima ne 6 goliyan maar di gussey me aakar ..... Aryan ko pata tha aisa ho sakta hai par woh yeah chahta bhi tha nahi bhi ..... Garima ko Aryan ne phatak se pakda aur gun Neela ko di aur Garima ko jaldi se lekar torture chamber waale room se bahar nikal gaya aur doosrey room mei phoucha , Garima bas royti rahi. Aryan ne usko puchkara aur batyaa ki Saloni mummy jinda hai aur mujhe pakka pata hai kahan hogi ...... rahi baat Dr Kuldeep ki woh tumharey asli father nahi hain ? par ishka answer Saloni mummy se milne ke baad lena, agar woh nahi batyai toh mein baad mein bataa dunga ..... par yeah baat kisi ko pata na chaley ki tumne Dr Kuldeep ko maara ki koshish ki hai ok "...... Garima ke aansoon saaf karke Aryan ne Garima ko 2-3 baat aur batayi ......


Phir Neela ko call karke bulaya ......room mei aakar Neela halke halke muskara rahi thi ...... Aryan aur Garima ko ek doosrey se pyar se baatien kartey huye dekh rahi thi ...... Garima ki peeth Neela ki taraf thi Garima boli ," Bhai mujhe ush jallad aurat ke saath mat bhejo usko dekhkar hi darr lagta hai ".... tabhi Neela boli ," don't worry madam I will not harm you " ( pareshan na ho madam mein aapko nuksaan nahi phoucha gi )..... Garima ne palat ke dekha toh darr kar Aryan se aur jaada chipak gayi ..... tabhi Aryan ka phone ring huya aur usne call attend ki aur udher se baat sunne laga toh dheere dheere uskey chehre par muskaan aa gayi,"mein 30 minute mei phouchta Hoon ".... Aryan ne answer kar call cut kiya .....


Aryan ," Neela tum yahan sambhalo mein Garima ke saath seher jaa raha hoon "...... Neela kuch sochkar ," sir any good news ?"...... Aryan hastey huye pehle Garima ka maatha chooma ," Meri lucky choti behen mere pass hai toh good nahi best news milli hai "..... aur phir Garima ke gaal par kaat leta hai halke se ..... Garima hastey huye ," ahhhh Bhai kaat mat "...... Aryan bola ," jaa washroom mei fresh hokar aa hamey jaldi nikalna hai" ..... Garima fresh hone room se attached bathroom mei chali gayi .... 


Aryan aur Neela room ke bahar chale jatey hain toh Aryan Neela ko sabkuch bata deta hai aur usko kuch instructions dekar room mei aata hai toh Garima bhi bathroom se bahar aati hai ..... Aryan Garima ko apne saath leta hai phir parking area mei jaata hai jahan pehle se 4 guards unka ek SUV mei wait kar rahey they ..... Aryan aur Garima ander beth jatey hain aur SUV chal deti aur kareeb 1 km tunnel mei chalne ke baad Farmhouse ke dosrey gate se bahar nikalti hai ...... Garima Aryan ke kandhey par sar rakhey bethi thi ..... SUV seher ki aur daud rahi thi jiski manjil Dr Anju ke Main (ya sabse pehla ya sabse puraney) hospital thi ...... 


yeah hospital Choudry MADHAV SINGH ne Dr Anju ko banwa ke diya tha par Dr ANJU ne ish hospital ko apni mehnat se 10 saal mei city ka sabse bada hospital banna diya ..... aaj ki date mei super specialty aur Tertiary level (3rd level) ka advanced hospital tha Jo ki 5 acre mei phaila tha ..... ishme research facilities aur high-tech laboratory bhi thi ...... Dr Anju ki aaj ki date mei kareeb 10 hospital ki chain thi apne state mei ..... aur seher mei 2 aur branch bhi thi...... toh Aryan aur Garima Dr Anju ke Main hospital jaa rahey they....

udher Neela room mei jaati hai aur dekhti hai Dr Kuldeep aur Mira (nakli Saloni ) buri tarah se pitey huye aur lahu luhan ek doosrey se chipte bethe they aur bas roo rahey they ...... yeah kya Dr Kuldeep jinda hai ??? toh phir jo Garima ne usko 6 goli maari thi kaisey bach gaya ???? ..... sawal kayi saarey they par jawab sirf Neela ya Aryan ke pass tha joh ab Garima ke saath hospital ke liye nikal gaya tha....


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toh thoda pichle chaltey hain______

jab Neela Aryan ke pass aayi thi Dr Anju ka sandesha dene , ki Garima ko koi nuksaan na ho ...... toh Aryan ne Neela ko samjha diya tha ki apni special gun laana joh tumney Geeta ko bhi di thi par dhayan rahey agar Garima goli chala di, koi bhi chehre ya gardan par na lagey ishliye wahin uskey pass rehna ...... Saloni mummy kahan hongi unka pata mujhe 99% yakin ho gaya hai par kis haal mei hongi yeah nahi pata ..... par plan-B ke mutabik Kuldeep hamey har haal mei jinda chaiye ...... 

haan dosto aapko agar aapko yaad ho Aryan aur Geeta ki pehli mulakaat ki kaisey haweli mei Aryan ki entry par swagat kartey huye usper firing ki rubber ki goliyon ka par usney shotgun se fire kiya tha aur yahan Garima ne pistol se par dono jagah Neela ki goliyan thi ..... Aryan par goliyan ka kya asar hota hai humko pata hai. par agar ek bhi goli Kuldeep ki gardan ya face par lagti toh uski mout bhi ho jaati par Neela ne badi chalaki se Garima ke josh ko dekh usko halka sa push kiya jab hoslter se gun nikali toh josh mei saari goli Kuldeep ke seene par lagi jis par pehle se moti shirt mei padding thi ...... Aryan ne Garima ko itna mokka hi nahi diya ki woh dekh sakey ki Kuldeep marr chuka hai ya nahi ..... sabkuch plan ke mutabik huya. uske baad dono Laila majnu (Kuldeep aur Mira ) ko ek saath rakh diya gaya aur painkillers se lekar adrenaline ke injections bhi de diye hain toh nahi marenge abhi .....

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Garima apne test mei pass huyi kyonki Aryan se jaada sakh Neela aur Beena ko tha ...... par Saloni (asli) ka gayab hona aur nakli Saloni (Mira) ki presence ne Aryan aur Neela ko bhi hilaa diya ..... Aryan ko ek minute ko laga woh apni Saloni mummy ko kho chuka hai par 20 minutes ke saari details aur facts check karney ke baad usko pata chal gaya ki Dr Saloni 100% jinda hai nahi toh Kuldeep ka plan aur mehnat bekaar ho jayegi. woh Garima ko ya apni sauteli behen Mira (nakli Saloni ) ko kho sakta hai par asli Saloni ko nahin kyonki poori daulat aur business par kabja ki liye Dr Saloni hi Dr Anju ke baad waaris hoti ..... aur ushi ke through Aryan aur Rati ka business bhi takeover karta .....

..... bas yahin se usney apne dimaagh ka bharpoor istemal kar yeah sochney par lagaya ki Saloni mummy kahan hogi ..... aur 2 min mei uska guess hi 99% confirmation ho gaya ki kahan hongi ...... par 1% last chance phir Dr Kuldeep ka mind read karne ke liye bachaya aur ish kaam mei usko Meena (Aryan ki lover cum behen aur 2nd heroine of story ) ki jaroort padti ..... aur Meena 6 bajey ke baad shaam ko Geeta aur Jane ke saath Agra se wapis aati ......

ab present mei .....


Neela torture room mei gayi toh dono Bhai behen ka pyar dekhi aur joor joor se taali bajaney lagi ,"bhai kya pyar hai tum dono ka itni maar khaakar phir bhi pyar khatam nahi huya ..... aur Kuldeep tera saara gameplan ish teri behen ne chopat kar diya abhi bhi waqat hai sab kuch sach ugal de ho sakta hai Aryan sir ko reham aa jaaye aur tum dono ko jinda chod de par karam toh tum dono ke mout waale hain" ...... Kuldeep aur Mira (nakli Saloni jo Saloni ki humsakal thi ) dono bas Neela ki taraf dekh rahey they ...... Dr Kuldeep kuch sochkar bola ," humey apne marney ka gum nahi hai par hum dono ne bhi Saloni ko maar kar aur Dr Anju ko mout ke darwaje par khada kar apna badla le liya "...... Neela phir hasi ..... ha ha ha ha ..... aur apni pent ki Jeb se mobile nikal ke boli ," Kuldeep humney kuch aurtien ko Randi khaney bhej rahey hain jindgi bhar ke liye dekh tu inmey se kisi ko jaanta hai ..... aur Mobile nikal sabsey pehle Mira ki pics dikhai aur phir ek baad ek 4 pics alag alag auratein ki uske baad boli ," hum soch rahey hain ki tu toh marney waala hai toh in sabka dalaal (pimp) ishey bana dengey " aur ek aadmi ki pics uski taraf kar di ..... aur jor jor se hasney lagi ....... ha ha ha ha ha ...... Kuldeep kuch gussey se kuch bolna chaha toh Mira ne uska haath pakad liya ...... Mira ki halat bahut kharaab thi itni maar khakar kal raat se ...... Neela hastey huye boli ," Kuldeep yeah sab Gujjar ke kabjey mei hain aur Gujjar ko tu jaanta hi hoga ki woh kya karega toh soch le par agar sach bolega toh yeah jo teri behen hai iska treatment bhi hoga aur baaki sab chuth jayenge ..... soch le last offer hai ".... Kuldeep ," tum hum sabko maarne hi waalo ho toh mein mouh nahi kholunga "....... Neela ," chal theek hai mein jaati hoon tum log ilu ilu karo"...... Neela gate ke pass jakar ruki ," asli Dr Saloni ka pata Aryan Sir ko lag gaya hai aur woh unko leney Dr Anju madam ke hospital ke basement mei baney lab aur lab ke niche baney secret room se leney gaye hain uskey baad toh tere saare parivaar ko Dr Saloni madam hi mareygi "...... itna bol Neela room se bahar chali gayi aur kuldeep aur Mira ki gaand ke nichey sulghta huya harey rang (green color) ka sutli bomb chod gayi ....


Dr Kuldeep plastic surgeon tha aur Dr Saloni pathologist thi ..... lekin dono naye naye experiment ke saath saath research se bhi judey they par Dr Anju unpar restrictions rakhti thi ...... tab dono ne Dr Anju ke 2 months kuch research training program par England jaaney ke baad ek aur secret lab 3 kamro ki banna daali 1 month mei jisko sirf woh dono log hi jaantey they ...... 3 room mei se ek room dono ne apne rest ke liye banya tha ...... 

Baat tab ki (past) ------

Aryan jab 5 saal ka tha..... tab Saloni ke saath hospital gaya tha toh Saloni Aryan ko ek nurse ke pass khelta chodkar basement lab mei chali gayi ..... par Aryan toh Aryan tha bas apni maasi maa (Saloni ) ka picha kartey huye pehle basement lab mei phoucha phir ..... phir usney dekha uski Saloni mummy ek darwaje par lagey kuch button daba rahi hai dewaar par aur diwaar hati toh ek lift mei ghuss niche chali gayi ..... Aryan ne 5 number ka code dekh liya Dr Saloni ko dabtey huye ..... Aryan bachpan mei bahut chalu tha bas doodh peeney ke liye aur jaada masoom bankar aur apni baccho waali smile de kisi ko bhi pataa leta ...... woh Dr Saloni ki taraf bhaga par lift bandh ho chali gayi aur gate bandh ho gaya jaisey koi diwaar ho ..... par Aryan ne sab dekh liya tha ..... woh jaakar ek kursi kheech ke laaya aur ushpar khada ho code type kar diya phir se door khula aur lift mei jaakar khada hoga jaisey uski Saloni mummy khadi huyi thi ..... lift ka door bandh ho gaya aur nichey phoucha .... lift ka door open huya toh bahar nikala toh dekha samney 2 door hain ek ke ander gaya toh dekha Dr Saloni microscope par kuch dekh rahi hai .... par Aryan (Mahi) ko laga ki woh koi lukaa chuppi waala khel Jeet gaya toh chillata huya daud gaya Dr Saloni ki aur " mummy pakad liya ice pice".... Dr Saloni Aryan ki awaaj aur usko dekh gabhara gayi aur sochi yeah yaah kaisey aa gaya ... woh kuch bolti Aryan uski taango se lipat gaya aur uski taraf dekhkar bola ," mummy doodu pilao !!! mummy doodu pilao na !!!".... bas Dr Saloni ke liye sab kuch bhulana kaffi tha ki uska beta Mahi uskey liye aisi secret jagah par phouch gaya jahan kisi ko pata bhi nahin par aaya kiske saath usney Aryan ko apni goad mei utha liya ," Mera laal !!!! Mera MAHI ...... chal tujhe doodh pilaati hoon". Aryan ko lekar woh restroom mei le gayi aur ek desktop jismey camera ki live photage aati uski chair par bethi aur Aryan ko apni goad mei betha apna blouse khol aur bra upper kar apni left choochi uske mouh mei de di ," Mera beta Mahi , aacha beta doodh pi .... mere pyara beta..... mera Mahi" .... aur dono haatho se Aryan ki balayie li (praising own son with affection ) ...... Aryan bas apne favorite kaam mei lag gaya doodh peeney mei ...... ish liye sab usko Choochichor aur Choochidhar boltey they ...... edher Aryan ko Dr Saloni apni goad mei litakar doodh pilaa rahi thi aur computer par camera ki recording dekh rahi thi Aryan phoucha kaisey ..... par usko ush baat par garv huya meri choochi ka doodh peene yeah panch saal ka baccha kahan tak aa gaya ..... doodh pilaney ke baad Dr Saloni ne Aryan ke ander darr bitha diya ki agar ish secret jagah ka kisi ko bataya toh kabhi usko doodh nahi pilayegi aur na kabhi baat karegi kyonki woh uskey mummy and daddy (Saloni aur Kuldeep) ki secret jagah jisko Aryan ke alawa koi nahi jaanta ..... par Kuldeep ko kabhi nahi pata chala ki Aryan aaj se nahi 15 saal pehle se apne mummy and daddy (Saloni aur Kuldeep ) ki lab se niche research waali jagah jaanta hai ..... Aryan baad mei bhi Dr Saloni ke saath 2-3 baar gaya tha par dono ne kabhi Dr Kuldeep ko nahi bataya...Kuldeep ki yeah secret jagah Kuldeep ke liye sirf uskey alawa Dr Saloni jaanti thi joh pichle 6 mahiney se yahan kaid thi ....... 



Kuldeep ko vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha ki Aryan wahan kaisey phouch gaya jiska kisi ko uske alawa pata nahi tha ...... wahan 2 nurse 24 ghantey baari baari duty par rehti thi par unka bhi kisi ko jaankari hona namukin tha ...... phir kaisey ...... ????

edher Aryan aur Garima guards ke saath basement lab phir secret room mei phouchey toh pehle se Aryan ki security team ke 4 aadmi aur 2 aurtien mojood they ..... yeah 6 logo ki team Aryan ki sabse khass team thi joh Beena ke under special task ke liye use hoti thi ..... inhoney hi Kuldeep aur dono Thakur ke saath munim ko unke aadey Jo Noida mei tha kal sham ko uthaya tha very secretly ..... 

tab team leader ne Aryan ko ek room ki taraf ishara kiya Jo ki rest room tha ..... Aryan aur Garima ush mei enter kiye toh ek doctor bed par letey kisi patient ko injection laga raha tha jisko IV drip lagyi gayi thi ..... jab patient ki sakal dekhi toh dono bed ke pass jaldi se phouche ..... woh koi aur nahi Dr Saloni thi joh kaafi kamjoor lag rahi thi ...... Garima rotey huye Saloni se lipat gayi aur mummy mummy chillaney lagi ...... Aryan ne aankh band kar Bhagwan ko dhayanwad diya ki uski Saloni mummy jinda hai par usko nuksaan phoucha ne waalo ko nahi chohdega ....... Aryan ne dekha ki dheere dheere Saloni ne aankh kholi aur sabse pehli nazar Aryan par padi toh uski aankhon mei aasoon aa gaye aur apne seene se lagi Garima ko rotey dekha ..... doctor ne bola ," please inko rest karne do kaafi week hain . please situation ko samjhiye . Aryan sir aap hi samjhaye "..... Aryan ne doctor ko bola ," bas 5 min hamey akele chod dijye phir aap jaisa bolega waisa "..... doctor bahar chala gaya yeah doctor bhi Aryan ki Security team ke saath tha aur medical emergency handle karta tha ..... 


Saloni Garima ke sar par haath pher rahi thi dono roo rahi thi ..... Aryan ki aur dekhkar Saloni ne usko apne kareeb bulaya toh Aryan ne jukhakar Saloni ke maathey ko chuma ...... Saloni ne ek haath Aryan ke gaal par rakha ," Mera MAHI aa gaya , mere laal mujhe laga mein kabhi tum dono ko dekh nahi payongi "....... Mera MAHIIIIII ...... mere bacchey mere laal ...... aur Aryan ka poora chehra choomne lagi ..... Garima bhi uthkar Aryan aur apni mummy se chipt gayi aur boli ," I love Bhai apne mummy ko doondh hi liya "..... aur kabhi Aryan ko kiss karti kabhi Saloni ko ...... Aryan ne dono ko kiss kar bola ,"aap aaram karo abhi mein aapko yahan se le chalne ka intzaam karta hoon aur Garima mummy ko rest karne de aur koi baat mat karna yahan samjhi "...... Aryan ne room se bahar jaakar doctor ko kuch samjha ke ander bheja aur apni team ko thanks kaha Saloni ki jaan bachane ke liye ...... phir team leader ne bataya ki do nurse pakdi hain ander par mobile jaamer aur camera jammer se hamney undo ko kuch action leney ka mouka hi nahi diya toh hamara kaam aasan ho gaya ..... Un dono ko hamney baand ke ish almaari mei daal diya hai ...... Aryan ne sabko samjhaya kya karna hai aur Saloni aur Garima ko lekar apni Security team ke saath Farmhouse baaki joh guards Aryan ke saath aaye they unmey se 2 ko wahin chod diya aur hospital ke chief manager ko phone kar sabkuch samjha diya ..... 

Dr Saloni ko Farmhouse ke ek room mei shift kiya jahan Garima aur doctor bhi tha ...... doctor bola meine blood sample le liye hain aur bodyscan bhi kar liya ...... waisey sab theek hai bas weakness hai aur itney dino se ek room mei bandh hain toh depression due to isolation hai par jaldi hi recover kar jayengi ...... Aryan bola," doctor kal mei inko Delhi bhej raha hoon aur baaki test aur treatment aap ke under mei hoga toh ab yeah aapki care mei hain kyonki I don't trust any other person "..... doctor room ke bahar gaya toh 10 min baad Beena , Neela aur Bheema ander aa gaye ..... sab Saloni ko dekhkar khush they joh Aryan ka haath pakdey laiti thi aur Garima apni maa ke bagal mei leiti thi ...... Beena ko jab Neela ne asli aur nakli Saloni ka batya toh woh bhi chakra gayi yeah kaise ho sakta hai ..... par Aryan dwara asli Saloni ko dhoondh kar laney ka pata chala toh boli ,"bach gaye yaar ,yeah haramjada Kuldeep toh humari soch se parey nikla . aacha huya Aryan sir ne theek time par dhayan diya". phir Bheema ko saath lekar teeno Saloni se miley ..... 

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Dr Anju - Aryan ki mummiji aur Rati ki behen 

Dr Saloni - Aryan ki maasi maa aur Dr Anju ki beti 

Garima - Dr Saloni aur Dr Kuldeep ki ekloti beti 

Dr Kuldeep - Saloni husband 

Mira - nakli Saloni after surgery , Dr Kuldeep ke maama ki beti 

Neela - Dr Anju bodyguard and Beena assistant

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Nice updates and waiting
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Mast update Bhai Maza aa Gaya par aap to update 18 ke date part Dene wale the na bhai
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Update was awesome ??
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