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Adultery Intehah................(A Tale Of Lust)
Nice update
waiting for another
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Good going.. Waiting for more.. And more n more
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(11-07-2019, 05:28 PM)Jaan Wrote: Mast update ajay bhai..!  yourock
Thanks yaara.....saath bane rahiyega


(11-07-2019, 07:20 PM)Silverstone93 Wrote: Very good update. Agla update jaldi dena. Ram ko bhi mauka milana chahiye .

Usey bhi mauka milega yaara saath bane rahiyega
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Dear Ajay,
Your writing style is commendable.
The way of narrative is superb.
Characterization was spot-on.
You have that x-factor in your stories which titillates the reader to the core.
The seduction and self-seduction of kavya was put in words splendidly.
Also the filthy language which opens up kavya's carnal desires was aptly used.
The start of Kavya's sexcapades was good.......!
Hope to read more of these....

P.S.: I would like you to repost your story MARYADA- A tale of lust in PDF if possible.

FROM A FAN of yours.
mraj1
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(12-07-2019, 11:38 AM)Ajaykumar82 Wrote: Thanks yaara.....saath bane rahiyega



Usey bhi mauka milega yaara saath bane rahiyega

Oh noooooo yar plzzzz... Ye ram boring item ko dur rakho yar story se... Bari mushkil se story ne rhythm pakra hai ap phr ram k peeche lag gae.... Plzzzzz noooo
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Waiting for next ajay bhai..!
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(12-07-2019, 04:33 PM)Zee khan Wrote: Oh noooooo yar plzzzz... Ye ram boring item ko dur rakho yar story se... Bari mushkil se story ne rhythm pakra hai ap phr ram k peeche lag gae.... Plzzzzz noooo

Ajay Bhai seriously mai bhi nhi cahta ki aap Ram par kuch likho.. Ram bas ek supporting role mai rehna cahiye and main leads Raghu and Jeetu ko he rehme do. I hope aap aple reader's ki demand ko samjh rahe ho..
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Superb one.
Make ram character more bold and interesting from a shy guy to a playboy
Make kavya fuck with ram in front of raghu
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Superb! Awesome! Fantastic update!
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Superbb
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Jaha tak lagta hae bhai log ram kuch jyada avi nai kr paega..  Qki avi ushka shuruvat hae kamya ko aur garam kr k chod dega jisse raghu ko madad milegi..! Shayed ab ajay bhai hi bata shakty hae ram ko nikalna hae ki nai..!
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Waiting ajay bhai
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Ekdom lajawab aur behad kamuk update dhiya aapne bhai
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Waiting
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(13-07-2019, 07:41 PM)Jaan Wrote: Waiting ajay bhai

(14-07-2019, 06:19 AM)Ajgupta Wrote: Waiting

bhai in dinon thodi tabiyaat kharab chal rahi hain is wajah se yahan nahin aa paa raha hoon........ek do din mein update de dunga..........samjha karo yaaron.......
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(14-07-2019, 08:22 AM)Ajaykumar82 Wrote: bhai in dinon thodi tabiyaat kharab chal rahi hain is wajah se yahan nahin aa paa raha hoon........ek do din mein update de dunga..........samjha karo yaaron.......

Ok bhai health ka dhyan rakho bhai ..! Thik ho jao fhir Update krna
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bahut khoob Ajay bhai,ekdom lajawab update1 bahut bahut maza aya.
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Ajay bhai aap itna ache se likh rahe ho ki apke taarif karne ke liye shabdh dundna mushkil ho raha hai. Take care of your health bro.
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You are really great Ajay bhai.Your every update is very much pleasurable.
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Ashadaran, super sexy story.Extraordinary narration
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