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Sat Shri Akal dosto Main tuhada Apna Sarpanch bhut der ton ethe judeya hoya han. Odo eh site da naam exbii hunda c bhut sare reader te writer mnu jaande v hoonge par main filhal apni pachaan nahi dssaga tusi meriya stories padhke khud idea laa lena ki main kon han.
Bki es thread te apa punjabi short stories likhage hafte ch ik kahani jo ki mehaz 3 ton 5 updates tak hoyegi oh apa puri karan di koshish krage. Main khud job krda te family person a is krke update vich deri ho skdi hai islai thoda adjust tusi b kr lena dosto. Par eni gurranty de skda ki jo v likhaga tuhada kachya ch paani kdhwaun lai majboor karn wala hoyega. Baki pehli story da pehla update bhut jalad post kranga. Odo tak comments vich apne sujhaav jarur deyo te guess kro ki main kon a.... Odo tak lai Sat Shri Akal Tharkiyoo...
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13-07-2019, 08:52 AM
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Kamal apne kamre ch fullan nal sze bed te bethi c te baahan ch paya laal chooda te usde gundwe sareer te kassya laal lehnga is gal di gawahi bhar reha c ki ajj usdi suhaagraat c. Kamal de dil ch thoda ja dar v c par usto kite jada khushi c apne viah di te usda gharwala v sohna uchaa lamma sardar mileya c. Kamal mappeya di kallo dhee c te pindo bahar kheta ch 2 knaal di kothi pai hoi c. Baap fauz cho major retier hoke aya c te ghardi 20 kille jameen v c. Is karke paise takke si ohna nu koi ghaat nahi c. Kamal de maa peyo di viah lai iko sharat c ki munda vaishnoo howe te sade ghar ake ghar jawai bannke rahe. rishte ta bhut aunde c par ohna nu dar eh c koi sadi jameen te kothi dekh laalchi banda ethe naa aa jawe is krke oh v har kadam sochke puttde san. Aakhir ik rishte di dass pai te dekh dkhai hoi ta Harinder nu usde maa peyo ne psand kar hi leya. Harinder jisda kacha naam harry c uchaa lamma sohnaa ji paggbannan wala sardar c usde chehre di laali usde sofi hon di gawahi bhardi c. Aakhir puchh padtal kiti gai ta v harry apne dasse mutabik khara hi nikleya. Rishtaa pakka hoyaa te viah hon ton bad aakhir suhagraat wala din aa geya. Harry nu sohre ghar ake rehna ajeeb lag reha cpar usnu ptaa c hun ethe hi adjust hona pena a othe hi kamal lai thoda kam aasan c kiunki usda eh apna hi ghar c ethe hi jamm ke khed di hoi oh jawan hoi c. Kamal bethi ehi soch rahi c ki kiwe kal diya hi gallan jdo oh pind diya galliya ch bhajji firdi hundi c par ajj kise di vahuti bnn sehagraat ali sez te bethi c. Usdi sochaa di tand nu darwaze te hoi dastak ne todeya te ehi dastak usdi dil di dhadkan vdhaa gai. Usne thoda jiyaa ghund cho akhan chkk upr dekhya ta samne harry kurtaa pajama pai khada c. Jiwe hi halke kadma nal harry us wal vadhya ta usde sareer ch kambbni jehi chhid gai...
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I love to read short stories. Nice start.
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I think you missed one name on the poll list that is of "The Blue Prince. " He was expert in writing sexy thrilling erotic short stories.
Apart from him i have read few good stories of sexy reet also. Punjab de patole or Main cheez badi hun mast mast. They were really good ones.
One more story romantic of kavita khullar was also amazing.
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Congrats for the story. For me all writers are best.
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Ajj isda next update ayega dosto sham tak ??
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