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Incest Kannttoo fulln tey .... ayo k nyi
Karde Cheti next esto v kaim jea update
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Sirra
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Ghaint story ban rhee aa....skey bhain bhra waley scene di kamee rhoo lgda ...jiwein deepu ne seerat di seal todi c...baki writer da dimag pta ni ki ki soch reha
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Awsome
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Bahut khubsurt
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Nice Kavita ji , please keep it up and regular updates .Thanks
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Tusi bhtt sohna likhde o dearr main thonu mail or msg v kria plz apni story ch mera te meri wife da naam pa dwoo mainu puch skde jo puchna sade baree vaise tusi chaho te sadi story v bna skdee bhtt vdiaa glaa ne mwre kol daasan nu real thnxx plzz try ot nd thnxbhtt khush krda wife jis din thodi story read krda
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Meri te wife di life diaa glaan puch mere to tusi plzz osnu pa dwo story ch bhtt kuch hai esa jo tusi likh skdee i nver mind
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Nice story but very slow update, readers loosing interest and eventually this story will also stop incomplete like other stories so guys say goodbye to this sorry right now !
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good going kavita,try to update frequently..to keep the rythm of the story thanks !
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Wating for update
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Aj sure ...


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Tnku ji for reply
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Waiting Kavita ji!!Thanks
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'Mummy ji mummy ji ' gali wal vekh bhaj k navjot kol andi manpreet kahli kahli ch boli ' tayi ji edr e aa rahey ney ...'
'Aan lain dey fer ki hoyea ' gardan chuk gali wal vekhdi navjot b munh bnandi boli ' koi suh lain ayi honi '
 'Menu nyi pta mera tan unha dean gallan sun sun  sar dukhn lag painda ..' apney mathey hath rakhdi manpreet paudean wal jandi boli 'vohat boldi a mein tan chubarey chali mera puchugi tan keh dayeo kitey gyi hoyi a '
'Aho mera ekeli da sar khawey  'uchi uchi hasdi navjot boli
'Menu nyi pta .. 'hasdi hoyi paudean chardi manpreet  chubarey utey jandi boli  ' mere ton nyi unha dean galln da jwaab dey hunda..'



'Ki hoyea ' manpreet nu kahli kahli ch paudean chard upr andi vekh yuvi thora hairaan  hunda bolea 
'Kuch nyu yaar teri tayi andi pyi a 'apney sah kabu krdi manpreet boli  'awen sar khayougi mera ..'
'Ohhh!!!!!!...' banerey ton thalley vekhda yuvi muskuranda hoyea bolea 'mein b sochan bhabhi eni kahli kahli upr kyoun ...'
'Hor ki krdi sar e kha jandi a ' yuvi wal vekh munh bna di boli manpreet  uton mehney vakhrey marugi ...'
 ' Eh tan hay .. ' bhabhi di haan ch haan milanda bolea yuvi ..'mein tan aap side ton nikl janda j mohrey takr javey .. '
'Chal chad eh sab hor das ki krda c ..' chaubarey ch edr udr vekhdi manpreet boli
' nyi bas dhup sek riha c  ' manja dahnda yuvi bolea 'ayo beitho'
 'Dhup sek riha c k aand gwand jhattia maar akhn sek riha c ' yuvi wal vekh banerey ton vehrdey wal  vekhdi  manpreet hasdi hoyi boli 
'Ki bhabhi tusi b .. 'bolda bolda sharmanda manjey tey beithda hass pya yuvi ...

'Aj ayi c nimi  'yuvi kol aa manjey di wahi tey beithdi  manpreet hasdi hoyi boli  'mein puch e lya  usnu nee ki krdi c usdin deor naal khet ch '
'ki kehndi ...mukr gyi honi ' utsuk jeha ho yuvi ney puchea
 'Kithey ..' yuvi da swaal sun  uchi uchi uchi hasdi hoyi boli manpreet' kutti khendi deor naal peeng jhootdi c ..'
 'Omg usney aap e das ditta' hairaan hoyea yuvi burburaya 
'Aho'  gardan ghuma yuvi wal vekhdi boli manpreet'  kutti  kehndi j deor ton ghar dey kam   kadwaney  hon tan thori vohti churi da lalach dena e painda nyi tan aj kal dey mundey kithey kehna mandey ...'
'Omg'  manpreet wal vekhda yuvi bolea'  esi lyi tuhanu unha dey khetan wal jaan ton rok riha c .. ho gya yakeen keha c na tuhanu usdi galbaat  a deor  naal ..'
' gaal baat'  yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli ..' gaal baat ton b kitey wadh ..'
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum bolea yuvi 
 'Hor tenu ki lagda gal jaffia pappia  tak e a unha ch..'  gaur naal yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli   'pkka kam khichwa chuki a deor ton ..'
 'Ohhh' thora awaak hairan  reh gya yuvi manpreet bhabhi nu eni khul k boldi sun 
 'Chal chad sanu ki' jad samj lgi kuch  jyada e bol gyi yuvi dey samney  gal badldi  boli  'deor  a usda jo marji ...'
 'Pr ..' sah nigldey burburaya yuvi..  jism ek khumari naal kamb gya eh soch nimi bhabhi apney deor ton ...'
 'Pr br kuch nyi gharwala driver mahina mahina truck naal  bahr rehda' yuvi nu hairaan hoyea vekh boli manpreet'  ghar ch jwaan deor... akh matka ho e janda' 
 '' '  apni ski bhabhi naal e ..' samj na ayi ki boley yuvi.....kuch der chup reh bolea' fer b ..'
 'Fer b ...ki ......'apni hik tey chunni swardi boli  manpreet 'eni sohni patola  bhabhi j aap .. kehra deor naa karu ...tika lyi agley ney'
Kuch na bolea yuvi na e jwaab dey sakeya jidan bhabhi beparwah ho khull k bol hasdi  hoyi nimi barey dasdi pyi c...

 'Tun bach k rahin uston'  yuvi nu chup beith sochda vekh usnu cherdi hoyi boli manpreet 
 'Mein kyoun'  samj na ayi usnu bhabhi ney eh  kyoun keha tun bach k rahin uston ... kahli kahli ch bolea ''mein kyoun bach k' 
 'Aho tun bach k rehin ' yuvi dean akhn ch vekhdi manpreet akhn matkandi boli'  terey utey b akh a usdi ..'
 'Nyi nyi ...'ek dum hdbda k eketha jeha ho bolea yuvi
 'kehndi c yuvi nu keh dewin ekela na aaya karey  khetan ch jis din mere hath aa gya ..' uchi uchi hasdi hoyi manpreet pura swaad lay yuvi nu cherdi boli' mein usda...'
 'Edan kidan'  ek dum kahli kahli ch bolda bolda hass pya yuvi ..
 'Eh tan usnu pta hona'  fer uchi uchi hasdi usnu cherdi boli manpreet'  kehndi sohna ucha lamba tagra kadh kaath kadeya  yuvi ney ..'
 'Pagal a oh kuch b boldi'  chubarey  ch edr vekhda burburaya yuvi
 'Eh tan menu nyi pta .. pr hay chakmi run.. ' yuvi nu upr ton lay haithn tak gaur naal Vekhdi hasdi hoyi boli  'bs tun bach k rahin uston .. hor na kitey tera kaand kr ..'
 'Edan kidan kr dayo ..' hasda behas krda samj gya yuvi bhabhi usnu cherdi hoyi boli tease kr swaad lay rahi a 
 'Kr sakdi a' fer usnu cherdi boli manpreet'    ..tere wargey  gabhru nwey nwey jwaan mundey  tey tan pkki akh ..uton hay b uchi lambi gaddar jatti.. ki pta '
 'Bs karo bhabhi ..' bolda bolda sharma gya yuvi'  tuhanu mein edan da lagda ..'
 'Thora thora ..' yuvi nu sangdey sharmandey vekh hor swaad lendi manpreet usnu cherdi boli'  tun e kehnda c  pindan ch tan khetan ch e ..'
 'Koi hor gal karo na bhabhi...' hasda hoyea sharma e gya  yuvi.....

Kuch boln e lgi c manpreet k 



'Nee manpreet 'paudean ton ayi tayi di awaaz sun ek dum hdbda k manjey ton uth khadi hoyi manpreet ' lagda tayi upr aa rahi a . '
O teri ..  manpreet dey naal naal pareshaan hunda yuvi b jhatkey naal manjey ton uth khada hoyea 
 ' mummy ji nu keha b c na daseyo mein upr haan .'paudean wal vekhdi manpreet kych sochdi boli '
'Hun ki mein tan challa' chaubrey ch edr udr vekhda yuvi bolea ' mere ton nyi sun hundia usdean gallan ..'
'Kidr challa ' yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli '  paudean ton tan tayi upr andi pyi a ...'
'Menu tan pta mein kithey lukna 'manpreet wal vekhda yuvi bhaj k chaubarey tey ek passey nj janda bolea.

 yuvi wal vekh paudean wal vekhdi manpreet kahli kahli ch  uskol puj ek baar tan o b hairaan reh gyi kithey gya yuvi .. puraney tuttey manjey fatey hor kafi purana smaan tey usdey pichey yuvi .. chaubarey tey aa koi soch b nyi sakda c k yuvi ethey lukeya hovega 
'Ruk mein b andi haan' tayi nu paudean chardi vekh bhaj k puraney samaan dey pichey aa khadi hundi manpreet paudean wal vekhdi  burburayi ' keha b c mummy ji nu na daseyo mein upr haan  ...........'
 







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(01-08-2019, 10:39 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote:

'Mummy ji mummy ji ' gali wal vekh bhaj k navjot kol andi manpreet kahli kahli ch boli ' tayi ji edr e aa rahey ney ...'
'Aan lain dey fer ki hoyea ' gardan chuk gali wal vekhdi navjot b munh bnandi boli ' koi suh lain ayi honi '
 'Menu nyi pta mera tan unha dean gallan sun sun  sar dukhn lag painda ..' apney mathey hath rakhdi manpreet paudean wal jandi boli 'vohat boldi a mein tan chubarey chali mera puchugi tan keh dayeo kitey gyi hoyi a '
'Aho mera ekeli da sar khawey  'uchi uchi hasdi navjot boli
'Menu nyi pta .. 'hasdi hoyi paudean chardi manpreet  chubarey utey jandi boli  ' mere ton nyi unha dean galln da jwaab dey hunda..'



'Ki hoyea ' manpreet nu kahli kahli ch paudean chard upr andi vekh yuvi thora hairaan  hunda bolea 
'Kuch nyu yaar teri tayi andi pyi a 'apney sah kabu krdi manpreet boli  'awen sar khayougi mera ..'
'Ohhh!!!!!!...' banerey ton thalley vekhda yuvi muskuranda hoyea bolea 'mein b sochan bhabhi eni kahli kahli upr kyoun ...'
'Hor ki krdi sar e kha jandi a ' yuvi wal vekh munh bna di boli manpreet  uton mehney vakhrey marugi ...'
 ' Eh tan hay .. ' bhabhi di haan ch haan milanda bolea yuvi ..'mein tan aap side ton nikl janda j mohrey takr javey .. '
'Chal chad eh sab hor das ki krda c ..' chaubarey ch edr udr vekhdi manpreet boli
' nyi bas dhup sek riha c  ' manja dahnda yuvi bolea 'ayo beitho'
 'Dhup sek riha c k aand gwand jhattia maar akhn sek riha c ' yuvi wal vekh banerey ton vehrdey wal  vekhdi  manpreet hasdi hoyi boli 
'Ki bhabhi tusi b .. 'bolda bolda sharmanda manjey tey beithda hass pya yuvi ...

'Aj ayi c nimi  'yuvi kol aa manjey di wahi tey beithdi  manpreet hasdi hoyi boli  'mein puch e lya  usnu nee ki krdi c usdin deor naal khet ch '
'ki kehndi ...mukr gyi honi ' utsuk jeha ho yuvi ney puchea
 'Kithey ..' yuvi da swaal sun  uchi uchi uchi hasdi hoyi boli manpreet' kutti khendi deor naal peeng jhootdi c ..'
 'Omg usney aap e das ditta' hairaan hoyea yuvi burburaya 
'Aho'  gardan ghuma yuvi wal vekhdi boli manpreet'  kutti  kehndi j deor ton ghar dey kam   kadwaney  hon tan thori vohti churi da lalach dena e painda nyi tan aj kal dey mundey kithey kehna mandey ...'
'Omg'  manpreet wal vekhda yuvi bolea'  esi lyi tuhanu unha dey khetan wal jaan ton rok riha c .. ho gya yakeen keha c na tuhanu usdi galbaat  a deor  naal ..'
' gaal baat'  yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli ..' gaal baat ton b kitey wadh ..'
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum bolea yuvi 
 'Hor tenu ki lagda gal jaffia pappia  tak e a unha ch..'  gaur naal yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli   'pkka kam khichwa chuki a deor ton ..'
 'Ohhh' thora awaak hairan  reh gya yuvi manpreet bhabhi nu eni khul k boldi sun 
 'Chal chad sanu ki' jad samj lgi kuch  jyada e bol gyi yuvi dey samney  gal badldi  boli  'deor  a usda jo marji ...'
 'Pr ..' sah nigldey burburaya yuvi..  jism ek khumari naal kamb gya eh soch nimi bhabhi apney deor ton ...'
 'Pr br kuch nyi gharwala driver mahina mahina truck naal  bahr rehda' yuvi nu hairaan hoyea vekh boli manpreet'  ghar ch jwaan deor... akh matka ho e janda' 
 '' '  apni ski bhabhi naal e ..' samj na ayi ki boley yuvi.....kuch der chup reh bolea' fer b ..'
 'Fer b ...ki ......'apni hik tey chunni swardi boli  manpreet 'eni sohni patola  bhabhi j aap .. kehra deor naa karu ...tika lyi agley ney'
Kuch na bolea yuvi na e jwaab dey sakeya jidan bhabhi beparwah ho khull k bol hasdi  hoyi nimi barey dasdi pyi c...

 'Tun bach k rahin uston'  yuvi nu chup beith sochda vekh usnu cherdi hoyi boli manpreet 
 'Mein kyoun'  samj na ayi usnu bhabhi ney eh  kyoun keha tun bach k rahin uston ... kahli kahli ch bolea ''mein kyoun bach k' 
 'Aho tun bach k rehin ' yuvi dean akhn ch vekhdi manpreet akhn matkandi boli'  terey utey b akh a usdi ..'
 'Nyi nyi ...'ek dum hdbda k eketha jeha ho bolea yuvi
 'kehndi c yuvi nu keh dewin ekela na aaya karey  khetan ch jis din mere hath aa gya ..' uchi uchi hasdi hoyi manpreet pura swaad lay yuvi nu cherdi boli' mein usda...'
 'Edan kidan'  ek dum kahli kahli ch bolda bolda hass pya yuvi ..
 'Eh tan usnu pta hona'  fer uchi uchi hasdi usnu cherdi boli manpreet'  kehndi sohna ucha lamba tagra kadh kaath kadeya  yuvi ney ..'
 'Pagal a oh kuch b boldi'  chubarey  ch edr vekhda burburaya yuvi
 'Eh tan menu nyi pta .. pr hay chakmi run.. ' yuvi nu upr ton lay haithn tak gaur naal Vekhdi hasdi hoyi boli  'bs tun bach k rahin uston .. hor na kitey tera kaand kr ..'
 'Edan kidan kr dayo ..' hasda behas krda samj gya yuvi bhabhi usnu cherdi hoyi boli tease kr swaad lay rahi a 
 'Kr sakdi a' fer usnu cherdi boli manpreet'    ..tere wargey  gabhru nwey nwey jwaan mundey  tey tan pkki akh ..uton hay b uchi lambi gaddar jatti.. ki pta '
 'Bs karo bhabhi ..' bolda bolda sharma gya yuvi'  tuhanu mein edan da lagda ..'
 'Thora thora ..' yuvi nu sangdey sharmandey vekh hor swaad lendi manpreet usnu cherdi boli'  tun e kehnda c  pindan ch tan khetan ch e ..'
 'Koi hor gal karo na bhabhi...' hasda hoyea sharma e gya  yuvi.....

Kuch boln e lgi c manpreet k 



'Nee manpreet 'paudean ton ayi tayi di awaaz sun ek dum hdbda k manjey ton uth khadi hoyi manpreet ' lagda tayi upr aa rahi a . '
O teri ..  manpreet dey naal naal pareshaan hunda yuvi b jhatkey naal manjey ton uth khada hoyea 
 ' mummy ji nu keha b c na daseyo mein upr haan .'paudean wal vekhdi manpreet kych sochdi boli '
'Hun ki mein tan challa' chaubrey ch edr udr vekhda yuvi bolea ' mere ton nyi sun hundia usdean gallan ..'
'Kidr challa ' yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli '  paudean ton tan tayi upr andi pyi a ...'
'Menu tan pta mein kithey lukna 'manpreet wal vekhda yuvi bhaj k chaubarey tey ek passey nj janda bolea.

 yuvi wal vekh paudean wal vekhdi manpreet kahli kahli ch  uskol puj ek baar tan o b hairaan reh gyi kithey gya yuvi .. puraney tuttey manjey fatey hor kafi purana smaan tey usdey pichey yuvi .. chaubarey tey aa koi soch b nyi sakda c k yuvi ethey lukeya hovega 
'Ruk mein b andi haan' tayi nu paudean chardi vekh bhaj k puraney samaan dey pichey aa khadi hundi manpreet paudean wal vekhdi  burburayi ' keha b c mummy ji nu na daseyo mein upr haan  ...........'
 


Nice scene


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Thnku for the update keep it up
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nice build up KAVI ma'am.....bahut maza aaunda tuhadi likhi hoyi story pad ke......dill khush ho janda jad v tuhada update aaunda hai ji.......
bahut sohna likhde ho.......tuhadi sab toh changi gall ehi lagdi hai pura detail ch scene create karde ho ...te conversation uuufff...agg hi la dinde ho.....
u r just awesome KAVI ma'am.....
keep going dear
keep writing
waiting for next update eagerly......
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You are one of the best ever writter

I have read your all the stories

I am from up and from hindi state but i love your stories

I am your fan


Mam after this plz write a brother sister invest
And mam plzz rply

U never rply me


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