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Oh my God! Ekdom faadu aur lajawab update! Bahut maza aya bhai
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vah!vah! bahut hi hot aur behad exciting update!
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Great.... Mast... Lajwab... Mast conversation.... Thoda or dirty banao.... Please update more
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Next update kab de rahe hai...
आपकी लेखनी का जबाब नहीं है ।
जो आईडिया रखा है ।
विलेन का गज़ब का है।
Dirty बनाओ थोड़ा और...
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If I'm not wrong, then Vandana Jain is the main character of this story. She is wife of Alok..(correct me if I'm missing something).
Vandana ki Abhi tak entry bhi nahi Hui hai.. Alok ki behan par itna concentrate karna thik nahi lagta... Story telling is outstanding. No doubt.
Lekin Vandana ka kirdar agar readers ke samne jaldi as jaye to achha hoga..
I liked your story and I'm looking forward to great updates..
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Bahut khoob! Extremely exciting update!
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Aabhi aabhi last ke updates padha aap hot likh rahe hain isi tarah aagey bhi continue kijiye.....kahani mein jab tak theme nahi hogi maza nahi aayega kyon ki kewal sex base nahi hota kisi bhi kahani ka