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so finally there is going to be an "INCIDENT" ??
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The first half till armpit lick was good. very disappointed with the second half. Especially the liplock, boob suck/press, blow job. At least she could have done hand job to give some release to him. tasting the juice is too much this time. it was like a rush and felt little bad to have it so fast. She cannot turn dirty so soon and it should have happened slowly after they started loving each other.
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the sanitary napkin buying scene is good. She agreed only to give a kiss. she should have stopped there and for the next 3 days should be only phone conversations. But, you made everything happen in same day. there is nothing much interesting to think about now. so sad.
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Nice update bro... Really awesome and seductive
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Rahim, you lucky bastard. You have tasted the armpit, juicy lips and boobs of Jaya beauty.
Yuk, you made her suck your dick and drink the juice. you did half of the things in just one night.
you must be very very lucky. Now jaya does not have any shy. She will be more open to give her. you have won her trust by projecting yourself has poor guy only helping her. looking forward for what is going to happen next between them.
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Amazing update man. Loved it. Rahim has successfully touched, hugged, licked, kissed, pressed and enjoyed Jaya in their very first one to one meeting. He will sleep peacefully.
Jaya has allowed a person other than her husband to touch her. She will have some guilt. Soon her sexual desires will throw the guilt away. She will think about what Rahim did to him again and again. She will surely eagerly wait for the next touch from him and to know what other beautiful pleasures that a man can give. She now knows that she cannot ask all that she need from her husband. However, she can ask anything from Rahim now as he knows her size and helped buying napkin.
Much appreciated.
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Superb. you nailed it perfect. Jaya will hereafter longing to take Rahim dick in her mouth. She too will be interested to drink his juices. She might not have drank her husbands after all. She will slowly become bitch of Rahim. Loving your updates. keep posting more and more. thank you.
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Few other things that i noticed. Just to let you know.
a. You had told in the beginning it is 8 floor apartment and in this you made it 6
b. Rahim cannot be only security for the apartment. If so, he cannot go out, drink or sleep while on duty.
c. If Rahim is a maintenance person staying in the apartment, he can play multiple roles.
Rahim should slowly make Jaya as his slave by slowly turning her to more sex addicted women.
He should change her mindset from friend to secret lover. He should make her think him like her husband. People in apartment may doubt, so they have to play slowly and carefully.
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Sorry man, you continue as you wish. Like other said make this long and interesting one.
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superrrrrrrrrrrrrr erotticccccccccccccc update
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Even you told you would update once in 3 days, you know i could not stop checking every hour for your new update, that is the impact created your story. Xossipyenjoy told every possible positives in this story, wish to see more to come and not to consider close this story soon.
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what a way to seduce a women. very nice writing. Jaya is experiencing the great pleasures for the first time. Make them meet daily in roof top and enjoy during the periods. Let Rahim teach the teacher Jaya about the sexual pleasures she is not aware of. make him lick the body fully, navel kiss etc. Let Rahim change himself a bit to make Jaya more comfortable like clean shaving, using some perfumes etc.