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(08-01-2019, 03:12 PM)Rocksanna999 Wrote: Hi aapne bilkul thik kaha... Itne bade business man ki ptni khud hi khana kaise paka Sakti hai . Lekin jaisa ki meine pehle bhi kaha hai kya Suresh ki maa bahut hi sanskaaron waali aurat hai... Unka maanna hai ki nahi aur beti donor ghar ki Lakshmi Hoti hai... Isliye ghar ki saari jimmedaari Chandini ne apni badi bahu Ko de Rakhi hai.. aur fir ghar mein naukrani is liye bhi nahin hai kyuki ghar mein sirf teen log hai.. Suresh uski patni Chanchal aur uski maa Chandini .. teen logo ka kaam to kisi bhi ghar ki aurat kat leti hai...
Arr a vai, inn bade ghar k modern aurte pedicure manicure/shopping/parties me hi adhe din guzarte hai..sanskari hona/zimmedari uthane ka matlab ye thodi k aurte khana pakaye/bartan manje aur mard sare khud gadi chalaye fire.Na driver aur na hi koi naukar.Yar status bol k v kuch hota hai, jo ki in HIGH SOCIETY-LOW CLASS stories me dikhana zaruri hota hai,erotic appeal badta hai... inko thoda dekhle, ...baki story waise kafi achha ja raha hai
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Very nice update.Your story is going to the right direction.
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इस बेहतरीन बड़े अपडेट के लिए आपका बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद।
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(08-01-2019, 03:29 PM)M¡Lf€@TeR Wrote: Arr a vai, inn bade ghar k modern aurte pedicure manicure/shopping/parties me hi adhe din guzarte hai..sanskari hona/zimmedari uthane ka matlab ye thodi k aurte khana pakaye/bartan manje aur mard sare khud gadi chalaye fire.Na driver aur na hi koi naukar.Yar status bol k v kuch hota hai, jo ki in HIGH SOCIETY-LOW CLASS stories me dikhana zaruri hota hai,erotic appeal badta hai... inko thoda dekhle, ...baki story waise kafi achha ja raha hai
Ek tarf se dekha jaye to aapki bat me dam hai. Lekin story abhi bhi develop ho rahi hai.. Writer ne story ko alag tarike se dikhane ke liye koi alag character socha hoga jo aage jakar story me aa jayega.. Har baar naukar, driver, gardener hi sex karta rahega to iss forum me aisi bahot saari INCOMPLETE stories hai.. I think ki writer is same plot stories ko naya mod dekar is story ko kamyab aur interested banaega...
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(08-01-2019, 03:59 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Ek tarf se dekha jaye to aapki bat me dam hai. Lekin story abhi bhi develop ho rahi hai.. Writer ne story ko alag tarike se dikhane ke liye koi alag character socha hoga jo aage jakar story me aa jayega.. Har baar naukar, driver, gardener hi sex karta rahega to iss forum me aisi bahot saari INCOMPLETE stories hai.. I think ki writer is same plot stories ko naya mod dekar is story ko kamyab aur interested banaega...
Bilkul sahi keh reh ho ap, pura forum noukar gardener driver se chudwane me lage huye hai....
Ishiliye maine "NAUKRANI" likhha, naukar nehi,...taki sex me wohi boring naukar chakar gardener ka entry na ho....ThnkU
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(08-01-2019, 03:29 PM)M¡Lf€@TeR Wrote: Na driver aur na hi koi naukar.Yar status bol k v kuch hota hai, jo ki in HIGH SOCIETY-LOW CLASS stories me dikhana zaruri hota hai,erotic appeal badta hai... Maine aapke is comment par apni ray di thi.. Isme mujhe "Naukar" naam dikha isliye maine bola..
Agar naukar/naukarani ka role aham hai to writer aage jakar unke baare me jarur jikr karenge..
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08-01-2019, 05:07 PM
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Ji me ap se sehmat hu, ishliye pehle hi NAUKRANI likha .. aur naukar/drivero ka koi aham role k liye zarurat nehi yeha, bas bade gharo me hote hai, yehi norm hai
(08-01-2019, 02:36 PM)M¡Lf€@TeR Wrote: Vai kafi achha update tha ..,bas ek baat - Itne bade ghar k aurte khud hi khana pakate(aur chaye v banate) hai kya, ..kitna absurd lag raha hai...kam se kam ek naukrani/cooking maid to honi hi chahiye, hai na...
Aur pls ho sake to aj ek aur update pls ...
Spellings ki parwa mat kro, wo hum sab samajh lnge, tum bus ek aur update de do aj..
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nice thread and nice website. Acchi forum hai.
Do not Advt other sites in this forum.
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(08-01-2019, 03:32 PM)Wanton Wrote: Very nice update.Your story is going to the right direction.
Thank you so much...
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(08-01-2019, 03:40 PM)SweetSonali Wrote: इस बेहतरीन बड़े अपडेट के लिए आपका बहुत-बहुत धन्यवाद।
जी इस कहानी को पढ़ने और मुझे प्रोतसाहित करने के लिए आपका बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया।।
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(08-01-2019, 04:09 PM)komaalrani Wrote: bahoot badhiya कोमल रानी जी आपका बहुत बहुत आभार और बड़ी ही प्रसन्नता से में आपका एक्सोपी पर स्वागत करता हूँ।।
Welcome back my dear friend... I really miss you and your stories....
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(08-01-2019, 05:50 PM)Bregs Wrote: superb story dear
Thank you so much...
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(08-01-2019, 11:08 PM)sexysneha Wrote: nice thread and nice website. Acchi forum hai.
Do not Advt other sites in this forum.
Thank you so much dear...
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Bhai aab koi Naukar ya Sadhu baba se in dono bahu ke maze krwa do...
Maine bas apni iccha jatai hai baaki aap Story apne hisab se likhiye...
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(09-01-2019, 01:51 AM)KareenaKapoorLover Wrote: Bhai aab koi Naukar ya Sadhu baba se in dono bahu ke maze krwa do...
Maine bas apni iccha jatai hai baaki aap Story apne hisab se likhiye...
Thank you dear... Thoda sa bharosa kijiye.....
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09-01-2019, 09:53 AM
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My dear supportive readers.. I have a kind request. Please visit this thread and support KOMAAL RAANI ji to write here incomplete story of xossip.
https://xossipy.com/thread-2220.html
Jis trah se aap sabhi ne mere saath diya thik usi trah se komaal raani ji ka bhi saath dijiye...
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Nice update. Interesting development. ..... पर sex scene पालक झपकते ही खत्म होगया। कृपया अगला sex scene जभ भी आये उसे विस्तार में लिखिये मेरा निवेदन।।।।
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Superb start! Nicely written..keep it up ????
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