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Reader v vadh jaan gey tuci je likhna hi band kr deo
Ge te fer te thread hi band hoju... samundar ik din ch thodee bhar janda... boond boond v keemti hundi
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Muskan ji your story was great.please carry on.
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Behtreen story aa jee. Tussi continue karo please
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Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai..
Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai..
Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge
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(16-08-2019, 02:07 PM)Harman91 Wrote: Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai..
Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai..
Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge Bilkul sahi keha. Ik character nu bhut jada khich dita. J baniya eda karn lag pye india tabh ho jao. Vilan ohnu dikhana si ta thoda back ground dasde oda. Koi wanted criminal aa. I guess pawan da kam done karna chida
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Aaja yr hun tae... Sarre wait krdae pae nae... 2 weak tu yadda tym ho gyea muskan yr
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Oda wadia likhde o. keep it up
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Didn't know actual girls do write stories , I mean this is the first story of a girl I've read till date
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(13-09-2019, 12:38 PM)SamAce Wrote: Didn't know actual girls do write stories , I mean this is the first story of a girl I've read till date, baki story ghaint aa
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(06-07-2019, 03:34 PM)Muskan Wrote: Please Padh k Reply Zaroor kar daya karooo ...
Chahe Changa Bolo Yaa Mada ...
Par Reply Zaroor Karoo ...
Taahi Main Zyada Toh Zyada Update daya karangi
So much violence imagine karan te ajeeb lag reha hai bache sahmne eh sab...... Per fir v tusi scene create acha kita hai darshak sachi sehamgaye ...
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(16-08-2019, 02:07 PM)Harman91 Wrote: Story ch readers da interest na hon da kaarn hai story ch incest na hona.. sex v hai par dhakka ho reha hai.. eda lgg reha jive koi c grade film chal rahi hove.. story parhdi jaldi jaldi nex page te clik karida k kado eh scene khatam hove te kujh nava wadhea scene aave.. bahut hi unrealistic jiha lagg reha hai..
Pehli unrealistic gall ehi hai jive story da villain deikhaya hai uh pawan hai.baniya community nal sbandhit par dialogues te roab eve dikha reha hai jive jatt hove .. mai ta ajjtak aeve da koi baniya character dekhya nhi jo jattan wang roab marda hove.. eh koi caste base comment nhi.. nature te natural d gall hai..
Baki writer d apni marji hai. par menu ehi lagda k story de views te comments ghat hon da ehi karn hai.. pehlan v kujh readers keh chukke ne.. umeed hai gaur karoge
sahi keha ...... ehna di bund ch ena dum kithey ..... ja te kisey baniye ne likhi lagg di aa avdi bhadaas kadhan de lyi .... may be ohna de naal eda hoya hovey kisey jatt ne us di gharwali naal eda kitta hovey .... jidda ki bhaiye jattiyaan de naal sex kr de ne , pr actually ch oho khud hi bhaiye likhde hundey ne story nu .... punjabi ch bhain hunda te ehey behen likh de ne . Ajj nu Aaj likh de ne , hor v bohat galtiyaan hundiyaan ne . half hindi hi likhi jandey ne jdo ki ehna de dimag cho nikal janda ke story te punjabi ch likh rahey aa . vekheya nu dekheya likhi jaan ge .... itho pta lagg janda k story koi hindi writer likh reha aa ( writer. ki naal tatteyaan de ne ) .....
copy maar ke story paste kr dindey ne . te ulta kehan ge story te comment kr ke dasseyo .... o f y d story vdhiya hougi te comments mallo mallo ho janda aa .....
xossip te vdhiya stories hundiyaa c . ithey main jdo da account bnaya aa bass 5 pages hi ne is to jyada vadhey hi nhi page . bhaiye avdi imagination pesh kri jaan ge ..... punjab ch padh likh gaye punjabi sikh li te lagg ge stories ch avdi imagination likhan .......
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(24-07-2019, 08:10 PM)Muskan Wrote: Pawan 10 minute Eve He Manpreet Di Fudi marda rehnda ... Manpreet Nu Eve Nangi Payi Nu chuddi Dekh k othe Khade sarra Gundaya da Lun Khada Hoo janda hai Te 2 gunde Taan Lun Bahaar Kadh k Muth maar rahe hunde ne ...
Pawan ", Chal Uth Hun "
UPDATE 5
Nangi Manpreet Nu Khade Haun Ch bahut Pareshani ho rahi sii .. Uss Di Fudi Bahut Dukh Rahi siii ... Kisse Tarah Ohh Manje Toh Uth k Khadi Hoo jandi aa ...
Pawan uss Da Hath Fadh k Usnu Usde Gharwale De sahmane Khada kar dinda hai ..
Manpreet Hun Nangi Aapna Gharwale te Aapna Bachaya Aage Khadi hundi aa ...
Pawan", Chal Aapna Gharwale De Patta Te Hath Rakh k Kodi hojaa .... "
Manpreet Eh Sun K sharam naal Pani Pani ho jandi aa ... Ohh ove he Khadi Rehndi hai ...
Pawan Nu Hun Gussa Aa janda hai Te Oh Khich K Ikk Chaped Manpreet de Chitada Te marda hai ...
Manpreet Nu Bahut Dard Hunda te Ohh Chikh Mardi hai ", Aaaaaahhhhh "
Pawan Ne Inni Zoor Naal Thapad Maaraya sii ki Manpreet De Chittada Te Pawan De Hath Da Nishaan Chap gaya siii ...
Pawan ", Sunaya Nhi Tainu main ki keh rehaaa ... Jaa Pher Laava 5-6 Thapad Horrr Taan Tu Manegi ... "
Manpreet ", Tusi Joo karna Karlo Par Ehh kaaam na karao ... Mainu Hor Sharam saar Na karoo ... Main Edda nhi kar sakdi ... Hor Jo marzi karvalo Mera kolo ... "
Pawan ", Leee Teri Taaan Changi Tarah Izzat Lahni aaa ... Main Jo keh dita Tainu Oh karna Pauga .. Nhi taan Teri Ehh Kudi Nu Nangi kardunga ... Ehh taan haje Choti aa Taan main Kuch nhi kitaa Nhi taan Ehnu Vi Nangi Kar dena Siii ... Chal Ho chup karke kodi hojaa .. Main hun dobara Nhi kehna ..."
Manpreet Kol Hun Pawan di Gall Manan toh ilawa Hor koi chara Nhii sii ...
Usnu Pata Sii ki Je Hun usne Mana Kitaa Taan Ohh Usdi Kudi Nu Nangi kar devega ...
Manpreet Moh niche karke Baldev De Patta Te Hath rakh k Kodhi ho jandi hai ...
Pawan ", Moh Utte Chuk Te Baldev Diyaan Aakhan ch Aankhan paa "
Manpreet ", Aida Naa karvaoo Malik Mera koloo ... Main Kade Nazra Nhi mila pavagi Ehna naaal ... Enna Beizzat Naa Karoo Mainu ... "
Pawan (Gusse Naal) ", Tainu Edda Nhi Samajh Lagni ... "
Pawan Bandook Chukda Hai Te Baldev Vaal Kar dinda Hai Te
Thahhhhh Karke Goli Bandook Vicho Nikaldi hai Te .....
Baldev de Bilkul Kolo Di Kaan kolo Langh Jandi hai ...
Baldev Da Kaaan Tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Karaan Lag Janda hai ...
Pawan ", Eve Naa Samjhi Pawan Da Nishana Chuk gaya ... Dekh Sunle Main Koi Khoon Kharaba Nhi karna Chahunda ... Agli Goli Tera Gharwale De matha te Vajuu ... Chup karke Gall Manle Merii ... "
Manpreet ", Nhiii Nhiii Main Sarri Gall manan Nu tayaar aa .. Kirpa Karke Ehna Nu naa Kuch karooo ... Joo bologe Ohhi karungi "
Baldev Diyaan Akhan Ch hanju aaun lag jande ne ... Oh aapne aap nu bahut majboor mehsoos kar reha sii ... Edda Usdi Gharwali Nu Nangi Pawan De Agge Majboor Hundi nu dekh k ..
Manpreet Aapna Gharwale Baldev De patta te Hath Rakh k Uss diyan Akhaan Ch Akhaan Paa k Kodi Hooo Gayiii ...
Uss Nu Bahut Sharam Mehsoos Ho Rahi siii par Ohh kuch nhi kar sakdi sii ....
Pawan ", Haaa Viii Karim Recording Kivaa Chal Rahii aaa .."
Karim ", Haan Malik Vadia Chal Rahi hai .. "
Pawan ", Hun Ehh Wala Scene Changi Tara Record Kari Samajh gaya naa "
Karim", g Malik Changi Tarah karunga ""
Pawan Manpreet Nu ", Chal Hun Jo Jo Main Kehna Tu Mera Naal Naal bol ... Saaf Saaf Boli Samajh Gayi Naa ... "
Manpreet ", G Malik Saaf Saaf Bolu "
Pawan ", Bol Main Pawan Di Rakhel aa , Randi aa Pawan di .. Te Mainu Pawan De Lun Naaal Pyaar Hai ... LUN Di Bhukhi Janani aa Main .. Pawan Jithe Kahuga Main Othe Nangi Hoke Laata Chodiyan karke Ja Kodi hoke Chudwaun layi tayaar hoju ... Tapp Tapp k Pawan Da Lun Te Aapni Fudi Padwaun "
Manpreet te Baldev Ehh Sun k Pareshan ho jande ne .. Manpreet andaro Poori tarah toot chuki sii .. Pawan Koi kasar nhi chadh reha siii uss di izzat Lahaun ch ...
Baldev Taan Uss Manhoos Ghadi nu Koos reha sii jis vele Uss ne Pawan kolo paise Fade ... Na Oh Paise Fadhda te Naa uss nu ehh din dekhna painda ...
Aaj Usdi Gharwali Enna Begane Marda Agge Madarjaat Nangi khadi siii ... Bilkul Majboor Hoke Aapni Izzat Luta rahi siii ...
NANGI MANPREET
Pawan ", Jaldi kar .. Naale Aakhan ch aakhan paa k boli te Chehra te Vaddi Saari Smile naaal ... Karim Side Angle Toh Record Kari Saara Kuch Baldev Ye Manpreet Doha Da Muh aauna Chahida "
Manpreet Badi Mushkil naal Smile karde Hoye boldi hai ",Main Pawan Di Rakhel aa , Randi aa Pawan di ...Te Mainu Pawan De Lun Naaal Pyaar Hai ... Main LUN Di Bhukhi Jananai aa ... Pawan Jithe Kahuga Main Othe Nangi Hoke Laata Chodiyan karke Ja Kodi hoke Chudwaun layi tayaar hoju ...
Tapp Tapp k Pawan Da Lun Te Aapni Fudi Padwaun ... "
Pawan ", Bas Eve He Meri Gall Manaya kar tainu Maraan Di lorh he nhi paugi ... "
Pawan Hun Manpreet de Piche Aa Janda ...
Pawan ", Karimmm Jaaa Gusalkhane cho Teel di shishi leke aaa "
Manpreet te Baldev Sochan lag jandd ne ki hun Pawan ne Tel Kis vaste mangvaya hai ...
Pawan pher bolda hai ", Aaaj taaan Ehdi Bund Nu Fadh k rakh dayange hahaha "
Manpreet ehh Sun k ikko dum Khadi ho jandi hai te boldi hai ", Nhiii Nhiiii Malik Edda Na Kariyooo ... (Manpreet hun Pawan de paira te Gir Jandi hai ... Baldev de Munde Nu Aapni Maa Nu Iss tarah Pawan de paira Ch Giraya Dekh k Bahut Gussa aaunda ... Ohh Maan ch Pawan Nu galla Kadh reha siii ... Uss de Moh Ch Usdi Maa Manpreet Di Kachchi siii Jis karke Oh kuch bol nhi sakda sii ... ) ... Piche Naa Karooo .... Aage Kar Lavooo ... Thoda Bahut Vadda Hai ... Bahut Dukh Hovega ... Main Hath Jodhi aa "
Pawan ", Saliye Tu Pawan Nu Mana Kar Rahi Hai ... Je main Kehaa Teri Bund Marni hai taan main Teri Bund Marni hai .. Chal Hojaa Kodi .. Tu Enna Shukaar Mana Ki Suka Lun Nhi Paa Reha Tel Laake Paa Rehaa ... Nhi Taan Teri Changi Phatt Jani sii "
Manpreet Haje Vii Pawan De Pair Fadi Jhuki hoyi Siii ...
Pawan Nu Gussa Aa janda hai Te Ohh Othe Payi Aapni Pant Cho Belt Kadh Lainda hai ...
Manpreet Nu fadh k khadi karda hai Te Uss nu dobara jhuka k Uss de Chittda Te Khich Khich k Belt maraan lag janda hai ...
Manpreet Nu Bahut Dukh ho reha siii Par Pawan Rukaan Da naam nhi le reha siii .... Manpreet De Chittad Chill Rahe Sii hun ...
Baldev ", Naaa Marooo Manpreet nu ... Bahut Dard Hooo rehaaa uss nu .... Bainti karda main "
Pawan ", Hun Nhi rukda Main Teri Gharwali Ne Mainu Mana Karke Bahut Vaddi galti kar diti ... Hun taan Teri Gharwali De Chitada Te Inni Belt Marunga ki aaj Toh Baad Zindagi ch Je Kade Baithugi taaan Pawan Di Yaad Aaugiii ... Yaad Aauga Aaj Di Raat ki Kivaa Pawan Ne Chittad Sujaa Dite siii .. "
Manpreet Da Bura haal hoya payaa siii
Uss toh hor Bardasht na hoyaa...
Manpreeet ", Maaaf Kar Dohh Malik ... Thoda Joo maan kare ohh karloo ... Hun main Kuch nhi Kahungiii ... Maaf kardoh mainu "
Pawan ", Hun Kehdi Maafi Maang Rahi aa ... Tainu Saali Bahenchodi Meri Gall Ik Vaar Ch Samajh Nhi lagdi ... Aaaj Taaan Tera Chittad Fadh dena Ne amin ..."
Manpreet Raundi Hoyi ", Maaaf Kardohhh .... Hun Tusi Jooo Kahoge Karungi ... thodi Saari Gall Manugi ... Rehaaan Davooo Pleasee .... "
Pawan da Gussa hun Shant ho janda ...
Pawan", Dass Ki Karaa Hun Main "
Manpreet ", Mera Piche Karloo "
Baldev De Munda Nu Aapni Maa Di Ehh Halat Dekh K Bahut Zyada Gussa aa rehaa sii ... Ohh Aapni Hath Kursi Toh Chudaun Di bahut koshish karda Par Rassi changi tarah Banni Hoyii siii ..
Punjabi me kahani hai to Samjhi nahi ...agar yahi hindi.....yaaaa angreji me hota to maja bhi aata. . Lekin foto bade hi sexy hai... .
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(24-07-2019, 09:17 PM)Muskan Wrote: Thank Youuu Sooo Much g For Commenting ...
Haan g Jaldi toh Jaldi Koshish Karungi ..
Hindi.....yaaa angreji me de n to aaur logo ko samajh bhi aye. . Aaaur maje bhi..
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(30-07-2019, 07:55 PM)Muskan Wrote: Manpreet Hun Ove He kodhi hoke Aapna Gharwale Diyaan Akhaan Ch Akhaan Paa laindi aa ...
Pawan ", Laya Viii Karim Tel Di Shishi... Ehdi Bund Padaan Da Time aa gaya ... Tuu Fikaar Na Kar Manpreet Main Taan Choti Choti Kudiyaan Di Choti Jehi Bund Padi Aa Tu taan Fer Vi Eddi Vadi Janani aa "
Update 6
Pawan Hun Aapni Bich Wali Ungli Nu Tel Di Sheeshi vich Daboo Dinda hai ...
Manpreet Dard Naal Chikh mardi hai ", Aaaaahhhhhhh Maaar Gayii Kadh Doh Ehnuuu
Pawan Hun Ungal Nu Andar Bahaar Karaan Lag Janda hai ... Pher Oh hun 2 Ungala Tel Di Shishi Ch Duboo Dinda hai ... Te Iko Chatke ch Manpreet Di Bund Vich Vadh Dinda hai ....
Manpreet ", Aaaahhhhh Maaaar Gayiiii Holiiiiiii Karoooo ... Aaaahhhhh Kaddhhh Dohhh Bhaaarrr ... Bhaut Dukh Rahi aaaa .... Kadhhhh Dohh Bahaar ...
Manpreet Jivaa Pawan Kehnda hai ovee kardi hai Te Ohh Pawan Vaal moh kar laindi hai te Tel Le k Pawan De Loda Te malaan Lag Jandi aa ...
Pawan ", Aaahhh haaaaa Eve He Malish Kar Mera Lun Diii "
Pawan Nu Shrarat Sujhdi hai Te Ohh Aapna Hath Agge Karke Manpreet de
Momma Di Dodi Nu Zoor Di Fadh k Masalan Te Khichan Lag Janda hai ..
Manpreet Nu Iss naal Dard Taan Hunda Hai Par Oh Aurat Hoon Karke Garam Vi Hoo jandi hai ..
Manpreet Dobara Toh Kodi Hoo Jandi aaa Te Baldev Diyaan Akhan Vaal dekhan lag jandi aa ...
Manpreet Eve Baldev Vaal Dekh Rahi sii ...
Pawan ", Leee Viii Hojaaa Tayaaar ... Usman Salman Ehnu Aaa k Fadooo Nhii taaan Ehne Agge Nu Bhajna ... Main Ikko Vaar Ch Sarra Vadh dena Iss di Bund ch ... Holi Holi Gall Nhi banani "
Usman Te Salman Aaunde ne Te Manpreet Nu Lakk kolo Dabh k fad lende ne Te Manpreet De Hatha Te Hath Rakh Lende Ne ...
Pawan Manpreet De Chitdan Nu Kholda hai Te Lun Nuu Mori De Muhre Kar dinda hai ...
Pawan Hun Lun Piche Nu karke Ikk Jordi Ghasssa Marda hai Te Lun Adha Toh Vi Jyada Manpreet Di Bund ch Vadh janda hai ... Manpreet Nu Bahut Zyda Dard Hunda Te Ohh Chikkan Maraan lag jandi aa ...
Manpreet Aapna Aap Nu chutaun di koshish kardi hai Par Usman Te Salman ne Usne Bahut kass k fadhaya
Pawan Hun Lun thoda jehaa Bahaar Kadhda Hai ... Manpreet nu Rahat mildi aa Thodi jehi .. Par agle He pal Pawan Ikk Hor Jordi Ghaassa Marda Hai Te Lun Manpreet Di Bund Ch jadh taak andar Vadh janda hai ...
Manpreet Nuu Chakaar Aaun Lag Jande ne .. Uss Nu Din Ch Taare Dikhan lag jande ne ... Manpreet Nu Eve Lag Rehhaa Siii Jivaa Kisse Ne Usdi Bund Ch Chakkuu Vadh k Bund Chirrr Diti hoveee ... Pawan Da Lun Poora Da Poora Manpreet Di Bund Ch Vadh Chukaa siii ...
Manpreet Di Bund Da haal Vi ehho jehaa siii ... Manpreet Di Bund ne Pawan de Lunn Nu Poori Tarah Fassa Rakhaya Siii ... Pawan Vaste Taan Lun Nu Agge Piche Karna Bahut Aukha siii ...
Pawan ", Hayeee Oyee Teri Bund ne Taan Bahenchod Meriyan vi Chikkan Kadha Ditiyan ne ... Saali Kinni Tight aa
... Eve Lag rehaa Mera Lun Nu Kisse Ne Muthi Ch Fadaya Hoyaaa ... Teri Bund Taaan Kisse 13 Saala Di Kudi Vargi Tight aaa"
Manpreeet Uchi uchi Raun Lag jandi aaa te Chikkan Maraan Lag jandi aaa ...
Chikkan Inniyan Jabardast Siii ki Naale Ghara ch Vi Sun Rahiyan Sii ...
Manpreet ", Hayeeeee Kadhh Davooo Hun Taaaan ... Fadhh Ditii Merii ... Dard Bardasht nhiii hoo rehaaa ... basss Karoooo Hunnnn .... Maaa Maaar Gayiii MAaiinn .... Fattt Gayiiii Meriiii .... Hayeee Rahem Karooo Mera Utte "
Pawan Hun Zoor Zoor di Poori raftaar naaal Ghasse Maraan Lag janda hai ...
Oh lun Pooora bahaar kadhda te Fer Poora Andar paa rehaa siii ... Naal Naal Ohh Manpreet De Chidataan Te Thappad Maar Rehaa sii ...
Pawan ", Chakkk Chakkk Saliyeee Teri Bund Da Bura haaal kar dena aaaj main "
Saare Kamre Vich Chap Chap Di Aawaz Te Manpreet De Chittada Te Painde Thapada Dii aa rahi siii ...
Pawan Inni Zoor Zooor Dii Ghasse Maar Rehaa sii ki Manpreet Da Poora Sareer Hill janda siii ... Usnu Pawan Da Lund Aapne Didh te Vajhda Mehssos Hoo rehaa siii ...
Usnu Aapni Bund Vich Bahut Zyda Jalaan hoo rahi siii ...
10 minute Taak Pawan Manpreet Di Bund Marda Rehaaa ...
Pawan ", Hayeee Swaadd Heeee Aa gayaaa Aaaj taaan ... Mera Hun Chutan Wala Oyeeeee "
Pawan Hun Ek Zooor Naaa Ghassa Marda hai Te Lun Poora Andar karke aapna Sarra Maal Manpreet Di Bund Ch Shuta Dinda hai ... Te saho saah Hoyaa Manje te Baith janda hai ...
Manpreet Ove He Kodi Hoyi khadi sii ... Uss diyaan akhan haje Vi aapne gharwale Diyaan Akhan ch siii kyonki uss nu pata sii Je Usne Ankhan idhar udhar kitiyan taan Pawan Ne Pher Usde Gharwale Nu ja bachaya nu kutna ...
Usdiyaan Akhaan Laal ho gayian siii ...
Manpreet De Chittada Vicho Pawan Da Maal Bahaar Nikaal Reha Sii Te Manpreet Diyaan Latta Toh Vehnda hoya Niche Gir Reha sii ...
Manpreet De Chittad Lal ho gaye Siii Te Manpreet di Bund Kinaraya Toh Chill gayi sii ...
Khoon Vi nikaal Rehaa sii Manpreet di bund cho ... Manpreet nu Haje Vi bahut dard ho rehaa sii .. Usnu Evvee Lag rehaa sii Jivaa Lun Hajee Vi andar hee aaa ...
Pawan ", Bahen Di Lun Aaaj Taan Swaad He aa gayaaa .. Bade Time Baad Inni Tight Te Garam Bund Maari aa .. Bahenchod Tera Vade Vade Chittada Te Thapad Maar k vii bahut swadd Aayaa "
Pawan Khada Hoo janda Hai Te Baldev Di Kudi Kol k Jaaa k Usde Muh Cho aapna Ganda Kachcha Kadhda hoya bolda hai ", Leee Layaa Mera Lunn Da Swaad ... Tu Vii Ikk Din Aapni Maa Vang Siraaa Di Rann Banegii ... Aapni Maa Vang Tuu Vi Fudi Marvayi Mera kolo Samjhgi naaa ... Tainu Swaadd Laya dungaa ... Bol Marvayengi Nangi Hoke Fudi Pawan kolooo "
Usdi kudi kuch nhi boldi ...
Pawan ", Bolpe Nhii taaan Teri Maa Di khal Udheed Dunga main "
Baldev Di Kudi ", Haaan g Marvaungi "
Pawan ", Bol Meri Fudi Di Seal Pawan uncle Toduga Te Bund vi Pawan Uncle Faduga "
Baldev di kudi ", Meri Fudi Di Seal Pawan Uncle Todange Te Bund Vi Pawan Uncle Fadange "
Pawan ", Hahahahah Dekhaya Baldev Teri kudi Vi Mera toh Fudi te Bund marvana chahundi hai .. Ehh Vii Aapni Maa Vang Ek Din Mera Thale Nangi Pai hougi .. Dekhi Meri Gall Yaad Rakhi ... hahahahaha"
Pawan hun Aapna Kachcha Paa Lainda Hai Joo ki Baldev Di kudi De thook naal poori tarah Gilaaa siii ... Pher Ohh Aapna Baki Bache Kapde Vi chuk k paa lainda hai ...
Pawan Nangi Kodi Hoyi Manpreet kol Aaunda Hai Te Usde Mommaya nu patan Lag janda hai ..
Manpreet ", Veer g Hun Taaan Chadh Davooo Sanu ... Thone Joo Karna Sii Kar layaa .. Hun Taaan Baksh Davooo "
Pawan ", Hayyee Rabba Tera Veer g Kehaan Naal Taaan Mera Lun Ch tene Dobara Jaaan Pati ... Par Mera Taaan Hun Aaj Vaste Maan bhar gaya ...Chal Hojaa Hun Khadii "
Please Comment Zaroor Kariyo And Jee Koi Suggestion Hai Taan Message Karke Zaroor Dassooo ....
Ohhhhh.....baaap re.....koi kaise apne gaaand me lund le sakti hai. ....Maine to aajtak nahi liya....waise......
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