Angrakshak Parivar Ka .........MAHI

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Great story

[Salman haidar]

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[Dmahi19]

Thanks  for ur comments 

Keep reading lot to come



 

[Dmahi19]

 

Up to now I given 5 updates including long introductions I to build up story theme . With every passing update u will feel story getting more organized and explanative ..... And as par ur comments and suggestions I will try give you a  compelete story .

Its very difficult to satisfied all viewers demand but this story contains 75% erotism and 25% emotions and drama ...... So story u upto read in five updates so much that lots of fill-in the blanks left .....so now onwards I will try to fill blanks also and cover the characters who will play main lead role ...

Be patient and if any doubt and quries is left it will start solving in Update after Update .

Thanks 

[ramumargaya]

Bhai kya rita mami ka beta vasu, jo abhi shayad 1 -2 saal ka hai uska asli baap mahi hai?

[doctor101]

Dear Dmahi, 

As I said earlier , your language is very good. You are writing a family incest story, Your plot is nice . Can I suggest few thing, 

You should not bring so many characters all at a time. Reader will not be able to establish link between them, hari Singh, madhav sing, ram sing, rati, Saroo and many others are there. you should bring one or two new characters in every update , not more...as other reader has also said "THERE WILL BE LOT OF RAITA ALL ALONG"   and you yourself will not be able to justify their character. 

IT IS NOT A CRITICISM , JUST A SUGGESTION,  BECAUSE IT IS NOT NECESSARY TO POST SO MANY UPDATE IN ONE DAY...

notwithstanding my suggestion , your story is nice..  

Dmahi, please focus on few characters at a time. You have so many female characters. Rotate erotica with them. Only Rati Devi won't work. So let Mahi seduces all female characters one at a time. Inside family members as well as  village girlsas well as enemies' daughters / wives.

So if you follow Mahi, you will control your all characters. If Mahi is interested in any female, there you can exploit other male character who has sexual relationship or crush on particular female. Rotate sex scenes with different characters but keep focus Mahi's point of view.

Secondly, I love big updates.. Congratulations. But..  long updates must have solid erotic, plots, characterization conent. Otherwise it is just Indian daily TV Rural based soap opera. And who cares mediocre work. So quality is important.

[Dmahi19]

UPDATE 06

part 01

ARYAN apni nani RATI DEVI ki chudai karne ke baad suite se bahar nikla aur apna cellphone check karne laga . woh corridor se ghumta huya balcony mei ja kar mobile ki saari detail check kara koi 5 mins , fir use bhar garden me kisi ladki(Mona Sharma Rati ki sectary) ko jogging karte dekha , track suite me katil lag rahi thi........... .... Aryan smile karte huye nice girl bolo aur chal pada choti maami ke suite mei .


usko pata tha Rita ki choot me khoojli hui hogi RATI aur ARYAN ke chudai live dekh kar (ji haan dosto Rita ko Rati ki live chudai dekhane ka arrangement Aryan ne hi kiya tha woh bhi Rati ke room aur washroom mei spy cam lagwa kar ) .......aaj ish Rita ki garmi aache se utarni padegi ........usne kuch sochkar decide Kiya ki dono saas bahu( Rati aur Rita) ke cold war ko khatam karne ka time aa gaya hai ........apne lund se dono ko ek ke uper ek ko daal kar pelna padega tabhi dono ki choot aur Mann ki jalan khatam hogi ..........

RITA in short nighty


Aryan ne suite ka door khola to woh unlock tha , woh ander jakar lock laga hi raha tha ki Rita pheeche se uski kamar me haath daal pheeche se chipki aur boli ,"saale tujhe uss bhudiya ki choot aur choochi me kya maaza aata hai ki kutte ki tarah usse chipak jaata hai jab bhi wo randi tere pass aati hai tujhe duniya ki koi bhi ladki aur aurrat nahi dekhti ...........chinal tujh per jaadu kar rakha hai apni aag shant karne ke liye tujhse har samay chipki rahti hai agar mere buss chale to saali ki choot mei tezaab daal doon , kutiya mere Aryan ko mujhse chin na chati hai aur tu matherchod agar uske aaspass bhi dikha , Aryan ke lund ko pakad joor se   bheenchti huye uski peeth per kaat leti hai........ ahhhhh saali Randi teri maa ko chodun .....Rita ko dhakka detha hai jisse woh jameen per gir jati hai aur Aryan apni peeth sahla raha tha aur doosre haath se lund ko aur Rita ke taraf palta gussey se ......... Rita neeche floor per beth chuki thi usne sirf ek choti transparent light pink color ki nighty pheni thi aur uska poora body dikh Raha tha ...... Aryan bedroom ki taraf dekha to woh lock tha aur Rita ko dekha woh gusse se laal hokar gheri saans le rahi thi aur usko ghoor rahi thi .......Aryan apni t-shirt utar ek tarah lage mirror me apni pith dekha to Rita ke daanto ke nishan pade they aur halka khoon bhi nikal Raha tha , Aryan us nisan per touch kiya to dard se uski aahàaaaaaaa nikal gayi phir lower ke uper se apne land ko sahlaya jo abh bhi halka halka dard Kar raha tha .

Aryan ne Rita ki taraf dekha to woh usko gusse se abhi bhi ghoor rahi thi .....Aryan apna t-shirt Jo uske haath mei tha uko Rita ke uper phenka aur bedroom lock khol under gaya aur vasu ko dekha woh so raha hai uske pass gaya uske maathe per kiss kiya aur uska blanket theek Kiya............ bedroom ke bahar aa  lock Kiya aur RITA jo abhi bhi waise hi bethi thi ke pass gaya aur usko kheech kar jabardasti uthaya aur uske moh ka hath se band liya aur lejakar sofe per betha aur usko apni goad Mei betha liya........Rita haath pair Chala rahi thi Aryan ne uska moh choda aur uske baal apne hath me pakdar kheeche aur uaka sar uth gaya aur mooh khul gaya ........Aryan Rita ke lips apne lips se jod buri tarah choosne laga ..puch...puchhhh.. puchhhh puchhhhhh..... Rita virod karti rahi haath per chalati rahi par Aryan per uski pakad na dhilli huyi thodi thak haar kar Rita aab shan't ho gayi aur Aryan ka kiss Mei saath de rahi thi ...... chmmmm chmm... puchhhh puchhhhhh siiiiiiii ........ jab uski saans pholne lagi Aryan ne kiss todi di aur dono gheri saans le ek doosre ko ghoor rahe they magar aab gussa kam aur dono ki aankho Mei vasna thi ...... ..... Rita ek baar phir Aryan ke baal pakd jor se uske lips per toot padi aur jaada josh se kiss kar rahi thi ......puchhhh puchhhhhh .. chmmmm chmm.....10 min baad kiss ka silsa ruka aur Rita Aryan ki goad me uske seene se lipt bethi apni saasn normal kar rahi thi...... Aryan uske baal aur peeth sahela Raha tha.

thodi der baad Rita Aryan ki goad se utri aur pheeche ho apni nighty nikal capet per phenki aur pink color ki penty nikal Aryan ke moh per  usne catch Karli .... Rita niche ghutne ke baal carpet pe khade ho Aryan ka lower kheechne lagi .........Aryan Rita ka husan aur figure dekh Kar garam ho gaya aur uski penti apne face se hata usko khol kar jeebh se chaatne lagaa Jahan Rita ki choot ka Pani laga tha......... Rita ka paani ka swaad aur nasheli mahek uske lund ko aur khonkhar bana rah thi aur uske jism me chudi karne ka Josh bhar rahi thi ....... neeche Rita ne Aryan ko lower nikla  uske baad uska under wear utara to Aryan ka lund uske sexy jism ko 32 toopo ki salami deta khada tha aur apni bahuduri aur takaat ki misal de raha tha . pure 11inchi 4inch mota pura goore color ka aur uska topa bilkul laal seb ki tarah tha uske ched se halka 2-3 paani ke boond chamak rahi thi ......... Rita itni khush hui usey dekhkar foran dono hath se pakad li aur agey baadh lund ke topey se boondo ko chat li phir kiss karne lagi aur dono haath se halke halke uper niche hath phira rahi thi ..........usney apna sar utha Aryan ki taraf dekha .





Aryan maaze se naak me uski penty soongh raha tha aankh band karke .....Rita ko hasi se aagai per chup hi rahi aur dono haath se lund ko hila rahi thi ......tabhi ussey sararat sujhi usne lund pe ek kiss kar Aryan ki right jaangh per apne daant gadaa diye .....Aryan ke moh se aaah nikli aur uski aankh khul gayi aur Rita ki taraf dekha woh abhi daant gaaday uski aur dekh rahi thi... ayran aage huya uske sar ke baal per haath phera to Rita ne daant hata liye fir us jagah Jahan laal ho gaya tha apne moh se thook girai aur phir jeebh se chaatne lagi .thodi der baad Aryan ki taraf dekh uske land ko chatne lagi uper se niche Tak........... Aryan uski taraf dekha ,"aaj tu jaida katakhni kuttiya to nahin ho gayi ja baar baar kaat rahi hai " ......  Rita pyar se lund chatti rahi phir lund ke topey per bahut saara thok girakar dono haath se lund pe ragdte huyi boli ," abhi nahin huyi per ho sakti hoon tera poora maas nooch lungi agar tu mere ya ""mere Toopchi"" ke beech aaya"


(Aryan ke lund ko Rita ne ""Toopchi"" naam rakha tha )  



phir lund chod khadi huyi aur Aryan ko haath pakad uski jaangh per apne guthne rakha ...........phir uske sar ke pheeche haath rakh uska mooh apni doono kadaak choochi mei daba liya ,"le choos inko aur saara doodh pee inka ".......Aryan ne left nipple ko mooh me dabakar Kar suck karne laga aur dosre ko haath se salaah Raha tha taki joor se dabane se doodh na nikle , uska dosra haath uske bhari pichwade ko daba Raha tha aur kabhi kabhi ungli gaand ki darrar me pherta .......... Rita uske sar ko aur joor se daba rahi thi aur dosra haath se uske baal salah kar moh se awaj aur gaali de Kar usko Josh chada rahi thi .........siiiiii'' aaaaahhhhhh ..mere khasam mere yaar pee jaa .....aah  siii .....pee aur jor pee apni Randi lugai ka doodh   shhhh ahhhhh saali bohut tang karti hai .......Hain aise hi doosri ka bhi piiiiii shiiiii ..


Aryan 10 min me doono choochi Khali Kar diya  aur Rita ko dono hath se utha sofe per lita diya fir uske uper jhuk kar kiss karne laga .....uski jeebh apne moh me le suck karne laga  aur ek haath se uske choochion ko khub jor se bari bari maslta aur nipple pinch karte huye kheench bhi deta ......uski left kaan ke ander jeebh ghus Kar ghumi to Rita badhawas ho gayi ...uski kaan ki loo ko daanto se halke halke kaatne laga to Rita ki choot se pani sa bhene laga .....Aryan ne uski chuchi dabate huye dosre haath ki do ungli uske choot ki lakeer per pheri aur angutha se choot ke Dana ko ragdne laaga aur ab apni jeebh doosre kaan Mei ghused di to Rita ko laga aaj to ye saala mujhe sirf sahlaa aur daba Kar maar dalega .......aryannnnnnn chod de mein mar jayongi mein pagal ho gayi.... siiiiiii sssiiiiiiiiii aahhhhhhhhhh mar gayi ....aahhhh mar gayi matherchoddddfdf kutteeeeee chodddddd ...... aahhhhhhhhhh uski kamar uper huyi aur choot se pani ka shower khul gaya

aur saant pad gayi jaise jaan hi na ho .....Aryan ne hamala band kar usko pyar se kiss  kiya aur phockara  aur uske uper se uth kar beth gaya aur uski nighty utha uski choot aur sofa saaf Kiya . phir ek cushion uski gaand ke neeche lagaya ....... Rita ke uper jhuk uske dono nipple choosey phir dono choochi poori golai me chaati aur poori thuk se gili ki phir poora pet chuma uske baad uski choot ke pass phouch...... usne dekha ki Rita ki aankhien band Hain to uski dono taange dheree se choudi ki aur uski gulabi choot ke chire per neeche se uper Tak jeebh phirai aur choot ke daane per bhi phirai to Rita ne doono haath se usko baal me ungli ghoome lagi ......achnaak Aryan uska choot ke button ko daant se pakdkar 2-3 daant Chala diye phir to Rita bilbala uthi aur uthkar ek haath se Aryan ke baal khinchi doosre haath se uske sar aur khandhe per thappad maar rahi thi aur ek per ki eddi utha utha ke uski kamar per 3-4 baar Mari .......oh meriiii maaaaa mardala kamine ne ahhhhh saale teri maa ki choot me aag lage jisne tujhe paida kiya.... ahhhhh siiiiiiisiiiii suuaar kahin ka ...ahhh. .......


Aryan seedha hua aur has raha tha ,"maja aaya maamiji ko ha ha ha"....... Rita ki aankho me assun aa gaye ,"kamine mujko dard de has raha hai aur mujhe maamiji bol raha. ja kutte mujse baat bhi nahi karna". ......Rita roti hui uthne lagi to Aryan ne usko wapis peeche lita diya aur poori takat se usko neeche babooch liya.


Rita jhatpatne lagi aur uski pakd se niklane ki kosis karne lagi aur cheek Kar bura bhala bolne lagi ... Aryan ne  apna ek haath se uska moh bandh kiya , doosre haath se lund uski choot per set kiya ......aur aage ho uska sar apne ek haath se pakda aur bola aab kuch aant sunt boli "to lauda ek baar Me choot ke ghused ke Teri gaand se nikalunga ". ...... Rita itna sunte hi shaant ho gayi Aryan ne uske moh se haath hatya aur bola "chal thook laga lund pe aur doosre haath se " aur pyar se uski choochi sahlaane lagaa ...... Rita ko kuch na karte dekh kar uske dono gaal ko chum Kar aur uske lips per kiss karke bola ,"lagaa jaldi nahin to phir mat bolna ".... Rita uski aankho mei dekhkar apne haath se uska sar pakdkar smooch karne lagi aur dono thook bilno lage dhaai ki tarah jaise makhaan nikaal rahe hon ek doosre ke moh me ......Rita ne doosre haath se Aryan ka lauda pakd uska topa apni choot per ragdne lagi jis per uski choot ka paani lagne laga . Aryan aab ek haath se choochi aur dosre haath se uska sar aur gardan sehlaa Raha tha ....

RITA ne hoth alag Kar ek hath me thook jaama Kiya aur laude ke tope aur shaft per mal rahi thi , usne 2-3 baar thok jaama kar puri chiknai baana li lund or choot per......Aryan uske asoon Jo sookh chuke they unhe chat ke saaf Kiya aur uske maathe per kiss kar Beth gaya ...... position banayi aur honth gol kar khoob saara thook ko lund aur choot ke jod per dala aur pura ragadkar phela Kar ready ho gaya .....

Rita ki aankh me dekh uske uper jhukha  to woh boli ,"bhool mat jaana mein tere bete ki maa Hoon koi bajaroo aurat nahi !!!!!! .......mujhko pyar de bas pyar "".

Aryan ne apne ek haath ki hatheli uske mouh me gusha di taki jab woh kaate to paata chale kitna dard ho raha hai aur ek jhatka Diya ....... uska topa chut ke under ghus gaya aur Rita ne daant gadaa diye uski hatheli per ..... Aryan dusre haath se choochi sahlaaya aur usko choom bhi Raha tha jab uske daant ki pakd kam huyi to Rita ne uska haath moh se nikala aur chaata .....phir Aryan ke lips choosne lagi Aryan ab lund thoda aage pheeche kiya phir ek jhatka maara lund 6 inch tak under  guss gaya aur woh utna hi ander bhar Kar raha tha ...... Rita ko ab maza aaraha tha ......."aur joor se kar aur dal Meri jaan aur" ....Aryan dhere dhere speed badha kar inch by inch karta ja raha tha last me karib 10 inch tak ab lund wahin Tak jaata aur Rita ki aahan naklti rahi ......"Aryan Meri jaan mujko bahut maaza aaa Raha hai ..... sssiiiiiiiiii aahhhhhhhhhh "...thap thap thapp ... Aryan ne raftar badha di ab Rita aur woh dusri duniya me they




Rita kabhi choomti kabhi kaat leti aur 20 min ki chudi mei 3 baar thandi ho gayi ....... Aryan abhi laga tha ......Rita ko thaka dekh usne usko lund ander kare kare utha liya phir carpet per peeth ke bal lait gaya usko chipkaye ...... Rita ne apne ko adjust Kiya aur sar Aryan ke seene per rakh liya Aryan neeche se dhakhe per dhakhe maarta aur woh saski lekar maze se kabhi Aryan ke nipple choosti ya seene ko chat leti . ..... ish position mein karib 15 min chudi karne baad Rita uske kaan ko chom Kar boli mujko tera Pani apni choot me chaiye bhar de .....khali karde meri choot mei apna veerye ....





Aryan foran palat gaya ab Rita niche aur Aryan uper usne apne hoth uske hoth se joode aur suro Kar diye apne last wale heavy shots.... phach phach phach....thap thap thap........aaaaaaaahhhhh aaaaaaaahhhhh aaaaaahhhhhhh aaahhhh aaahhhhhhhh ummmmmm......
Aryan aur Rita pasine pasine ho Gaye....akhir kar  Aryan uske uper dha gaya .....thodi der baad Rita ne apne uper se dekhela to Aryan ne lund bahar kheecha aur pukkk ki awaj se lund bahar  aaya .. .....Rita ne apni nighty uthai aur usko choot ke ched par lagayi ......


thodi der saans theek hone ke baad ARYAN utha aur rita ko apne dono hatho se uthaya sur washroom Mei jakar  usko commode per bitha diya . Rita mootne ke baad choot dhoi aur khadi ho gayi phir Aryan fresh huya aur usko le shower mei ayya ek saath dono ne ek dusre ko saaf Kiya aur nahakar aur towel  band bahar aaye Rita aur aryan ne drawing hall clean Kiya room freshner spray Kiya uske baad dono bedroom me aaye ....... Rita ne full Gowan phena ..... Aryan apna lower aur t-shirt phen vasu ke pass lait gaya......  Rita uske pass jaakar  aur Aryan ki banhh per sar rakh Aryan se chipk ke lait gayi ......

Aryan bola ,"aaj tumko Kya ho gaya tha jaan tum itni wild our out of control kaise ho gayi"....... Rita,". pata nahi sayad maaji aur tum ko woh sabkuch karta dekh insecure ya jealous ho gayi thi aur mujhe laga meine tum ko kho diya"........ Aryan ne bus "hmmmm" kaha .

thodi der baad Aryan bola,"meine tumko roka tha aisa mat karo per tum ko Meri aur MAA (RATI) ka live sex dekna Hain . meine tumko phele bhi warn Kiya tha Mein apni MAA se bahut pyar karta Hoon woh meri sabkuch hai aur humko ek saath sex karte aur hamara emotional love dekh Kar tumko bahut bura lagega kyonki tum bhi mujko apni jaan se jaada pyar karti ho or mein bhi. agar woh sab baatein  aur gaali tum aaj tum ne di thi agar koi Meri MAA ke liye bola hota to mein uska sar dhad se alag kar deta us time mujko agar vasu ka khayal na aaya hota to tum yahan mere pass nahin samsaan mei hoti . mein apni MAA ka bahut samman karta hun Mera unka her tarah ka rista hai aur mein kabhi kisi se nahin darta koi kya kheta hai mujhe farak nahin padta par agar kisi ne unhe gaali di to woh zinda nahin rahega chaye woh apna hi koi kyon na ho . aur ek baat apne mann se laga lo mein tumse bhi bahut pyar karta hun woh bhi jab meine tumhari photo pheli baar dekhi mujko tum bahut pasand aayi par mein tumse bahut chota tha to shaadi to nahi ho payi  magar meine tumko Mamaji se Shaadi ke liye maana liya tum khush bhi thi per jab tumko phala dukh aur jhatka laga zindgi me to meine tum ko apne pyar se sambhal liya meine tum ko tumhare jism ke liye nahin balki tum mujko pasand thi . uske baad tumne VASU mangaa meine apna vaada nibhaya aur aage bhi Mera pyar tumhare aur vasu ke liye kabhi kam nahi hoga aur agar tum cahahogi to tumse shaadi bhi Kar sakta Hoon. per tum already jaanti ho Meri jeevan se bahut log Jude Hain"  .

Rita boli," I love u ARYAN and I m always with u but please forgive me pls for my first big mistake . mein maaji se bhi maafi maang longi" .......Aryan muskara "main naaraj kab tha"....... Rita usko kiss karke ,"vasu ke Roop me tumne mujhko sab kuch Diya and thanks jab mujhe laga ki mujhe tumhari biwi ki bagdor sambhalni Hain to main usdin saare adhikaar maang loongi "...!!!!??????

dono thodi der pyar bhari baat kiye aur Aryan so gaya aur Rita ko woh uss din ke baare me sochne lagi jab Aryan se pheli baar mili thi ....?????



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thoda RITA SINGH ki baare mei jaan lete Hain .....


RITA SINGH age 32 yrs , ht 5'9" ( 2 yrs elder than her husband) ,
fig 36 -28- 36 , model type figure and dressed smartly, very fair color and dominant personality , she is PhD economics and she was Professor in University . her only son is VASU . She is guide , mentor and guru of MAHI . Very high headed but loves mahi more than her family . Everybody respects her due to her intelligence and smartness and she always have more solutions for any problem . Rita taught MAHI yoga and meditations .

[Dmahi19]

UPDATE.  06

Part - 2


Rita bachpan se hi padhi me tez thi .....uski ek badi bahen aur aur do chote Bhai bahan they ....... Rita apne intelligence and Sharp mind ki wajah se har exam top karti gayi aur last mei usne economics se sirf 23 saal ki umer me economics se PhD ki aur University me asst. professor ki job karne lagi .




Rita  jitni padne me tez thi utni hi jaada khoobsurat aur hot thi usko dekhkar na jaane kitne ladko uske piche pade ....per usne kisi ko ghaas tak na daali..... apne dominant aur attitude nature ke karan sab usse darte they ....... uske parents even saare Bhai bhen bhi usse darte they ....... sabko pata tha Rita ko koi nahin hara sakta na jhuka sakta ..... uske pass har problem ka hamesha do illaz hote Hain.... phela seedha aur saral doosra teedha aur pechida per wo dono ka use kabhi bhi Kar sakti hai .

kabhi apni naak per makhi na bethne dene waali ladki ke liye sabsa muskil kaam tha ladka milna .....uske maa baap se lekar ristedaar tak na jaane kitne ristey dikhaye per usko koi pasand nahi aaya...... Rita aab 27yrs ki ho gayi aur University mei professor ki post per thi .
.....uske maa baap uski shaadi karna to chaate they per unko bhi lagne laga isko koi bhi Shaadi ke liye maana nahi sakta ......pata nahi kyon ladka isko pasand aayega ......

Rita ke pitaji rajveer(Aryan nanaji) ke purane dost they to baat baat mei ristey ki baat nikli per ladki ladke se do saal badi thi ........per rajveer ne phale ladke ladki ko ek doosre ko pasand karne ko kaha aur age kya manye  rakhti hai.....rajveer Rita ko jaanta bhi tha ki Rita bahut intelligent aur tez ladki hai..... aur uska chota beta SATEESH (Aryan ka chota mama)  Jo simple aur seedha saada hai per padhne Mei intelligent tha to computer Engineer ban ker kisi MNC Mei job karta tha USA mei ......abhi India aaya to sahi time tha rista karne ka .....


phele Rita aur SATEESH mile aur dono ne jawaab ghar walo per chod Diya..... karib 3 bad woh din bhi aagaya jab Rita ki pheli mulakaat Aryan se hui .

Huya ye ki Aryan ka 10th ka results aaya usne cbse board all over India top kiya , pura khandhan Aryan ke ish karname se apne aapko bahut garvith mahsoos Kar raha tha ..... usi time Aryan apne maa baap aur choti bhen ke saath Rati Devi ke pass ayaa huya tha ......jab usko pata chala chote mama ke liye ladki dekhi hai per kuch jawaab ladki wale nahin de paa rahe hain ........


RATI ne Saroo ko photo dikha diya Saroo boli ladki to bahut sunder hai sateesh se jaada qualified bhi to haan Kar do ..... RATI boli Saroo hum ladke wale hain per abhi Tak unki taraf se jawaab nahi aaya ki unko ladka pasand hai ....tabhi Aryan photo lekar dekhkar bola ye to bahut hi beautiful aur cute hai agar mama nahin karte to mein Shaadi Kar leta hoon mujhe bahut acchi lagi....pura parivaar uski baat sunkar hasne laga ...... Aryan bola mei sach kah raha hun itni suder aur qualifed ladki maamji ko nahi milegi agar mein thoda bada hota to usko apne liye Shaadi ke liye maana leta but my bad luck .....sab phir hasne lage aur Aryan ki baat ko seriously nahi liya .

Aryan uthker apne chote mama sateesh se phoocha ki apko ye ladki pasand hai ......to sateesh todha sharama gaya kyonki saare Ghar wale wahin bethe they ..... Aryan phir phoocha to sateesh bola agar pasand hai bhi to uska jawaab bhi to Hain hona chaiye ...... Aryan bola agar ye haan kardegi to Shaadi karloge .... sateesh bola Kar lunga .

Aryan kuch soch kar bola theek hai agar larki me apko haan kah diya to meri choti mami banegi aur na kaha to mein ish sunder ladki se Shaadi karunga  per aab aayegi hamari family mei hi .....sab bilkul saanth hogaye ki Aryan ye Kya bol Raha hai ...... Saroo usko datne lagi ki apni hone wale choti Mami ke liye aisa nahi bolte .......Aryan bola MAA (Rati Devi ko Aryan MAA hi bulata tha) bola thik phir chanda  se hi Shaadi kar loonga aur ye choti mami banegi......sab joor joor se hasne lage (aryan Geeta ko Chanda bulata tha)... Geeta ish samay apne college gayi thi...... Aryan bola hum inko aaj hi millenge kuch bhi karke .
phir Aryan ke jid per sab ladki ko dekhne uske Ghar jaane ko tyaar hoye aur rajveer ne apne dost ko bata Diya .woh bhi khush hua ishi bhane dono parivaar bhi millenge aur raat ka dinner unke yahan fix ho gaya .

RAJVEER pure parivaar ke saath dinner per phoucha aur unka khoob aacha welcome huya ..... Rita ko jab ye baat pata chali to usne bol diya abhi meine koi decision nahi liya aur  aap sabne khaane per bula liya ...... sabne uski request ki....... woh samjhdaar thi aur ghar aaye mehmaan ka sammaan janti thi..... usne ek shart rakhi woh sab unko jab tak ristey ki haan nahi karenge jabtak mein haan na kahun ..... Rita ki maa boli chal ye baat bhi theek per tujhko unke samney woh sab karna hoga jo ladki pasand karne aate hain aur unke bol denge ki jawaab kal denge ....thik hai Rita ko isme koi dosh nahi laga.

Rita ke parivaar wale Aryan ki family ko dekh Kar bahut impress huye per Rati , Saroo aur ARYAN ko dekh ke lagaa koi itna sunder bhi hota  hai . RATI aur Saroo Jahan apsara si sazi dhazzi lag rahi thi per sabki aankhien bus Aryan per tiki thi .... aaj Tak itna sunder aur khoobsurat jawan ladka unlogo ne nahi dekha tha woh black blazer mei koi devta ka avtaar lag Raha tha kissi ke mouh se bol nahi uth rahe they ..... RAJVEER unki halat samjh gaya aur bola ye meri BADI beti Saroo ka beta hai MAHI naam he iska aur isne aaj he 10 mei pora India top kiya hai .....rajveer bole woh dono tumhare nana nani hai jaao dono ka ashirwad lo ..... Aryan aage baadha aur dono ke piar chuya per dono ne usko apne gala lagane ka moka na khoya .....unko laga itna suder jawan baacha kabhi jindgi Mei gale lagne ka moka mile ya na mile , Rita bahut sunder thi but is Aryan ke saamne woh bhi khuch nahi.

sab Ghar mei ander aagaye naasta ho gaya to Rita ko bulane ko kaha . Rita aayi aur sabke saamne sir jhukha ke beth gayi ..... sab uski sundharta dekh Kar mantar mughdh ho Gaye ......Aryan apne chote mama ke kaan mei bola Mamaji ye to bahut sunder hai agar apne inhse Shaadi nahi ki to mein narraz ho jayunga ..... sateesh ye baat jaanta tha ki agar koi Rita se haan karwa sakta hai to woh Aryan hi hai usko pata tha isko koi na Kar hi nahi sakta ..... sateesh bola sab tere haath mei hai usko apni maami banana.... Aryan bola mein unse baat karunga aap ke liye .

RITA ke father bole ladka ladki ko ander le jaayo jisse woh aapas Mei baat kar paye ....sab me haan bola aur Rita aur SATEESH bahar garden mei chale gaye ....Rita ne abhi Aryan ko nahi dekha tha woh apni tension mei thi ......sabkuch jaldi khatam ho aur ish drame se chutkaara mile .

bahar garden mei SATEESH aur Rita dono chup they aur 15 min hogaye koi baat nahi kar raha tha ......dono apni uljanh mei they tabhi Aryan wahan aaya aur bola," mamaji  kahin ladki goongi to nahi" ????

Rita ekdum chok ke sammne dekha to dekhti rah gayi .....ek jawan ladka jo sateesh ki brabra tha koi 20saal ka lag Raha tha aur hase jaa raha tha.... ... usko dekh kar laga koi itna bhi handsome aur dashing ho sakhta hai kya , uska dil uski taraf khicha chala jaa raha tha jaise usko ek baar gale laga le to sukoon aajaye .... uska dil pheli baar kisi ke liye dhadka hai aur sarir bus usko dekh kaamp Raha hai ....woh apni khaylo ki duniya Mei thi sateesh bola ,"RITA .. Rita Rita".tesri baar mei usne suna aur dekha sateesh usko hila Raha hai aur Aryan undono ko dekh raha hai ......Rita phoochi ,"kya hua" .... sateesh bola," MAHI idhar aa" ....Rita apne mann me thoda khush hokar to iska naam mahi hai bahut pyara hai ..... sateesh bola," ye meri badi sister ka beta hai MAHI aur agar tumne mujse Shaadi nahi ki to tumko ish se Shaadi karne padegi ".... Rita boli,"Kya matlab" ??? aur apne mann mei sochi kahin mahi ko gale lagne wali baat in dono sun to nahi ....sateesh bola ,"jab isne tumhara photo dekha to mujshe bola ki Mamaji jaldi aap ish ladki se shaadi karlo nahin to mein kar lunga" aur hasne laga uske saath saath MAHI bhi .....per Jo Rita kisi se nahin sharmati aaj pheli baar sharmai aur has di...

tabhi unko bulane Rita ki choti bhen aayi to sateesh bola," mahi tumse kuch baat karna chaata hai to tum log baat karke aa Jana" ...... Rita phele sateesh ko dekhi phir mahi ko to woh bola ,"sirf 5 min ritaji" .... Rita boli ,ok.

sateesh aur Rita ki bhen ander chale gaye .aab Rita aur MAHI hi garden mei they . .... Rita ko aaj first time nervousness huyi aur khusi bhi itna handsome ladka uske saath hai .... woh abhi kuch sochti ..


(so friends ab dono English mei baat karenge.....)


Mahi ," with ur permission may  I call u Ritaji or Mamiji "...... Rita first time look in mahi blue eyes and first time she feels desire of any man in his life and her pussy felt moistness and urgency of pee .....she told mahi that can he wait for her for 5 mins ......mahi noded yes .

Rita reach in her room as fast as she can and enterd her bathroom and start pissing on western commode and start relieving herself ........ is all this is true first time in my life I fall in love just whom I met 20 mins earlier ...... no he is not the man but dream boy any girl want in his life ......his eyes stares itself make my knee weak .... he is somewhat magicians ..... thakkk thakkk didi Didi  r in their .

Rita say give me 5 mins I m coming out .then after 5 mins she makes presentable and come out and sit on bed and after bringing her self-confidence back and start going towards garden and see nobody was there . she turned back and saw her mother staring at her. ..... "tu yahan Kya Kar rahi hai"...... "woh maa me MAHI se baat karne aayi thi usne bola tha ki mujhse 5 min baat karna chata hai" ...."tu pagal ho gayi hai raat ka 1 baj Raha hai aur tu bol rahi ki mahi se baat karne aayi hai phichle 4 ghante se room mei band thi aur hamari naak katwa di unke samney .... sab tujse milna chaate they tujse kuch baat Kar saken aur dinner karte huye sab ne tera phoocha jab tune door nahin khola to humka laga nararaj hai to unko bol diya ki tumhari ladies wali problem (menstruation )start ho gayi hai aur tum ko fever bhi hai  to Kal answer Kar dengye ".... Rita apni MAA ki baat sunkar shock hogayi aur usey laga ki MAHI se kabhi nahi mil payegi .....uski maa boli chal kuch kha le aur apne room mei araam kar .....Rita apni MAA ke saath ander aayi aur udas Mann se boli ke uska sar dard Kar raha hai aur woh Sona chati hai .

Rita raat bhar sochti rahi aur usko laga ki uska sab kuch choot gaya .....mahi kitna pyara hai woh to mujhse Shaadi karne ko bhi tyaar hai ye sateesh bola tha per abhi uski umer Kya hai per kamse kam 20 saal ka to hoga agar mein 2ya 3 saal wait Kar lun to ussey Shaadi Kar sakti Hoon ........itne sochte huye khush huyi aur faisla Karli ki Kal MAHI se baat karegi ....phir 7 baje ka alaram laga sogayi .

subha  Rita jaldi ready hokar hall se gujri to dekha breakfast table per abhi sirf 7:30 huya hai aur saare parivaar wale Beth Kar chaiye pee rahe they ......uski maa boli ,"kahin kaam se jaa rahi hai". Rita boli," maa mujhe jaana hain jaldi".

Rita apni Alto car nikali aur seedha jaa phouchi ek bade haweli numa Ghar ke gate per...... apni entry kara gate ke pass phouch main door ki bell bajadi .....ek maid ne gate khol usko uper se neeche dekha aur boli,"aap sateesh Bhaiya ki hone wali biwi ho .... sach mei bahut suder ho aap mamsabh aur boli mein sabko batati hun" ..... Rita uska haath pakad aur moh band kar boli ,"agar tune kisi ko bhi bulaya to mein Shaadi nahi karungi" aur usko chod diya........maid Rita ko ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi thi...... Rita boli ,"aab Meri baat dhyan se sun baki sab kahan hai"maid  ,"baki sab so rahen hai dono bade sahab aur chote sahab gaon Gaye hai aur Geeta madam gym gayi hai".

RATI boli," MAHI kahan hai ".......maid uper se neeche tak Rita ko dekhi aur dono hath kamar per rakh kar boli kyon ........Rita ne phoron apna dimag use kiya aur boli ,"kya mujko bhar khada rakhegi aur paani bhi nahi pilaya" ......

......maid sorry bol under chaldi kitchen ki taraf aur Rita usko phusla ke saari baat jaan li aur uske haath se doodh ka glass le usko khuch samjhai ....aur apne gale ki gold chain nikal kar usko gift di aur boli," Meri taraf se gift aur ja security ko bhi bata de Mei nahin aayi hoon samjh gayi" ..... maid boli ,"aap bahot khoobsurat ho dimag wali bhi ho Kya vakil ho , meri bhen ki pati ki jammanat Kara do ..... Rita apne hand bag se khuch 500 ke note uske haath mei rakhke aur boli thodi kadak awaaj mei,"agar tujhe yahan nokri karni hai to Jo mei boli wo kar nahi to mein Shaadi karne baad sabse phela kaam tujhe nokri se nilkalungi per ek baat yaad rakh Mera vishwas banye rakh tujhe jaisa aaj gift mila waisa milte rahe ga ... chal jaa apna moh band rakhna" .

Rita doodh ka glass , toast aur water jag tray me daal mahi ke room per  jaa kar phele halke se knock ki phir kuch dair baad ......jab usne dehka koi reaction nahi aaya door ka nobh ghuma push Kiya woh open ho gaya .....Rita khus hokar ander enter ki aur room dekh kar uska mouh khula rah gaya . ...... sabkuch hifi tha aur usko koi female voice suni Jo phone pe baat Kar rahi thi .....Rita aaju baju dekh phale door band ki kyonki usko laga koi stairs chad uper aa raha hai ....

Rita ne jaldi se tray sofa table per rakhi aur ek closet khol ander khadi ho gayi .... tabhi RATI aayi aur MAHI ke mathe per kiss kiya aur bedroom ka door khol bhar chali gayi ........ Rita apne mann mei sochi bach Gayi ......Rita closet se bhar aayi aur gheri saanse lene lagi .......tabhi uska cellphone pe tunnn .....tunnnnn... message ki awaj aayi Jo uske handbag mei tha ....jaldi apna phone nikal usko silent per daali aur handbag table per rakhi jha usne mahi ki nastey ki tray rakhi thi aur jaldi se MAHI ke pass jaa bedside khadi hogayi aur jo najara dekha bus statue ban ke rah gayi .

usko apne hosh sambhale mei 5 min lage aur phir neeche jhuk kar mahi ke mathe per kiss ker di ye uski gati thi ya saaza .....?????

ek second se bhi kam samay mei wo mahi ki seene per leti thi aur cheekh bhi nahi payi ..... soja MAA bola aur mahi uska sar shalaa Raha tha aur chote baache ki tarah halka halka thapthap raha tha..... Rita ko uski seene se lag Kar bada sakoon mila . aur uski pakad se thodi der baad dhere se nikli aur uske gaal per ek kiss ki ..... usko hila kar uthne lagi.

MAHI apne bed per Rita ko betha dekh Kar chonk gaya aur seedha beth gaya....rita apne lips per finger rakh usko chup rehne ka ishara ki..... aur ja Kar door lock kar boli ,""good morning" MAHI"".

MAHI usko good morning wish kiya aur phoocha ,"aap room me kaise aai" ..... Rita boli ,"badi muskil se sabse chipkar aayi hoon tum se kal ke liye sorry bolne .... please mujhe maaf kar do maine tumko wait karne ka bol kar nahi mil saki" .

MAHI bola," it's ok aab aap ki tabyeet kaisi ha fever to nahi" .... Rita boli I m absolutely fine khud dekho tumhare room mei hoon , phir boli breakfast kar lo phir hum bhar ghoome chalte hain ".

MAHI uth kar washroom gaya edher Rita  sofe per beth table se newspaper utha kar dekhi ........ki MAHI ki photo front page per hai aur niche all India cbse board topper likha hai .... usne paper ki date check ki to aaj ki thi . usko vishwaas nahi ho raha tha ki MAHI ne all India level per top kiya 10th Mei ....woh pori details padh rahi thi to uski date of birth bhi pata chali aur uska mahi ke saath zindgi bitane ka sapna choor choor ho gaya , jisko woh 20 saal ka samjhi, woh to abhi 16 saal ka bhi nahi huya , sayad ht aur built jaada hai to age ka pata na chala aur dukhi ho gayi pheli baar kisi ko dekh kar laga ki iska hi wait Kar rahi thi par nahi woh usse kooso meel dour tha ....



tabhi MAHI washroom se aaya aur table per beth gaya aur glass se doodh peeta toast kaha raha tha aur Rita ke sunder chere per bhi kabhi kabhi dekhta ,aab woh itni khush nahi lag rahi thi .....Rita usko ready hone ka boli to wo ready hokar Rita ke saath neeche aaya ....jaise hi dono main gate per phouche hi they..........to saare mahi ki gharwale aur Rita ke gharwale khade they .

sab Rita ko Ghar ke ander Dekh kar shocked they ...... Rita phale ghabra gayi per turaant usne apna dimag use kar boli," good morning !!! mujhe MAHI ko kuch gift dilwana hain uske top karne ki khushi me , hum dono abhi ek ghante me laut aayenge aur jaldi chalo MAHI nahi to late ho jaayege ".

koi kuch phooch paata tab tak Rita mahi ka haath pakdkar apne saath lugbhag bhagati hui le gayi .....saare Ghar wale ek doosre ko dekh rahe they . Rita ki maa boli ,"hum sabko urgent bolkar yahan mahi ko gift dilwane aayi thi agar phele bolti to hum usko saath le aate ".......... tabhi RATI boli," woh sayad MAHI ko surprise dena chaati ho , per aaj hamare Ghar aakar usne ye jaata Diya ki woh Shaadi ke liye interested to hai "....... maze ke saath Geeta boli ,"haan per sateesh Bhaiya ke saath nahi mahi ke saath "aur hasne lagi .......sab ke chere ka rang badal gaya per sateesh bhi haskar bola," koi baat nahi bahu to hamare ghar ki banegi aur tu apni sautan ki tyaari Kar le" .....ab Geeta chid gayi ,"agar kisne mahi se shaadi karne ki koshish ki to us ladki ki tang tod dungi" aur gussey se uthkar chali gayi .....phir Saroo (MAHI Mother) me baat sambhali aur boli ,"Geeta aur mahi khoob apas me nok jhok karte hain kal Rita ka photo dekh mahi sateesh se majak me bola ki aap ish ladki se Shaadi jaldi karlo nahi to mein kar lunga , bas usi baat ka maazak ye dono kar rahe they. MAHI to abhi 10 pass Kiya hai uski shaadi mei bahut time hai abhi . to aap sab in baato ka bura mat manna" ....... Rita ka maa boli ,"baache mazaak karte hi hain lekin beti jaisi tum sunder aur sushil ho waise hi tumhara beta bahut honaar aur hashmukh hai usko dekh Kar dil chaata hai bas usko dekhte raho bahut cute aur handsome hai" ....... Rati boli," Mera MAHI lakho Mei ek hai" .

Edher Rita jaldi se apni car kholi aur MAHI ko jaldi car me bethne ko boli aur tezi se car chala di phir kuch der me relax huyi ki koi pheeche nahi hai....... MAHI bahut der se sab araam se observe kar raha tha per chup tha . Rita ek park ke pass car park ki aur phir dono ander chale gaye ...... dono park Mei jaa ek ped ke neeche padi bench per beth gaye to Rita boli," sorry .... wo is tarah jaldi jaldi tum ko yahan le aayi kuch baat karne ke liye .......and congratulations for becoming India topper your r so intelligent and tallented I m very much impressed ". usse mahi se haath mila kar congrats kari . MAHI ne usko thanks kaha aur phir kuch rukkar bola ,"ye baat to aap Ghar per bhi Kar sakti thi mujhe laga kahin aap mujhe apne saath bhaga ke le ja rahi hain ha ha ha ha" ....

RITA bhi haskar ,"kuch aisa hi samjah lo ki meine tumko sab ke saamney bhaga kar layi hoon" ......."acha woh kis liye" ARYAN phoocha . Rita uski aankoo me dekh Kar ,"kyonki mujhe tum bahut aache lage agar mei kahun agar tum meri age ke hotey to mein tumse shaadi karti "........"koi baat nahin phele aap maamji se Shaadi Kar lo aur jab mei bada ho jayon tab mujhse Kar Lena mujhe bhi aap bahut aachi lagi "aur Rita ke gaal per kiss kar diya ........ Rita usko pyar se sar per chapt lagai aur uske aur pass sark kar uske khandhe per apna sar rakhkar boli ,"mein bhale hi tumhare Mama se Shaadi karon per tum mujko apne dost aur lover ki tarah pyar karna . " MAHI Rita ke maathe ko choom Kar ,"bola per hum abhi lover Kahan bane "....... Rita uske gaal per kiss kar thoda kaati ,"phele dost to banno samjhe phir dekhenge ki tum lover ban sakto ki nahin" ......mahi bola ,"Chalo aacha aaj se hum aache dost ....ab to sateesh Mamaji se shaadi Kar lo woh apko bahut pasand karte Hain aur apko bahut kush rakhenge ".

Rita boli," ek sharat per aab mein tum ko shopping karaungi aur tumko jo gift dogi woh pyar se logo bolo "......... MAHI ,"done choti mammiji ". Rita usko jab chpat lagne lagi to woh haskar bhaag pada aur Rita uske pheeche daud padi kuch doori per dono ruke aur haath pakdkar saath chal diye jaise bahut purane dost ya lover ho . .....phir Rita usko mall se kai Jodi kapde aur special wrist watch gift ki . MAHI na na karta raha per woh na maani uske baad dono ne pizza khaya aur bhaar ki aur chal diye ....... itne mei MAHI ka phone baja to uski mom phoochi kab aa rahe ho to bola bas 15 min ...... Rita ko mahi bola ,"sab ghar bula rahen hain aur apka phone kahan hai" . Rita ne jab dekha uska phone silent hai 20 miss call sab gharwalo ki thi ....... Rita ne apni MAA ko call kiya to woh Rita per bhadak gayi ,"tera dimang kharabh hai subha subha inke Ghar Bina kisi ko pata lag phouch gayi ....woh bhi sabse chipkar mahi ke kamre gayi aur usko lekar yahan uski family ke samney se bhag gayi , aur teen ghante ho gaye na phone utha rahi kitne call kiye , jaldi se MAHI ko lekar yahan aa samjhi" aur call cut ho gayi .

Rita boli ,"mahi jaldi chalo Ghar per sab wait kar rahen hai "......aur 15 min me Ghar ke pass phouchkar Rita car rooki ," MAHI tum Ghar jayo aur sabko bol dena mein tumko drop karke chali gayi". MAHI bola ,"aap bhi Chalo na sab bahut khush honge  pls Chalo na ." ........" nahi mahi aab mein tumhare ghar Shaadi ke baad aanogi samjhe" ...... MAHI bola ,"per aaj subha to aai thi phir kya hua koi kuch nahi bolega ".....
Rita usko samjhai ,"dekho mahi subha mein tumhare ghar tumhari dost ban ker aayi aur aab tumhare ghar tumhari maami bankar aayongi Shaadi ke baad ".......mahi bola ,"chalo theek hai per mein apni dost se milne jaroor aayonga "aur uske gaal per kiss kiya ...... Rita usko hug ki aur usko kiss ki boli," I will miss  u my best friend" ....uski aankho Mei nami thi.

uske baad woh apni car lekar mahi ko bye kahkar chali gayi aur mahi apne saare shopping bags aur gifts lekar drawing hall mei phoucha tab sab bethe baat Kar rahe they aur aachank chup hokar dekna MAHI naye jeans aur t-shirt ,black goggls new shoes aur nayi wrist watch phene ander aa raha hai aur hath mei kayi sare shopping bags hain.

mahi ek khali sofe per bag rakhar beth gaya aur bola koi mujko paani pilwao .... tabhi RATI uske pani lekar di aur uske pass beth gayi aur boli ,"shopping karke thak gaya" woh khada hokar bola," MAA me kaisa lag Raha hun" . RATI usko pyar se dekhte huye kaha," bikul kisi desh ke rajkumar ki tarah "....... tabhi Rita ki MAA phouchi ki Rita Kahan hai ......mahi bola ,"woh to apne ghar chali gayi mujko phele shopping karyi pizza khilaya aur uske baad mujko Ghar drop karke" ......


sab harian huye Rita ke behavior per aab kya Karan....... RATI mahi ko apne pass betne ko boli aur uske sar per haath pher uske gaal per kiss kar boli tune usko shopping ke liye mana nahi kiya ........ MAHI bola," Mein to kai baar bola ki mein ye sab nahi lunga to woh mujko hamari nayi dosti ki kasam di,  phir bhi main nahi maana to woh boli agar mein nahi Mana to Meri choti maami nahin banegi to meine is promise ke saath gifts le liye ke woh meri choti Maami jaroor banengi , ab tu bol MAA mein kya karta ......


MAHI ki baat puri hote hi sab khusi se khil uthye tabi Rita ki maa boli ,"mahi Rita ne sachmuch tumko promise Kiya ".....mahi bola ,"tabhi to woh Ghar ke ander nahi aayi aur mujko boli subha wo hamare Ghar mujko sorry bolne aayi thi phir ham dono ki friendship huyi aur baad me jab Meri maami banene ko ready hogayi aur uske baad boli aab mein tumhare ghar tumhari choti maami bankar aayongi ".......


Rita ki maa ne side per jaakar rita ko call kar baat confirm ki aur sabse phele table se meethai utha sabse phale MAHI ko khilaai aur usko khoob ashirwad di aur kush hokar appne gale laga li ..... Rita ki maa boli ,"mahi tune wo kaam kiya hai Jo hum nahi Kar paate aaj mein Teri vajah se bahut khush hoon" ..........tabhi RATI boli ,"bhenji meine kaha tha aapse MAHI ko koyi na nahi kah sakta aur Rita to khud uski dost ban gayi phir to kaise iski baat taalti per mahi tujhe nahin lagta tune apni mammi ka jaada kharcha kara diya" ......Rita ki MAA boli ,"abhi kahan shopping huyi isbaar saari shopping mein khud mahi ko karongi ab ye mera bhi laadla beta hai "...... mahi bola," mein apni dost ko jo mujhe prize money milega usse shopping karwa donga" ...


uske baad Rita aur SATEESH ki engagement phir shaadi ho gayi ish dauran rita ko mahi ke Roop me ek saacha dost mila aur pyar to usko phele hi din mahi se hogaya tha ....... mahi ke name change ke time usney bade intelligently sabko samjha kar uska naam Aryan rakh diya .


Rita ne apne fil ko samjha liya aur usne faisla kiya ki MAHI (ARYAN) ko sabse kabil aur successful banegi aur uski best friend bankar rahe gayi

[Dmahi19]

Thanks  to all your r comments and suggestions my friends ..

Read this new update and post ur views .

[Dolly99]

ARTAM AUR RITA KEE MASTI BAHUT PASAND AAEE..GREAT..

[bhukhalund]

Nicely written update. Narration was good so was love betwwen Aryan and Rita . 

Very nice , keep it up .

[omkarkumar2001]

Nice updates

[Dmahi19]

ARTAM AUR RITA KEE MASTI BAHUT PASAND AAEE..GREAT..

Thanks and ready for more fun

[Dmahi19]

Nice updates

Thanks

[Dmahi19]

Nicely written update. Narration was good so was love betwwen Aryan and Rita . 

Very nice , keep it up .

Thanks and keep posting ur views..

[Salman haidar]

Nice update

[vkf]

good start and good going

[Salman haidar]

Waiting

[ramumargaya]

Waiting

[Demon King]

Nice update Rita aur Aryan ki kahani bohat zabardast thi.