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(23-08-2019, 06:41 AM)omkarkumar2001 Wrote: FANTASTIC UPDATES

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UPDATE 58

Yaha apna hero waha se nikal kar jab brack fast ke liye table pe aaya tab tak sab ja chuke the apne -2 kamo per. Keval kamini or savita hi thi. PB ne savita se jay ke bare me pucha to pata chala jay to subha hi kheto ke liye nikal gaya hai. to PB savita ko sath le kar khud bhi kheto pe pahuch gaya. Or waha pe sab kuch samajne laga. Jay se sabhi kaam ko bahut hi achche dang se sambhala hua tha. Kahi koi kami na thi. PB jay ke kaam ko dekh ke bahut khush hua. PB ne majduro se bhi baat ki to wo bhi Jay ke sath kaam karke khush the. Un majduro me ek jay ka purana dost bhi tha. Wo pehle bhi jay ke sath hi sahata tha. Usne bhi jay ke sath agriculture se diploma kiya tha. Per ghar me bimar maa baap ko chod ke jane ke jagah wo kheto me majduri kar raha tha. To PB ne usko jay ke sath laga diya. or usko majduro ka dayan rakhne ko bola. Wo bhi khus ho gaya. Uska naam lakhan tha. 

PB – lakhan aj se tum majduri nahi karoge. Balki jay ke sath me raha kar uski madat karoge.

Lakhan –bahut -2 danyabad malik ki jo apne mujko is layak samja.

PB – malik nahi bhai kaho. maintumhare bhai jesa hu. Tum mujko bhi apna dost maan sakte ho. Jese jay tumhara dost wese me bhi.

Lakhan – ap bahut achche hai bhai…

PB – nahi tum bhi bahut achche ho. Achcha ye batao jab tum pade likhe ho to city me ja kar job karne ki jagha yaha majduri kyu kar rahe ho.

Lakhan – wo mere maa- baap dono bimar rahate hai. or main unki ikloti santan hu. Yadi me chala jauga to unki dekh bhal kon karega. Ko jo meri ek choti si jamin hai usko kon dekhega.

PB – ohh kya hua hai tumhare maa baap ko??

Lakhan – dono ki aakhen kharab ho gayi hai. main unko city me hospital me bhi dikha chukka hu. Dr. 20 lakh magta hai dono ke ilaj ke liye. Per mere pass to kuch bhi nahi hai. isliye ved ji ki davao se hi unko thik karne ki kosis me hu.

PB lakhan ki baat sun kar sochta hai. ki ye bhi apne maa baap se uske jese hi pyar karta hai. mujko iski madat karni chahiye.

PB – lakhan tum aj syam ko haweli aa jana. 

Lakhan – thik hai malik .. sorry bhai..

PB – main tumko ankita se milwa duga. Uska clinic city me **** road ke hai. wo tumhari help kar degi. Tum kal hi apne maa baap ko le kar jana. Or rs ki mat sochna uska sara kharch me tumko duga.

Lakhan PB ki baat sun kar uske pair pakad leta hai. or bolta hai. – ap to bhagwan hai. ek hi pal me meri sari problem khatam kar di.

PB usko udata hai or bola – nahi dost main bhagwan nahi hu. Mujko tumne apna bita hua kal nazar aaya. Mene bhi apni maa or bahan ko rs ke chakar me kho diya. sayad mere ye karne se unki atma ko santi mile (ye kahate huye PB ki aakhen gili ho gai)

Lakhan – main dua karuga ki apki maa or bahan ki atma ki santi ki liye. Ap bahut hi achche insan hai apki maa jab apko upper se dekhti hogi to unko fakar hota hoga apne bête per. Bhagwan apki maa or bahan ki atma ko santi de…

PB – are chodo in baato ko ye batao ki tum jay ko kabse jante ho?

Lakhan – mera or uska bachpan sath me hi bita hai. 

PB – tab to tum usko achche se jante hoge?

Lakhan – haan main uski har baat ko janta hu. Or mujse kuch nahi chipata hai. mujko pata hai ki ap uski maa ke pati ho. Or wo bhi is se bahut khush hai ki uski maa apke sath khus hai.

PB – par kya wo khus hai. mene usko kabhi bhi khus nahi dekha. Yesa lagta hai ki uske seene me koi dard hai jo wo kisi ko nahi batata. Pehle to mujko laga tha sayad wo mere or savita ki wajah se dukhi hai. per fir mujko laga ki koi or baat hai. savita ko bhi yesa hi lagta hai. per wo kisi ko kuch nahi batata. Kya tum jante ho ki kya baat hai?

Lakhan – haan janta to hu. Par ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Ab to wo umra bhar yese hi udas rahega.

PB – kyu tesa kya ho gaya? Usko kuch bimari hai kya??

Lakhan – haan bimari hi hai. prem rog hai usko. Or pyar bhi usse karta hai jo uski kabhi ho nahi sakti.

PB – kon hai wo. Main khud baat karuga apne bhai ke liye.

Lakhan (ek dum soch kar chok jata hai) – haan bhai yadi ap chahege to ho sakta hai ki usko uski khushiya vapis mil jaye. Par apko jaldi hi kuch karna hoga. Kiyoki kajal ki sadhi next week hi hai.

PB – haan main har kosis karuga. Kon hai kajal. Kiski beti hai wo??

Lakhan – apne mukhiya ki beti hai. ap to mil chuke hoge usse. Per usne apni beti ki sadhi city ke ek bade pese wale se taya kar di hai. next week me hi uski sadhi hai. jay ko jab pata chala ki kajal ki sadhi kahi or ho rahi hai to wo mykhiya se baat karne gaya. To mukhiya ke admiya ne usko khub maara or sadak pe hi chod diya. or fir usi din Thakur bhanu ke aadmi usko uda ke le gaye. Tab se hi wo udas rahane laga hai. kajal bhi apne baap ke age kuch bol nahi pa rahi hai. 

PB – tumne bahut achcha kiya jo ye sab mujko bata diya. ab main sab thik kar duga. Achcha ab tum jao or kam dekho. Main jay or savita ko le kar ja raha hu mukhiya ram lal ke ghar.

Fir PB savita or jay ko apne pass bulata hai. or ghar chalne ko kahta hai. jay bolta hai ki kheto me bahut kaam hai wo kaam khatam karke aa jayega. Per PB usko apne sath chalne ka hukam deta hai. jay bhi fir uske sath chal deta hai. haweli pahuch kar PB guru ko sab batata hai. or usko apne sath chalne ko bolta hai. usse pehle hi wo savita or jay ko achche kapde pahan kar tayar hone ka bol deta hai. or khud bhi ek thakuro ki tarha tayar ho kar bahar aa jata hai. or ye sab bhi tayar the.

Sab log ek car me beth kar chal dete hai gaon ki or. Car PB hi chala raha tha. Jay or savita ko kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha tha ki ho kya raha hai. pehle kheto se pedal ghar gaye fir tayar ho kar vapis fir car se gaon aa rahe hai. jabki kheto se gaon pehle padta tha. Or haweli baad me.

Kuch hi der main car mukhiya ram lal ke gate par ruki. Or PB car se niche utra. Mukhiya ke ghar par car dekh kar jay ka dil joro se dadakne laga. Per wo chup hi raha. Pb ko dekh kar mukhiya bhag kar gate pe aaya or bola – Thakur sahib ap or is garib ke ghar, mere to bhagaya hi khul gaye. Ayiye andar ayiye..

Pb savita or sab ko apne sath ane ka isara kar ke age chalne laga. Sab log uske phiche ho gaye. Ram lal savita ko dekh kar muh banana laga. Per bola kuch nahi. PB ke age bolne ki usme himmat hi nahi thi. Sab log andar ja kar beth gaye. Mukhiya unki aaw bhagat me lag gaya. Per wo savita ko ignor kar raha tha. PB bhi is baat ko samaj raha tha.

PB – mukhiya ji ap mujko to jante hi hoge. Main apka baki logo se bhi parichaya kara deta hu. Ye guru hai. meri patni. Or ye hai savita ye bhi mari patni hai. or ye jay hai. ek dum mere bhai ke jesa. 

Mukhiya – savita or jay ke liye PB ki baat sun kar chup raha. Per usko pasand nahi aaya. Kiyoki wo aj bhi savita ko achcha nahi samajta tha. Mukhiya bola – boliye Thakur sahab main apke liye kya kar sakta hu..

PB – dekhiye mukhiya ji mujko baat guma fira ke bolne ki adat hai nahi. To side mudde pe aata hu. Per usse pehle kya ap bhabhi ji or apni badi beti kajal ko bula sakte hai.

Mukhiya uski baat sun kar chok jata hai. uske man me ek dar sa peda ho jata hai. wo smaj raha tha ki sayad Thakur sahab uski beti ka hath magne aaye hai. per wo to uski sadhi kahi or karwane ka pura intjaam kar chukka tha bus 7 din baad uski sadhi thi. Par wo soch vichar karte huye hi apni bibi or beti ko bula leta hai.

Jab uski bibi or beti aa jati hai tab PB bola – dekhiye mukhiya ji main kaya per apki beti ka hath apne bhai jay ke liye magne aaya hu. Ab ap bataiye apka kya kahna hai.

PB ki baat sun kar jay or savita dono sakte me aa gaye. Savita se soch rahi thi ki PB ko itni jaldi kyat hi jay ki sadhi ki. Usko bina bataye hi uski sadhi ki baat karne aa gaya. Or dusri taraf jay ye soch raha tha ki PB ko uske pyar ke bare main kese pata chala. Wese to wo andar hi andar khus tha. Ki sayad ab wo apne pyar ko pa sakta hai. or idar mukhiya jay se apni beti ki baat sun kar soch me dub gaya tha. Wo samaj nahi pa raha tha ki Thakur ko kese mana kare. Wo thakuro ke gusse ko janta tha. Par fir bhi badi himmat se bola – Thakur sahab dekhiye bura mat maniyega per me apni beti ki sadhi tay kar chukka hu. Or kuch hi din me uski sadhi bhi hai hum to khud hi apko sadhi ka card dene aane wale the. Ap hi bataiye ab ye kese sambhab hai.

PB – main janta hu ye baat or ap bhi jante hoge ki main yaha kyu aaya hu. Main nahi chahata ki mujko gussa aye per aap mujko gussa dila rahe hai. (fir PB kajal ki or dekh kar bolta hai) tum batao kajal kya tum jay se pyar karti ho ya nahi. Sach bolna kiyoki jhute insan ko marne me main ek min ke liye bhi nahi sochta. Or apne baap se darna bhi mat. Mere yaha hote huye koi kuch nahi kar sakta ye tum bhi janti ho.

PB ki baato se mukhiya ki gand paat gai. Uski bibi ki bhi hawa kharab thi. Dono ko ab PB yamraaj najar aa raha tha. Per kajal ka dar nikal gaya to kajal boli

Kajal – Thakur sahab yadi ap hamare sath hai to main sach hi bolugi. Main or jay ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai. mene apne papa ko bataya bhi tha per unhone jay ko garib or nikkama kaha kar tukra diya. or usko bahut mara bhi.

Kajal ki baat sun kar savita ko sab samaj aa gaya. Wo dhukhi thi ki uske bête ne usko kuch nahi bataya. Or usko maar bhi padi. Per wo PB ke is kadam se bahut khus ho gayi. Pehle usne uske bête ki jindgi bachai or ab usko jindgi bhar ki khushiya dene ke liye yaha aa gaya. Jay bhi kajal ki baat sun kar garden niche kar ke beth gaya. Wo apni maa se najse chura raha tha.

PB – haan ab boliye mukhiya ji, ab to sab apke samne hai. boliye ab ap kya karna chahate ho..

Mukhiya – haan to ap hi bataiye mene kya galat kiya. Main bhi apni ladki ka bhala chahata hu. Ap to jante hai ki pehle is ladke ke pass kyat ha.. ye apne khane ka intjaam bhi bari muskil se karta tha. To meri beti ko kese khus rakh pata.

PB – chaliye ye apki baat main maan leta hu. Par ab to iske pass kisi chij ki kami nahi hai na. ye mere sath haweli main rahata hai. waha ke bare me to ap jante hi hoge na.

Mukhiya – jee achche se janta hu. Per ap bura mat maneyega. Par aj bhi iske pass kya hai apke ahsaaso per jeer aha hai. kal ko apne isko nikal diya to ye to fir se bikhari ban jayega. Or meri beti dar dark i tokar khayegi..

PB ko mukhiya ki baat pe bahut gussa aa raha tha per wo sant betha tha per guru ko bardas na hua

Guru – ae mukhiya kya bole jar aha hai tu. Bhul gaya hai kya samne kon betha hai. ye rekha samja apne pati ko apni aokat me rahe nahi to iske sath kya ho sakta hai ye janta bhi nahi hai.

PB guru ki baat se muskura deta hai. or isare me sant hone ko kahata hai. fir bola

Pb – tum thik kahate ho mukhiya, achcha tumko ye pata hai ki mere pass is gaon me kitni jameen hai. 

Mukhiya – apke pass to gaon ki ade se jayada jaamen hai. per ap mujse ye kyu puch rahe hai. 

PB – kiyoki aj se main wo jameen kajal or jay ke naam pe kar raha hu. Ab to tumko koi aetraj nahi hoga na…

PB ki baat ne to waha ek damaka kar diya guru ko chod ke sabke muh khule ke khule raha gaye. Kisi ko is baat ki umid bhi nahi thi. Koi kuch nahi bola kuch der to fir ye chupi savita ne todi

Savita – nahi ji ap ye nahi karege. Wo apki jameen hai ap jay ke naam kese kar sakte hai.

PB – savita tum bhul rahi ho ki jay mera bhi kuch lagta hai. or wo hamari family ka ek member hai. yadi kuch property jay ke naam hob hi jayegi to kya fark padta hai. jay rahega to hamare sath hi na.

Savita – nahi bilkul bhi nahi, or yadi kabhi jay khud ghar chod kar chala gaya to ?? apki sari jameen apke hath se chali jayegi.

PB – savi ye uska feshla hoga ki wok aha rahana pasand karega. Jameen ka kya hai hum fir kharid lige. Per kya fir se ye riste bana payege jo aj hai. savi jay ko jana ho to wo aj bhi ja sakta hai. main tab bhi usko sari jameen de duga. Per bus tum nmat jana uske sath mujko chod ke. Main tumhari judai bardast nahi kar pauga.

Savita sabke samne hi roti hui PB ke gale lag jati hai. PB bhi usko sant karwata hai. or fir mukhiya ki or dekhne lagta hai. ki tabhi jay bolta hai

Jay – mujko kuch nahi chahiye na to jameen or na hi kajal. Main to bus apni maa or is devta saman bhai ke sath rahana chahata hu. Jo har kadam per mere ko khushiya hi dena chahata hai. pata nahi kyu karte hai ye kesa. Per ye mere apne hai. inke liye main kuch bhi chod sakta hu.

Jay ki baat sun kar PB usko gale laga leta hai. or sant hone ko bolta hai.

PB – ab bolo mukhiya ji ab apka kya kehna hai.

Mukhiya – par meri beti ki sadhi to pehle se hi tay hai.

PB – sadhi 13 ko thin a. ab bhi 13 ko hi hogi. Or 14 ko mene pehle se ek party rakhi thi. To ab party dable khushi ke liye hogi.

Mukhiya – par main un logo ko or gaon ke logo ko kya kahuga.

PB ko is baat pe gussa aa gaya – bus mukhiya bahut ho gaya tera natak. Main kab se pyar se baat kar raha hu or tu hai ki sir pe hi betha jar aha hai. tujko kisko kya jabab dena hai ye tu jaan. Or kuch jayada pareshani hai to main teri beti ko abhi apne sath le jata hu fir tu sabko bata dena ki Thakur ne uda liya teri beti ko.

PB ki baat se mukhiya ki puri fat gai. Wo janta tha ki thakuro me ladki ko uda ke le jana koi badi baat nahi hai. or wo kuch kar bhi nahi payega. To wo turant hi PB ke pair pakad lita hai

Mukhiya – nahi nahi Thakur sahab yesa mat karna nahi to main kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahuga. Mujko manjur hai ap 13 ko barat le kar aayiye. Main sab intjaam kar luga.

PB – hmm thik hai ab hum chalet hai. yadi koi bhi gadbad karne ki kosis ki to soch lena ki main kya hu or kya kar sakta hu.

Mukhiya ke muh se to awaj hi na nikli wo bus un logo ko jate huye dekhta raha
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(25-08-2019, 06:41 AM)omkarkumar2001 Wrote: Fantastic updates

(25-08-2019, 07:08 AM)Ashish_1982_in Wrote: Nice update

(25-08-2019, 07:49 AM)Salman haidar Wrote: Nice update

(25-08-2019, 12:10 PM)coolraj839 Wrote: Aaaahhh suoerb give more updates and long updates

(25-08-2019, 08:43 PM)kumaruttem Wrote: Nice update bro

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UPDATE 59

PB – hmm thik hai ab hum chalte hai. yadi koi bhi gadbad karne ki kosis ki to soch lena ki main kya hu or kya kar sakta hu.

Mukhiya ke muh se to awaj hi na nikli wo bus un logo ko jate huye dekhta raha.

Sab car me beth kar ghar ki or chal diye. Koi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Guru or PB ka man to sant tha. Per savita or jay ke man me udal pudal thi. Tabhi PB bola – jay ab to khus ho na. ab kajal sirf tumhari hogi.

Jay – hmm main bahut khus hu. Par apko jameen mere naam karne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. 

PB – nahi jay mene vachan diya hai. to me usko pura karuga. Wese bhi usse kya fark hai jab tum hamare sath hi rahoge to kabhi bhi koi problem hi nahi hogi..

Jay chup ho jata hai. or wo log haweli pahuch jate hai. car ko park kar ke PB ghar ke andar jane lagta hai. to jay usko gale laga kar rone lagta hai. PB bhi usko rone deta hai. wo bhi janta tha ki ye bahut din se chupa dard hai jo aashu ban ke baha raha hai. Guru or savita bhi ye dekh rahi thi. Savita ki mamta ne savita ki aakho me bhi aashu la diye. Usne apne bête ko aj bahut din baad yese rota dekha tha. Kuch der rone ke baad PB uske baalo pe hath perte huye bola

PB – Jay ab chup ho jao. Ab to sab thik ho gaya hai. ab kyu ro rahe ho. Bolo kya abhi bhi kisi baat ka gum hai??

Jay usse gale hi gale huye bola – nahi bhai ab kisi baat ka gum nahi. Apne meri jindgi ke sare gum dur kar diye. Mujko mera pyar de kar mujko umra bhar ke liye karjdar bana liya. 

PB – bhai bhi bolte ho or karjdar bhi. Are ek bhai dusre bhai ki madat nisavar baav se karta hai. tum log hi to ho mere apne. Yadi main tum logo ko khus nahi rakhuga to main bhi kabhi khus kaha raha pauga. Per main tumse gussa hu (jhut gussa dikhata hai)

Jay gabrate huye – kyu bhai mene kya galti kar di??

PB – dekho tumne meri savi ko rula diya. tumko dekh kar wo bhi ro rahi hai.

Jay savita ko dekhta hai jiski aakhon me aashu the. Chehre pe khushi or PB ki bato se ek saram jalak rahi thi. Jay PB ko chod kar savita ke gale lag jata hai. or bola – maa ap kyu ro rahi hai. ab to main bahut khush hu. Mujko bina mage hi sab mil gaya.

Savita – mera beta ro raha hai. to meri aakhon me to aashu ayege hi na…

Jay – nahi maa dekho main nahi ro raha (or apne aashu puch leta hai or fir savita ke aashu bhi saaf karta hai)

Guru – cholo ab andar ya yahi ke khade rahana hai. abhi sadhi ki tayari bhi karni hai bahut kaam hai andar chalo sab..

Guru ki baat sun kar sab andar chale jate hai. andar kamini or peya hi the. Guru kamini ko sab bata deti hai. wo dono baat kar rahi thi ki savita bhi unko join kar leti hai. apni 3 bibiyo ko apas me baat karta dekh PB khisak leta hai. or room se fresh ho kar bahar aata hai. to waha koi nahi tha. Sab rooms me ja chuke the. To PB peya ke pass pahuch jata hai. aj pehli baar PB peya ke room me aaya tha. Ada bhi uske sath rahati thi. Isliye wo is room me nahi aata tha. Per abhi ada or avni mill pe gaye huye the or ankita or pari clinic pe the. Peya jab PB ko apne room me dekhti hai to khus ho jati hai. 

Peya – bhaiya me apse naraj hu. Ap kabhi bhi mujse baat nahi karte.

PB – ohh mera beta mujse naraj hai. per main to uske liye chocolates laya tha. Ab ye main kisko duga. Cholo ada ko de deta hu.

Peya – nahi bhaiya main apse naraj nahi hu. Ye to sab mujko hi chahiye. Or wese bhi didi to hai hi nahi ap unko kese dege. 

Or peya khud kar PB se chocolates chin leti hai. or usko chidane lagti hai. PB bhi usko dekh kar muskurane lagta hai.

PB – achcha to ap abhi kya kar rahi thi.

Peya – wo main na game khel rahi thi. 

PB – or homework kab karogi??

Peya – didi kea ne ke baad. Jab wo yaha hoti hai na to mera dimag khati rahati hai ki game mat khelo, TV mat dekho. Jayada udam mat macho. Or pada karo. Bhaiya pehle to didi mere sath khelti bhi thi. Per ab to mujse thik se baat bhi nahi karti. Isliye jab didi aati hai to main padne lagti hu. Or nahi to….. hahahahaha

PB – hahahaha bahut setan ho tum. Hmm thik hai tum game khelo. Per tum room main kya khel rahi ho. Jao bahar ja kar khela karo na. 

Peya – bhaiya bahar kiske sath khelugi. Yaha koi bhi nahi hai jo mere sath khele. Isliye main room main hi video game khelti hu.

PB – Pehle bhi tum room me hi khelti thi kya.

Peya – nahi bhaiya, pehle main or didi piche wale garden me sath khelte the. 

PB – hmm achchi baat hai. tum khelo main bhi abhi ata hu..

Peya – ok bahiya.

PB ko peya ki bate sun kar gussa aa raha tha. Wo sida kamini ke room me pahucha. Per waha koi nahi tha. Fir usne sabko dekhna suru kiya to sab savita ke room me the. Ada or Avni bhi abhi aayi thi. Wo dono bhi jay ki sadhi ki baat se khus thi. Sabhi ladies sadhi ki bato me hi lagi hui thi. PB bhi waha pahuch gaya. Pari or Ankita ko chod kar sab waha the
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(26-08-2019, 07:36 AM)sabbhu07e Wrote: wah
nice one......

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(26-08-2019, 01:36 PM)omkarkumar2001 Wrote: Fantastic updates

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LAGTA HAI KI READERS KO MERI KAHANI ME JYADA MAZA NAHI AA RAHA. YADI ASI BAAT HAI TO BATAYE KYA KAMI HAI. 
Read My 1st Story -

Manav or Danav
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Nice update
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Fantastic updates
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(27-08-2019, 06:26 AM)Pbsex Wrote: LAGTA HAI KI READERS KO MERI KAHANI ME JYADA MAZA NAHI AA RAHA. YADI ASI BAAT HAI TO BATAYE KYA KAMI HAI. 

Bhai kahani bahut achhi lag rahi hai bas aap update Ek din me do baar diya karo.
Really I like your story.
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(27-08-2019, 06:26 AM)Pbsex Wrote: LAGTA HAI KI READERS KO MERI KAHANI ME JYADA MAZA NAHI AA RAHA. YADI ASI BAAT HAI TO BATAYE KYA KAMI HAI. 

na bhai
mujhe to bahut achhchha lag raha hai..
lekin family matter kuchh jyada khich raha hai...
per ye bhi to kahani ke part hi hain...
kahani achchi ja rahi hai.........
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little but nice update..........
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