A wedding ceremony in village

[Logan555]

Brother ,,your story is awesome ...I know how much a positive comment leave impact on writer ...but here something wrong with xossipy and it's writer ..most of them started a thread but they not able to give regular update ....so damm ....
People lost their attention and interest...it's also affect your story ...so sorry for that ..... otherwise your story is awesome...
Love30000???

First thanks for ur appreciation.....
But jub writers update dena band kar deta hai to stories me comments baad aa jati hai bhar bhar kar writer ko kosa jata hai galiya di jati hai ki jab writer aise hi hote hai story chalu karke bhag jate hai. Par jab chalti story me readers ke comment karne ki baat kari jati hai to reader bagle jhakne lagte hai jaise unki kidney maang li ho......
Readers ko to writer ke updates se story me interest  ata hai par writer ka interest kaise rahe story me ye khayal rakhna kiska kaam hai bhai writer ko bhi story me tab hi interest ata hai jab log use feedback dete hai warna wo bhi lost their attention lost tgeir intereat kehkar chala jaega story chhodkar phir dete reahkar readers use gaali kehre rahe story chalu karke bhag jate hai.
Jab garima ka update me 20 din lage to logo ne khoob comment kare writer bhaag gaya lagta hai story band ho gai jab shabana ke update ek hafte me de diya to koi reply nahk mila so moral of the story is this ki mahine me ek update do aur readers ke comment ka maza lo.
Its the funda to write the story.

[Logan555]

Love the story

Thanks bro

[Logan555]

wow!wow!wow! I have become totally speechless. What an extremely hot and erotic story! I am waiting very eagerly for the next update brother.

Yaar Mar dala.....no word to. Say this update.... Mind blowing and super rock star.... Please update more

Thannks bro thank u so much ki tumne update padne ke do line likhi to achha laga. Warna jadatar to story padkar aise nikal jate hai jaise writer unka koi udhar lekar baitha hai jo update ko jald se jald tayar karke post karna uski moral duty hai. Ab next update tab hi banauga jab 20-25 logo ke comment ho warna kya fayda apna time waste karke. Jab logo ko comment karne layak story nahi lag rahi. Ek doosri chalu kar dunga jisme ek rickshewala ho aur wo ek hi aurat ko tarah tarah se khud aur apne dosto se chodta chudwata rahe aisi story par comment jada aate hai aur aisi story likhna bhi asaan hai. Agar ye story logo ko samajh nahi aaegi to band karke ek simple normal story hi likhunga typical xossip marka.

[Vickydon]

Awesome update dost

But please Neha ka update karo Na bdsm Wala my favourite character is neha dari hui neha

[sunravi5853]

Bahuth maza agaya bro. Next update veenitha ke Liya waiting

[Pradeep]

Logan555 bhai zabardast update
I have no words to appreciate you simply super and thanks for update

[KareenaKapoorLover]

Very freaking Hot Update Logan bhai...
Maza he aa gaya... Ab aage ki Story se aur jyda expectations bad gye hai...
Waiting for the next one...

[asha10783]

Thanks bro

????? Bro nahi sis

[asha10783]

सच में आप जादूगर हो आप की कलम से निकला हर शब्द एक दिल पर तीर चलाने लगता है इतना बढ़िया अपडेट देकर आपने अपनी तरकश में से एक नया और अनोखा तीर छोड़ा है जिसमें मै निहाल हो गई हूं। आप का बहोत बहोत धन्यवाद जी।

[asha10783]

बस अगला अपडेट जल्द से दीजियेगा। thanks

[Badstar]

Killer brother.....
What a fantastic update

[Logan555]

Very nice brother...

Burka और hizab ने
Story में jaan daal di gazab...
Ek sceen vineeta का साड़ी में
किसी typical '. के साथ
डालडो bhai आग lag जाएगी...
Great update...

Thanks bro

Maine bhi isi update ko soch kar shabana ka charectar banaya tha.
Sorry paf vineeta par apki demand philhaal is story me possible nahi hai kyuki pehli baat to is story me koi '. male charectar hai hi nahi aur vineeta lakhan ki story ek alag track par hai jaha '. to door kisi teeare charectar ki entry ki gunzaish nahi hai.

[Logan555]

Awesome update dost

But please Neha ka update karo Na bdsm Wala my favourite character is neha dari hui neha

Thanks mitra

Ya next update Neha ka hi hai BDSM wala aur us update me bhi BDSM ek alag hight par jaega. And thanks for liking the charectar of Neha.

But ab readers ke reaction dekhkar hi update karunga maine apne hisaab se shabana ka update is story ka best update banaya jisme love dirtyness pain bdsm ***** '. sab daal diya isse better update mai nahi bana sakta tha. Ab agar is par readers ke reaction nahi aae to is story ko aage bada kar fayda nahi ek achhe update ke sath is story khatam karna hi sahi hoga. Naukar malkin wali ek simple story chalu karunga

[Logan555]

Bahuth maza agaya bro. Next update veenitha ke Liya waiting

Thanks bro maine bhi apni taraf har tarah ki cheez daal di us update me ki reader ko maza aae. Next update to neha ka aane wala hai par wo bhi ab reader par nirbhar karega ki ye story aage badegi ya shabana ke update ke sath hi apni antim padav par khatam ho jaegi.

[Logan555]

Logan555 bhai zabardast update
I have no words to appreciate you simply super and thanks for update

Thank u so much bro.
Thanks for ur great words aise hi comments ek writer ko boostup karte hai ki wo apna itna jada time is update ko banae me laga raha hai to reader bhi response kar rahe hai. Thanks again.

[Logan555]

Very freaking Hot Update Logan bhai...
Maza he aa gaya... Ab aage ki Story se aur jyda expectations bad gye hai...
Waiting for the next one...

Thanks bro
U r a core reader of this story and always with us form the start. And thanks for ur support in it.
Ye mera is story ka best update hai aur iske reply me meri bhi readers se bahut expectations maine to apna kaam kar diya ab dekhna hai readers meri expactations par khare utrenge ki nahi.
Kyuki agar readers naukar malkin wali stories par comment kar rahe sasur bahu par comment mar rahe yaha nahi matlab kumi meri story me hai. And mai unki expactation par khara nahi utra and its time to take final decision.

[Logan555]

 ????? Bro nahi sis

सच में आप जादूगर हो आप की कलम से निकला हर शब्द एक दिल पर तीर चलाने लगता है इतना बढ़िया अपडेट देकर आपने अपनी तरकश में से एक नया और अनोखा तीर छोड़ा है जिसमें मै निहाल हो गई हूं। आप का बहोत बहोत धन्यवाद जी।

बस अगला अपडेट जल्द से दीजियेगा। thanks

First sorry sis mostly here most are boys.
And shukriya jai aise readers ke comment padta hu to sach me lagta hai ki update par itna samay kharch karna safal ho gaya. Meri tarkash me jitne teer hai wo sab is update me chala diye hai. Aur ye abhi khatam nahi hua is update me ek twist bhi hai jo aage aaega.

[Logan555]

Killer brother.....
What a fantastic update

Thanks brothet
Thanks for giving ur feedback ye do lines hi bahut maene rakhti hai.

[Superdonic12345]

Killer update ... Maaza aa raha hai story main ...

[Avi_1298_]

You are the bestestestestest.......