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Misc. Erotica Ab bassss......the hate story......
Bahut badhiya update! Extremely exciting and erotic update
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vah!vah! itna hot aur itna kamuk update! bahut khoob bhai
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You are writing a very very hot and exciting story,
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superb! Extremely exciting update
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(07-08-2019, 02:03 AM)Theflash Wrote: Bhai ek baad ek har update dhasu
Record ban gaya
Best of the best

Shukriya yaara....ye to bus aaplog ke pyaar ka natiza hai ....age bhi saath bne rahiyega....
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(07-08-2019, 04:15 AM)Daxon Wrote: Another land blasting update! Extremely exciting story it is!

Shukriya bhai....khusi h mujhe ki meri koshis aaplog ko pasand aarhi h...
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(07-08-2019, 07:21 AM)Raj aryan3311 Wrote: Great yaaraa.......
Xossipy... Guru ban गए आप तो....
एक के बाद update
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Great going....
Best story....
Best character..
Best थीम.....
छा गए गुरु...
बेस्ट ऑफ लक.

.ye to aapka nazariya h yaara....saath bne rahiyega or bhi maza aayega aapko....
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(07-08-2019, 08:39 AM)Ella Wrote: Ekdom lajawab aur faadu update

Shukriya yaara...aage bhi saath bne rahiyega.
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(07-08-2019, 08:45 AM)Bambi Wrote: Bahut badhiya update! Extremely exciting and erotic update

Shukriya yaara....aage bhi saath bne rahiyega....
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(07-08-2019, 11:06 AM)Suryahot123 Wrote: vah!vah! itna hot aur itna kamuk update! bahut khoob bhai

Shukriya yaara...aage bhi aise update milte rahenge....
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(07-08-2019, 11:49 AM)TedBundy Wrote: You are writing a very very hot and exciting story,

Shukriya yaara...aage bhibsaath bne rahiyega....
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(07-08-2019, 12:31 PM)DONNY Wrote: superb! Extremely exciting update

Shukriya yaara....aage bhi saath bne rahiyega....
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KYA MAJA AATA H AISI KAHANIYO ME JISME EK BAHUT KHUBSURAT AURAT KO GANDE JAHIL MAZDUR YA BADSURAT GANDI AADATO WALE AADMI SE CHUDWANE ME, YAHI AURAT KISI SUNDAR SAF STHRE EDUCATED SMART ADMI SE BHI TO CHUDWAI JA SAKTI H. MAGAR LIKHANE WALE SICK MENTALITY WALE H . KYO KOI GANDI AURAT AUR GANTLEMAN ADMI KI KAHANI NHI LIKHTA, KHOKI YE TUMHARI MAN EGO KE KHILAF H .
ACHHA LIKHO TO ACHHA SEX BANE ,
GANDGI TUM LIKH SAKTE HO MAGAR KOI SUNDAR AURAT HAKIKAT ME ASIA KABHI NHI KAREGI CHAHE JITNA JORDAR LAND HO. TUM APNI BHADAS NIKALATE HO KYOKI KISI SUNDAR AURAT NE KABHI TAPPAD MARA HOGA YA REJECT KIYA HOGA.
PADANE WALE BHI AISE HOTE H JO BADALA LENA CHAHE H APNI NAKAMYABI KA JO EK SUNDAR AURAT SE UNKO MILI HOGI.
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY RUBBISH.
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(07-08-2019, 01:54 PM)mastmast123 Wrote: KYA MAJA AATA H AISI KAHANIYO ME JISME EK BAHUT KHUBSURAT AURAT KO GANDE JAHIL MAZDUR YA BADSURAT GANDI AADATO WALE AADMI SE CHUDWANE ME,  YAHI AURAT KISI SUNDAR SAF STHRE EDUCATED SMART ADMI SE BHI TO CHUDWAI JA SAKTI H. MAGAR LIKHANE WALE SICK MENTALITY WALE H . KYO KOI GANDI AURAT AUR GANTLEMAN ADMI KI KAHANI NHI LIKHTA, KHOKI YE TUMHARI MAN EGO KE KHILAF H .
ACHHA LIKHO TO ACHHA SEX BANE ,
GANDGI TUM LIKH SAKTE HO MAGAR  KOI SUNDAR AURAT HAKIKAT ME ASIA KABHI NHI KAREGI CHAHE JITNA JORDAR LAND HO. TUM APNI BHADAS NIKALATE HO KYOKI KISI SUNDAR AURAT NE KABHI TAPPAD MARA HOGA YA REJECT KIYA HOGA.
PADANE WALE BHI AISE HOTE H JO BADALA LENA CHAHE H APNI NAKAMYABI KA JO EK SUNDAR AURAT SE UNKO MILI HOGI.
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY RUBBISH.

Everyone  cherishes fantasy.And every adult story is written on the basis of fantasy.But in real life no one wants it to be happened.It is seems to me that you are very fair person.So it is not fair for a person like you to visit this world of fantasy.
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Superb! keep writing like brother.
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Supperb keep writing
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(07-08-2019, 01:54 PM)mastmast123 Wrote: KYA MAJA AATA H AISI KAHANIYO ME JISME EK BAHUT KHUBSURAT AURAT KO GANDE JAHIL MAZDUR YA BADSURAT GANDI AADATO WALE AADMI SE CHUDWANE ME,  YAHI AURAT KISI SUNDAR SAF STHRE EDUCATED SMART ADMI SE BHI TO CHUDWAI JA SAKTI H. MAGAR LIKHANE WALE SICK MENTALITY WALE H . KYO KOI GANDI AURAT AUR GANTLEMAN ADMI KI KAHANI NHI LIKHTA, KHOKI YE TUMHARI MAN EGO KE KHILAF H .
ACHHA LIKHO TO ACHHA SEX BANE ,
GANDGI TUM LIKH SAKTE HO MAGAR  KOI SUNDAR AURAT HAKIKAT ME ASIA KABHI NHI KAREGI CHAHE JITNA JORDAR LAND HO. TUM APNI BHADAS NIKALATE HO KYOKI KISI SUNDAR AURAT NE KABHI TAPPAD MARA HOGA YA REJECT KIYA HOGA.
PADANE WALE BHI AISE HOTE H JO BADALA LENA CHAHE H APNI NAKAMYABI KA JO EK SUNDAR AURAT SE UNKO MILI HOGI.
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY RUBBISH.

भाईसाहब।।
आपको कहानी की थीम
पसंद नही आ रही है ।
तो आप मत read कीजिये ।।
आप बुराई तो मत कीजिये ।
इतनी मुश्किल से अनमोल भाई
ने इतनी शानदार स्टोरी का लेखन किया है।
साइट में और स्टोरी पढ़िए but गलत मत 
बताइये ।।।।
धन्यबाद...श्रीमान जी..
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(07-08-2019, 01:54 PM)mastmast123 Wrote: KYA MAJA AATA H AISI KAHANIYO ME JISME EK BAHUT KHUBSURAT AURAT KO GANDE JAHIL MAZDUR YA BADSURAT GANDI AADATO WALE AADMI SE CHUDWANE ME,  YAHI AURAT KISI SUNDAR SAF STHRE EDUCATED SMART ADMI SE BHI TO CHUDWAI JA SAKTI H. MAGAR LIKHANE WALE SICK MENTALITY WALE H . KYO KOI GANDI AURAT AUR GANTLEMAN ADMI KI KAHANI NHI LIKHTA, KHOKI YE TUMHARI MAN EGO KE KHILAF H .
ACHHA LIKHO TO ACHHA SEX BANE ,
GANDGI TUM LIKH SAKTE HO MAGAR  KOI SUNDAR AURAT HAKIKAT ME ASIA KABHI NHI KAREGI CHAHE JITNA JORDAR LAND HO. TUM APNI BHADAS NIKALATE HO KYOKI KISI SUNDAR AURAT NE KABHI TAPPAD MARA HOGA YA REJECT KIYA HOGA.
PADANE WALE BHI AISE HOTE H JO BADALA LENA CHAHE H APNI NAKAMYABI KA JO EK SUNDAR AURAT SE UNKO MILI HOGI.
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY RUBBISH.


Shukraiya yaara...aapne apna kimti waqt nikala or mere story ko padha ...bt saayad aapne mere story ko thk se padha ni....mene khi pe bhi aisa to ni likha ki female character ko ganda low class aadmi thok rha hai..???  Qa mene aisa word use ki  rishika ko slum area ke mazdoor ya driver watchman naukar chod rhe hai ??? Ha mene interfaith jrur likhi hai....ab aapko ye theme ni pasand to mt padhiye.....baaki logo ko paaaand aari hai to mai continue kar rha hu......
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(07-08-2019, 02:19 PM)Rattler Wrote: Everyone  cherishes fantasy.And every adult story is written on the basis of fantasy.But in real life no one wants it to be happened.It is seems to me that you are very fair person.So it is not fair for a person like you to visit this world of fantasy.

Shukriya yaara...support k liye...inka kaam yi hai....ye kuch khud ni likh sakte bas dusro ki ko demotivate kar sakte hai....saath bane rahiyega.....
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(07-08-2019, 02:21 PM)Rattler Wrote: Superb! keep writing like brother.

Shukriya yaare...aage bhi saaath bne rahiyega....
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