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Incest Kannttoo fulln tey .... ayo k nyi
(27-07-2019, 09:39 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Dnt read.... if u dnt like .. kyoun fuddu bndey o ... 
Never ever invite u to read my story ... i write n update for myself ... dnt ask or invite readers like u to read my story...

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(27-07-2019, 09:39 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Dnt read.... if u dnt like .. kyoun fuddu bndey o ... 
Never ever invite u to read my story ... i write n update for myself ... dnt ask or invite readers like u to read my story...

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Kyi te inj krde ne jiwein pay krke story padh de hon.....jehnu nhi psand na padhey.. par aiwein nakk bull naa kadhey
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Don't bother for thankless readers. Most of them are out of their minds. You are doing them a favour and in no way are obliged to write . It is entirely your wish. They are themselves fuddu.
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God bless you
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(27-07-2019, 09:54 AM)Sukha.jatt Wrote: Good replyy????

But writer not supposed to lie with valuable readers.
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There are limitations with everyone
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(26-07-2019, 01:57 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Sorry  got stuck  .. definately kal sham nu big n detailed update karungi.. sorry for delay to my valuable readers

One must stick to his/her words
One should not make a words if could not fullfill them
Waiting
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kavita ji kithe busy ho gye update krdo hun wait kri jande aa tuhade update di
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When is update coming?
God bless you
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Kardo ji update hun tan
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Fuddu khich gi thoda
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It’s not about that readers pay to writers for
Writing, it’s all about that come in forum and lie to public ,nobody force you to write and humble request don’t post any story so people stop expecting from you.
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Fuddu khichan nu kihda appa paise dite ah. Jdo krni hayu ohne appe krdo
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Public de notice ch rhn da eh v ek tarika h doston
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Manjey tey lattan lmka beitha yuvi gardn ghuma kol beithi manpreet wal vekhda bolea'  aj tan tusi kmaal e kr ditta .. menu tan pta e nyi c tusi bullet b chala laindey o ..'

 'Meri chad'  mint di goli chusdi manpreet yuvi   dey modey naal modda mardi boli'   tun das tun jehra kmaal aj apni saheli naal kr k aya ..'
 'O .. o'  bolda bolda sangda hoyea edr udr vekhn lga yuvi 
 'Das das' yuvi nu sangdey nimma nimma hasda vekh manpreet usnu cherdi boli'  kithey kitta kmaal  college ch k kitey hor ..'
' park ch beithey galln krdey c'  pair dey anghuthey naal jmeen kured da yuvi bolea'  pta nyi kidan mere ch himmat aa gyi prabh dey bulln tey bull rakh dittey ..'
 'Wowww realy ..' yuvi wal vekhdi khush ho chehkdi takreebn takreebn cheek e pyi manpreet ..
' holi bhabhi koi sun lyouga ..' kahli kahli ch manpreet nu rokda ghabranda hoyea bolea yuvi
 'Kaun sunuga es velley sadey ton elawa chatt tey kaun a'  chat tey edr udr vekhdi  manpreet boli'  sarey sutey pye ney ..'
 'Fer b ..' bhabhi nu beparwah ho uchi awaaz ch boldi sun yuvi tokda hoyea bolea 
 'Fer b chhadd ..es das ki keha prabh ney jad tun usdey bull ..' gaur naal yuvi dean akhn ch vekhdi manpreet boli 
 'Kuch nyi ..  'akhn churanda yuvi bolea jidan bhabhi ney usdean akhn ch vekhdey puchea himmat na hoyi ja fer sharma gya bhabhi nal akh milaan ton .. pr manpreet nu cha e chadeaa hoyea c yuvi da jwaab sun chehkdi hoyi boli' Ki kehndi gussey hoyi .. '
 'Nyi nyi  chup chaap beithi rahi' kuch sochda hoyea yuvi apney bull ghutda bolea'  fer usney aap e apney bull mere bulln tey rakh dittey ' 
'Realy fer.. ' hairaan hundi manpreet yuvi wal vekhdi boli
'Waps andey hoye kehndi shukr a tenu b akal aa gyi k park ch beith saheli nal ekelian galln e nyi karidia 'muskuranda apney chabda bolea yuvi 
 'Kehna c bhabhi ney diti akal ' hasdi  hoyi yuvi nu edn vekhn lgi manpreet jiven o koi jang jit k ayea hovey oh 'hor ki kitta '
Hor kuch nyi bas bull e chumey ..' manpreet ton akhn churanda sharma gya yuvi 
'Ja vey hik palos deni c ' eh tan manpreet nu nyi pta lga kidan eh keh gyi oh yuvi nu  ...'
 'Parj ch theek nyi lga   koi sanu vekh .. ' kuch der chup reh bolea yuvi 'naley lga kitey gussey na ..'
'Ja vey ..nwi nwi jwaan kydi nu  tan apni hik tey yaar da pehli baar lageya  hath ... sari umar chetey rehnda kuri nu' donna hathn nal majey di wahi fad ek lamba aah lendi manoreet aasman  wal vekhdi boli
 'Fer tan ...' kuch sochdey hoye yuvi ney akhir pych e lya' Veerey ney rakhea c hath ..'
 'Aho.. ' bdey aram naal apnia lamkdia lattan hilandi boli manpreet 
'Kithey park ch  ' utsuk jeha ho puchea yuvi ney 
'Nyi  ..' kuch sochdi chetey krdi boki'  movie vekhn gye c udon pehli baar theater ch '
'Theàter ch tusi rokeya nyi  ' chor najran naal manpreet di bahr nu nikli hik tey mummeya di golayi nu vekhda bolea yuvi 
'Rokeya 'uchi uchi hasdi hoyi boli manpreet 'mein tan enha da hath apney dujey utey rakh keha es  da b haal chaal puch lyo .. es bechare da ki kasoor 
Tusi sachi'  bhabhi nu bina jijhak jwaab dindi sun nimma nimma muskuranda hoyea bolea yuvi   'bdey bold tey jolly mood ..'
' thori thori jyada nyi .. ' hasdi hoyi angrayi lendi chehkdi hoyi boli manpreet'  jwani dey unha dinna di gal e vakhri hundi c '
Angrayi lendi manpreet di t.shirt da jad uprla button ktk kr khulea na chahundey hoye b yuvi di njar bhar nu nikl ayi dono mummeya di ghati tey ja tiki ...
Chan di roshni ch t.shirt ton bahr nu nikli mummeya di golayi gori gulabi rangt ch chamkdi 
'Ki hoyea 'yuvi nu bina akh jhapkey apni hik wal vekhdey vekh tokdey hoye puch e lya manpreet neyb
'O bhabhi tuhada button khul gya .' skpka k manpreet di hik ton njran prey nu krda haklanda hoyea burburaya yuvi ..
'Ohhh  apni hik wal vekhdi manpreet button band krdi kuch sochdi yuvi wal vekhdi boli' 'tenu kidan pta button khul gya .... tun  meri hik wal ...'
'O o  nyi nyi ' akhan churanda skpka k edr udr vekhda yuvi ghabra k hadbdanda hoyea kuch na bol sakeya
'Koi na vekhi ja menu ki ..' yuvi nu enj hadbdanda vekh hasdi hoyi boli manpreet ..'sarey mundey vekhdey ney... hor kam k hunda mundya nu kudi hik nu ghuran ton elawa '
' Nyi bhabhi mein nyi... ' mukrda akhn churanda bolea yuvi
'Rehn dey kayi baar mein vekheya tenu  hik tey akhn tikayi ghurdey ' yuvi nu masoom jeha bn ghabranda hadbdnda vekh cherdi hoyi boli manpreet 
'O o tan tuhdey galley ch paya haar ..' bdi muskil naal gal bdlda bolea yuvi 
Oh ehhhh ... ' apni hik tey latkdey mangl sutar wal vekhdi boli manpreet'   eh haar nyi mangal sutar a '
' Vohat sohna dono mummey vichkar jhuldey mangl sutr wal vekhda bolea yuvi 
'Ki mangal sutar k kuch hor  'tedi akh naal yuvi wal vekhdi boli manpreet 
'Bhabhi tusi na bdey majakia o ' samj na ayi yuvi nu  ku jwaab devey 
' Acha chaldi haan rishu na kitey uth gya hovey raat kafi ho gyi a ..' kuch sochdi hoyi boli manpreet 
 'Beitho na bhabhi huney tan aye o ' dil nyi kr riha c yuvi da bhabhi eni jaldi waps thalley javey ..
'Ki gal neend nyi aandi ..' gardan ghuma yuvi wal vekhdi boli manpreet 
'Haan ' angrayi lenda bolea yuvi ..' pta nyi kyoun '
'Hun kithey neend ani ' yuvi nu cherdi chehkdi hasdi hoyi boli manpreet ' pehli baar saheli dey bull chumey ..'
'Tuhanu aa gyi c jad tusi pehli baar kiss kiti  ...' bhabhi nu mjak ch cherdi  vekh yuvi b usnu cherda bolea 
'Menu ..'yuvi wal vekhdi kuch boln e lgi c fer ek dum gal mukandi hasdi hoyi pyar nal yuvi nu jhirkdi manpreet apney walln da juda krdi boli'  puch puch Wahley swaad na lay.. '
'Nyi o gal nyi   ' bhabhi nu hasdi vekh yuvi gal badlda bolea 'tusi aap e daseya k veera da hath fad dujey utey ..'
 'J na fad k rakhdi tan enha ney  kehra hat jana c  'ena keh uchi uchi hassn lgi   manpreet 
 ' Oh  ' bhabhi da jwaab sun na chahundey hoye b bulln tey muskaan aa gyi yuvi dey 
 'Hun hath ayi saheli nu  'boldi boldi hsdi yuvi nu tichar krdi fer cherdi hoyi boli 'tere wang thodi saal baad chumi lyi  ..hath tan pta nyi kinney sal baad layounga.. '
 'Himmat nyi hundi c o tan tusi salah diti  'manpreet wal vekhda  bolea  yuvi  ' chuss  lye fer bull ..' 
 'Oye hoye ..' manjey ton uth khadi hundi boli manpreet ' menu tan neend aa rahi.. sona hun ...tun soch kad hun hath .. ' 
Agli baar pkka hath b .. 'josh ch aa burbura yuvi fer kuch sochda hoyea bolea ' tusi b tan tin char saal baad veerey nal viah karwaya ..' ena keh bolda bolda chup fer himmat kr bolea 'gussa tan nyi karogey ...ek gal puchan ...'
' nyi gussa kyoun ..  'paudean wal jandi yuvi wal vekh hasdi hoyi boli manpreet ' ehi puchna naa k viah ton pehln tere veerey ney meri ..'
'Haaaan ' hauka lay sah e nigl gya yuvi bhabhi da jwaab sun kuch samj na ayi hun ki boley oh...

Paudean kol ja ruk yuvi nu chup khada vekh kuch sochdi hoyi boli manpreet  '' ribbon tan viah ton baad e katan dita c tere veerey nu .".enha keh khind khinda k hasdi hoyi kahli kahli ch paudean  utardi thalley nu bhaj gyi manpreet 










'Sat sri akal massi ji ..'  vehrdey ch aa navjot nu rishab naal beith galln krdi vekh  nimi us kol aa beithdi  goddeya tey hath landi boli'  pauta ayea hoyea .. mein b socha massi gharon e nyi nikldi  kyi din ho gye ..
'Tun kehra mud k massi da haal chaal puchn ayi ' nimi nu mehna mardi navjot boli'  aj kithon rah bhul gyi ..'
'Aana c massi pr ghar dey kam e nyi mukdey .. 'hasdi chehkdi nimi boli'  fer pta lga manpreet ayi hoyi a ..sochea naley usnu mil awwaan naley bapu ney thekey di rakam bheji a ..o b dey awaan ..ah layo fado ..'
'Menu tan samj nyi andi tere sohrey di ..' paise fad ek passey rakhdi navjot nimi wal vekhdi boli 'jmeen tan thekey tey lay lyi fsal tan chaj naal beejda nyi ..'
'Tuhanu tan pta e a massi ji ..'  munh bnandi nimi usdi haan ch haan milandi boli'  jad dey  bapuji sarpanch bney ney pind dey kam e nyi mukdey .. '
'Agey kehra chajj naal km krda c ..' hasdi hoyi navjot boli 'changi trah jandi haan  us vehld nu '
'Sarpanch b tusi e banwaya  ' navjot naal behasdi hoyi nimi boli'  j tusi na kehndey pind ch .. sarb samti naal  bapuji nu kis ney sarpanch chun na c ..'
'Mein sochea pind da kuch bhala karu pr eh ..' hasdi hoyi navjot boli 'sarpanch ki baneya apney aap nu mantri e samjn lag pya .. miley sahi kisi din fer puchungi .. tun tan kehnda c gurdwarey ali gali pkki karwa dayounga ..'
'Koi na massi tuhada sneha laa dayoungi .. chetey krdi c maasi  ..' hasdi muskurandi nimi navjot wal vekhdi boli'  aa k mil jaan ..'
 'Mil k ... mein kehra  uston hall chalwana ..' hasdi hoyi navjot boli'  kahin massi kehndi c pind da kuch sudhaar karey jad vekho sehar tehsiley tureya rehnda ..' 
 'Koi na jarur keh dayoungi'  vehrdey ch edr udr vekhdi nimi boli'  manpreet kithey a ..' 
'Huney tan ethey e c ..  bechari saver di safayean krn lgi hoyi a ..  'manpreet dey kamrey wal vekhdi navjot boli ' apney kamrey ch honi ja mil aa ..'

 'Hye nee tun kado ayi ..'kamrey ch aa manpreet dey gal lag chehkdi hoyi nimi boli' menu tan kal pta lga tun ayi hoyi a' 
 'Meinu tan kyi din ho gye ayi nu  ... tun das kithey rehndi a "nimi nu jaffi pa mil mehna mardi manpreet boli' miln e nyi ayi...'
 'Ki dasan vehl e nyi milda' ek lamba sah lay  manpreet da hath fad bed tey beithdi nimi hasdi hoyi boli'  eh tan truck lay k nikl jandey ney tey sohra sahab sarpanchi ch busy ..  ghar dey sarey kam mere sar tey e. .' 
 'Aho vekheya mein kal khetan ch kidan deor nu galbakdi paa chummia dindi pyi c'  gaur nal nimi dean akhn ch vekhdi manpreet usnu cherdi boli 
 'Hun jwan mundey ton ghar dey  kam lainaey kehra saukha ..  thori vohti churi tan khilani e paindi a .. nyi tan aj kal dey mundey kithey kehna mandey .. dangra da ..  patheya da .. sarey kam kam ekeli nu e ..'
 'Luchi  ..'hairaan e  reh gyi manpreet nimi nu bina jijhak beparh ho apney tey  deor barey    dasdi sun 
 'Nee tun kad vekheya menu khet ch'  kuch sochdi nimi  manpreet dey goddey tey hath mardi boli 
 'Bs vekh lya ..' akhn matkandi manpreet hasdi hoyi boli ..' yuvi keh riha c bhabhi chalo khet dikha lyawa.. uthey gyi tan .. tun apney khetan ch deor naal ..'
 ' Hye tun ayi c khetan wal ... menu awaaz kyoun nyi mari .. ' kuch der chup reh  fer uchi uchi hasdi  hoyi  akh maar manpreet nu cherdi nimi chehkdi hoyi boli'  kitey tun nyi yuvi naal  .. sukh naal tuhadey khetan  ch  tan kammad b uchi uchi ..'
 'Tere wang luchi nyi ..' apney modey tey chunni theek krdi manpreet nimi dey modey tey thapd mardi boli'  jehri deor naal e ..'
 'Hye  'ahh bhar hauka lay  manpreet nu chirandi nimi   akhan matkandi boli' ucha lamba taggra gabru... sambh k rakhin kisi din mere hath aa gya ganna chup jana mein '
'Kutti  ...na tenu mera e deor labhya'  pta nyi kyoun jelousy jehi feel hoyi yuvi barey nimi dey munh ton sun ..
'Tun tan sehar  rehndi hun pind ch tan kisi bhabhi ney usda khuyal rakhna e a .. 'hik agey kad chekdi hoyi manpreet nu hor cherdi boli nimi'  nwa nwa jwaan hoyea a ...es baar kam saar k jawin becharey da... nahi tan mein kisi din ragar dena fer na kahin '
 'Nyi ji mera deor edan da nyi jehra saki bhabhi naal edan da kuch.... '   nimi nu ghurdi boli manpreet  'tey na e menu lod a '

 ' Aho tenu kyoun lord sehr ch maujan lutdi honi ..'  hasdi muskurandi hoyi boli nimi
'Bilkul lutdi haan  ... ' apni hik tey chunni swardi boli manpreet 
 'Hye kiney ney.. 'akh dba muskurandi hoyi boli nimi 
 'Kutiea   gharwaley nal lutdi haan ..' fer nimi nu jhirkdi boli manpreet'  kinney kunney koi nyi '
 'Hye 6/ 7 saal ho chaley ney tere viah nu bs gharwaley naal e'  hairaan jehi ho gaur naal manpreet wal vekhdi boli nimi
 'Hor kis nal krna hunda nee ..' fer nimi nu tokdi boli manpreet'  kutti kuch b bhaunkdi tere viah nu b tan eney saal ho gye tun  kineya ku..naal'
'3 ku e chetey ney ek gharwaka ek deor tey ek hor  c'  uchi uchi hasdi boli nimi
 'Tey jehrey chetey nyi o kinney'  nimi nu besarm ho boldi sun manpreet thori hairaan b hoyi pr pta c nimi da   usnu chakmi run c pind di ..
 'O o ek c 'kuch sochdi boli nimi 'meri nanan da gharwala kanjr jad b milda  awen makhaul krda rehnda c  ek din pind aya . ghar ch menu ekeli vekh wanh fad munch nu taah den lga mein b sochea kr lwey eh b cha pura .. eney salan da munh ch laar tapkayi firda ..dasdi dasdi uchi hassan lgi nimi ' ... kuttey kolon  char ton upr gassey na bjey ..jeev kad dig pya .. mud k nyi kadi mere samney apnia muchan nu taah ditta usney  .. '
 Puri luchi a tun .. ' nimi nu hasdi vekh manpreet da b hassa nikl aya .. ' Chal chad eh sab hor das teri saas da  ki haal a ...''
'Usda haal ' munh bna di boli nimi ' kam kaar kuch krdi nyi jad vekho ehi bass hye goddey dukhdey tureya nyi janda ... dil tan krda kahan jwani velley ghat kaudi hona c ... bulla hun unha yaarn nu ... aa k malish karn  tere goddeya di ..'
 'Sachin vohat bhaunkdi a tun .. 'nimi da jwaab sun boldi boldi haas pyi manpreet boli ' waisey Lod tenu b  paini kutiea malish di    ... jehri deor agey khetan ch nit  kaudi hundi a '
'Jad time ayouga Malish b karwa layiungi .. ajay tan nwey nwey jwaan hoye deor dey dandey tey beh peeng jhootan da time a ....'  angrayi lendi ahh bhar hasdi hoyi nimi boli ' waisey teri saas dey goddey tan nyi dukhdey ...'
'Kutti ' akhn kad nimi nu ghurdi manpreet bed ton uth khadi hundi boli ' kuch b  ..' 
'Gussey kyoun hundi a yaar  ''manpreet wal vekhdi nimi fer usnu cherdi boli ' waisey teri saas es umrey b pura patolla lagdi a ..'
'Bs kr yaar .. ' bed ton uth khadi hundi manpreet b boldi boldi hass pyi ' chal aa bahr beithdey haan .. naley tere lyi chah bna di ..'







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Very seductive conversation...thanks for the update please update jada na lait karya karo mam
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Very nice update keep it up kavita ji
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bahut sohne......story bahut sohni create kar rhe ho.....jama hi bilkul enj lag riha jiwe WEB SERIES chal rahi howe ..........enna sohna likhde ho......NIMI new character kafi pasand aaya....hun lagda story padan ch hor swaad aauga......i love hot & seductive conversation.....naale tussi bahut sahi character create kitta hai.....bas kicchi jao kamm.....hunn pura pura swaad aa riha story padan ch...
bahut wadiya likhde ho.....awesome
keep going KAVI ma'am
keep wrtingl
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Bahut hi Sohna likhea update.
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