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Misc. Erotica Ab bassss......the hate story......
Oh my God! Ekdom faadu aur lajawab update! Bahut maza aya bhai
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(02-08-2019, 02:57 PM)Ghosthunter Wrote: Agla update ke lie intizar bhai

Dono update de diya hai bhai...check karlo...
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(03-08-2019, 02:09 AM)Raj aryan3311 Wrote: Great update...
Ye story to..
Xossipy.Com ki Blockbuster
Super duper hit story
Great going please continue..

Shukriya yyara....aage bhi saath bne rhiye... aage or bhi maza aane wala hai....
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(03-08-2019, 12:08 PM)Theflash Wrote: Achha likha hai

Shukriiya yaara....aage bhi saath bne rhiyega...
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(03-08-2019, 12:24 PM)Bimal Wrote: Oh my God! Ekdom faadu aur lajawab update! Bahut maza aya bhai

Shukriya yaara...aise hi saath bne rahiye....aage or bhi hot encounter aane wale hai..
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vah!vah! bahut hi hot aur behad exciting update!
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Great.... Mast... Lajwab... Mast conversation.... Thoda or dirty banao.... Please update more
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(03-08-2019, 01:52 PM)Love Venom Wrote: vah!vah! bahut hi hot aur behad exciting  update!

Shukriya yaara...aage bhi saath bne rahiyega...
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(03-08-2019, 02:39 PM)Suryahot123 Wrote: Great.... Mast... Lajwab... Mast conversation.... Thoda  or dirty banao.... Please update more

Shukriya yaara .....hausla badhaane k liye...aage bhi isi tarah pyaar dete rhiyega....
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Next update kab de rahe hai...
आपकी लेखनी का जबाब नहीं है ।
जो आईडिया रखा है ।
विलेन का गज़ब का है।
Dirty बनाओ थोड़ा और...
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If I'm not wrong, then Vandana Jain is the main character of this story. She is wife of Alok..(correct me if I'm missing something).

Vandana ki Abhi tak entry bhi nahi Hui hai.. Alok ki behan par itna concentrate karna thik nahi lagta... Story telling is outstanding. No doubt.

Lekin Vandana ka kirdar agar readers ke samne jaldi as jaye to achha hoga..

I liked your story and I'm looking forward to great updates..

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(03-08-2019, 10:03 PM)Raj aryan3311 Wrote: Next update kab de rahe hai...
आपकी लेखनी का जबाब नहीं है ।
जो आईडिया रखा है ।
विलेन का गज़ब का है।
Dirty बनाओ थोड़ा और...

Jaldi doonga yaara... ho sake to aaj hi ...
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(03-08-2019, 10:10 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: If I'm not wrong, then Vandana Jain is the main character of this story. She is wife of Alok..(correct me if I'm missing something).

Vandana ki Abhi tak entry bhi nahi Hui hai.. Alok ki behan par itna concentrate karna thik nahi lagta... Story telling is outstanding. No doubt.

Lekin Vandana ka kirdar agar readers ke samne jaldi as jaye to achha hoga..

I liked your story and I'm looking forward to great updates..

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Bhai mene aisa kb kha ki main character vandana hai.....story padhte jaiye sab pata chl jaayega..
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(03-08-2019, 10:37 PM)Anmolkjain Wrote: Bhai mene aisa kb kha ki main character vandana hai.....story padhte jaiye sab pata chl jaayega..

Thank you for clarification.. Ab koi confusion nahi... Give big update.
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(03-08-2019, 10:37 PM)Anmolkjain Wrote: Bhai mene aisa kb kha ki main character vandana hai.....story padhte jaiye sab pata chl jaayega
Thanks
We  are waitning for ur mega update
Yaraaaaa....
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(03-08-2019, 11:00 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Thank you for clarification.. Ab koi confusion nahi... Give big update.

Keep in touch yaara....agla update aaj dedunga.....
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(04-08-2019, 07:10 AM)Raj aryan3311 Wrote: Thanks
We  are waitning for ur mega update
Yaraaaaa....

Aaj dedunga yaara....update... keep in touch....
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Bahut khoob! Extremely exciting update!
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Aabhi aabhi last ke updates padha aap hot likh rahe hain isi tarah aagey bhi continue kijiye.....kahani mein jab tak theme nahi hogi maza nahi aayega kyon ki kewal sex base nahi hota kisi bhi kahani ka
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(04-08-2019, 09:30 AM)Ajaykumar82 Wrote: Aabhi aabhi last ke updates padha aap hot likh rahe hain isi tarah aagey bhi continue kijiye.....kahani mein jab tak theme nahi hogi maza nahi aayega kyon ki kewal sex base nahi hota kisi bhi kahani ka

bilkul sahi kaha aapne ajayji. kahani ki story abhi tak shuru hi nahi huyi.
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