02-09-2019, 08:30 AM
Super update!!!! you rock! !
(09-09-2019, 07:56 AM)sp1910 Wrote: Not getting enough comments.. Will close story in next update
(09-09-2019, 08:33 AM)jtiwary Wrote: The more updates you give, the more people will comment and responses will come..
If there has not been an update for almost a week, people have short attention spans and do forget who the author is...
This has great potential and you are a good story teller.. dont let others define the way you write...
Thats my opinion.. rest is up to you