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????????????24 kisses????????????
#1
24 kisses ye meri pahli kahani hai .
Ye story me drAma hai love hai aur sex hai.is kahani Ko just ek fantasy hi samajhe baki Aisa kuch hota nahi hai.
Ye kahani ek Thakur Khandan ki bahu aur usi Ghar ke Naukar ke bich ki Prem kahani hai.


Is kanahi ke lead roll character-
Rana Pratap- Thakur haveli ka Malik , age-70
Awash Pratap -.   Rana ka beta , age -50
Savita - Rana ki 2nd wife  , age-39
Kamya-Awadh  ki 2nd wife (heroine) ,age -24
Devi - Savita ki beti
Raghu - (hero) Thakur ke ghar Naukar+member age-32
               Member is liye Kyun ki Raghu Ko Awadh Pratap ne bachpan me sadak se utha kar ghar me Rakha tha aur 12 tak padai bhi karai .


Is kahani me bahut se Patra age aid honge aur detail age bhi di gayegi. 
(Mai is kahani me pics bhi aid karna chah Raha hun but mere pass time na hone ke Karan Mai nahi aid kar pa Raha hun)

To kahani ki shuruat ek shadi samaj toh se Hoti hai 
Awadh ki dusri sadi ( first wife ki death ke bad aur usko koi vacch bhi nahi tha .uski death 10 sal pahle car accident me Hui thi.
Awadh usse bahut pyar karta tha is Karan usne dusri sadi nahi ki but is bar use Savita ki khubsurti aur pita ke davav me aa kar karna hi pada.)


Awadh , Raghu aur Rana sahr me rahte the wahan uska business bhi tha aur wo usi Kam me rahata tha.
Raghu Ghar ke sare Kam karta th aur naukaron ka head bhi tha.kyun ki awash use bahut pasand karta tha wo sirf awash ke aadesh ka hi palan karta tha kuch bhi karne se pahle awash Ko jaroor batata tha fir chahe wo Kam Rana khud Kyun hi na kah Raha ho wo bade Malik ka bhi Kam Awadh Ko batane ya puchne ke bad hi karata tha.


Jyada tar Raghu Awadh ke Sath hi Raha tha.matlab deriving and as a bodyguard.uske pass ek pistol bhi di thi Malik ne.

Aur usne kai bar apni Jan par Khel kar Malik ki Jan bhi bachao thi . Sayad is Karan wo Malik Ko bahut pyara tha.


Ab aate hain kahani par .
---vidhai hone ke bad Raghu gadi chala Raha tha aur pichhe Malik aur ( Kamya ) Malkin puche baithe the.
Savita Apne hathon Ko god me rakhe aur sat jhuka ke baithi thi.
Savita ka gaw shar se bahut dur tha Karin 6 - 7 ghante ka Safar tha.


Kamya-   ek Kam Mohini , man Mohini , ATI Sundar aur Apsara ke saman Sundar badan ki Malkin thi .
Agar use miss world bhi kaha jaye to kuch galat nahi tha .
Uski age abhi Matra 21 sal thi aur uski sadi ho Rahi thi wo bhi sage se hi PADI graduation ki Hui ladki thi aur multi talented thi.


Gadi sadak par bhag Rahi thi Karun 3 ghante ho rahe the. Aur abhi adha Safar aur bhi baki tha .Fadi me sirf Sannata thaa ac chal Rahi thi .tabhi Awadh Raghu se kahta hai- Raghu , raste me kahin acha sa hotalho to rukna 
Raghu- ji Malik 
Aur car fir thodi der bad ek hotel me rukti hai 
Raghu- Malik apki kya chahiye Mai le aayun
Malik- ruko Mai bhi chal kar dekhta Hun ( asal me Awadh Ko smoking ki Sadat thi)
To wo dono hotal ki or chal diye aur wahan ek seat par Raghu Malik Ko baithata hai aur Malik ke liye cold drink aur cigarette lata hai.

Tab Awadh Raghu se use bhi kuch Lene Ko kahta hai to to wo man kar deta hai.
Tabhi use Fadi me baithi Savita ki yad aati haiaur wo rahgu Ko Savita se puchne Ko kahta hai.aur jaise hi wo Hadi taraf Jane lagata hai wo Raghu Ko rokte hue bulata hai.
Awadh- are suno , tum wahan se ek frooti ki bottle le lo aur Malkin Ko de aao .
 
Raghu- ji Malik,
Raghu Malik ke kahe anusar wahan Jaya hai aur Malik ke side ki khidki Ko knock karta hai par Kamya ka koi Dhyan nahi jata ek to sare dharwaje band the upar se wo Ghoonghat odhe aur apna SAR niche kiye baithi thi.

Jab thodi der bad sisa nahi khulta to wo dusri tarajf se Jata hai aur gate khol kar malikn ke taraf frroti dete hue kahta hai.
Raghu- Malkin, wo aapko pyas lagi hogi to Malik ne ye frooti aapko dene Ko kaha hai .

Ab kamya jaise kahin se jagati hai aur wo us bottle Ko Lene ke liye hatha Raghu ki taraf badha deti hai 
Par jaise hi wo bottle pakadne Ko Karti to Kamya ki ungaliyan Raghu hath Ko touch kar jati hain


Jisse Raghu ke Dil ki to jaise dharkan hi Ruk jati hai aur wo kisi dusri duniya me kho Jaya hai itna Komal sparsh use aaj tak nahi Mila tha jaise 
Uske sparsh me ek ajab hi Jadu tha 

Isle bad use thodi der bad hosh aata hai aur wo Apne andar hi Apne AAP Ko Josh kar wahan se chala Janta hai jaise kuch Anarth soch Liya ho.

San wo Malik ke pass chala Jara hai idhar Kamya us bottle Ko le leti hai uske koi glass nahi tha aur na hi Raghu ne la kar diya tha to us bottle ko Apne Ghoonghat ke andar kar ke side muh Laga kar pine lagati hai.aur do lagabhag aadhi pine ke bad wo us bottle Ko bagal me rakh deti hai Kyun uska kuch khane pine ka man nahi kar Raha tha.
Aur waise bhi his ladki ki aaj rat suhagrat hone wali ho use bhukh pyas kuch nahi lagti.

Idhar Malik aur Raghu av Laut kar apni seat pe baith hate hain aur Pratap jaise hi us bottle Ko dekhta hai wo Kamya Ko thoda mind free karane ke liye majak me kahata hai.
Pratap- lagata hai Hamri di Hui ye  frooti ap Ko pasand  nahi aayi .aur halka sa has deta hai . 

Issue pahle Kamya kuch kahti wo fir se turant bol pada .
Pratap- Raghu ,tum hi ye frooti pi lo tumhari Malkin Ko ti pasand nahi aaya.aur wo frooti Raghu Ko de deta hai

Raghu us frioti Ko le kar pine lagata hai , tabhi use uske bottle me lipstick lagi Hui dikhti hai jise wo dekh kar samajh Janta hai ki Malkin ne jootha kar ke Piya hai .
Idhar Kamya wo sab rokna chah Rahi thi par Aab der ho chuki thi isliye wo bhi chup baith gayi.
Man Ko samjha kar ki kise pata chalega ki ye joothi thi.


Par idhar to Raghu Ko Nasha sa hone Laga tha to wo thoodi si pee kar rakh deta hai .

Raghu ke Dil ka to pata nahi tha ki wo Kam bhi kar Raha hai ya nahi aaj tak usne itni ladkiyan dekhi unse Mila baten bhi ki aur bahut kuch bhi Kiya par pata nahi kya tha aaj uske Dil aur dimag me sirf Malkin ka wo sparsh hi ghoom Raha tha jise usne kuch der pahle paya tha aur ab wo uske malikn ka honthon se sparsh ki Hui bottle se Malkin ki joothi frooti pi Raha tha ab to use malikn ki khusboo bhi aane lagi thi jo use madhosh aur pagal kiye de Rahi thi isliye usne wo bottle rakh di .

Aur wo ek bar fir Apne man Ko kosh kar aur Apne dimag Ko aaja de kar hosh me aa Gaya aur Hadi chalane Laga.......



Age kya hota hai wo next update me.
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#2
Nice work dear
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#3
Bhai kahani to badi mast hai bass please Raghu ki age thode bada do 50-60 ke beech , aur usko thoda kala aur ugly show krna... buddha naukar aur jawan hot bahu ki kahani padhne mai jyda maza aayenga and Story aur Erotic bann jaengi....
All the Best fr your great Story....
Bas bhai thoda mistakes pe dhyan rakho Kamya ki jagah kahi kahi pr Savita likh diye ho....
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#4
Nice story. Plz update regularly.
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#5
Aur wo ek bar fir Apne man Ko kosh kar aur Apne dimag Ko aaja de kar hosh me aa Gaya aur Hadi chalane Laga.......



Ab age-----


Kuch samay bad karib 3 ghante bad car ek jagmagati haveli ke pass jakar rukti .
Wahan par bahut se log aur aurtey usi car ka intejar kar rahe the.car rukte hi Awadh ne Raghu Ko gate kholne Ko kaha 
Malik- Raghu gate khol do
Raghu- Bhaiya! Mai gate nahi kolunga.
Malik- ( hairan hote huye) Kyun??

Kyunki Raghu ne aaj tak Aisa nahi Kiya Malik ke kahne par wo kuch bhi kar deta tha aur ek bar bhi age aur piche ka nahi sochta tha par aaj is tarah achanak uske aise mana karne wo shok ho gaya tha.

Raghu - ( thoda emotional hote huye) wo muje bhabhi maa (Kavita) ki yad aa gayi wo bhi his din ayi thi to unho ne muje gift dilwaya tha aapse AAP logon Ko yahan lane ke liye . To muje Wahi bat yad aa gayi.


((Kavita , Pratap ki pahli patni 
   Kavita Raghu Ko Apne bete ki tahrah pyar Karti thi aur Raghu bhi use hamesa bhabhi maa bulata tha aur waise hi chahata tha))

Pratap-- Oh!! To ye bat hai , accha batao kya chahiye ??
Raghu-- wo ..
Pratap- Han bolo
Raghu- aap Ko pata hai ki mujhe bike chalane ka Sauk hai par yahan koi bike me chalta hi nahi...
Pratap - to tumhe bike chahiye
Raghu- han me sir hilata hai.
Pratap- thik hai tumhe bike mil jayegi.
Raghu- aap sach kah rahe hain
Pratap - ab mere ladle ne itne salo me pahli bar kuch manga hai to wo to Dena padega waise bhi tune Kavita kei death ke bad se kabhi kuch nahi kahta tha.
            Aur ab tu apni nayi bhabhi ke aane bad kuch mang Raha hai to wo to tujhe Dena padega nahi teri bhabhi maa naraj ho jayegi.
Raghu-- par mujhe abhi nahi chahiye.
Pratap-  par abhi nahi chahiye to kab chahiye.??
Raghu- wo abhi mai hamesha AAP ke Sath rahata hun to yahan mujhe bike ki jarurat nahi padti isliye jab mujhe chahiye hoga Mai mang lunga.
Pratap. -- achha tik hai ,aur kuch
Raghu- Han,, 
Pratap - aur kya?
Raghu- wo maine aapko bhaiya ji bola hai par Mai malkin Ko bhabhi nahi kah Sakta..
Pratap- par Kyun??
Raghu- bhabhi maa ne mujhe swyem aise bulane Ko kaha tha isliye Mai bhabhi Ko bhabhi maa kaha kar pukara tha aur wo sirf pyar ke Karan tha par malikn ne abhi hame Aisa kuch nahi kaha isliye ham sirf Malkin Ko Malkin hi bulayenge.

( Ye bat Kamya ke liye thi isliye wo ghunghat ke andar se hi apni najaro Ko utha kar Raghu ki taraf dekh Rahi thi par use kuch nahi dikh Raha tha )



Pratap -- thik hai jo tum kahna chaho wo kaho ye tumhari aur tumhari malikin hi Jane. Aur halka sa hans deta hai.

Ab Raghu gate khol deta aur Pratap  car se bahar aa jata hai aur uske nikalte hi wahan ke log aa kar kamya Ko bhi le jaten hain aur wo haveli ke andar chale jaten hai aur din bhar Wahi rasme , puja aadi chalta hai.aur Raghu to bas wahan ke Kam karta Raha aur dhire dhire rat ho gayi..

Ye rat Kamya ke liye bahut badi rat thi sayad ye uske zindagi ki Sabse hasin rat..
Par kya ye sach me Kamya ke liye hasin rat hogi ya kuch aur bhi hoga.wo to rat hone par hi pata chalega.....
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#6
bahut badhiya shuraat. keep going bhai
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#7
Kamya ki suhagrat--
 
Rat me ek taraf Kamya Apne bedroom me suhag ki sej me Apne suhag ke Sath suhagrat manane ke liye intejar kar Rahi baithi thi ki tabhi uske kamre ka door khulta hai aur Kamya ke Dil ki dhadkan bad jati hai wo abhi bhi apni Aankhen niche kiye baithi thi uske man me ek ajib si bechaini thi pata nahi wo kis liye thi sayad har ladki Ko Apne life ke din ka intezar rahata hai aur wo aaj pura hone wala tha .

Kamya usi position me baithi thi Jaise ki koi Murti wo to bas ye soch Rahi thi ki aaj ki rat kaise kategi , kya hoga , uske pati kaisa karenge , wo kya karegi Apne pati ke Sath par Sabse jyada use is bat ki bechaini thi ki uske pati dikhte kaise hain kya wo Sundar honge kya Mai unko pasand aungi ???
Wo ye sab baten soch Rahi thi ki us kamre me 2 pairo ke Ander aane ki Aahat Hui aur fir darwaja band ho gaya, aur fir Kamya ki oor wo kadam bad Gaye .

Jaise jasie kadam Kamya ki taraf bad rahe the uski dhadkane aur Tej ho Rahi thi .thodi der bad Kamya Ko bed par kisi ke baithne ka abhas hua aur wo apni eyes niche kiye huye baithi rahi aur aage jo home wala tha uske Tej dhadkano ke Sath intejar Karti Rahi.

Kuch hi der Kamya ke Ghoonghat ke upar hone ka aabhas hota hai aur wo Apne eyes aur band kiye ja Rahi thi aur Apne hathon Ko bhi tight liye ja Rahi thi thodi hi der me uske chehre par light padti hai jiske kararn uski eyes aur Tej band ho jati hain .

Thadi door par fir se koi aata hai aur door Khul jata hai door ke khulte hi Kamya ki eyes ke samne ek bar fir andhera chha jata hai kyunki uska Ghoonghat niche ho jata hai.fir agalei aawaj se wo thoda hosh me aati hai .
Savita - Rani ( Savita ki beti , Kamya ki nanad) tum yahan kya kar Rahi ho chalo bahar aur apni bhabhi ko parashan karna band karo .
Rani - wo to Mai...
Savita - Han Han janti Hun ki apni bhabhi ko dekhne ke liye Mari ja Rahi hai , par hamne bhi to nahi dekha Abhi tak apni bahu ko thoda Sabar kar kal subah dekh Lena .

Fir Savita Rani Ko room se bhaga deti hai aur Kamya ke pass aa kar Kamya se puchti hai.
Savita - Kahi Rani me parashan to nahi Kiya .

Aur Kamya ne halke se na me sir hila diya.fir Savita Kamya Ke bed ke bagal me doodh ka glass rakh kar use Pratap Ko pilane Ko kah kar bahar aa jati hai .

Aur ek bar fir us bade se kamre me Apne suhag ka intejar karne lagti hai...

Wahin doosri taraf Raghu ke kamre me---

Raghu din bhar Kam kar ke thak Chuka tha aur wo Apne bistar par let Gaya aur Apne purane din ke khayalon me kho Gaya tabhi pata nahi wo kya soch Raha tha ki turant uth kar bahar Nikla aur garage me ja kar car ka gate khola aur under se kuch Nikal kar fir se Apne room aa Gaya aur vahin Apne gande se bed par baith Gaya aur Jeb se frooti ki bottle nikali aur uski cap Ko khol kar uspe lagi kamya ki lipstick Ko khojane laga. 


Jaise hi wo Nisan use milte hain uske aankhon Ko chain mil jata hai , uski dhadkane bad jati jo ki kuch samye pahle ruko Hui ke saman thi .fir wo us bottle Ko ek bar Apne nak par le jata hai aur ek Jor ki sans leta hi jisse uske andar Kamya ki majak bhar jati hai aur Aisa do teen bar karta hai Jaise mano snake Ko Chandan ki khushboo a gayi ho aur wo us par Mohit ho gaya fir Raghu ne usi nisan ko Apne hoontho par laya aur ek sip pi Liya Jaise wo Amrit ho.
Fir wo khayalon me khya hua bas us bottle se frooti pita Gaya aur ab Jaise use hosh hi naraha ho aur wo pita Gaya wo to khatam hone ke bad bhi Aisa 4-5 bar kiya.fir wo Kamya ke khayalon me dooba hua hi so Gaya ...


(( Raghu ka Aisa bartav kya tha wo ? Kya wo Kamya se pyar karne Laga tha?? Ya fir bas uske liye pyas thi jo Kamya Ko pana chahati thi ???
Aur Kamya ke jindgi ki Sabse badi rat me kya hone wala tha???))
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#8
(19-07-2019, 05:51 PM)SweetSonali Wrote: bahut badhiya shuraat. keep going bhai

I need a girl volunteer.for writting this story in more erotic way so any one who can help me please text me reason mai publicly nahi Bata sakta .
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#9
awesome starting! fantastic story. carry on bro.
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#10
Excellent starting! Bahut badhiya kahaani
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#11
Nice start. But needs editing. Name’s me Bahut confusion hai.
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#12
Bhai logon name me aage jo bhi milega Wahi Sahi hai.so thoda sa adjust kar lo
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#13
Nice start
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