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Fantasy TMKOC-GOKULDHAM
#1
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Hi me dkumar7. Me ak story shru karne ja raha hu app sab mra sath dna apna reply jarrur dna. Me khosis karoga update jaldi jaldi do. Agar kch typing me galti ho jaye toh maaf kar dna... or is story ka intro app sab jante hi hoge tmkoc k bare me..
Keep supporting me :D ;)
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#2
All the best for your 1st story. Start it...... i am sure it will be superb

MAIN BHI EK STORY LIKH RAHA HUN. HAWAS KI AAG. HO SAKE TOH
ZARUR EKBAR PARNA AUR APNA FEEDBACK DENA. Ok....
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#3
1st update
Good morning gokuldham 

Gada house
Subha k 9 bje reh h ghar pura shant hai...
Kyu ki hamre pyare jethalal so reh the or unki wife daya kitchen m khana bna rhi thi.
Bapuji mandir gaye the or tapu college gya hua tha..
Idhar daya jethalal ko utane jati h kyu ki bapuji ane wale hai..
Daya:- tapu k papa oh tapu k papa uthye subha ho hyi h
2 se 3 bar utne k baad jethalal ki ankh kholta h or bolta hai
Jethalal:- 5 min daya sone de na
Daya:- kya 5 min uthye bapuji ka ane ka time ho gya h jldi uthye...
Jethalal:- chal jhuti bapuji abhi nhi ayege sone de mujhe..
Daya sochti h bapuji ka ane ka time ho gya h or tapu k papa uth hi nhi reh h...kch karna pdega..
Fir daya ko ak idea aata h..
Daya jethalal k lund ko pyjama k uper se hi pkdh k hilane lghti h or bolti h
Daya:- uth jaye na tapu k papa apko me pura maja dungi ajj..
Jethalal:- ahhhh ahhh daya maja aa raha h or kar acchee se kar...
Karib 5 min tak chalta raha daya ka lind hilana..jab jethalal ko lgha ki uska ane wla h ki
Bapuji k entry
Bapuji:- bahuuuu...
Daya or jethalal dono shocked me...
Jethalal:- daya jna mat mra ane wala h
Daya:- jana pdega tapu k papa bapuji bola reh h nhi toh woh ander aa jayege...
Or daya fir lund chodh bagti h...
Daya:- ji bapuji 
Bapuji:- chai dna or jethiya uth gya??
Daya:- ji bapuji uth gye
Fir daya jethalal ko bolti h
Daya:- sorry tapu k papa jldi jaye or naha k aye..
Fir jethalal sda hua muh le k nahne chala jata h...
10 min k baad
Jethalal:- daya me ja raha hu...
Jethalal exit house..
Jethalal sidhyo se utrte utrte sochta h kya baghwan kis type ki life di h muje..
Fir jethalal nikal raha tha ki tabhi uski najar tarak k ghar  bhar padhti h jaha uska lund fir se kadha ho jata h kyu ki idhar Anjali mehta jhuk k apne plants me pani daal rhi thi..
Jhukne k waja se uska cleavage pura dikh raha tha..
Anjali ne ajj green colour k suit phena tha upar toda deep neck wla kurta phena tha..
Jethalal yeh dekh pagal ho jta h...
Fir anjali jethalal ko dekti h..or wese bolti h
Anjali:- good morning jetha bhai..
Lekin hmra jethalal abhi v anjali k boobs ko hi dekhe ja raha tha..
Fir anjali ne notice kya ki jethalal uske boobs dekh raha h..
Fir se anjali ne jethalal ko awaj di..
Anjali:- jetha bhaiiiii...
Is bar jethalal apne wosh me ata h...or bolta h..
Jethalal:- haa anjali bhabhi bolye...
Anjali:- kha ko gaye the app...me kab se apko awaj de rehi thi...
Jethalal:- wo toda dukan k bare m soch raha tha..
Ab jethalal bole kya apke boobs k bare m soch raha tha..
Jethalal ka lund kadha hone se jethalal k dikht hi rhi thi ki khi anjali bhabhi dekh na le
Lekin anjali ne phele hi dekh liya tha..
Jethalal:- anjali bhabhi mehta saheb nikal gye
Anjali:- haa woo toh subha hi gye
Jethalal:- chalo me chalta hu..
Fir jethalal apne pant ko thk karte nikal raha tha 
Or idhar anjali apne man me bolti h
Anjali:- jetha bhai kya mre boobs ko dekh reh the nahi nahi jetha bhai ese nhi h...
Fir anjali andar chal jati h...
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#4
(06-09-2019, 06:40 PM)Baban Wrote: All the best for your 1st story. Start it...... i am sure it will be superb

MAIN BHI EK STORY LIKH RAHA HUN.  HAWAS KI AAG. HO SAKE TOH
ZARUR EKBAR PARNA AUR APNA FEEDBACK DENA.  Ok....

Jarur pdhoga bhai or feedback jarur dunga...
All the best for your story
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#5
2nd update 
Dophar k 12 bje 
Mehta house
Anjali abhi bhi subha wali ghatna ko soch rhi thi jo use jethalal k sath ajj eshas hua..
Soch rhi thi
Anjali:- kya lgta h jetha bhai kya sahi me mre boobs ko ghur reh the.. mujhe toh esha nhi lgta kyu ki jetha bhai toh tarak k parm mitar h me hi galat ho..
Itne me door ki ganti bajti h..
Ting tong ting tong
Anjali:- aa rhi hu....
Jaise hi anjali ne gate khola samne hmri pyari big bomb Babita khadi thi..
Babita:- hello anjali bhabhi.. kesi h app
Anjali:- are babita ji app me bilkul thk hu..aye na andar
Ajj babita ne ak tight top phna hua tha uske boobs pure bhar k taraf the uske bra k strap v dikh reh the...or niche ak jeans phne wuyi thi..without panty.
Dono andar aa k sofe me bhete the h..
Babita:- anjali bhabhi kyu na ajj shopping pe chala jaye masum v bhut accha or yaha ak mall me 50% sale chal rhi thi undergarments me kapdo m v...
Anjali:- kya haa haa bikul chalo muje v leni h mre sab purane ho gye hai
Babita:- toh kyu na sab ko phone kar k bola lete h
Anjali:- haa me daya bhabhi or madhavi bhabhi ko phone karti hu or app roshan or komal bhabhi ko phone kar lo..
Babita phone karti h roshan ko toh pta chalta h ki roshan apne mayika ayi h kal ayegi woo orr komal dr.haati k sath clinc me kch kam h...
Anjali daya ko phone karti h toh pta chalta h ki daya apne kisi ristedar yaha gyi h..
Anjali:- sab toh khi na gaye hue h bs madhavi bhabhi bss ghar hi pe ho.
Babita:- yaa phone karo warna jane ka kya faida
Anjali madhavi ko phone karti h lekin koi pick nhi karta 
Anjali 4 se 5 bar try karti h lekin koi pick nhi karta h
Babita:- chalo hm madhavi bhabhi k ghar me ja k aate hai
Fir dono nikal jaate h..
Dono ghar bhide k ghar k bhar puch k bell bajte h
Lekin koi gate nhi kolta h..
Anjali:- koi gate kyu nhi khol raha h
Fir achank se gate khulta h dono shocked ho jate h kyu ki madhavi samne ak nighty me hoti 
Anjali:- madhavi bhabhi app thk toh h n
Madhavi:- ha toda sar me dard tha iseliye so rhi rhi..
Babita abhi bhi madhavi ko dekhe ja rahi thi kyu ki madhavi ak nighty me rhi or usne andar kch phna v nhi tha uske boobs pure hil reh the or nighty k buttons v khule the pure..
Anjali babita ko hilte hue
Anjali:- babita ji kha ko gyi
Babita:- nhi nhi khi nhi madhavi bhabhi app apna dyan rakna..
Fir dono nikal jate h..
Babita man me:- jarur yaha kch hua h madhavi bhabhi is wakt saree m nhi nighty me thi or uhone bra v nhi pheni thi??

Agle update flash back chalege..
Or shopping v toh he.....???
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#6
Guys update aa chuka agla update v bhut jald donga
Plse keep supporting me..
Apna feedback jarur dna..
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#7
Bahut bariyaa chal raha hai story. Continue...
Par ek baat batana chahta hu please is story ko ek realistic way mein banana.cheating /sex jitna chupake kia jai utna hot lagta hain. is liye is story ko realistic way mein likhna.  Superb going.

And waiting dor your feedback on Haws ki aag.
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#8
Haan usi direction me le k jayuga...
Direct sex dikana nhi h mre ko pura hot and sexy style me le k jaooga...keep reading for more update
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#9
Nuce update
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#10
Good Update .
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#11
Bro Next Update mai Anjali Ko Abdul aur Bhide se Chudai ya rough Sex Karvao.Fir Madhvi ko Dr. Hathi ke mote Lund se Chudvao.
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#12
Thank you guys
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#13
3rd Update
Chalte hain flashback me dekh kya hua tha madhavi k sath uske ghar me...
Flashback....
Subha 10 bje
Bhide house
Yaha pure ghar me shanti thi ak dum pin drop silence
Kyu ki hmare bhide saheb newspaper pdh reh the or madhavi kitchen me kam kar rhi thi.
Karib 5 min k baad bhide newspaper ko rakh deta h or bolta h
Bhide:- madhavi oh madhavi chai milegi ya nahi..
Karib 2 min k baad madhavi k entery hoti hai..
Madhavi:- hoo baba...la chai...kyu chila reh ho le lo apki chai
Ajj madhavi bhut hot lgh rahi thi kyu ajj usne orange colour ki saree or sleeveless blouse jo deep neck wla phna tha..
Bhide:- itni der madhavi me kab se itnzar kar raha hu..
Madhavi:- pi lijye nhi toh tandi ho jayegi...
Bhide:- haan rakh do yaha pe
Fir madhavi chai ka cup ko table me jesi hi rakne jati hai uska pallu gir jata h fir samne bhide ki halat kaarb hone lagti h
Madhavi ne ajj deep neck wla blouse phna hua tha uske mst gol gol boobs bhide k akh k samne jhul reh the usne ajj pink colour ki bra phni thi andar
Bhide k muh me pani aane lgta h
Bhide:- madhavi yeh tmne kya kar diya
Madhavi apna pallu ko jhuk k thk kar rhi thi ki tabhi bhide ne apna ak hath madhavi ki un gol gol boobs k andar le ja k dabane lgta h...
Madhavi ak dum shocked reh jati h
Madhavi:- aho kya kar reh ho chodo na koi aa jayega..
Bhide:- madhavi ajj tmhare boobs me whi baat hai kya lgh reh h dekho toh wha hmare zamane me
Madhavi bich me hi bolti h
Madhavi:- rehne do apka zamna chodo mujhe
Fir bhide apna hath bra andar daal k madhavi k nipple ko masalne lgta h..
Madhavi:- ahhh ahhh chodo aho bhut kam h..
Bhide:- madhavi bss toda sa karte h plse toda sa khulo na blouse ko jldi ho jayega
Madhavi:- nhi abhi nhi bhut kam h ahhh chodo mujhe..
Bhide apna dusra hath madhavi ki chut k upar le jata saree k upar se hi...
Madhavi:- ahhh aho....rehne do chodo mujhe or gharm mat karo mujhe...
Bhide:- madhavi kholo na plse..
Fir madhavi man jati h..
Fir kya madhavi ne apna saree ko khol k rakh diya itni der m bhide se raha nhi ja raha tha toh usne madhavi k blouse ko utar diya or bra ko upar kar k madhavi k mst bade bade brown nipple ko chusne lga ...
Madhavi:- ahhh ahhh...maja aa raha h aho.. 
Bhide apna muh nipple se nikal k bolta h
Bhide:- madhavi ajj v tmhare boobs usi din k jese h jesa ki hamare zamne m hota tha
Madhavi ne itni der fir se bhide ka muh apne boobs rakh k bolti h
Madhavi:- bss karo apna zamna chuso jaldi ahhhhwhaa maja aa raha h..
Fir madhavi ne apna peticot utar diya usne ajj panty nhi pheni thi..
Wha bhai kya chut thi madhavi ki akdum full shave chut ak dum kuwari dikh rhi thi...
Madhavi:- jaldi se daal do na ab rah nhi ja raha h 
Fir bhide apna pyjama or underwear ko utar deta h or madhavi v apna bra ko khol k phek deti h...
Fir bhide k lund hath me hilane lgti h fir muh m le k chusne lgti h...
Bhide:- wha madhavi ahhh or lo andar...wha ahhhahhahhh madhavi aaahhhh
Karib 5 min tak chusne k baad bhide sofe me let jata h or madhavi uske upar aa jati h...
Madhavi bhide k lund ko apni chut me set karti or apna ak boobs bhide k muh me deti h...
Or uchalne lgti h lund k upar..
Madhavi:- ohh fuck...ahhh ahhh...or tez aho...or tez...
Bhide:- ahhh madhavi kya tez tm bhut bhari ho tm hi khudi mre lund me...
Mdhavi fir lund k upar khudne lgti h...
Karib 5 min k baad bhide bolta h
Bhide:- madhavi mra ana wla h
Madhavi:- kya aho...mra abhi tak nhi hua h ahhhh todi der roko na..
Bhide: nhi ho skta madhavi ahhhhhh..
Fir bhide madhavi ki chut me jhad jata h...or madhavi ko hatne k liye bolta h..
Madhavi:- jab app sr kch hota hi nhi h toh kyu mujhe gharm karte ho..fir ager karte ho toh pura satisy toh karo...
Bhide:- suno madhavi...me toda jda excited ho gya tha raat me pka ache se karoga..
Madhavi:- rehno do ajj k baad kabhi v mre samne apna lund le mat ana...
Bhide:- accha meh tumhe figuring kar deta ho..
Madhavi:- thk h....ache se karna..
Bhide toda khush hota h lekin uska phone bjta h..
Bhide phone pick karta h
Bhide:- hello haa ji boliye...acha acha me abhi aata hu...haa thk h...
Madhavi guse se bar jati h or bolti..
Madhavi:- ahooooo ab kha apka ho gya ab ap jaa reh h
Bhide:- jana pdega madhavi society ka kch kam h plse
Fir bhide apna kapda phne lgta h or madhavi wha bina kapdo k kadhi thi or uske boobs hil reh the baap reh baap
Madhavi:- jao bagho yaha se...
Bhide:- madhavi apne kapde toh phne lo
Madhavi:- meh ab aise hi ghumo gi pure ghar me...jao yaha se app...
Fir bhide nikal jata or madhavi gate lock kar deti h...
Madhavi apni life ko kosi lgti h...
Fir madhavi apne kapde uta k bedroom me jati h wha v usne kapde nhi phne fir nangi hi kitchen me jati kya chutad thi madhavi ki kya hil rehi thi 
Fir madhavi kitchen me puch k fridge khol k ak lamba kira(cucumber) nikalti h
Or bed room jati h
Apne bed me let k us tande tande kire ko apni dono tangi k bich me chut k andar jesi wo dalti woo akdum machal jati hai
Madhavi:- haaa ahhhhhh ahhhh ahhhh kya baat h...ahhhh
Madhavi kira ko andar bhar tezi se karne lgti h or apne ak hath apne boobs ko maslne lgti h..
Madhavi:- ahhhh ahhhhh ahooo mja aa raha h...or tez or tez or tez...ahhhh ahhh
Madhavi apne brown nipple ko muh me lne ki koshi karti h lekin nhi ho pta h...
Or apne nipple ko pinch karne lgti h
Karib 5 min k baad madhavi jhad jati h...
Usne us kire ko nikal k usko chusne lgti h...or apni chut me hath marne lgti h..
Todi der k baad use nind aari or woo soo jati hai 
Madhavi nangi hi soo jati h..

Ab agle update dekhge shopping me kya hoga...
Wait and watch
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#14
Guyzz update de diya h..
Plz give your feedback and agle update me shopping me kch suggestions de skte ho app...
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#15
Super update..... bro..

Shopping ke idea mei main tumhe ek idea deta hun. Accha lage to add karna. 

Sab aurtein mall mein shopping karne jati hai. Par wahan ek pervert seller hoga.  Jo itni sari aurton ko dekhakar muh se lal tap kayega.  Aur khas kar ke Babita ke big boobs ko dekhkar uska under hi khara ho gayega. Jab babita bra panty size check karne ke liye girls room mein jayegi tab under hidden cctv hoga aur woh pervert Seller Babita ka nanga badan us cctv mein capture kar lega. Aur agey jakar use dekhega aur babita ke huge boobs dekhkar hilayga apna lund. Aur woh agey jakar us footage ka istemaal Babita ko blackmail karke chodne ke liye bhi kar sakta hai. 

Kyun..... idea kaisa laga? 
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#16
Thank u for the suggestions bro..
Me update type hi kar raha hu...
Kch changes kar skta hu tmhare suggestions se..
Thnk u
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#17
Wink 
4th Update
So jesa ki apne dekha flashback me kya hua tha madhavi k sath
Av chalte real time me

Dophar k 1 bje
Anjali or babita bhide k wing  se bhar aate hue baat kar reh thi
Anjali:- toh babita ji hm hi chalte h shopping me
Babita:- haa thk h milte h 1 ghante me tab tak app tyar ho jao or me v tyar hi hati hu
Anjali:- thk hai...
Fir anjali apne ghar or babita apne ghar chal jati h tyar hone chailye dekhte h kya chal raha h ghar me.. :D :D
Anjali house
Yaha pe anjali apna makeup kar rahi thi karib 10 min k baad makeup kataam 
Fir woo apne wardrobe ko khol k apni dress select kar rahi thi or bol rahi thi
Anjali:- kya phenu itni gharmi v h haa yeh suit accha h yehi phenti hu..
Anjali ne ak Green colour ka suit select kiya tha jo toda sa uska cleavage dikh jaye
Fir anjali apna kurta utar ti h usne apni bra nhi utari
Kya mst gol gol gore white boobs bra me mst dikh reh the 
Ajj anjali ne todi choti bra pheni thi iseliye uske 40% boobs dikh reh the
Fir usne apna pyjama utara or matching pyjama phen liya ajj anjali ne panty nhi pheni thi
Kya chut dikh rahi lgta h ajj hi shave kiya akdum pink colour wha maja aa jaye...
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Yaha toh anjali tyar jara chalte h hamri babita k ghar me...
Yaha toh scene hi change hai..
Babita apne room me sirf or sirf bra and panty me kadi thi or apni wardrobe me apne dress select kar rahi thi
Babita ak blue bra and panty me kadhi thi or apne wardrobe me jhuk k kch search kar rhi thi 
Bhai saheb kya gaand h babita ki akdum makmali gaand thi mano abhi bole aa jao mar lo..
Tode der k baad use ak dress milti h jo akdum mst thi sleeveless wali bss kch knee se todi or aage thi...
Fir babita apne wardrobe kch search kar rhi thi chailye sunte h kya h woo chiz
Babita:- are meri red strapless bra kha gayi uske bina me yeh dress kese phenugi..chodo late v ho raha h bina bra k hi chalti hu wese v garmi h bhut...
Fir babita ne apne blue bra ko utar diya 
Are baap reh baap kya boobs h babita k or uskr nipple ak dum pink colour k kade the tarubj size ak boobs hai babita k...
Fir babita bina bra k apni dress ko phen leti h
Or tyar ho kar nikal jati h anjali k ghar..
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Babita anjali k ghar k bhar puch k bell bajti h ting tong
Anjali andar se darwaja kholti h or bolti h
Anjali:- kya baat hai babita ji bhut mst dikh reh h app
Babita:- sharma jati h... kya anjali bhabhi app v app v bhut pyare lgh reh h...
Anjali:- thank u..
Itne mr anjali notice karti h ki babita ne bra nhi pheni hai uske nipple anjali ko dikh reh h..
Babita:- kya dekh raho anjali bhabhi 
Anjali:- babita ji apne bra nhi pheni h apke nipple dikh reh h..
Babita:- kya anjali bhabhi app v or sharma jati or bolti  hai woh meri red bra nhi mile toh socha ki chodo ese hi chalte hai..or kya app mre nipple ko dekh reh hai
Anjali:- kya karo babita ji apke nipple mre akho k samne the toh dikh gaye...lekin bhut mst lgh reh h app or apke yeh nipple :D :D
Babita:- abb chale ya or dekna mre nipple ko dress k upar se ya fir utar k apko dikha hi du ki kese h mre nipple...bolo app..
Anjali:- kya babita ji app v me toh majak kar rahi thi chaliye fir kesi din dikha dna apke nipple or boobs ko 
Or hasne lgti h.... :D :D
Babita:- ji bikul ab chale.... :D Heart

Ab dekhe the inka kya hota h shopping me
Kch toh hone wla h inka...
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#18
Wow.Good going...... aab shopping mein kya hoga janne ka intezar hai.
Mera Hawas ki aag ka update aa gaya hai. Parke apna feedback dena. Accha lage to Reps bhi dena.
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#19
Thank u bro...
Bss update sham tak aa jayega...
Bsss yeh update ktam kar k tmhara wla update pdhne jaooga...
Once again thank u
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#20
Aaahhhhh meri babita
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