Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story

[kavitakhullar]

'Kehar singh waps aa riha'  beithak ch beitha mehar singh  apney putt pali wal vekhda burburaya'  eh Kidan'
'Haan bapu'  kehar singh wal vekhda pali bolea'  chachi aap gyi a hwayi addey chachey nu lain'
'Ehi tan mein ..' kuch sochda mehar singh pali wal vekhda bolea'  raman aap gyi kehar nu lain hwayi addey o tan kehar nu ..'
'Aho bapu'  naldi haveli wal vekhda pali bolea'  haveli ch saff sfayi b edan ho rahi a jiven koi viah rakheya hovey. ..'
'Menu tan lagda e nyi c kehar singh bahrley mulk gya hoyea awen teri chachi pind nu eh sab ..' kehar singh di haveli wal vekhda mehar singh bolea'  j gya c tan b ajeha ki changa kar ditta kehar Singh ney raman lyi jehri o aap  usnu lain hwayi addey gyi a'
'Ki ho gya peo putt kehria sochn ch dubey hoye ney'   kol andi rano unha nu cha dey gilas frandi boli'  ah layo cha peo'
'O bibi chachi chachey nu lain hwayi addey gyi a'  rano wal vekhda pali bolea
'Kehar singh aa riha'  apney aap e awaz ch khanak aa gyi rano di fer kuch sochdi ek dum boli'  raman gyi a usnu lain'
'Aho ehi tan mein soch riha eh puthey passeyo chan kiven nikln lga  'rano wal vekhda mehar singh bolea  'eni ankhi janani aap javey usnu lain eh tan kehar nu munh la k b nyi khush ..'
'Pta nyi kahdi eni akad a esnu ena sau a kehar Singh'  munh brings
krdi boli rano par ek cha jeha chadeya hoyea c usnu kehar dey aan da sun ..Kinney mahiney ho gye c usnu vekhey nu .....
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Car ch beithey pind di sadak wal mud dey e apney pind di mitti di mehak nal chehak uthea debu..kinney mahinia baad o apney pind dean gallean.. ghar vekh  riha c ...ruh nu sakoon milia ohi pind ohi pind dean gallia jithey jum.. khed k jwan hoyea c .. cha nal kolon langdey  ek ek bandey wal vekhda pr hairan koi us wal vekh k b usnu awaz na marda na e bulanda.. kuch c jehna nal akhn mildia pr o jhuk k aadar ijjat satkaar  dey chup chup us wal vekhdey...  apney munh tey hath ferdey nu chetey aya ohhh  o debu nyi koi hor a  ..
shyad apney pind di miti di khusboo.. waps aan di khushi c jehri usdey dukh nu b es velley ek passey luko muskuran di himmat dey rahi c  eney mahiney eko kamrey ch kaid usnu tan eh b pta nyi lagda c din kado hoyi tey rat kad hoyi...
Samneyo cycle tey andey inder nu vekh apney aap nu rok na sakeya car ton sar bahr kad awaz marn e lga c k ramanjot ney usdi wanh fad usnu rok lya.....chah k b awaz na maar sakeya tey inder usney b usnu vekheya tan c par bolea kuch na jad akhn milia usdea debu nal cycle rok hath jod us wal vekhda lang gya..
'Keha c na tenu ethey koi nyi  pehchaan payouga'  ek jit bhari muskaan muskurandi ramanjot us wal vekhdi boli'  haveli aan wali a .. waisey tan  tun sab nu janda pehchanda haveli ch fer b ghat boli tey mehar singh jad milan ayo udon khass khiyal rakhin... tenu vekh sab ton jyada takleef usnu e honi ... mein b sab nu keh dayoungi ...safr ton thakeya a kal miluga..
'Ji  'ena bol haveli dey gate wal vekhn lga jithey kayi janey khadey shyad unha di e udeek kr rahey c ...

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'Eh tera kamra ... kehar singh ethey e rehnda c ...' ek wadey sarey kamrey ch lya debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli'  aj ton tun ethey e rahunga  ..
'Ji .. 'kamrey ch edr udr vekhda debu ena keh chup kr gya ...samj nyi aa rahi c ki kahey kathputli wang bs usdi har gal tey ji keh sar hila dinda ... kafi aukha c uslyi haveli ch lokan nu milna shukr c ramanjot usnu eh keh kamrey ch lay ayi k hun aram karo thakey hovongey kal mil layeo sarea nu ..usney tan aap shukr manayea nyi tan jidan samney beitha mehar singh usnu ghur riha c akh milani aukhi c usyi mehar singh naal ...
'Aram kr hun ..' us wal vekhdi ramanjot boli'  bs edan e ghat bolna sarea nal tey thori akhad jehi awaz ch gal krni .. shak nyi hona chahida kisi nu ..kehar singh eney pyar nal kisi nal nyi bolda c jidan tun bol riha c ...tenu samjaya b c apni gal krn da tareeka tey saleeka bdl ...
'Ji  'fer sar hilanda debu bolea
' ..  j kisi cheez di lod hoyi kisi nu b awaz mar lawin' ena keh kamrey ton bahr nikl kuch soch  sattey wal vekhdi boli  'meri gal suni aa k'
'Channo nu keh debu nu miley'   bahr aa sattey wal vekhdi ramanjot boli
'Ji hukm'  sar jhukayi khada satta holi jehi bolea
'Es lyi kisi  chakmi  jehi run da intzaam karey'  edr udr vekhdi ramanjot boli
Kuch na bolea satta thora hairaan hoyea ramanjot wal vekhn lga
'Hairaan kyoun hunda a .. viahia hoyea banda a 7/8 mahiney vohti  ton dur riha  ' sattey wal vekhdi ramanjot kuch sochdi boli' uton gabru jwaan kuch jismani jarurartn b hundia  ney bandey dean ...es ton pehln k o apni vohti matlab preet nu milan ja fer us kol jaan di sochey usdi eh jarurt channo nu keh kisi ton puri karwa ...'
'Ji hukam'  ena keh   bina kuch hor boley bahr nu nikl gya satta


Hairaan reh gya debu channo nu apney kamrey ch vekh  eh andr kidan buha tan band a pr samjdey der na lgi jad usney kamrey dey dujey buhey wal vekheya.. palang tey beith us wal vekh kehn tan lga c channo massi tusi ethey fer ek dum apney aap nu sambhal awaz bhari krda bolea'  channo tun ethey ..'
'Ki krn sardar ji jad da pta lageya tusi bahrley mulk ton mud aye o ghar dil nyi lag riha c sochea mil e awan sardar ji nu'  hasdi hoyi plang kol aa khadi hundi channo us wal vekhdi boli ..' shyad sardar ji nu kisi cheez di lor hovey ..'
Hadbda e gya channo nu eni kol khadi vekh .. pta tan c usnu b channo pind di chalu run a .. pr o us kol usdey kamrey  ohhh ..achank chetey aya kehar singh da es naal b ..  berukha jeha ho bolea' aj thakeya hoyea aram karna! '
'Mere sardar ji thakkey honey esi lyi tan  hazir hoyi haan  'agey nu jhuk apney mummeya di jhatti marwandi channo bullan tey jeev ferdi boli'  pta menu sardarni  nal tan tuhadi nibhdi nyi ..'
Kuch ns bolea debu ekela kamrey ch tey samney luchi run vekhn ch b theek thak ..jism ch luki aag bharkn jehi lgi ... kinney mahnia ton ekela e kamrey ch kaid tey aj usdey samney run khadi njrn usdea beimaan ho channo dey jhattia mardey mummeya tey ja tikia lun harkt krn lga uton jidan bulln tey jeev ferdi usdey upr nu jhukdi channo usdean akhn ch vekh luchi muskaan muskursndi us wal vekh rahi c jism ek khumari ch dubn jeha lga..
'Bahrley mulk ch tan changia gorria chaudea honeya sardar ji'  apna mumma debu dey modey tey ragardi akh matkandi boli'  sadi yad kitho ayi honi..'
Samj na ayi ki jwaab dwvey par jism usda akdn lga boli e eni khul k c channo lun  tan jhatka lay funkar uthea
'Pr ek gal a sardar ji'  debu dey pattan ch akad dey lun wal vekh akh mardi channo boli'  punjabi fudi da apna e swad hunda ..'
'Eh tan hay'  Sah nigl hauka lenda bolea debu  channo dean gallan tey akhn dey ishareya ney usdey andr sutti pyi luki hoyi agg nu tan jiven hwa la diti .... c tan channo  umar ch uston  wadi par jism ajay b ena ku katil tan c k 7/8 mahinia ton suttey pye lun andr chingari la sakey
'Esi lyi taan ayi haan sardar ji tuhadey kol'  akhn matkandi channo sidi khadi hundi boli'  es baar ajehi jatti hazir karungi .. channo nu chetey karongey ... aag a agg ..'
'Ohhh  'ek dum jiven neend ton jageya  debu ...
'Enam ch sau rupey deney painey tuhanu ..' akhn matkandi channo hasdi hoyi  boli
Samj na ayi  debu nu ki jwaab devey eh tan kisi hor di gal krn ayi a
'Sau rabb di j tuhada dil khush na hoyea menu channo na kaheyo'  debu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli'  puri raat nyi sondey tusi  '
'O tan menu pta tera channo  'akhir kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea'  es baar b vekh lenda kehri sheh...'
'Pta lag jayouga tuhanu'  hasdi hoyi channo boli'  bas huney bhejdi haan ..'
'Udeek karunga'  channo nu dujey buhey rahi bahr jandi vekh debu bolea
'Jyada udeek nyi krni payougi'  buhey tey khad us wal vekhdi boli'  sau rupey ...'
'Haan haan kyoun nyi ..' es baar tan sub bhul debu b khumari josh aa bolea'  bhej tan sahi ...'

Akhn debu dean buhey tey e lagea c .. jism josh ch akad riha c thori der pehln channo di lyi agg bhambr bn machn lgi lun akad k bekabu hon lga ...


Jiven e buha khuleya ek dum plang tey uth beitha debu.. akhn tika andr ayi 18/19 saal di kudi nu vekh ek baar tan lun usda jhatka lay funkar uthea sachi bhej ditta channo ney kudi nu....
'Ji menu channo massi ney'  thori ghabrayi thori kambdi dri hoyi kudi bar bar sar tey fisldi chunni nu theek krdi buhey tey khadi haklandi hoyi boli
'Ohhhh haan ...  buha la dey ... ' gaur naal us kudi wal vekhda debu bolea
'Ji .   ' kambdi awaz ch o kuri  buha laa us wal andi boli' ji'
'Tera naam sukhjeet hay na ..' akhn fad fad us kudi wal vekhdey e debu nu jiven jhatka lga eh tan sukhjeet a preet kol silayi  kdayi sikhan andi hundi c ..bholi jehi masoom jehi eh ethey ..
'Ji hanji ji  ' debu wal vekh kambdi haklandi hoyi ghabra k akhn churandi boli sukhjeet
'Tun ethey'  hairan hoyea debu usnu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhda bolea' es kam ch ..'
'Ji ohhh'  ena vol jameen wal vekhn lagi sukhjeet ..lattan usdean dr tey ghabrahat nal kambn lagea 
'Tera bapu tan bda sau tey sharif  '  changi trah janda c o sukhjeet dey tabr nu ..sau tey sharif tey kudi eh sab ... jism ch chadi khumari tan ubalay lay ek swaal bn ud gyi
'Ji o es duniya ch nyi rahey'  boldi boldi awaz bhr ayi sukhjeet di
'Oh kidan  ki hoyea'  sundey e ek baar tan jhatka debu nu b lga changa bhala tagra c .
'Bapu tey veerey da accident ho gya c bapu ji purey ho gye tey veera halley b theek nyi hoyea doct kehndey ney usda operation.hona..' holi jehi bol sukhjeet ghabrayi sehmi kamrey ch edr udr vekhn lgi
'Ohhhhh ..' dard bhari ek tees uthi debu dey dil ch
'Bapu ji dey jaan ton baad roti tuk muskil ho gyi tey uton veerey da ilaaz..' himmat nyi c sukhjeet di us wal akh chuk k vekhey jidan sardar us wal vekhda hoyea puch riha c
'Kado  eh sab ...' apna sah nigal gaur nal sukhjeet wal vekhda debu bolea
'Ji aj pehli baar.... channo massi ney keha c paisey milugey ..' bdi muskil nal akhn chuk sardar wal vekhdi sukhjeet holi jehi
'Nyi nyi accident kado hoyea' ek dum usdi gal katda  bolea debu ..
'Tin mahiney pehln  bapuji tan udon e purey ho gye tey veerey nu sar tey satt lgi'  boldi boldi sukhjeet dean akhn hanjua nal bhij ayea
'Ohhh..' hauka e nikl aya debu da sukhjeet dean akhn ch hanju vekh
'Ji menu tadkey  jaldi jaan dayoungey veerey nu dwayi deni a bibi b fikr karugi das k nyi ayi'  chunni nal akhn punjdi sukhjeet plang kol aa khadi hundi boli
'Haan haan ja  tun .. ' apney kol aa khadi sukhjeet ton akhn churanda  bolea debu
'Ji channo massi tan ..kehndi c rat tuhadey kol .. es velley waps kidan .'
oh tan soch k ayi c paisey milugey par eh sardar tan usnu jaan nu keh riha
Masoom dard bhri awaz sun reha na gya debu ton uth khada ho usdean akhn ch vekhn lga
'Ji mein jaldi nyi jayoungi. jado tusi bhejongey udon e .. 'debu wal vekhdi minat krdi sukhjeet kambdi awaz ch boli  'menu paiseya di lod a veerey di mehngi ali dwayi muki hoyi a kinney din ho gye....
Agey nu ho   usdey sar tey hath fer  usdean akhn ch vekh boldey hoye di awaz bhar ayi apna sah niglda  bolea  'kinney paisey chahidey'
'Ji channo massi kehndi c panjah rupey Milugey'  himmat nyi c sukhjeet di sardar dean akhn ch vekh sakey
'Ah lay fad sau rupey'  kurtey di jeb vichon paisey kad sukhjeet wal karda debu bolea'  jah apney bhra di dwayi da intzaam kr..'
'Ji ..' kadi sau dey note wal kadi sardar wal vekhdi sukhjeet kambn lgi
'Ja hun'  sukhjeet dey hath ch note fda kamrey ch ek passey nu janda debu apnia akhn punjda bolea
Hki bki hairaan hoyi  sukhjeet nu kuch samj na ayi kuch pal buth bn khadi rahi fer Bhaj k pairan ch e dig pyi debu dey
'Pagl a ki krdi a  ' kamb e gya debu sukhjeet nu apney pairan nu fad rondi vekh. Ek dum kahli kahli ch usdey modey fad khadi kr usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea' jaldi ghar ja ... es barey channo nu dsn di lod nyi . . tey na e mud k kadi eh kam ..'


'Haan bol debu..  'sattey nu kuch samjandi samjandi ruk k andar aye debu wal vekhdi ramanjot ney puchea
'O channo ney rat ek kudi bheji c mere kol ...' kuch jijhkda kuch sochda debu sattey nu vekh ramanjot wal vekhda bolea
'Haan  pta  menu ' gaur nal debu nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekhdi ramanjot boli' sukhjeet ayi c rat tere kol'
'Tuhanu'  hairaan hoyea debu ramanjot wal vekh ena e bol sakeya
'Keha c na tenu meri gal manda reh tenu kisi cheez di kmi nyi rahugi ..'debu wal vekhdi boli ramanjot ' Eni ku tan smj hay menu viahea hoyea banda sath ath mahiney vohti ton  dur reha hovey kuch tan  jarurartan ..esi lyi ..'
'Usdey bhra da ilaaz chal riha bapu usda accident ch mar chuka ghar chalan  lyi ...'  kuch der chup reh kuch sochda hoyea bolea debu'   o eh km'
'Kehna ki chahunda'  debu dey munh ton eh sab sun thori hairaan hundi ramanjot sattey wal vekh fer debu wal vekhdi boli
'Mein chahunda tusi usdey bhra da wadey hasptaal ch ilaaz karwayo tey us lyi kuch ajeha karo k usnu eh km ch na. .' Apney dil di gal keh debu ek lamba sah lay ramanjot dey jwaab di udeek krda usdey munh wal vekhn lga
  'eni psand aa gyi'  debu wal vekh ghurdi hoyi ramanjot boli'  ki gal rakheil bna k rakhni a'
'Psand ali koi gal nyi'  kamrey ch edr udr vekhda debu burburaya  ' jidan ayi c udan e waps gyi ... '
'Matlab kuch nyi'  fer hairaan hundi ramanjot boli
'Pehli baar o es daldal ch ..' kuch sochda hoyea debu bolea'  mein nyi chahunda o apni jindgi kharab ...'
'Hmmmm fer ki chahunda tun'  debu kol aa usdean akhn ch vekhdi kuch sochdi ramanjot boli
'Ohi jo mein keha o'  himmat kr  ramanjot dean akhn ch vekhda  debu bolea
'Ena changa na bn k lokan nu shak ho javey tun kehar singh nyi a'  kuch soch debu wal vekh burburayi ramanjot
'Karogey eh kam  ' ramanjot nu burbura k chup hoyi vekh fer puchea debu ney  'Boldey kyoun nyi'
'Satta kithey a  ' ek dum debu wal vekh boli ramanjot
'Hunney tan ethey c'  thora hairaan ho kamrey ch sattey nu  na vekh bolea debu
'O uthey e gya jo kam tun krn lyi keha' debu wal vekh ek rehsmayi muskaan muskurandi ramanjot boli
'Matlab .. ' akhn ch chamk aa gyi debu dey
'Usnu bol k dasn di lor nyi hundi ek ishara e voht hunda uslyi k ki krna tey ki nyi krna .. ' debu wal vekh muskra k kuch sochdi hoyi boli ramanjot' sukhjeet dey bhra da illaz b shuru ho javega tey usnu  mud eh km b nyi ..! '
'Mein tuhada eh ehsaan'  sakoon bharea sah ayea debu nu ramanjot da jwaab sun
kuch der chup reh ajay b debu nu apney kol khada vekh  ramanjot ney puchea ' Hor kuch kehna'
jad da pind ayea c bechain hoyea pya c preet nu vekhn lyi ..pind aa k b preet nu mil nayi  sakda .. eh dard usdi jaan kad riha c akhir bol e pya' Preet nu milan nu dil krda'
'Jeoundi nu milna  k mri hoyi nu'  ek dum kadak uchi awaz ch boli ramanjot
'Nyi '  ghabra k pichey nu hunda kadak awaz sun sehm e gya debu
'Tenu samjaya c na pind aa k na tan tun apney ghar jayounga na e apney ghardeya nu miluga na e preet barey... ' debu nu akhan kad  gussey ch ghurdi hoyi ramanjot boli' Ek gal chetey rakh debu ... bdi muskil nal ethey lokan nu yakeen dilwa rahi haan k tun kehar singh a  eslyi koi ajehi harkat na krin k menu ...
Kuch na bolea debu na e usdi himmat c ramanjot di dhamki sun us agey khadey rehn di ....


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[Harryjatt]

Kavita Ji, excellent update. ur imagination is very good.
Ramanjot da v lagao jugaad. Thank you.

[Jatt Saab]

Super

[Devil Harry]

Awesome update

[anilmouriya]

Bechara...mere warga bhola hi a debu v ??

[Guggu]

Sirra skills

[Chamanchutiyabsdk]

ਸਿਰਾ ਲਾ ਰੱਖਿਆ... ਰਮਨਜੋਤ ਦੇ ਦਿਲ ਚ ਛੇਤੀ ਹੀ ਪਿਆਰ ਦਾ ਦੀਵਾ ਵਲੂ, ਤੇ ਸੈਕਸ ਦੀ ਕਮੀਂ ਤਾਂ ਰਹਿੰਦੀ ਕੋਈ ਨੀ, ਬਹੁਤ ਸ਼ਾਨਦਾਰ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਜੀ... ਸੋਚਿਆ ਨੀ ਸੀ ਕਿ ਅਜਿਹਾ ਮੋੜ ਆਊਗਾ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਚ ਤੁਸੀ ਫਿਲਮ ਫੁਲਮ ਵੀ ਲਿਖੋ ਕੋਈ... ਐਵੇਂ ਨੀ ਪਤਾ ਇਸ ਨਾਮ ਪਿੱਛੇ ਕੋਈ ਵੱਡੀ ਹਸਤੀ ਹੀ ਨਾ ਹੋਵੇ, ਜੋ ਕੇ ਸਮਾਜਕ ਹੱਦਾਂ ਕਰਕੇ ਸਾਹਮਣੇ ਨੀ ਆਉਣਾ ਚਾਹੁੰਦਾ।।

[desimeet]

Kya batt hai kavita ji.... kya twist hai.... maja aa gea please keep writing thank you.....

[Armaan01]

Siraaa gal baat aa kavita ji.... suprbbbbb

[hhhotboy2000]

updateeeeee

[kavitakhullar]

'Oh vekh cycle tey jeetu aa riha  ... picheey preet b beithi a'  car ch beitha satta debu wal vekh gali wal vekhda bolea
Kuch na bolea debu bas akhn tikayi galli ch andi jeetu di cycle wal vekhn lga .. ehi udeek tan o car ch beitha besabri nal kado di kr riha c ...jidan jidan  cycle car kol aa rahi c dil di dharkn tez hon lgi.... ek baar b akh na jhapki debu ney.. jhapk e nyi hoyi uston kinney mahinia baad o apney chottey bhra jeetu nu vekh riha c tey pichey beithi preet nu ...cycle chalandey muskurandey jeetu nu vekh dil nu antha da sakoon milia ...bholi jehi muskaan  muskuranda jeetu jado kolon langeya tey pichey beithi preet jeetu dey modey tey hath rakhi nu vekhea..sah e ruk gya us da .hauka lay unha wal vekhn lga muskurandi chehkdi jeetu pichey beithi us nal galln kardi preet dey  full wang khindey hoye chehrey nu vekh ahhh bhar sah niglda bdi muskil nal apney aap nu rok sakea 
Dil ton nikli awaz nu dil ch e ghut gardan ghuma bina akh jhapkey jeetu di cycle nu udon tak vekhda riha jad tak o gali da mod naa mud gyi

 'Tera eh ehsaan mein jindgi bhr nyi bhulunga sattey ...' bhijean akhn nu punjda sattey dey dono hath fad ghutda  sisak uthea debu
 'Ehsaan ali koi gal nyi ..' debu dean akhn ch vekhda satta  usdey hath ghutda bolea' mein tera dukh teri takleef samj sakda ..'
 'Koi dukh koi takleef nyi  'apnia akhn punjda debu usdey hath nu ghutda bolea' .preet nu vekh lya ruh nu sakoon mil gya .. kini khush c oh ..'
 'Haan  'usdi haan ch haan milanda satta bolea' ek gal kahan  preet menu vohat e changi lagdi a shuru ton...'
 'Ki ki matlab  'ek dum sattey nu ghurda debu akhan kad da bolea 
 'Vohat e changi'  bina debu dey gussey di parwah kitey fer bolea satta 
 'Pta b a ki bol riha tun o b mere samney'  gussey ch akhn lal krda debu awaz uchi krda fer bolea
'Haan     menu preet bdi changi lagdi a parria wargi' ...Has di hoyi  dey munh tey ek alag e noor hunda 'debu wal vekhda bolea satta' menu galat na samj debu changi lagdi a preet es da eh matlab thori a k meri buri njr a us bechari tey ..'
Debu nu chup vekh sah lay fer bolea satta 'Pta nyi jindgi ch kinney katal kittey kinia lashan tikaney lagayean pr us din jad teri lash matlb kisi hor di laash lay tere ghar puja us velley usnu rondi vekh mera dill kamb gya .. ek baar tan dil kitta keh dewan usnu usdey debu nu kuch nyi hoyea jeounda a pr keh na sakea rondi o c tey dil mera cheer hunda c  pehli br lag riha c mein kuch galat kr riha..  o meria rabba aj b jad usdin rondi hoyi preet da chehra meria akhn samney anda  meri jan nikldi a... rondi cheekdi behosh ho jandi jad hosh andi fer bechari ro ro apna burra hall kr lendi ..
Rondi rondi jad hanju muk gye gungi e ho gyi bechari ...sunnia akhn nal asmaan wal vekhdi jiven rabb nu puchdi hovey kyoin kitta tun mere naal eh .. .. pr kehndey ney wakt har zakhm bhar dinda pr sach eh hay debu asin us zakhm naal jeouna sikh lendey haan ...

Fer usdey maa peo usnu apney naal lay gye kachee umr jwan kudi .. kina chir ghar rakhdey duja viah kr kitey tan bithana e c usnu usdey ghardeya ney .. tey tey jad usda  ghardea ney jeetu nal viah kr ditta sun k tey vekh k sakoon milia ... bechari sab kuch bhul fer tuhadey ghr aa gyi vekheya nyi kinni khush a jeetu naal '
'Haan  haan 'hauka lenda debu bolea 
'Hun tun aap soch  tun usnu mil aapney barey das kyoun usnu .. usdi nwi hasdi khed di jindgi nu ...' debu dean akhn ch gaur nal vekhda satta bolea 
'Nyi nyi 'ek dum bolea debu .'. kadi b nyi .. bs vekhna c preet nu vekh lya khush a oh ...tey sadey e ghar mere bibi bapuji kol ..ena e mere lyi vohat a ..'apney sah kabu kr kuch sochda bolea debu 'Bs ek baar jehra kam krn lyi tusi menu lay k aye o ho javey  fer es pind ton voht dur chaley jana mein ..'
Kush der khamoshi rahi dona ch fer ..Ena e bolea satta usdey modey tey hath rakh  ' mein tera dukh samj sakda debu ..'
'Koi koi dukh nyi menu ' apnia bhijia akhn punjda debu sattey wal vekh bolea ..' meri preet raji khushi a hun koi dukh nyi koi fikr nyi..'
'Bs sardarni nu na patta lagey tenu mein ethey..'debu wal vekhda satta bolea' tun vohat e bhalla banda a .. jad tun sukhjeet dey bhra da ilaaz karwaan lyi sardarni nu keha tey us bechari nu us raat   ghar waps bhej ditta sachin  vohat e changa lga vekh k  ...........

[Jatt Saab]

Good one mam

[Harryjatt]

Very good update, kavita Ji. But try to give big update.

[Hani]

Nice update

[Guggu]

Qaim story

[Lusty.guy]

Duja viah story tusi hun tak xossip tey padi .. preet da apney deor jeetu nal viah ho janda tey o waps apney sohrey ghar aa jandi sare ghar ch raunkaan mud waps aa jandia .. bas kmi c tey eh k jeetu ajay b preet nu bhabhi smj ijjat maan dinda .. tey preet b usnu apna gharwala na smj deor smj e khushi khushi us ghar ch rehn lgi ethey tak story tusi xossip ch padi .. usdey close hon ton baad mein eh story agey continue krn lgi haan umeed a holi holi punjabi section dey sarey readers es site tey aa jangey ... 
So mere valuable readers story da agla part .....


3rd update

Thand da mausam uton asmaan ch badl sham velley e enj lag eiha   c jiven rat pay gyi hovey ... pura vehrda dhund nal bhar gya ..dangar wadey da kam muka preet chaunkey ch beithi dudh ubaldi chulley dey sek nal apney hathan nu sekdi bar bar buhey wal vekh ehi soch di aj jeetu ajay tak nyi sehron mudeya  agey tan mud anda c ...es velley tak... keh k b nyi gya c der nal ayounga ... fer kithey reh gya .. dopehr dey bibi bapu ji b massi di khair khabr lain  wandey challey gye c 
Kayi dina di keh rahi c bibi bapuji nu  apni bhain kol  jaan lyi ..ageyo kuch din college ch jeetu nu b   chuttia c ...ehi soch dopehrey  bibi   apni bhain  nu milan  bapiji naal wandey tur gyi ... ..
 'Eh munda aa janda'  chulley ch lakr pa agg da sek wadhandi preet burburayi'  roti tuk da kam muka aram nal kamrey ch beithdi ethey tan thand e vohat a .. '
 'Shukr a aa gya'  cycle lay andar andey jeetu nu vekh sakoon da sah lendi preet burburayi ...
 'Ah layo bhabhi tuhada smaan'  cycle ton thailla lah chaunkey ch   preet kol aa khada hunda jeetu  bolea
 'Oh tan theek a ..'  jeetu ton thaila fad preet us wal vekhdi boli'  aj eni der kyoun la diti .. mausam vekh kinna khrab a ..'
 'O bhabhi tesan tey gaddi late c ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  bibi kithey a ..'
 'Dasea tan c tenu bibi ney aj wandey jana'  sar chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Oh mein bhul e gya'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay mein roti tuk da ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  puria wahan da sweater pa lavin thand vohat a ..'
 'Nyi roti nyi khani ajay bhukh nyi ...' kamrey wal janda jeetu bolea'  halley time b ena nyi hoyea bdl tey dhund kaarn hanera lag riha ..'
 'Chal theek a jad khani hoyougi das devin'  chulley uton ubldey dudh da patila chuk ek passey rakhdi preet boli
' cha bna layo bhabhi ..' bda chit karda ..'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  thand vohat a' 
 'Tun kapdey bdl lay ....uni der mein cha banadi haan ..' thand ch preet da apna chit kar riha c cha peen da...  patili chuk chulley tey rakhdi kamrey wal jandey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sweater jarur pa lawin....'
'Layo ji gram gram cha peo'  cha dey dono gilas hath ch fdi preet eh kehndi hoyi kamrey andar aan e lgi c k dehleej tey e ruk gyi... andar jeetu nu sheeshey mohrey khad apney wall swarda vekh hassa e nikl aya usda ..
Pith c us wal .. shyad kapdey badlda badlda sheeshey ch apney aap nu vekhn ch ena ulj gya k kurta paan da dhiyan b nayi riha ..eni thand ch b upron nanga ..thand nyi lgdi es mundey nu.. kuch sochdi hoyi preet kehn e lgi c thand lag jayougi kuch pa lay mundeya par keh na saki ..buhey tey khadi khadi usdi nangi pith nu nihardi gaur na usdey  uchey lambey bharwey  jism wal vekhn lgi.. sohna ucha lamba kad niklya a jeetu da .. 3/4 salan ch pura gabru jwan ho gya... majboot modey fulley hoye wahan dey dolley .. chauri tagri pith   ... kini der khadi nihardi rahi ... 
 'Bas kar hor kinnia ku chuzzan marnia sheeshey nu'  .. kol aa apney dhiyan ch rujey sheeshey wal vekhdey jeetu nu cherdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kapdey paa lay thand lag jayougi ...'
 'Ohhh o o bhabhi ...' gal na suji jeetu nu ki boley manjey tey pya kurta chukda bolea'  cha ban gyi ..'
'Haan'  jeetu di nangi hik wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli'  mein tan kado di lay k khadi c par jnab tan sheeshey mohrey ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' galley ch kurta fsa panda hoyea jeetu apni jhep mitan di kosis karda bolea 
 'Tera kasoor nyi'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jwani ch sarey  mundeya da ehi haal hunda'  aahh lay fad cha pee' 
 'Ruko jra ... ' apney galley ch fsey kurtey nu thalley karda muskuranda jhepda jeetu hassan di kosis karda bolea..
Cha dey gilass dona hathan ch fdi kuch na boli preet akhan tikayi jeetu di nangi  chauri majboot hik wal muskurandi hoyi vekhn lgi .. apney aap e usdi njar haithan nu jeetu dey pattan wal fislan lgi ..pajamey andar shant lun da njar anda ubaar vekh bull tukdi ek baar tan sochan ch pay gyi preet .. sahi e das rahi c jaspreet .. andaza landi akhan nal napn si kosis kardi nu jaspreet di gal sahi lagan lgi ... chahey shant c par fer b andaza lana aukha nayi c preet lyi kinna ku wada mota tey lumba kala sap hoyouga jeetu da ..  
 'Deo chah ..' jeetu di awaz sun ek dum apnia njran usdey pattan ton hta usdean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli'  sweater tan pa lay ...'
 'Koi na paa layounga bhabhi'  preet dey hathon cha da gilass fad ghut bharda hoyea jeetu bolea'  bibi kiney bjay gyi ..'
'Dopherey.' majey tey beithdi hoyi preet boli' tun tan bhul e gya    aj bibi ney jana jaldi ghar aa jawan ..par pta nayi tera dhiyan kithey rehnda. .'
' chetey nyi riha aj jana c unha ney  ..' preet kol e manjey tey beithda jeetu kuch sochda hoyea bolea'  fer tan aj asin ghar ch ekeley ...'
 'Haan kyoun ..' ek baar tan dil dharak uthea preet da jeetu di gal sun ..
 'mera matlab aj tan sarey kam  tuhanu e karney painey ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Muka lye sarey kam ..' dhar kad lyi .. dangra nu pathey pa andar b kar dita  .'Hasdi hoyi preet boli'  hun tan bas roti took da reh gya das devin jad khani hovegi ...'
 'Ajay nyi khani'  cha da khali gilass ek passey rakh manjey ton uth sweater chuk panda jeetu bolea  'acha bhabhi mein huney aya ...'
' hun kithey challea .. eni thand ch ' jeetu nu bahar janda vekh preet boli ..' hanera ho gya' 
 'Bas thori der ch aya bhabhi ..' kahli kahli ch kamrey ton bahar niklda jeetu bolea ..' jra kam a kisi naal...'



 'Thand  vohat a ...aa ja rajayi ch beih ja ..' majney tey beithi preet mungfali chabdi jeetu nu kamrey ch aya vekh chaukri mar beith rajaayi nal apney goddey dhakdi  boli
 'Sahi keh rahey o bhabhi aj tan sachin thand jyada a ..dhund  pay rahi a bahr ..' preet wal vekhda thand nal kambda jeetu bolea
 'Hor ki ajay 6 e  bjey ney enj lagda jiven adi raat ho gyi hovey ...mein tan jaldi jaldi kam mukaye ..thand naal bura hall c ... aaa ja rajayi ch beith. .' manjey tey ek passey hundi preet jeetu lyi jagah bnandi boli
 'Es baar lagda thand jyada payo gi'  manjey tey  preet samney chaukri maar beithda jeetu   rajayi naal  apney goddey dhakda bolea
 'Aah lay mungfli kha ... ' gud di dheli tey mungfali nal bhari hoyi thalli rajayi utey rakh  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  sehar di mungfali da swad e vakhra hunda' ..
' meinu tan chetey e bhul gya c tusi mungfali mangwayi ..o tan jad chetey aya pehlan mungfali liti fer baki smaan' mungfali da chilka lah giri kad chabda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 'shukar a chetey aa gya nyi tan dobara sehr jana paina c ..'
 'Hye sachin'  chehkdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'hor ki bhabhi pehli baar tusi koi cheez mangwayi c ...' gud di dheli chuk dandi wad hasda hoyea jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea'  lya k tan deni paini c ...'
 'Acha ji .. ' preet b hasdi hoyi boli'  eh tan das aj eni der kidan ho gyi sehar ch ...tun tan kehnda c jaldi mud aana aj ..'
 'O bhabhi bas ..' thalli vichon mungfali chukda  jeetu bolea'  yaaran dostan nal sehar ghuman firan chalea gya ..'
 'Yaaran dostan nal k rupi nal ..'mungfali chabdi preet gaur nal jeetu wal vekh usnu cherdi boli..
' tuhanu kidan .. mera matlab tuhanu kis ney dasea'  jhepda hoyea jeetu bolea
' gya c rupi naal'  muskurandi chehkdi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli...
'Haan'  ena keh edar udar vekhda jeetu bolea'  rastey ch unha dey pind utar gye ..kehndi sada pind vekh lay'
.'
 'Oye hoye munda sohrey pind ja k aya'  chehkdi chulbali hassi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli 
 'Nyi nyi'  ek dum bolea jeetu'  ghar nyi gya usdey' 
 'Naley apey keha rupi dey pind gya c'  dhiyan nal jeetu nu vekhdi  boli preet
 'Haan par unha dey ghar nayi' .. 'Teshan ton thori e dur unha dey khet ney   nal e   unha da amba da baag c'  kuch sochda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye saheli nal amban dey baag ch  ' akhan matka bharwatey chuk preet hasdi hoyi boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b..' preet di gal sun sharma e gya jeetu

 'Kyoun.kyoun ki mein b  ' jeetu nu cherdi preet dey munh vichon 
Pta nyi kidan nikl gya ...' fer chuppey preet dey bag dey amb..'
 'Nyi bhabhi ..Aj kal kehra ambn da mausam '  preet wal vekh  jeetu bolea..
 'Oh haan sach ..' gal sambln di kosis kardi preet boli shukar c jeetu usdi tichar nayi samjeya
 'Vohat wda amban da bag a unha da ...' mungfali kha gud di dheli nu dandi wad da jeetu bolea
 'Acha ..' jidan jeetu masoom jeha ban das riha c na rok saki preet apney aap nu fer usnu cherdi boli'  sara baag dikhaya rupi ney
 'Haan bhabhi .. ' mein tan thak e gya  
Baag ch turdey turdey ...' sehaj swah ch gal karda jeetu bolea
 'Beh jana c kitey'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  ' hor kon c naal ..'
 'Koi nyi bas  asin dono'   mungfali chuk khanda jeetu bolea 
 'Hye sachin ...tusi dono baag ch  ekeley.'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet muskurandi hoyi usnu cherdi boli' fer tan ..'
 'Edan da kuch nyi bhabhi'  boldey boldey shrma gya jeetu munh usda lal hon lga 
 'Fer kidan da kuch'  akhan matkandi jeetu nu sharm nal lal hunda vekh preet usnu hor cherdi boli'  jaffi juffi tan payi honi saheli nu ..'
 'Nayi bhabhi mein nyi'  ach khachanda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi ney payi c ..'
 'Hye sachin matlab tun sharmanda reh gya tey jaffi b  rupi ney aap..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  meri deorani tan bdi tez nikli ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharma k mungfali chabda edar udar vekhn lga...
 'Usney jaffi payi tun kuch nyi ..' gaur nal jeetu da chehra pdan di kosis kardi preet usdean akhan ch vekhdi boli 
 'mein ki ..' haklanda sharmanda ena bol chup e kar gya jeetu ..
 'Budu a tun b ..' hasdi hoyi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli'  kudi ney aap tenu jaffi payi tey tere kolon baag ch kuch b nyi ...'
 'Edan thori bhabhi j koi aa janda uthey fer ..' ek dum bolea jeetu 
 'Hye meria rabba tun tan kudi nalo b jyada darda'  jeetu wal vekh hasdi  hoyi preet boli'  tere kolon tan kudi nu jaffi b nyi pyi o b bechari nu aap pani pyi ...tun hor ki...' boldi boldi ruk gyi preet
Kuch na bolea jeetu mungfali khanda edar udar kamrey ch vekhn lga..
 'Lassi karwa diti tun tan jeetu'  hasdi hoyi preet boli'  ki sochdi hoyougi rupi ...  kinna budu a jeetu' 
 'Nyi bhabhi ena b budu nyi ..' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ......
 'Rehn dey rehn dey pta menu'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet fer usnu cherdi boli
 'Oh tan bas jijhak riha c .. mein'  kuch soch preet ton akhn churanda jeetu holi jehi bolea'  fer tan rupi e mintan kardi c na kar jeetu koi aa jayouga ..'

 'Ki keha ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea .sun tan lya c preet ney ki keha jeetu ney fer b swad lendi hassdi hoyi boli'  ki keha tun ..'
 'Kuch nyi'  hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  rupi nu puch layeo mein  budu haan k nyi ..'
 'Oh ho acha ji'  muskurandi hoyi preet  jeetu nu cherdi boli' matlab kanto fulln tey lay e ayea sada jeetu ...'ena bol uchi uchi hassan lgi preet .....
' katto tan aap ayi c fullan tey..' halka halka sharma k hasda hoyea jeetu bolea..
 'Oh ho ..' jeetu dey munh ton eh sun hasdi hoyi preet b swad lendi boli'  fer tan palosi honi kanto ...'
 'Palosni paini c ..' jhijhak mitta khulda hoyea jeetu bolea'  hun j rupi aap...'
 'Oye hoye'  akhan matkandi preet dey munh ton bina sochey samjey nikl gya'  ki ki kita fer ..'
'pehlan tan aap jaffi paa menu tichar krn lgi gallan e andia k kuch hor..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali khanda jeetu boleea'  jad mein jaffi paan lga fer agey agey bhjan lgi ...'
'Fer'  gaur nal jeetu wal vekh preet usda chehra pdan di kosis kardi boli
 'Fer ki amb dey buttey pichey  fad  k ghut k jaffi pa lyi udon kehndi chad dey jeetu koi aa jayo ..' bina preet wal vekhey mungfali chabda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho fer ..' ajay b yakeen nyi  c preet nu k jeetu sach bol riha
 'Fer ki hasda hoyea jeetu bolea'  mud k nyi tichar karugi menu .... har baar 
 kehndi hundi c bas gallan e krnia andia k ..'
 'Hye sachin bdi chakmi saheli a teri Fer tan ....dasna c gallan e nyi hor kuch b anda ..' jeetu di gal sun akhan matkandi preet boli
 'Lag gya pta usnu Fer tan kahey na kar na kar..' sharmanda muskuranda jeetu bolea
 'Oye hoye ki na kar...' jeetu nu cherdi preet boli
 'Ki bhabhi tusi b ...' akhan churanda jeetu edar udar vekhda bolea
 'Ki mein...' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  baag ch mundey nu kudi aap  lay k gyi ... fer kahdi na kar na kar .. mundey ney tan hath ayi patola saheli napni e c ..'
Kuch na bolea jeetu sharmanda muskuranda hoyea edar udar vekhn lga .. bhabhi eni khul k tichar karugi umeed nyi c usnu ..
 'Nap lyi fer ..' muskurandi mungfali chabdi preet jeetu wal vekh hasdi akhn matkandi boli
 'Haan ...' achkhachnda muskuranda haklanda hoyea jeetu ena bol preet dey hathon mungfali dean kadiyean giria chuk chabda bolea
 'Oye hoye sachin ..'  apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu nu vekhdi preet nu yakeen nyi hoyea jo usney jeetu dey munh ton sunea sach a k jooth ..'
 'Hor ki bhabhi ..' gud di dheli nu dandi wad khanda jeetu bolea ..'   jad ghut k jaffi pyi ghabrandi hoyi boli'  hye eni jaan jeetu ... '
'Fer'  jeetu dey gatheeley jism nu nihardi preet boli
 'Fer ki bhabhi .. lag gya pta usnu gallan e nyi  hor b kuch anda menu..' muskuranda nimma nimma hasda jeetu bolea
 'Sachin.. 'chehkdi hoyi preet boli'  waisey hor ki anda .
 'Sab kuch . Muskuranda sharmanda jeetu bolea'  koi hor gall karo bhabhi menu dasdey nu sang lagdi a ..
 'Acha ji uchi uchi uasdi hoyi preet boli'  jad saheli nu jaffi payi udon nyi sang lgi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  das na hor ki ki ..'
 'Tin char chumia littia usdean fer chadeya  na na kari javey'  sharmanda jijhakda bol e pya jeetu
Ohhh  ...  ' jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli'  bas chumia e littia hor kuch nyi..'
Nyi ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Munh vekhn wala c usda dari hoyi ghabrayi hoyi  mintan krn lgi jan  dey jeetu menu koi vekh layouga .
'
 'Tun jan ditta..' jeetu di gal bdey dhiyan nal sundi preet boli 
'Haan'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  mintan krn lag pyi c ..'
 'Jhalla e a tun ena ku tan nakhra kardi e a kudi naley app lay k gyi  tenu apney baag ch nap  leni c'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Npi tan c bhabhi ghut k jaffi pyi c' kamrey ch edar udar vekhda sharmanda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Oh ho gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet usnu cherdi boli'  hor kuch nyi kita'  
 'Nyi kehndi hanera ho riha chal hun waps chalea ..'  nimma nimma hasda sharmanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh tey waps aa gye tusi'  thori hairaan ho gaur nal jeetu nu nihardi preet boli 
 'Haan ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu gal badlda bolea'  kal vekhea na tusi ..kidan jaapreet bhabhi nal....

Baa kamaal kahania likh rahe o meri v kahanu tuc hi likho

[kavitakhullar]

'Kidan  ghur ghur  akhn kad vekhda c ' cycle pichey beithi burburayi preet
 'Kon 'kachi pagdandi tey cycle morda jeetu pichey nu vekhda bolea
'Ohi jehrey gaddi ch beithey c 'fer burburayi preet
'Oh o kehar singh tey satta c' cycle nu paidal marda jeetu bolea
'Pta menu ... 'munh bnandi preet boli 'kamina pta nyi kithon fer pind waps aa gya..'
'Sanu ki  'cycle da paindl maar ek passey nu cycle morda jeetu bolea 'kehra kuch keha usney ...'
'Keh k tan vekhda delley na kad dindi' ek dum uchi awaz ch boli preet
'Tuhanu kuch keh k marna usney' hasda hoyea jeetu cycle apney khet wal morda bolea 
Kuch na boli preet gardn ghuma edr udr vekhdi nu pta nyi ki hoyea hath jeetu dey patt tey rakh ungl nal usdey lun nu kured ditta
'Ohh bhabhi ki krdey o ' cycle chalandey ek dum uchal pya jeetu jad pichey beithi bhabhi ney usdey patt tey hath rakh ungl usdey lun tey ragri 
'Vekh rahi c jeetu mein khet dikhan lija riha k kuch hor...' hasdi hoyi preet apna hath usdey patt ton chuk modey tey rakhdi boli 
'Fer ki vekheya' machl k chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea.. lun tan eko jhatkey ck akad da funkar uthea
 'Ehi lagda  'hsdi hoyi boli  preet'  aj tenu jeetu khet dikhn dey bahaney kuch hor e dikhayouga' 
'Pehln tan nyi sochea c pr hun pkka bs bach k reheo 'sarur ch cycle tez krda jeetu chehkda hoyea bolea
'kyoun ' jeetu di pith tey hath maar hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Khuh nal kamrey ch manja pya ' grdan ghuma preet wal vekh akh mar usnu  nu cherda bolea jeetu
'Hye rabba sachin  ..' cycle dey pichey beithi khumari ch kambdi ekethi hundi  boli  'nyi nyi '
'Koi nyi nuee nyi hun ' hasda machlda jeetu chehak k akhn matkanda bolea'  aj tan bhabhi khet ch e chaudni' 
 'Holi bol vey'  jeetu di pith tey hath maar preet usnu chup karwandi boli'  koi sun layounga' 
 'Koi nyi sunda koi nyi vekhda  khetan ch dur dur .. 'pagdandi tey cycle chalanda jeetu sarur ch chehkda bolea 'bs tusi salwar dhili krn nu tyar reheo jehra tusi ungl  la sutta pya jageya o tan hun sikhr dopebrey khet ch  patoley wargi bhabhi ragrd k e sah lau'
 'Hye mein mr gyi' apni hik tey hath rakh burburayi preet' kehra putha panga lay liya' 
 'Lay liya tey lay liya  'cycle rok jeetu hasda chehkda bolea'  bhul gye kidan kehndey c tera lain lyi tan vehrdey ch kaudi ho jawaan ...'
 'Ghar dey vehrdey ch  keha c  'cycle ton utr sar tey chunni swardi khetan ch edr udr njr mrdi preet boli   'khet ch thori' 
 'Nyi ji' preet da hath fad usdean akh ch vekh khuh waley kamrey wal ishara krda bolea  'o vekho khuh ala kamra  chalo hun' 
 'Nyi nyi jeetu'  jeetu da hath fdi usdey pichey pichey turi jandi preet  kamrey wal vekhdi boli' na lay k ja uthey mera b dil krn lg paina tenu den nu' 
 'Hye sachin  'apney hath ch fadeya preet da hath ghutda bolea jeetu

 'Pta nyi'  jeetu dey pichey pichey turdi preet  nimi nimi hasdi khetn ch edr udr vekhdi boli 
 'Ohhhh  'kamrey ton thora pehln e preet da hath chad ruk k khad gya jeetu...
 'Ki hoyea' nimi nimi hasdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli 
 'O o  naldey khet ch inder veera pathey wadh riha ' khuh nal lagdey inder dey khet wal vekh holi jehi bolea jeetu 
 'Hun fer ' jeetu dey modey nal moda ragar akhn matkandi preet hasdi hoyi boli 
'Hun kuch nyi ' bolda bolda hass pya jeetu fer kuch sochda bolea 'mein veerey nu mil k aanda'
' mein b andi haan 'jeetu dey pichey pichey turdi preet sar tey chunni theek krdi boli

'Sat sri akaal veer ji'  watt tey khad pathey wad dey inder wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Sat sri akaal jeetu' gardn ghuma jeetu wal vekh fer preet wal vekh ek dum khush hunda inder bolea'  ohh preet b ayi a' 
 'Hanji .. sat sri akal'  inder wal vekh chekh k muskurandi hoyi preet boli 
 'Mein wadd wa dewan pathey'  inder wal vekhda jeetu agey nu hunda bolea
 'Nyi nyi bs wadd lye .. ' pathey chuk ek psssey sut inder khadda  hunda bolea'   'hor ghar bibi bapuji theek ney  '
 'Hanji sab theek ney ..' preet wal vekh fer inder wal vekh bolea jeetu

 'Didi theek a' inder wal vekhdi preet ney puchea
 'Haan ..  'khet di watt wal vekhda inder bolea  'udr gyi a shyad saag tod di honi.'
 'Didi b ayi a' ek dum chehak k khush hundi preet kahli kahli ch dujey khet wal jandi boli'  mein mil k andi haan ...'

' fsal changi hoyi es baar '  jeetu huna dey khet wal vekhda inder bolea'   'khaad pa deni c ..'
 'Hanji kal pawangey bapu ji sehr khaad lain e gye ney ..' apni fsal fer inder wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'lay meinu das dindey mein lay k aya kal tuhadi b lay anda'  apney hath jharda inder uskol anda bolea
 'Nyi bs... hor b km c bapu ji nu sehar ch ..' ' inder wal vekh fer turi andi preet nu vekhda bolea  ' mil ayi didi nu ..'
  'udr tan hay nyi didi  'waps aa inder tey jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Ethey e tan c'  edr udr vekhda inder kuch sochda bolea
  'O a didi ..' khuh wallon turi andi kiran wal vekh kahli kahli ch us wal jandi chehkdi hoyi preet boli ..

[Bestforme7]

Bhot dhunda is story ko xb bandh hone ke baad //// pe bhi likhi but waha update na aa rahe the bhot der baad yaha mili

[Bestforme7]

Mujhe laga hi tha ke jeetu ka bhai hi to nahi kaid kiya hua hai aur mera andaza sahi nikla kahaniyo me esse mod hote bade mast hai but mere liye thoda emotional ho jata hai ke preet ab jab jeetu ke sath settle ho gayi tab uska bhai vapas aaya
Ye situation jitni reader ke liye mast hai utni hi agar kahani ke characters ke view se dekhe to dukhi karna wali hai jise preet pyaar karti thi ab kaher ke roop me use dekh ke chid rahi hai mai us waqt ke bare soch raha hu jab preet ke ghar walo ko sachai pata chalegi kya beete gi

mai itna jyada sochta nahi hu kahani ke bare me but muje usi kahani me maza aata jisme mai characters ki feeling ko feel karke padhu aur yahi writer ki ache likhne ki baat prove hoti hoi ke reader characters ki feeling ko feel kar sake 

Ek kaam aur kar do kyu ke kahani ke character ke naam ka index bana do to jyada acha rahega kyu kafi din baad padhi to kuch naam bhul gaya mai thoda uske bare me bhi ek index mil jata to aur badhiya ho jayega

[Harryjatt]

Nice update, kavita Ji. Sex d kami hai but very good.