[Yesudoss]

she has to learn from Rahim and then teach mani. How is it??

[AB-the Unicorn]

super ... waiting for exploration

[sanju4x]

To all the others who are commenting how the story should progress, go forward and write your own story. No one is stopping you. Let the author write however he/she wants. Do not interrupt of try influencing their work.

[Henry]

You are great erotica writer.so in request keep relation between Only jaya and rahim.dont include others. either i wil leave reading.

[nishanthtu]

Waiting....

[1234rocket]

nice story... keep going

[Manikandarajesh]

You have told about mani is going to help in household and inlaws leave to UK, when are you going to give the update? please mention the tentative date and time as well to avoid visit and disappointments.

[Logan]

Very much hot story...

[prady12191]

Update please

[prady12191]

When will be the next update ?

[jaipurpink007]

Highly erotic. Especially the conversation part. Slow seduction of Jaya is working well... Waiting eagerly for the updates.

[kamal kishan]

something different.

[Sdh243]

Super writing skills very nice

[Yesudoss]

One week completed after the last update. No idea when the next update will come.

[kuttoosan009]

I am really sorry friends, I don't get time. Yesterday I started to write next update, only 15% completed. I will try to post today evening or tomorrow...

[Steven Rajaa]

If periodic update is not given, readers will lose interest in the story.

[Capfalcon]

Please update.!! eagerly waiting........

[Mr Strange]

Please post the update bro.. We are eagerly waiting

[imelodyprince]

Update ....... is far away

[Pattaasu Balu]

I think the story is delayed due to lack of ideas.