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Pooja
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Muskan
50.00%
7 50.00%
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Incest Hawas - Rishteyaan Ch Hawas Te Ohna Da Anjaam (Incest , Adultry )
Reader v vadh jaan gey tuci je likhna hi band kr deo
Ge te fer te thread hi band hoju... samundar ik din ch thodee bhar janda... boond boond v keemti hundi
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No carry on ji
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Muskan ji your story was great.please carry on.
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Behtreen story aa jee. Tussi continue karo please
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Siraaa
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ਘੈੰਟ ਸਟੋਰੀ
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Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai.. 

Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai.. 

Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge
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(16-08-2019, 02:07 PM)Harman91 Wrote: Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai.. 

Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai.. 

Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge
Bilkul sahi keha. Ik character nu bhut jada khich dita. J baniya eda karn lag pye india tabh ho jao. Vilan ohnu dikhana si ta thoda back ground dasde oda. Koi wanted criminal aa. I guess pawan da kam done karna chida
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Aaja yr hun tae... Sarre wait krdae pae nae... 2 weak tu yadda tym ho gyea muskan yr
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Oda wadia likhde o. keep it up
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Didn't know actual girls do write stories , I mean this is the first story of a girl I've read till date
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(13-09-2019, 12:38 PM)SamAce Wrote: Didn't know actual girls do write stories , I mean this is the first story of a girl I've read till date, baki story ghaint aa 
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Hlo dear.. continue kro
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(06-07-2019, 03:34 PM)Muskan Wrote: Please Padh k Reply Zaroor kar daya karooo ...
Chahe Changa Bolo Yaa Mada ...
Par Reply Zaroor Karoo ...
Taahi Main Zyada Toh Zyada Update daya karangi

So much violence imagine karan te ajeeb lag reha hai bache sahmne eh sab...... Per fir v tusi scene create acha kita hai darshak sachi sehamgaye ...
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(16-08-2019, 02:07 PM)Harman91 Wrote: Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai.. 

Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai.. 

Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge

sahi keha ...... ehna di bund ch ena dum kithey ..... ja te kisey baniye ne likhi lagg di aa avdi bhadaas kadhan de lyi .... may be ohna de naal eda hoya hovey kisey jatt ne us di gharwali naal eda kitta hovey .... jidda ki bhaiye jattiyaan de naal sex kr de ne , pr actually ch oho khud hi bhaiye likhde hundey ne story nu  .... punjabi ch bhain hunda te ehey behen likh de ne . Ajj nu Aaj likh de ne , hor v bohat galtiyaan hundiyaan ne . half hindi hi likhi jandey ne jdo ki ehna de dimag cho nikal janda ke story te punjabi ch likh rahey aa . vekheya nu dekheya likhi jaan ge .... itho pta lagg janda k story koi hindi writer likh reha aa ( writer. ki naal tatteyaan de ne ) ..... 
copy maar ke story paste kr dindey ne . te ulta kehan ge story te comment kr ke dasseyo .... o f y d story vdhiya hougi te comments mallo mallo ho janda aa .....
xossip te vdhiya stories hundiyaa c . ithey main jdo da account bnaya aa bass 5 pages hi ne is to jyada vadhey hi nhi page . bhaiye avdi imagination pesh kri jaan ge ..... punjab ch padh likh gaye punjabi sikh li te lagg ge stories ch avdi imagination likhan .......
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