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Fantasy Kamukta de nzare
#41
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#42
Bahut vadhia likhia bai ji
Jaldi update deo
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#43
Ghaint update but bit slow!
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#44
UPDATE

Sver hundi hai, Gurleen di hauli hauli akh khudli hai. Oho uth k beh jandi hai. Akhan maldi maldi oho jdo apni bedsheet te nigah mardi hai ta osnu ik daag dikhayi dinda hai..jo k raati osdi fuddi cho nikle juice da daag c. Ehe dekhde he osnu raat di poori kahani yaad ajndi hai.  K kis trah osde bhra ne osdi fuddi chatti c te osdi boori halat kiti c. Ehe sab yaad aunde he osnu gussa aajanda hai k oho ehni besharam kive ho skdi hai k apne bhra de sahmne nanagi ho gyi. Osnu apne aap te shrmindagi mehsoos hundi hai. 
Oho fta fat otho uthdi hai te uth k washroom ch chli jandi hai. Oho pishab layi english toilet di seat da dhkkan chuk dindi hai . Te fer apni nikkar teh kacchi fad k niche kr k beh jandi hai. Nikkar te kacchi pairan ch payi hundi hai te , fuddi cho pishab di tej dhaar nikaldi hai. Teh isse time Gurleen di nazar apni kacchi teh paindi hai jis upr v ik daag bnya hoyea c. Ehe dekhde he oho fta fat khdi hundi hai te kachi te nikkar kd k farash te he sit dindi hai. 
Oho washbasin kol jaa k tooti chla dindi hai te paani da unjla bhar k fuddi de bull khol k fuddi te mardi hai. Eda he oho do teen baar krdi hai . Osdi fuddi de vaal v poore gille ho k fuddi  upr val ikthe ho jande han. Oho towel chukk di hai te apni fuddi upr ragad k osnu saaf krdindi hai. Oho hath dho k eda he ik tshirt ch bahar chli jandi hai . Tshirt osde chittdan de upr wale paasey ikthi hoyi hundi hai. Te muhro v fuddi de chhote chhote  vaal nazar aa rahe san. Jdo oho toori aundi bathroom cho bahar aandi hai ta osdi bund da nazara dekhn wala c. Osde mote mote gol chitd upr thalle ho rahe san. Oho room ch aake eda nangi he, apne bed di chdr htana shru kr dindi hai. Oho is gal to bekhbr c k oho raat nu eda he sogyi c te osde room da darwaja khulla c. Odhro hundi hai entry Ravneet di.. drwaja khulda hai...
" didiiiii"
Oho sahnne khdi Gurleen nu dekh k hakka bakka reh janda hai.  
Goriyan chittiyan lattan .. bhare patt ..
Gurleen fta fat chukk k pillow naal apni fuddi teh patt dhak lendi hai.
Gurleen gusse ch" akal ni hegi tenu.. darwaja khdka ni aa skda"
Ravneet" sorry didi sorry"
Gurleen" beakal nikal ja mere room toh bahar chal bhaj itho"
Ravneet" sorry didi.. sorry schi menu ni pta c k darwaja khulla c"
Gurleen" chal hun bahar nikal"
Ravneet mud k room cho bahar jaan lgda hai. Gurleen pillow apne pattan toh hta dindi hai. Osnu lgda hai k Ravneet hun piche ni mudega.
Pr Ravneet harami c oho vpis Gurleen val paltya..
" didi.. " te bhaj k gurleen toh pillow kho lenda hai.
Gurleen dono hathan naal apni fuddi dhakk lendi hai.
Gurleen" plz yaar Ravneet eda na kr bahar chl mere room cho"
Ravneet" fr ki hogya didi.. raat main sb kuch dekh he lya"
Ehe sunde he gurleen shrmo saar ho jndi hai.. osdiyan nazran jhukk jandian han.. nazra jhukayin dari hoyi Gurleen ..hath fuddi dhkn di koshish kr rahe .. sleeveless tshirt.. nanagian gori bahan te lattan.  Te koole koole patt.. dekh k Ravneet da Lun khdaa hogya.
" didi ki hoyea.  Thonu raat b smjayea c thonu "
Gurleen" Ravneet oho sb galat c.. apa nu ehe sb khtm krna chahida "
Ravneet" ki aa didi .. ohi gallan fr toh"
Gurleen" but apa bro sis aan yaar"
Ravneet" swaad ayea c?"
Gurleen" kaahda swaad"?
Ravneet " jo kuj raat hoyea c osda"
Gurleen" pr oho sb galat c"
Ravneet "swaad ayea? Hn ya na"
Gurleen" pr yaar'x
Ravneet"hn ya na?"
Gurleen" hmm"
Ravneet" bs fer kuch na socho"
Gurleen" nahi yaar"
Ravneet" thonu mere te bhrosa ni?"
Gurleen" hega eda ta"
Ravneet " bs fr kuch ni sochna"
Gurleen" pkka ehe galat ni  na?"
Ravneet "kuch galat ni "
Gurleen" thk aa "
Ravneet"dasso fr mzaa ayea c?"
Gurleen shrma k " hn ayea c"
Ravneet" ayee hayeee"
Gurleen" chup krja sang lgdi menu"
Ravneet " didi esnu vekho"
Gurleen" ki"
Ravneet apne pjame ch fasse Lun val ishara krde hai
" isnu"
" tenu ta jmaa shrm ni aandi"
" hun tusi eda adh nangi halat ch sahmne auge ta isda ta aahi haal hona"
" yaar plz kpde paane main tu bahar chla ja"
" main kdo rokya .. paalo"
" plz ravneet.. veera ban k chla ja main kpde paane"
" ithe he paalo"
" pr mainu kpde change krn bathroom ch jana paina.. " 
" ithe he krlo"
" tere sahmne shrm aundi"
" krlo mere sahmne e change"
" nhiiiiii"
" main leya k dinda kpde" keh k oho almaari val vadh da hai, te almaari khol k"dssso ki paana"
Gurleen" panty he dede filhaal ta "
Ravneeet" lg len do hwaa.. kal kaafi paani chhdya isne"
Gurleen" beshrm aa jma tu"
Ravneet" chhdya ni?"
Gurleen' harkata e eda di kri"
Ravneet" mza aagya c didi kal"
Gurleen" kis cheez da mza'
Ravneet" thodi chatt k"
Gurleen" luchaaaaa"
Ravneet" acha.. odo ta swaad ch thodi akhan ni khul ri c"
Gurleen" chl hun kpde paan de pehla "
Ravneet" daso ki paonge"
Gurleen" tu bahar chl main appey paalungi"
Ravneet" nahi main daunga fr payeo"
Gurleen" main ni, tu ja hun "
Ravneet"  didi daso yaar"
Gurleen"nahi manana tu?"
Ravneet"Na tusi daso ki pauge?"
Gurleen" panty "
Ravneet" kithe aa..main daunga"
Gurleen " almari ch, drawer ch"
Ravneet almari khol k drawer kholda hai ta othe Gurleen diyan BRA teh PANTIYAN san .. 
" Didi ehni kachi bnainan"
" bra panty bolde.. "
" hn chlo ehni bra pantiyan"
" hm lod paindi periods de time"
" acha.. vadia hai alag alag rang"
" acha .. luchaa"
" hn hega main luchha" keh k oho kachiyan frolan lag janda hai..
" kehdi paunge didi?"
" jo marji dede bs dede jldi"
Drawer ch LAAL, KAALI, NEELI, BHOORI, ASMANI, GULABI teh NABHI rang di kachian payian san.
Osne LAAL rang di kacchi chukki jo k osdi maa ne hun he oslyi litti c .. jis ch Gurleen di fudi di shape nazar aandi c.
" didi aha paalo"
"Leya de"
" lao pao"
" tu eyes close kr"
" ok" keh k oho pith kr lenda hai Gurleen val.
Teh gurleen kacchi paa lendi hai. Pr osdi fudi di shape kacchi cho saaf saaf nazar aa rahi hundi hai.
Ravneet" paa lyi didi?"
Gurleen" hn"
Ravneet mud da hai te osdi nazar sidha Kacchi te jandi hai.
" aye haye didi.. is ch ta shape bdi sohni lg rahi "
" yaar nvi aa ehe panty ..eda he dikhda es ch"
" hayee didi fudi de bull thodi de.. hayeeee"
" chup kr ja besharam ja" ik muskan naal Gurleen ne keha
" didi isda ki kran"?
" kisda"
"Aahi mere pajame ch fssya jo"
" mainu ni pta ki kran isda"
" didi kro koi hilla isda"
" aapey kr la mainu ki pta"
" didi hath ch fad k krdo"
" nahi ravneet main ni"
" didi ni mere?" Bhola jeha banda hoyea.
" yaar eda na kr"
" fr krdo na plz "
" raat tah krya c hle.. ehni jldi fr toh"
" didi plz"
" yaar bohat ziddi aan tu"
" krdo na"
" chal aja , door lock kr k"
Ravneet bhjya bhjya janda hai te lock kr k aajnda hai.
Gurleen bed te beh jandi hai..osdi ik lat bed toh niche lamak rahi hundi hai te ik bed de upr.
Ravneet bhaj k osde brabr ch let janda hai. 
Gurleen" chal hun jldi kr jo krna.. fr kamm v krne hor"
Ravneet" tusi he ta krna krdo"
Gurleen" besharm bacha"
Ravneet" bacha hu main?"
Gurleen" hor ki bacha he hain"
Ravneet apna pjama niche kr k Lun bahar kd lenda hai...
" aha bache da ehna vadda ni hunda"
" tenu jmaa ni sharam ni andi vese"
" naji nahi andi apni didi toh kaahdi sharm"
" acha.. tah he kd lendan bahar isnu jhat dene"
" didi fad lo hun"
" leya fda " keh k Gurleen apne sajje hath ch osda Lun fad litta.
" hayee didi thode hath ch kinna svaad anda fdaa k"
" acha svaad da lggya hun chheti chheti nbed"
" kro ta sahi isnu upr niche"
" hm krdi han.. " keh k oho Ravneet de Lun di muth maran lag jandi hai.
" aaahhh didi hayee "
" ki hoyea"
" svaad aa reha"
" acha g"
" thankyou didi"
" thankyou kaahda didi aan teri .. kuch b kr skdi tere layi"
" kuch b didi?"
" hn meri jaan kuch b" keh k oho poorr flow ch  muth mar rahi hundi hai.
Isse duran osdi fuddi b paani chhdn lag jandi hai. Te oho bull tukk di hoyi apni fuddi cho nikle paani da svaad lendi hai.
" didi ki hoyea thodi akhan kyu band hoyian"
" yaaar mere tummy ch kuch ho reha c te....."
" te...?
" fr wet hogyi meri"
" hayee didi thodi fuddi da paani. . Yummy "
" tera kad hona.. ravneet koi aajuga schi let hojuga "
" kerde raho didi hojuga appey"
Gurleen poori tej tej Ravneet da Lun fd k osdi muth maar rahi c.
" aaha aaha ahah.. didi"
" hn meri jaan jldi kr"
" didi ik second ch hoju, bs menu ik kam kr len do"
" ki"?
" thode dudhu touch kr len do"
" noooooooo ravneet" ehe ni krna"
' plz didi "
" kyu yaar othe ni touch krna"
" kyu"
" kuch hunda touch kre teh "
" kya"?
" wet hojndi "
" didi plz ik vaar"
" nahi manana?"
"Didi plz"
" jyada na press krienn.. plz"
" nahi bs hlka ja"
" hmmm"
Ravneet apna hath aggey krda hoyea.. Gurleen de khbbe mumey nu hath ch bhar lenda hai te hlka hlka dba dinda hai.
Gurleen" ummmmmmmm... aaaah, ravneet"
" hayye didi thoda mumma"
" na kr veere .. meri jaan nikldi"
" jaan ni fuddi cho paani niklda didi"
" hmm yaar.. ohiii"
Sunde  he Ravneet de Lun cho ik pichkari nikldi hai te Gurleen de hath nu gilla kr dindi hai.
Ravneet" aaaaaaahhhhhh didi.. chhutt gya"
Keh k oho sir piche patak dinda hai te jor jor naal sah len lg janda hai.
Gurleen  " sara hath ganda kr tah luchhe ne "
Ravneet" sorry didi"
" lggya sorry da.. chal main aundi han.. hath dho k"
Oho hath dho k vapis aundi hai ta Ravneet oda he peya c.  Pjama osda niche ..c Lun osda sutta peya c.. te singud k chhota ja reh gya c. Te lace di boonda osde lun cho tapak rahian san.
Gurleen ne ik kpda chukkya te Ravneet de patt te lun nu saaf kr ditta.
" rehan do didi"
" kuch ni hund, chal hun paa pajama "
" tusi paado"
"Bacha ni hega tu"
" didi main v thodi nikkar paa k gya c"
" acha chal fr ho upr nu" keh k Gurleen ne Ravneet da pjama lakk kolo fd k upr set kr ditta.
" chal bache uth hun"
" main bacha ni"
" chal uth ja hun fr"
oho uth k beh janda hai...
" didi aha ki hogya"
" ki"
" thodi kacchi "
" ki hoyea meri kchhi nu"
" gilli hogyi"
" ohh yaar.. fr change krni peni"
" raat wali ta poori gilli hogyi c fuddi de paani naal"
" hn yaar schi bura haal krta meri panty da"
" didi kinni sohni aa thodi fudi"
" acha.. ki sohna is ch" keh k apni kacchi val vekhn lg pyi 
" isdr lips, isdi khooshboo, ehni soft aa ehe.. te ìsda juice ta bohat tasty aa"
" lucha lucha lucha"
" hahahhaha.. " dovein hassan lg jande han.
Gurleen" chal b hun, jaa itho main room set kr dva te chddr change kr dva"
" didi panty b change krni"
" aaho panty v krdi aan change"
" didi menu dedo ehe panty utar k "
" kyu tu ki krna?"
" dao ta"
" nahi main dhoni aa ehe"
" didi dedo na"
" le lvein baba.. hun ja"
" chalo theek aa jandan main"
Keh k oho chla janda hai ..
Te gUrleen apne room di safai krn lgg jandi hai.
To be continued. .....
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#45
very hot keep going
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#46
Very nice ...keep writing
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#47
Superb
No words
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#48
Awesome
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#49
Please do comment as it makes a writer aware whether the story is going in right direction or not
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#50
Bahut khubsurat writeing
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#51
Bai bhut ghaint hai .....sexy conversation bhain bhra di lambi challan deyo.... jaldi sex na krauna te sex hun bhain bhra da hi rakhna.....koi cousins bula k seal tudwa do ravneet tou jo sara scene gurleen dekhe.... gurleen di koi sheli ya geandan v thukwa deyo
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#52
Very very sexy and interesting story a, keep it up, conversation krvao
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#53
Usdi maa te peo v ehna nal conversation vich rakho, maza full...





Congrats eni vadhia story vaste
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#54
Bhut vadia lekh rhe o update jaldi Dea kro
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#55
Update

Dono bhain bhra apne apne kmre cho tyar ho k niche aande han. Gurleen ne aj Gulabi rang da pajami suit payea c. Jis ch osde patt poori trah kasse hoye san. Te kmeej osdi hikk teh kassya hoyea c.
Oho kitaban te hand bag lai k niche aundi hai. Harjeet kitchen ch roti bna rahi hundi hai .
Ravneet b apna bag lai k niche aajnda hai. Oho college dress ch hunda hai.. Blue colour di trouser te white shirt. 
Oho aakey khane di table teh beh janda hai. Odhr Gurleen apna bag rakh k andr kitchen ch chli jandi hai.
Gurleen" mummyyyy"
Harjeet" aagi meri puttri, aj ayi he ni niche sara kamm kli nu krna peya"
Gurleen" •sorry mumma akh e ni khulli"
Ravneet" hn mummy akh ni khuli didi di" keh k osne Gurleen nu akh maar diti
Gurleen os val akhan kddn lgg pyi, te bullan te ungal rakh k osnu chup rehan da ishara kitta. 
Gurleen" sorry mumy.. "
Harjeet" chal koi ni putt" 
Gurleen" leyao main rotii pa lendi hn.. late ho gye aj asinv"
Te oho plate chakk apne layi te Ravneet layi roti paa k le jandi hai.
Oho roti table te rakh k Ravneet di chair de naal vali chair te beh jandi hai. 
Gurleen" lai b khaa roti te college nu chal"
Ravneet" khaa lindan didi koi ni"
Gurleen roti khana shru kr dindi hai.
Ravneet ta c he harami.osne holi jehi Gurleen de kann ch keha" didi kaali payi aa fr aj hain"?
Gurleen" ki kaali?"
Ravneet" Kacchi"
Gurleen" hayee tenu kidan pta chlya"
Ravneet" thode kmeej da plla hat gya c side toh plate chukkan lagge.. td elastic dikh gyi c menu.."
Gurleen" sara dhyan tera mere te e rehnda"
Ravneet" hai e ehne sohne tusi dhyan hatda e ni"
Gurleen" acha g .. makhan lga  rehan"
Ravneet" makhan ta tusi aap ho"
Gurleen" chal chup kr k roti khaa badmash"
Ravneet" didi .. kamm keha c thonu ik"
Gurleen" ki kamm reh gya"
Ravneet" thonu keha c laal vli kacchi menu dedeo"
Gurleen" hayee rabba ki kra main is munde da.. meri pantyian de piche pai gya tu tah"
Ravneet" didi dedo na"
Gurleen" ki krenga tu osda"
Ravneet" didi plz dedo"
Gurleen" pehlan roti kha"
Ravneet" ok"
Oho khushi khushi roti kha linda hai. Dono bhain bhra apna khaa k table toh uth jande ne.
Gurleen apna bag chukk k nikln lgdi hai.
Ravneet" didiii.. mera kamm kr k jao"
Gurleen" main late ho rahi hn.. tu lela room ch he honi labh lavein.. main chali"
Keh k oho chli jandi hai.
Ravneet bhaj k Gurleen de room ch janda hai. Oho idhr udhr nigah marda hai ta osnu kacchi nahi mildi fr oho bathroom ch janda hai. Jithe diwar te laggi hook upr laal rang di chhoti ji kacchi latak rahi c.
Ravneet ne kacchi nu chukkkya te fuddi vli jgah nu nakk te rakh k sungna shru kr ditta.
Fuddi di smell ne osnu pagal kr ditta te osda Lun fr toh khdaa hogya.. pr college jaan di deri ch osne fta fat apni BHAIN di kacchi nu apni pocket ch rakhya te college layi nikal gya.

Osne apne mobile toh gurleen nu msg kitta.
Ravneet" didi mil gyi"
Gurleen" acha.. mannya ni tu"
Ravneet'' mza aajnda "
Gurleen" kisda mza aa reha tenu"
Ravneet" thodi panty smell kr k"
Gurleen" tu college ni gya?"
Ravneet" college ch he hn"
Gurleen" fer panty smell kidan"
Ravneet" mere kol he aa thodi panty"
Gurleen" hayee besharam .. meri panty college ch lai k gya.. ravneet eda de kam na krya kr"
Ravneet" didi kise nu ni pta .. main washroom ch hn"
Gurleen" kya lod c naal lai k aayn di"
Ravneet" didi khooshboo ne pagal kr ta menu tah"
Gurleen" tu tah kmla hogya.. chal rakh hun phone te class laa"
Ravneet" ok didi.. "
Gurleen" bye luche"
Ravneet" bye sohni didi"
Keh k dono class ch chle  jande ne...

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Class ch jande he Gurleen teh Mankirat class ch iko table teh baithdiyan han. Class ch munde te kudiyan baithiyan san. Mundyan ch ik Mankirat ta hun wala yaar v c jo k bilkul osde piche wali seat te baitha c .. jis da naam c Zorawar .. jis nu sare Zora kehnde san. Oho kaafi velly te bigdya hoyea insaan c. 
Mankirat ne Red top payea hoyea c te jeans payi hoyi c. Osda top piche toh thoda upr uth janda c.
Piche zorawar baitha c te oho Mankirat de kann kol aa k kuch bol reha c. 
Gurleen naal he baithi c.. 
Zora" kive aa patole?'
Mankirat" thk hn jnaab, tusi dsso kive o"
Gurleen nu ehe sb sunayi de reha c..oho man he man ohna di ashki dekh k muskra rahi c.
Zora" aj bda qehar dhayea laal rang ch"
Mankirat" acha g... bach k raho"
Zora" jaan nìkli jandi laal rang ch ta
Mankirat" eda ni meri jaan nu kuch hon dindi"
Zora" aye haye.. tu krva k manengi aj kuch"
Mankirat " na g main ni krvana kuch v"
Zora" dekhla yaar man ja.. kyi din hoge"
Mankirat " na g mera koi mood ni kuch krn da"
Zora Mankirat de lakk toh uthi kammej ch hath paa k aggey nu jhuk k osde dhidd upr hath fern lg janda hai.
Mankirat " ssssssss,, no baby.. na kro"
Gurleen odhro hairan c k ho ki reha c..
Gurleen ne apna patt mankirat de patt naal maarya teh mankirat val akh de ishare naal puchya k ki kr rahe c oho dono.
Dujje passey mankirat ta hai e Sexy c.. osne apne hath htande hoye .. piche no ho k Gurleen nu osde top ch osde dhid teh ghumda Zore da hath dikha ditta..
Gurleen ne shrma k hath apne muh teh rakh litta oho hairan c k class ch he Zora te mankirat ehe sb kr rahe sn..
Mankirat ne Gurleen val dekhde hoye ZORE de hath nu apni pant di zip wali jgah rakh dita...te side toh apna bag rakh k cover kr ditta teh dujji side ta Baithi he Gurleen c.. 
Gurleen toh ilawa kise nu nahi c pta k othe ki ho reha c...
Gurleen tedhi nazar naal ehe nazara dekh rahi c..  Zore ne hauli hauli apni unglan ni zip di kundi te rakhya te zip khol diti..
Ehe dekhde he Gurleen de mathe teh pasina aagya.. oho hairan c ehe sb dekhde hoye.. k ehe ki ho reha c... 
Fr osne zip vich di he apni unglan nu Mankirat di pant de andr paa ditta te unglan di tip naal fuddi nu kacchi upro he palosan lgga..
Ehe sb dekh Gurleen de dhid ch b kuch hoyn lgga... osnu b ehe sb dekh k svaad aayn lggga te osdi fuddi gilli hoyn lggii..
Eda he kchi upro hath firda Mankirat di fuddi toh sehan na kr hoyea te osen paani chhad ditta .. te Mankirat diyan akhan band hogyian te osne svaad svaad ch apne bull tukk ditte.
Ehe hunde he Mankirat ne Zore da hath htayea te osde kann ch kuch keha.. jo sunde he Zora class cho bahar jaan layi uth khdya..
Mankirat ne aase paase dekh k apni pant di zip band kitti te.. Gurleen nu class ch chalan da ishara kitta..
Gurleen" kithe"
Mankirat " chal ta sahi yaar ,, tenu aj vadia ji cheej dkhani"
Gurleen" ki"?
Mankirat " chal jaldi main dikhaungi tenu"
Gurleen te Mankirat dono janiyan... uth k  chali jandiyan han..
Mankirat Gurleen nu college ch bani Lab val nu lai jandi hai.
Gurleen" lab ch ki krna apa... othe koi hunda ta hain ni"
Mankirat " j koi nahi hega, tah he ta ure ayein aan"
Gurleen" ki krna ithe"
Mankirat " jeeja tera aau saheli teri nu paani laayn"
Gurleen" kiiiiiiii"?
Mankirat" Sex krna mere naal zore ne, ithe"
Gurleen" hawww ithe.. oho b sex"
Mankirat " ehi jgah hundi.. emergency ch ta"
Gurleen" emergency nu ki hogya''
Mankirat " fuddi ch agg lggi pyi yaar, bhujauga oho apna pipe andr paa k paani naal"
Gurleen"shrm ni aaugi tenu eda ithe"
Mankirat " tu eda kr oho almaari piche khdi hoja jaa k"
Gurleen" main kyu main ta vpis jana class"
Mankirat " ki krna class ch asli lesson ta ithe hona' kundi ch sotta vajda dekhein"
Gurleen" main tere wargi besharam ni"
Mankirat " fuddi ta dayengi na kise na kise nu?"
Gurleen" menu ni pta"
Mankirat " tu lai mze almari piche khdi ho k"
Gurleen almari piche jaa k khdi hojndi hai..
Odhro zora enter krda hai.. oho annde he mankirat nu jaffi paa k osdi gal teh chummi lai lenda hai" muaaassaaaah"
" ehne dina baad aj machli jaal ch fasi"
Mankirat Zore di pant upro osde lun upr haath ghuma k" aha magarmachh kyu, fsaeya pant ch"
Gurleen ehe sb dekh k muskra rahi c.. almari piche luk k oho ehe sb nzaara dekh rahi c. 
Zore ne Mankirat diyan gallan nu chumna te chattna shru kr ditta.. mankirat diyan akhan band san...te oho kamukta ch leen c..dujje paasey Gurleen v ohna nu chuma chaati krde dekh excited ho rahi c...
Zore ne Mankirat di gardan nu chumna shru kr ditta oho kutte vaang osdi gardan chattda te chumda.. 
Agle pal Makirat ne zore di pant di zip khol ditti.. Zore di pith c Gurleen wal.
Osne pant da button khol k kacche cho lun bahar kr ditta te Gurleen nu zore de lun di jhalak dikhaan layi .... thoda ghumaa dita..
Gurleen di akhan sahmne Zore da 7" inch da mota kala lun c... osdi akhan khuliyan reh giyan Lun vekh k.. 
Zora hle v Mankirat nu chatt reha c..
Mankirat ne Gurleen val dekh k muskra k akh maar diti.....
Mankirat ne zore da muh hath ch fdya te osde bullan ch bull paa ditte...
Oho dono ik dujje nu pagalan vaang choos rahe san" mmmuaaah ammmuaa ammuaah"
Diyan hlki hlki awaajan lab ch goonj rahiyan san.
Ehe sb dekh k Gurleen di fuddi ch bhuchal aa chuka c.. oho apne pattan nu apas ch jod k fuddi cho niklde ras da swaad lendi..
Duje pase bullan ch bull paa k premi joda kamukta de sikhar te c.
ZORE ne apne hath piche laijande hoye MANKIRAT de chittdan te rakh ditte. Jean ch qaid Mankirat di gol matol bund te hun ZORE de hathan ne jaal vichha litta c. Oho apne hathan ch fad k osdi Bund nu ghut reha c. 
Te chumma chatti hle b chalu c. Zore da lun poora tight ho k Mankirat de pattan de vichale fas gya c.
Mankirat ne apne bull Zore de bullan cho bahar kdde " Hun bull he choosi jane .. kuj hor ni krna?"
Zora" aha dekh jehda tannya khda tenu lgda ehe tenu jaan de du eda he"
Mankirat " Haye rabba ehe fauji ta border te tainat hoyea khda"
Zora" ehe aj sarhad paar k hmla kru "
Mankirat " zore time naa laa, hun ni reha janda paa de vich"
Zora swaad lenda hoyea " kisde vich ki pana"
Mankirat " apna Lun meri Fuddi ch paa de"
Zora" hayee Mankirat aj ni chhad da tenu"
Mankirat " na chhad ve.. pr jldi kar"
Zore ne Mankirat di pant nu osde pairan ch kr ditta te osdi kacchi nu osde goddyan te .. atteh naal paye banch te osnu koddi kr lya.. 
Mankirat Banch da sahara lai Bund bahar nu kadd apne dhid bhaar bench upr c osdiyan lattan zameen te san.
Gurleen ehe nazara dekh kaabu nahi kr paa rahi c. Osne pajami de upr di he apni fuddi nu ghut lya.
Zore ne Mankirat di Bund vekh oste ik thapad maarya,, te room ch " chtaaak" di awaaj goonj gayi.
Mankiraat" aaah"
Zora" pta ni kha k jammi maa ne tu, ehna sex pta ni kitho ayea"
Mankirat " gallan na bna bs hun Lun paa k ghasse maar fuddi ch"
Zora" chal theek aa"
Zore ne pocket cho condom kdya te apne Lun te paa litta.
Zore ne Mankirat dian lattan khol dittyan te fuddi upr Lun da toppa rakh ditta.. osne hauli hauli topa andr wal sarkana shru kr ditta..
Mankirat " aah zoree tera lun bohat motta"
Zore" appey ta kehndi c paa chheti"
Mankirat dard naal tadap rahi c
Mankirat " hayee zore hauli paa"
Zora " hm paa rehan saaliye chup kr ja"
Mankirat " aaaahhh"
Zore ne hauli hauli sara toppa fuddi ch paa ditta
Zora" hun apni cheekh smbhaal lein.. ikko ghasse ch andr vaadna"
Mankirat " haye tenu rabb da vaasta eda na kr"
Zora" chup bhain diye lodiye, pehli vaar ni den lggi, nakhre na kr"
Mankirat " hauli kri plz"
Zore ne osdi gal an suni kari te ik zor da ghassa maarya te poora Lun fuddi ch fas gya.
Mankirat ne apne bull ik duje naal jod k bohat mushkil naal apni cheekh nu rokya.
Gurneel ehe dekh dar gyi.
Zore ne fr toh lun bahar kddya te fr ik jor da ghassa marya te Mankirat table smet agge nu khis gyi.
Zore da Lun fuddi cho bahar nikal gya.
Zora fr aggey vadya te hath naal Lun nu fuddi upr tika ditta.
Te ik jor daar ghassa maar poora Lun fuddi ch tunn ditta. Is baar mankirat di cheekh ruk na ski" aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh mar gyi maa"
Zore ne apne hath Mankirat de muh te rakh litte te ..jor jor naal ghsse maran lgga"
Mankirat " ahmmmmmahhhammm..." kr rahi c pr awaaj osdi nikal nahi c rahi"
Gurleen diyan akhan khulliyan reh giyan ehe sb dekh k .. oho dar gyi Mankirat di halat dekh k .pr oho kuj kr nahi c skdi.
Mankirat diyan akhan cho hanju cho rahe san.
Pr zora janwaran waang osdi fuddi ch ghasse maar reha c .. mankirat da lakk buri tarah hill chuka c . Zore de ghasseyan da dard hun swaad ch badal chukka c.
Mankirat diyan akhan band hogyian swaad ch te hun oh svaad ch" aaahmmm aahmmm.. haaa haye zore meri fuddi"
Zora " aayea swaad?"
Mankirat" haye eda he tikka k maar ghassa ,  bohat svaad anda .. meri fuddi ta jhadan wali aa"
Zora" mera b chhutan wala "
Mankirat " aaaaaaahh zore meri fuddiiii"
Zora" aaah haye Mankirat chhut gya mera"
Keh k zore ne apna maal condom ch kad ditta . Mankirat te zora fta fat sidhe hoye te ,
Zore ne condom utar k hath ch fad lya. Mankirat sidhi hoyi" isda ki krna "
Zora" tu laija apne naal"
Mankirat " chal ganda"
Zore ne Condom pre sutt ditta te.. otho chla gya. Mankirat ne apni kacchi upr kitti te jeans set kr k.. Gurleen nu awaaj maari"
Aja gurleen"
Gurleen" haye tu theek ta hain"
Mankirat " menu ki hona"
Gurleen" ki halat c teri,, akhan cho hanju aa rahe c dard naal"
Mankirat " oho ta pyar da dard hunda kamliye, akhan te fuddi dona cho paani aanda"
Gurleen" besharam, chal hun chliye"
Mankirat ne apna muh dho k makeup kitta te dono janiyan class ch chale gyian.
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#56
Superb you have too much skill how to write the story
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#57
Ghaint update ....keep writing
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#58
osmmmmm
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#59
Kaim chl rhi story
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#60
Bht vadia
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