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Reader v vadh jaan gey tuci je likhna hi band kr deo
Ge te fer te thread hi band hoju... samundar ik din ch thodee bhar janda... boond boond v keemti hundi
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Muskan ji your story was great.please carry on.
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Behtreen story aa jee. Tussi continue karo please
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Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai..
Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai..
Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge
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Aaja yr hun tae... Sarre wait krdae pae nae... 2 weak tu yadda tym ho gyea muskan yr
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Oda wadia likhde o. keep it up
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Didn't know actual girls do write stories , I mean this is the first story of a girl I've read till date
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