A wedding ceremony in village

[vat69addict]

zabardast vivran....ati uttam....agle bhaag ka intezaar

[abhi_mishra_91]

Nice Update Bro...
Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai Aarti k sath...

[Rakeshsingh1999]

Jabardast kahani.update dere rahiye.thanks

[Khiladi007]

Why are you repeating the story of previous night? Focused on Neha so much that now you are repeating Aarti's story and probably going to repeat Neetu's also. So disgusting.

[Deadman1]

Cuckold hotwife and fantasy lovers check my thread ypull love ot?

https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=14527&page=4

[Logan555]

Waiting for my favourite vineetha ka update

Jabardast kahani.update dere rahiye.thanks

Ab agla update vineeta ka hi hoga.

[Logan555]

zabardast vivran....ati uttam....agle bhaag ka intezaar

Thaks bro halaki ye xossip bacha hua part tha par yaha nahi kara tha.

[Logan555]

Nice Update Bro...
Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai Aarti k sath...

Thanks bro xossip par aarti ki story beech me dene wala tha par ab kahani ke aakhri din yani dusve din karunga.

[Logan555]

Why are you repeating the story of previous night?  Focused  on Neha so much that now you are repeating Aarti's story and probably going to repeat Neetu's also. So disgusting.

Bhai reapeat nahi kara ye xossip par 5th night ka update tha par yaha nahi,  yaha ye update diya hi nahi tha aarti ka pichhla update 72 page hai ek baar pad le ye ussi se aage ka update hai. Aur neha ka update to de chuka wo khatam bhi ho gaya ab usme aur kya karta. Aapne ye update xossip par pada hoga kyuki yaha to ab tak ye diya hi nahi gaya. And yes Neetu ka update bhi doonga kyuki waha par logo ne demand ki thi aarti ki story ka flashback beech me na aae isiliye use ek din bada diya. Aap apne hisab se dekh rahe hai kyuki aap ye update xossip par pad chuke hai par jo readers yahi pad rahe unke liye to ye naya hai to yaha ye update kaise hata deta. Its not disgusting its commonsense. Disgusting kehne se pehle check to karle PAGE 72.

[Ajay.star]

Bhai ab tum story apne hisab se nahi likh rahe ho is liye padhne me jiyada maja nahi araha, xossip site pe jise khud ki marji se likhte the vese nahi likh rahe ho.

Hum tumhari writing skill aur tumhare vicharo vali story padhne aate he, na ki kisi Reader ki suggestion vali story. Ager kisi Reader ko bahut echa ho ki ye story uske vichar ke hisab chale to unse gujaris he ki vo khud story likhe. Ager unki story pasand aayi to jarur padhuga, lekin kisi ki achi khasi story vat mat lagavo.

Logon bhai tumne jo story me do changes kiye vo pasand nahi aaye. Ek to garima aur chhotu ki story reader ke hisab se likhi and lalu ka character acha bana diya.

I hope tumhari story pehle ki tarha sab se different hi rahe.

[Khiladi007]

Bhai reapeat nahi kara ye xossip par 5th night ka update tha par yaha nahi,  yaha ye update diya hi nahi tha aarti ka pichhla update 72 page hai ek baar pad le ye ussi se aage ka update hai. Aur neha ka update to de chuka wo khatam bhi ho gaya ab usme aur kya karta. Aapne ye update xossip par pada hoga kyuki yaha to ab tak ye diya hi nahi gaya. And yes Neetu ka update bhi doonga kyuki waha par logo ne demand ki thi aarti ki story ka flashback beech me na aae isiliye use ek din bada diya. Aap apne hisab se dekh rahe hai kyuki aap ye update xossip par pad chuke hai par jo readers yahi pad rahe unke liye to ye naya hai to yaha ye update kaise hata deta. Its not disgusting its commonsense. Disgusting kehne se pehle check to karle PAGE 72.

They demanded not to interrupt by any flashback and you change the number of night only. Such a nice exhibition of common sense.

[Abstar]

HAR KAAM KIYA MAINE USKI KHUSHI KE LIE
PHIR BHI NA JANE KYU BEWAFA KEHLAYA HU
MAUT SE PEHLE KARLU EKBAAR DEEDAR USKA
ISLIYE MARKAR BHI BUS USE DEKHNE AYA HU


Kya likhte ho bhai dil jeet liya.m
Bht hard bht hard bhai ??

[Abstar]

Bhai neeta ka kch likho

[Logan555]

They demanded not to interrupt by any flashback and you change the number of night only. Such a nice exhibition of common sense.

Bhai isse jada mai samjha nahi sakta. Maine ab tak sirf wahi updates diye hai jo maine xossip band hone se pehle waha diye the. Ab agar tumne ye updates waha pade the to ye tumhare liye repetation hue na bakiyo ke liye to nahi. To meri nazar me to ye repetation nahi hai ha agar is site par mai ye update de chuka hu to wo page batao jaha pehle maine ye update diya hai. Jaise maine bataya ki Aarti ka pichla update page 72 hai usse aage ka maine ab diya. Ab meri nazar me me to ye disgustung nahi hai ab agar tumhe disgusting lagta hai to mai isme kuchh nahi kar sakta.

[Khiladi007]

Bhai isse jada mai samjha nahi sakta. Maine ab tak sirf wahi updates diye hai jo maine xossip band hone se pehle waha diye the. Ab agar tumne ye updates waha pade the to ye tumhare liye repetation hue na bakiyo ke liye to nahi. To meri nazar me to ye repetation nahi hai ha agar is site par mai ye update de chuka hu to wo page batao jaha pehle maine ye update diya hai. Jaise maine bataya ki Aarti ka pichla update page 72 hai usse aage ka maine ab diya. Ab meri nazar me me to ye disgustung nahi hai ab agar tumhe disgusting lagta hai to mai isme kuchh nahi kar sakta.

Then I was not talking about repetition. I was talking about your strategy to match the people's demand of going to flashback one day later. What a cunning brain!! Almighty give you writing power to write well and a brain to make people fool. I know it is a complete waste of time to say you anything. You are the most right person, what you think, what you do all are right, we readers don't have anything to say unless praising you. Almost two years, Aarti-Neetu story still not in flow and now you are delaying one day and if anyone say anything then - "mai isme kuchh nahi kar sakta".

[Logan555]

Bhai ab tum story apne hisab se nahi likh rahe ho is liye padhne me jiyada maja nahi araha, xossip site pe jise khud ki marji se likhte the vese nahi likh rahe ho.

Hum tumhari writing skill aur tumhare vicharo vali story padhne aate he,  na ki kisi Reader ki suggestion vali story. Ager kisi Reader ko bahut echa ho ki ye story uske vichar ke hisab chale to unse gujaris he ki vo khud story likhe. Ager unki story pasand aayi to jarur padhuga, lekin kisi ki achi khasi story  vat mat lagavo.

Logon bhai tumne jo story me do changes kiye vo pasand nahi aaye. Ek to garima aur chhotu ki story reader ke hisab se likhi and lalu ka character acha bana diya.

I hope tumhari story pehle ki tarha sab se different hi rahe.

Oh bhai bade dino baad tumhara comment aya maine to samjha ki jin do readers ko maine apni story ka part banaya wo dono hi alag ho gae. Abhay raichand ka to koi ata pata nahi hai. Bhai mai reader ka hisab bhi dekh raha hu aur apna hisab bhi. Aur pichhle do update shabana aur neha ke to logo ne bahut pasand kare unme tumhe maza nahi aya.

Bhai mai story to puri apne dimag me pehle hi likh chuka hu ga reader agar kuchh demand karte hai to hske hisab se halka fulka change kar deta hu.

Ab jaise do changes ki baat kari ek jeetu wala waha tumne chhotu likha wo koi bahut bada change nahi hai wo kewal ek scene tha jaha maine sex socha tha reader ne mana kara to orgasm scene bana diya par kirdaar kahi nahi gae garima bhi wahi hai jeetu bhi. Balki hariya aur garima ka bhi pehle orgasm hua tha phir sex wahi yaha ho jaega. So wo koi itni badi baat nahi thi.

And doosra lalu ka charectar bhai to tumne to story xosip se padi hai aur Lalu ko bhi achhe se jante ho. Aur agar us update ki ye line tum dhyan se pado to is baat ka jawab Lalu ne khud de diya tha.

Lalu: Kya soch rahi hai ki kahi mai tujhe koi galat goli to nahi khila raha ye soch rahi hai. Zeher to dunga nahi tujhe maar kar mujhe kya mil jaega aur anshe ki goli khilakar tere sath kuchh karnenki mujhe zarurat nahi kyuki ye tu bhi janti hai ki agar mai chahu to tere hosho hawaas me bhi tere sath teri marzi ke bina bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hu aur ye tune kal raat hi dekh liya tha to tujhe nashe ki goli kyu khilaunga. WO TO STORY KE KUCHH DARIYADIL READERS KO TERI BARBAAD HALAT PAR KUCHH JADA HI TARAS AA GAYA AUR UNHONE WRITER SE REQUEST KARI KI TUJHE AUR ZALEEL NA KARA JAE AUR APNA WRITER BHI PIGHAL GAYA AUR APUN KA STYLE HI BADAL KAR RAKH DALA. Par agar mera ye badla hua roop samajh nahi aa raha hai to wapas kal raat wala lalu bhi ban sakta hu.

So mujh par nahi to Lalu par bharosa rakho wo utna bhi seedha nahi jitna dikh raha hai bus kum shabdo me jada samjho. Lalu is the most Disgusting Charectar of this story. Ye bhi uska bus ek naya shade hai.

[Logan555]

HAR KAAM KIYA MAINE USKI KHUSHI KE LIE
PHIR BHI NA JANE KYU BEWAFA KEHLAYA HU
MAUT SE PEHLE KARLU EKBAAR DEEDAR USKA
ISLIYE MARKAR BHI BUS USE DEKHNE AYA HU


Kya likhte ho bhai dil jeet liya.m
Bht hard bht hard bhai ??

Ha ha ha pasand aaya.

Tumne ye update xossip par nahi pada tha waha bhi ye dala tha. Xossip band hone ke baad yaha dubara dala hai to repetative hai. Shaayad tumne yaha pehli bar pada hai tabhi tumhe repatative nahi laga.

[Logan555]

Bhai neeta ka kch likho

Bhai Neeta nai neetu bhai tum ye story xossip se pad rahe ho ya xossipy kyuki neetu ka next update jo hai wo xossip par pehle post ho chuka hai to kuchh ke liye wo purana update hoga par aarti ki story ka important hine ke karan yaha ke nae readers ke liye naya hoga so post karna jaroori hai to kuchh log kagenge mai fool bana raha purana update post karke..

[Ajay.star]

Oh bhai bade dino baad tumhara comment aya maine to samjha ki jin do readers ko maine apni story ka part banaya wo dono hi alag ho gae. Abhay raichand ka to koi ata pata nahi hai. Bhai mai reader ka hisab bhi dekh raha hu aur apna hisab bhi. Aur pichhle do update shabana aur neha ke to logo ne bahut pasand kare unme tumhe maza nahi aya.

Bhai mai story to puri apne dimag me pehle hi likh chuka hu ga reader agar kuchh demand karte hai to hske hisab se halka fulka change kar deta hu.

Ab jaise do changes ki baat kari ek jeetu wala waha tumne chhotu likha wo koi bahut bada change nahi hai wo kewal ek scene tha jaha maine sex socha tha reader ne mana kara to orgasm scene bana diya par kirdaar kahi nahi gae garima bhi wahi hai jeetu bhi. Balki hariya aur garima ka bhi pehle orgasm hua tha phir sex wahi yaha ho jaega. So wo koi itni badi baat nahi thi.

And doosra lalu ka charectar bhai to tumne to story xosip se padi hai aur Lalu ko bhi achhe se jante ho. Aur agar us update ki ye line tum dhyan se pado to is baat ka jawab Lalu ne khud de diya tha.

Lalu: Kya soch rahi hai ki kahi mai tujhe koi galat goli to nahi khila raha ye soch rahi hai. Zeher to dunga nahi tujhe maar kar mujhe kya mil jaega aur anshe ki goli khilakar tere sath kuchh karnenki mujhe zarurat nahi kyuki ye tu bhi janti hai ki agar mai chahu to tere hosho hawaas me bhi tere sath teri marzi ke bina bhi kuchh bhi kar sakta hu aur ye tune kal raat hi dekh liya tha to tujhe nashe ki goli kyu khilaunga. WO TO STORY KE KUCHH DARIYADIL READERS KO TERI BARBAAD HALAT PAR KUCHH JADA HI TARAS AA GAYA AUR UNHONE WRITER SE REQUEST KARI KI TUJHE AUR ZALEEL NA KARA JAE AUR APNA WRITER BHI PIGHAL GAYA AUR APUN KA STYLE HI BADAL KAR RAKH DALA. Par agar mera ye badla hua roop samajh nahi aa raha hai to wapas kal raat wala lalu bhi ban sakta hu.

So mujh par nahi to Lalu par bharosa rakho wo utna bhi seedha nahi jitna dikh raha hai bus kum shabdo me jada samjho. Lalu is the most Disgusting Charectar of this story. Ye bhi uska bus ek naya shade hai.

Abhi 76 page tak read ki he story. Jald hi current page pe aa jauga

[Logan555]

Then I was not talking about repetition. I was talking about your strategy to match the people's demand of going to flashback one day later. What a cunning brain!! Almighty give you writing power to write well and a brain to make people fool. I know it is a complete waste of time to say you anything.  You are the most right person, what you think, what you do all are right, we readers don't have anything to say unless praising you. Almost two years, Aarti-Neetu story still not in flow and now you are delaying one day and if anyone say anything then - "mai isme kuchh nahi kar sakta".

Firstly thanks for the compliment about my brain. And almighty give u also writing power i see ur bengali story of seven page but cant say u r making fool of ur readers or not becoze i dont know bengali.

Now the flashback u r talking about,  i not started it yet. This update is not a flashback. Its just a normal update if u think its a flashback its up u. Falshback means Abhay past story of his killing not means this. And when that story comes all other story paused becoz  Abhay story is from different time era. Thats the reason to make it seperate from other stories and take it to last day. Thats why i take this update to day 6 rather than day 5.

If now u understand what i am saying than its ok otherwise i also think its a waste of time to tell you anything. Becoz before this u commented on this thread on 21dec2018 and 1 may 2019 and both the times u only commenting on to leave that story what i already written on xossip becoz u already read that on xossip. But my thinking is differ becoz here are so many readers who first time join my story on xossipy thats why acc to me give them a short briefing is important. I cant take decison according  to just one reader.

And prasing line what u r talking about firstly check u never ever gave any prasing comment on this thread. Only said two times to start the story where i leave on xossip. So dont say anything about prasing u never comment on shabana u never comment on neha u never comment on vineeta or garima but when i gave a update from xossip u critisizing it.

And jo baat tumne readers par kahi ki we readers dont have anything to say unless prasing me. To for ur kind information maine apne readers ke feedback ko behad seriously liya jeetu aur lalu ke updates uske example hai. But jo tum chahte he wo feedback nahi tha ek personal demand thi ki xossip par story jaha chhodi thi wo chhodo a yaha uske aage se likho kyuki tum wo pad chuke ho. Par jo yaha pehli baar pad rahe hai kya wo readers nahi hai kya mai wo updates unke liye post nahi kar sakta hu. Agar mai ek readers ki demand par wo story chhod du to kya ye unhe fool banana nahi hoga.

And in the last u are talking about two years than i told u yaha maine Dec 18 se likhna shuru kara hai aur 8 months me 100 page tak aa gaya hu. If u think u can write faster than write a story faster. Writer also have a personal life wo har waqt story hi nahi likhta rahega.

Aur rahi pasing ki baat to writer apne khud ke liye story nahi likhta hai readers ke liye likhta hai. Aur maine nahi kaha kisiko ko sirf mujhe prasie kro hamesha ye kaha ki comment karo aur har reader ke comment ka usiki bhasha me jawab bhi diya. Tumhare bhi har comment ka jawab diya hai. Agar readers ne kuchh changement ki request kari to pura bana banaya update delete karke unke hisab se upate bhi banaya.

I think maine tumhe achhe se khulkar samjha diya hai aur rahi xossip ki story ki baat to ha mai wo neetu wala update bhi dalunga kyuki wo ek imp update tha jise maine rok kar rakha tha. Agar waha bhi tun fool bano to tum use bina pade paas it away kar dena.