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Incest Sohni Punjaban ( ਸੋਹਣੀ ਪੰਜਾਬਣ )
Waiting for the update bro.
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still waiting for update
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update
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Nahi time hai ga te thread delete mar de
Var var check te na karni pau
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Lkhak di kahani de agle ansh de intezaar vich.
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Bro plz update
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(12-07-2019, 09:44 AM)ghost19 Wrote: Thanx veer ji please aaj shaam nu update jaroor karna pls

(12-07-2019, 12:35 PM)Ghaintjatt1 Wrote: waitingggg

(12-07-2019, 08:51 PM)ghost19 Wrote: Veer ji kardo kripa

(12-07-2019, 09:58 PM)Preet Sukh Wrote: Ji krdo hun updaye

(12-07-2019, 10:18 PM)Hello523 Wrote: Update waiting

(13-07-2019, 12:02 AM)Radha sharma Wrote: Kidhr aa o vddi update

Hanji friends bas huni kar reha update.
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(12-07-2019, 01:30 PM)Radha sharma Wrote: Baki sb ehna ne shi keha bs kde v is story nu incest na banyo... tang aaye pye aan sb story incest ..
Story di jan nikl jani incest ton.
Baki niki kudi nu  peo de dostan nal krvao .. k o ghr aaun te chhed chhat hou kudi nal

Okk ji...main hun change kar ditta hai plot ji.
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(13-07-2019, 03:38 AM)Blank Wrote: Bai ek correction karni a... Genre ta tu "INCEST" ditta par hje tak koi v "INCEST " seen ni aya.... na kite koi gall hoi a.. ek jagah bas Kuldeep nu ohde dosta ne kaha ohdiya Dheea bare... par oh just ek gal hi c... mere vang shyad kyi jane confusion ch a.. ke story "Adultery " a ke "INCEST "  ???

Te duji gal bai 1 sex seen likhya tu... hje tak .. ohde ch Sirf kuldeep ki feel kar oh dasya... jahdi kudi nal oh kar raha ohdi ta tu koi feeling ni likhi... just ena likhya kudi nu maza aun lagga... bas ... sex seen nu bhut improvement di lod a.. bai... je vadiya lagge ta.. dasi.... correction jrur kardi uppar jo kaha mai

je kuch hoya ta.. pakka dasu.,,, baki all good a..

Thank you so much veer jo tusi story dhyaan nal parhi and apna review ditta. Tuhade naal main poori tarah naal ehmat haan and niche jawaab main de reha haan ...

1) Bilkul sahi keha veer k main genre incest likhya hai par story ch hale tak koi incest da scene nahin aaya. Reason eh hai ki pehla eh story incest hi likhi si and hun vi incest hi likh reha si par phir incest di supply jyada hon karke main plot change kar ditta hain. Pehla is story ch ik character si jehra pure incest si . Par hun eh story incest nahin hougi. Main isda genre change kar dena hai ji. Eh adultery hougi story hun.

2) Hanji veer ik sex scene aaya hai kyunki veer ik-do nu shaddd ke meri story de characters thode '. kism de hai jo aini jaldis sex ch nahin fass sakde jiskarke sex scenes ghatt hai. And jehra kuldeep vala sex scene si us ch kudi valo tan nahin dasseya kyunki oh kudi gasti ( Prostitute) si and meri story da main character kuldeep hai. Iskarke kuldeep de point of view toh dasseya hai. 

Baaki veer jo hor v kamiyan hai jaroor dsseo. Main shai karda rahuga. Bahut bahut dhanwaad veer.
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(13-07-2019, 09:52 AM)ghost19 Wrote: Veer ji aaj taa mausam vi bada sexy hai please aaj jaldi hi update Karo please sadda KLPD no ho jaawe

(13-07-2019, 05:06 PM)Waliaz Wrote: Waiting for the  update bro.

(13-07-2019, 07:35 PM)jatt22 Wrote: still waiting for update

(13-07-2019, 10:28 PM)manpreetaj Wrote: update

(13-07-2019, 11:27 PM)SKELTON Wrote: Lkhak di kahani de agle ansh de intezaar vich.

(14-07-2019, 09:14 AM)Harryjatt Wrote: Bro plz update

Bas huni aa reha update doston.
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(13-07-2019, 10:32 PM)Bhullar Wrote: Nahi time hai ga te thread delete mar de
Var var check te na karni pau

Veer kayi vaar banda kama karrach busy vi ho janda jiskrke update likh nahi hundi . Par main roz iskrke reply karda rehna ki sarya nu pata rahe ki writer haiga hai. Kyunki veer reply karn ch tan 1-2 minute hi masi lagde par update likhan layi 1-2 hours chahide oh v koi v disturb na kar reha hove.
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Incest ni to to fir kya
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(14-07-2019, 11:25 AM)Raja156 Wrote: Incest ni to to fir kya

Veer main soch reha Adultery kar dava story. Tusi incest read karna chahunde ho?
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Veer ji shukar aa tusi aa gaye sadda taa dil bada ghabra riha si
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waitingggg
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Doston meri next update bahut important hai. Us vich story da genre change ho skda hai. Iskrke mainu eh dsso tusi is story nu pure incest read krna pasand kroge ya Pure Adultery. Ya phir mix incest + adultery.

Doston please reply Jaroor krna tanki story phir us genre de according hi challe.
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Incest plus adultery kardo
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Saare readers happy ho jaange
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Adultry
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Jive marji likh de bai par likh
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