15-07-2019, 11:53 AM
Amazing update. Maza a gya. Jasmeen is really wild and seductive. The rain scene is amazing.
(14-07-2019, 11:50 PM)Waliaz Wrote: Wow bro..! Update is really sexy . I love how you have described the feelings of jasmeen. Vicky is an interesting character. I am also very eager to find how that that totka done by ramu will effect everyone . Hats off to your for this wonderful update.Yes.. ramu ta totka kam krna chahida... njara aajau
(15-07-2019, 05:25 PM)The Blue Prince Wrote: Amazing update and precise narration. I would love to see this story as adultery. But i also want that you should yourself decide the genre of the story according to your plot.
(15-07-2019, 07:46 PM)Radha sharma Wrote: Sareya ne kr lena plot select bs ji tuhanu chhad k ... jehda plot tuhada best tuc tan ohnu e ni chhed skde
(14-07-2019, 11:33 PM)Radha sharma Wrote: Bhot vdhia update... pr hun jdli kreyo agge.. sareya ne navneet aala scene expect kitta hoya c.. jldi w usnu v likho... jasmeen ne njara lya ta pr ohdi virginity ohde bf kolo na tudvayo.