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Adultery Meri Society
#41
Kavi nu gasti na bna dena .. kavi di spot naal tusi khud hora naal kro
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#42
nice update dear.....very hot & erotic.....punjabi ch story te enni wadiya writing......bahut sohne......
u got skills mate how make hot scene even more hotter.....
hopefully getting ur update on regular basis....
u r awesome.....
keep going
keep writing
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#43
sirra
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#44
(01-08-2019, 01:49 PM)Jambojatt Wrote: NYC...... Keep it up

Thanks brother...
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#45
(01-08-2019, 06:15 PM)Jattpunjai Wrote: Nice and hot update but very small update, please try to be regular and long update at least lun by pura najara aye. Thanks

Thnaks Veer. Main thodda busy chal reha si, es karke bdda update nahi likh sakeya. Agge jaroor try karunga.....
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#46
(02-08-2019, 09:34 AM)Sunny12 Wrote: Yaar kavi nu gasti na bna dena loka naal... kvi de rahi tusi hora nu aapne val kro

Try tan kuchh iddan hi rahegi, baaki dekhde aan ki story ki rukh lendi hai. Menu aap ni pta agge ki hovega....
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#47
(02-08-2019, 11:01 AM)doonknightz Wrote: nice update dear.....very hot & erotic.....punjabi ch story te enni wadiya writing......bahut sohne......
u got skills mate how make hot scene even more hotter.....
hopefully getting ur update on regular basis....
u r awesome.....
keep going
keep writing

Thanks a lot Veer for the appreciation. Your detailed feedback and comments are really a booster for me to try more. I will try to be regular and entertain my readers.

Thanks a lot.....
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#48
(02-08-2019, 02:16 PM)jattwaad22 Wrote: sirra

Thanks Veer.....
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#49
    Ajj main office ton chetti ghare aa geya si, te jadon main gaddi park karke apane flat ch pahuncheya, main dekheya ki flat locked si. Menu idea hoya ki shayad Kavi sair karan gayi hovegi, so main lock khol ke andar aa geya, te samaan waigarah rakh ke apani balcony ch aa geya. Itthon park saamanne hi dikhda si. Main jadon thalle nazar maari, te dekheya ki kaafi saariyan jananiyan 2-2 ya 3-3 de group ch gappan ladda rehiya si, te bachhe apas ch khed rahe si. Khoob shor sharaba chal reha si. 
     Main idhar udhar nazar maari te dekheya ki Kavi ik kuddi naal baithi gappan ldda rehi si. Itthon dekhann ton oh kuddi kaafi sohni te sunakhi lag rehi si. Reet aunty menu utthey kitte dikhi nahi. Kavi us kudi naal kaafi goodiyan gappan ldda rehi si, main sochann laggeya ki eh isanu 1-2 din pehlan hi mili honni, fer  inni dosti kiddan ho geyi. Fer meri nazar thodi idhar udhar hoyi tan mein note keeta, ki 2 k munde uhnan donan wal ghoor ke dekh rahe si. Oh dekh menu jhatka jeha laggeya te mere dil di dhadkan ikk damm badd jehe gayi. Eh donan mundeyan naal mera takra ho chukeya si ik baar pehlan bhi.
Jaddon main society ch nma nma aaya hi si, udon ik din mere falt ch paanni nahi aa reha si, te main upar tanki check karan geya si. Uppar jaddon main apanni flat di pipe labb reha si, uddon menu ik side kuchh khaddka jeha sunneya, jaddon main us side nu geya tan dekheya ki 2 munde, jehde ki 18-19 saal di umar de lag rahe si, par sehat ch kaafi tagadde jehe si,utthe ik kuddi naal khadde si. Ek munde de hath ch phone si, te oh us kuddi wal nu karke iddan khadda si, jiddan ki usada video bna reha hove. Te duja munda usade naal waisey hi khadda si. Kuddi bhi uhnan de hann di hi lag rehi si, jisane poora makeup waigarah keeta hoya si, te bdda kainth Top te jeans paayi hoyi si. Dekhann ch koi model type hi lag rehi si. 
    Iston pehlan ki menu kuchh samajh aandi ki utthey kee ho reha hai, uhanan cho ek munde ne menu dekh leya te ik damm boleya "Oyye bhennchod, kee dekhi jaana" te oh mere wal nu ghoorda hoya apanne dolleyan te hath ferda aaya. Oh kudi te dooja munda bhi mere wall nu dekhann lagg paye. Meri tan uddon bund hi fatt gayi si, main ik damm pichhe nu honn lgga ki uhne menu collor te fadd leya. Main baddi mushkil naal boleya "Baai galti ho gayi, main tan hor kamm naal aaya si".
Fer usane menu jor naal dhakka ditta te gussey ch aakheya "Bhajj ja itthon te wapis na dikkhin", te main utthon bhajj ke thalle aa geya. Menu baad ch bahut sharam jehi aayi, ki main apanne to 8-10 saal chhotte munde ton darr ke aa geya, oh bhi ik kuddi de samanne.  Khair shukar hai ki oh kuddi menu kadde nahi dikhi, par eh munde kadde kaddar menu society ch dikh jaande si, te jaddon bhi dikhade si, menu ghoorde si, te pta ni kyun meriyan najran apanne aap thalle ho jaandiyan si, te main tej tej utthon nikall jaanda si.


Main apanne khyalan ch uddon bahar aaya jaddon menu darwaja khulann da ehsaas hoya. Main ek damm thalle dekheya, oh dono munde, Kavi te usade naal baithi kuddi bhi utthon ja chukke si. Kavi ne andar aaundeyan menu dekheya te kehandi, "Hanji, tussi kaddon aaye?".

"Bas thodi deir hi hoyi" main usda jawaaab ditta.

"Thalle park ch aa jaande, Sair sapatta ho janna si, te main thuhanu apanni ik saheli naal bhi milla denna si". Oh kehandi.

Mera mood kuchh innan theek nahi si, par fer bhi main puchheya "Kehaddi saheli".

"Oh yaar mere college di ik saheli bhi itthey hi rehandi hai" ajj hi milli menu te asssin bahut gappan shappan maariyan.

"Achha, chalo wadiya", main usnu jawaab ditta.

"Kee gall, thuhadda mood kuchh theek nahi lag reha, ki gall? Office ch kaam jyada si ki" usane mere koll aake menu jaffi paandi ne puchheya.

Yaar kinni wadiya te care karan waali janani menu milli si, par menu pta ni kyun ajeeb jeha feel ho reha si. Main usanu ghutt ke jaffi paa leyi te keha "Nahi, iddan da tan kuchh nahi" te apanna mood theek karan di koshish keete.

Khair fer usane menu ik kiss keeti te ghar de kamman kaaran ch lagg geyi.
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#50
Dear readers: I am trying to take the story to a different direction and hence added few lines of the plot. Please let me know if it interests anyone, only then I will continue it Else will close the thread.....
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#51
Yes yes but be regular
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#52
Nice update !! Veer as a mentioned earlier you post very small update this way readers loose interest plz be regular, you are best writer ?
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#53
Bhut vdia bro siraa story a i come here only to read ur story.....pls continue..
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#54
bahut sohne......tussi bahut sahi likh rahe ho......main v hunn INCEST story pad ke aqq gya.....(i love incest story but hor v genre ne, variety jaruri hai)
.....thanks to u .....tussi kujh new flavour le ke aaye ho.....bahut maza aa riha pad ke jiwe jiwe story agge wad rahi hai......
v r in support with u always.....edda hi likhde raho......jado story lambi ho jandi hai sab nu apne wall khichan lag jandi hai....kujh redaers taah bichare ehi sochde ne ke....is waar story continue rahegi...par jad writer da pta nhi ki aage update aaunge ya nhi ....taah reader da interest ghat ho janda hai story wal
......
so its a humble request to u ....plz continue & keep updating ur story....ja eh kah lo saddi sab di sanjhi story.....
comment aape wad jange.....m sure of that.....
keep writing bai
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#55
gud bri
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#56
Update bro nice story...
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#57
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#58
(05-08-2019, 09:55 AM)Neo_ Wrote: Dear readers: I am trying to take the story to a different direction and hence added few lines of the plot. Please let me know if it interests anyone, only then I will continue it Else will close the thread.....

Your writing is just too good, Neo_ bhai! The direction you are planning to take looks very exciting, considering the thick chest muscles of those two gunda boys. Poor Kavi is going to get ravaged savagely, while helpless hubby can only look on.

We know it takes time to think & write down. So don't worry even if updates are small. But keep developing the story slowly with lot of description & dialogues. We are with you!! 
        pylode
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#59
(25-09-2019, 02:52 AM)pylode Wrote: Your writing is just too good, Neo_ bhai! The direction you are planning to take looks very exciting, considering the thick chest muscles of those two gunda boys. Poor Kavi is going to get ravaged savagely, while helpless hubby can only look on.

We know it takes time to think & write down. So don't worry even if updates are small. But keep developing the story slowly with lot of description & dialogues. We are with you!! 
        pylode

Thanks a lot brother for the appreciation

I am really busy these days and not getting enough time...

But will try if I gets time....
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#60
(06-08-2019, 07:25 AM)Sarpanch Wrote: Bhut vdia bro siraa story a i come here only to read ur story.....pls continue..
Thanks a lot brother for such nice words....
Will try. Really busy these days
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