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So friends read the 1st update of story and pls comment and give ur suggestions .
I know readers expect some masala and sex also .. but I promise you in after 3rd update hero enters and will rock the story in present past and future . Upto then u wait and enjoy story...
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Waiting for hero entry .
Story sahi jaa rahi hai. But can you add pics also.?
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interesting start with good update
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(10-07-2019, 04:36 AM)Dmahi19 Wrote: So friends read the 1st update of story and pls comment and give ur suggestions .
I know readers expect some masala and sex also .. but I promise you in after 3rd update hero enters and will rock the story in present past and future . Upto then u wait and enjoy story...
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Nice family story . Both Saroo & Rati showing good characteristics . Keep it up .
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11-07-2019, 12:34 AM
Thanks Very much to all of you who read my story and also double thanks to those gives excellent comments .
Try my best that ur interest in story remain intact .
Tomorrow evening I try to give u 2 update .
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2nd UPDATE in 5 mins ...
Pls don't comments for 30 mins while I upload update for continuity of update
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UPDATE 02.
Dr ANJU Choudry MADHAV ko apna pitaji swikar kar phooli na sama rahi thi usko abhi tak yeh ahsaash tak nahi tha ki woh nayi car me bethi hai usko laga Choudry MADHAV SINGH ne apni dusri beti ka darza dekar ek baap ka pyar mil gaya jo usko kabhi nahin mila ( anju father's expire when she 2 yrs old). Apne sarkaari hospital me baki 3 males co doctor ke sath woh kafi uncomfortable rehti thi woh sabse sincere aur punctual thi, phir bhi uska senior dr vikas jo 50 saal ka tha uska boss bus uske akele me milne ke mokaa ke intzaar karta tha .Aaj usne nayi fiat jisme se anju utri dekh kar harian rah gaya . Dr ANJU apne naye baap ke milne ki khushi me usko boli sir mein ye noukri chod kar jaa rahi hoon . Mujhe private hospital me kaam mil gaya hai .Itne me doosre do doctors bhi apne kabin se bhaar aa gaye . Dr vikas bola ye to khushi ki baat hai Anju nahi to Private hospital me nokri kahan milti hai baadahi ho , Dr ANJU ne bola sir packing karti hoon aur 2 ghante baad apko resignation de dongi . sir aap teeno seniors ke sath kaam karke naya experience mila ...
Tabhi teeno doctors ko lagaa aaj nahin to kabhi nahi ye bulbul aaj udh jayegi . teeno ki aankhien milli aur plan Jo woh 6 months se plan kar rahe they ki anju ki kisi kamjoori ko pakar apna matalb nikal lengye , vidwaha hai , maa baap hai nahin pati ek accident me maara gaya , le de ek beti hai *****sath par bhi hath saaf kar zameen me gaad dengye ; per aaj ka din Dr anju per sabse bhari tha kyonki usey andzaa nahin tha ki teeno doctors ke saath saath jo sarkari hospital ki gari ka driver tha woh bhi 2 months se inke sath plan me tha . Dr anju jahan jaati phichle 2 mahino se hospital ki gaari uske sath with driver , ye teeno apne bakre ko khila pilla kar tagda kar rahe the jab bakra unjaan ho uski aankh dakh kar sar kalam ; per Dr vikas ne ek galti kar di.
Dr anju apne sarkari quater per phouchi aur apni beti SALONI ko pukarne lagi . pura quater channe ke bad jab usko apni beti na milli to quaters ke bhar aayi apne driver se poochi tumne saloni ko dekha , driver bola madam woh abhi vikas doctor shabh ke quater ki taraf gayi . Dr anju ko laga jaroor uska baare me phouchne gayi hogi , kyoki wo saari raat ek aaya ke pass chod gayi thi saloni ko , usne apna sar jhatka aur Dr vikas ke quater ki aur chal di subh ke 9 baje they sarkaari hospital me mareez logo ki bhir thi par abhi tak saare doctor O.P.D. se aakar chale gaye koi v.i.p. case attend karne sab unke loutne ka intzaar kar rahe they.
Itne me Dr ANJU vikas ke quater ke gate per knock ki , vikas lungi me door khola aur anju jhat se boli sir Meri beti yahan aayi hai , vikas bola beti mere sar me dard tha to me rest karne aa gaya tumhari beti us room me beth kar breakfast kar rahi hain. Kya karoon mein ish ladki ka , meri ek bhi baat nahi sunti sir aap usko bolo mein usko lene aai hoon . Dr vikas bola kya beti tumhne bhi naasta na kiya hoga tum bhi uske sath naasta karlo uske baad le jaayo mujhe bahut khusi hogi aaj tumahara akhiri din hai. Dr anju uski chal saamjhe bina doosre room me enter ki to dekha dono dossre doctors usko haste huye nazar aaye . anju jab palti to dekha room ke gate per Dr vikas aur uska driver haas rahein they usko andazza hogaya tha ki woh inki chal me phas gayi hai , bus usko apni beti ki chinta saata rahi thi agar woh yaha nahin hai to hain Kahan??
Dr vikas bola hum intne din se teri jawani ka maaza door door se dekh Kar tarash rahe they per aaj poora maaza lenge samjhi agar apni beti ki kariyat chaati hai to raazi hokar humko maaza de, nahin tere baad teri beti ke sasth bhi jabardasti karenge . Un dono ne room me aakar darwaja andar se band kar diya . Dr anju rooti hui ghuntno ke bal beth gayi aur joor joor se rone lagi .
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doosra doctor bola aaj tere baad tere ksmsin beti ka maaza lengye , anju hath jor ke sabke samney boli meri izzat loot lo meri beti ko chod do mein kisi ko nahin bolongi , per driver bola sirji ye to chudhi huyi hai iski beti kawaari hai aur uski choot hum chodegye to jawan rahengye isko chod kar maar dengye aur iski beti ko aapne kaid me rakh aapne lund ki dhar pani karte rahengye . Tabhi teesra doctor bola yar isko chodlete hain iski beti kor choro . Tabhi anju dhardkar chillayi agar mujko aur Meri beti ko tumh me so koi touch bhi kiya to tumsab ka khandan aur ek ek ristedaar jameen se 6 feet niche dafan hoga . Aaj hi Choudry MADHAV SINGH ne sabke samney mujhe apni dusri beti bole aur nayi car aur ish kutte driver ko nayi wardi di. Anju ki baat sun jahaan room me kuch dair khamoshi chaa gayi . Sab Dr jaante they ki 3 din phele anju ko dr vikas ne Choudry shabh ke order per bheja tha. pure pardesh me Choudry MADHAV SINGH ke naam ka sikka chalta tha .
Driver ko saara plan fail hota dikha to bola sir abhi iski beti ko lekar aayonga na to app sab ke lund per kutiya ki tarah kood rahi hogi phir hum sab milkar iski beti ka maaza lenge sir . teeno doctors soch me parh gaye. ek taraf gadaraye badan ki anju aur kahan jawani me kadam rakhi wali SALONI sirf ****** saal ki. sabke mouh me paani aane laaga .tabhi anju boli agar mere pitaji ko pata chala to ek ek booti kutte ke samne padi hogi aur tumhare khandan ki har nasal Randi ke khothe per milegi . charoo ke jism me jhurjhuri daur gayi darr ki ek baar . driver sabse jaada kamina tha usey laga agar ye phir dhamki deti rahi to saara plan ye doctors ki gaand phatne se chopat ho jayega . driver cheekh kar bola randi laga apne baap ko awaaj aaj saale Choudry ki sagi beti ko bhi hum chod dete aur aage badkar jaise hi Dr anju ke moh per thappad Marne wala tha . anju chillai pitajijijijjiji......
phatakkkkkkkkkk dhamdhummmmmmm ...........................Driver thappad Marta itne me dhdam ke saath darwaja toot zameen per tha aur 5 second baad window tootkar room ke andar gire baki jo door aur window ke pass they dab hi jaate baal baal bache . room me dhul gubaar faal gaya kuch 10 second baad sabki nigha toote huye darwaje per khade Choudry MADHAV SINGH aur unke pheeche khade Bhima naam ke gunde per padi ( Bhima ki madad bahut baar Choudry ne ki thi, Bhima unko apna baghwan manta tha) Charoo ko saap sung gaya aur bheema ko unke saath dekh kar marne ki rahi sahi kasar bhi poori hogayi .
Dr ANJU daur kar pitaji pitaji aap aagaye jaa kar Choudry MADHAV SINGH ke sinne se liptkar roo padi per jaldi hi boli pitaji SALONI meri beti inke kabze me hain .usko bhi bacha lijye pitaji woh Meri jaan hai ... tabhi peeche se awaaj aayi mummy mummy ....anju apni beti se lipt gayi . aur usko khoob chumi . beta tujhe chot to nahin lagi . saloni boli mein nanaji ke saath apni bahut badi car me thi. nanaji bahut aache hain aur mujko or apko apne saath hi rakenge . Choudry bole bheema ab kya karna hai tum jaante ho. Choudry shabh Dr anju aur SALONI ke sath apni haveli aa gaye. saloni SAROO se jaldi guhlmil gayi . Dr anju ne Choudry ko saari baat bataai . per pitaji aap us time na aate to pata nahin kameene insaan kya karte mere aur meri beti ke saath. Choudry bola beta mujhe tumhari nurse ne jab tum yahan se gayi to un teeno ke baare me baatya ki woh bade kameene hai unki gandi nazar tum per hai. mein bheema ka apne saath unko warning dene le gaya tha aur usne apne aadmi bhej kar unka plan ka pata laga liya, phele saloni ko apne pass uski aaya ke saath apne pass safe kiya baad me tumhe doondha aur time per unko pakad liya. aab tum araam se kuch din yahin raho aur aage ka plan baano ke kya karna hai . mein chaata hun ki tumhare liye ek hospital kholonga apne city me aur tum uski Malkin hogi kya kahati ho .Anju boli pitaji jaisa aap kahen . tumko shayad pata nahi tumhare dada Meri pitaji ke aache mitr they aur phir meine tumhare baare me sabkuch paata kiya.
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sabkuch jaane ke baad meine tumko apni beti baanane ka faisla Kiya . tum meri kanonan doosri beti banogi aur SALONI meri nawasi benagi . jaise aap bole pitaji mein bahut bhagysaali hun Jo Bhagwan ne mujko apki beti banne ka awsar diya . Woh baat kar rahe they ki maid boli bheema aaya hai. Choudry bole mein aata hun, anju boli pitaji mein bhi apke saath chalun ??? Choudry kuch sochkar bole chalo. phir woh haweli ke phichle hisse me banne do kamro me se ek kamre me phouche to bheema ek kursi per betha tha. Choudry aur Dr anju ko dekh kar kursi se khada hogaya aur dono ko pranam kiya. Choudry apni kursi per bethe aur anju ko sofe per bethne ko kaha aur bheema ko bole door baand kar table ke dusri taraf padi kursi per bethne ko kha. ANJU is room me charoo taraf dekh rahi thi usko ye Choudry MADHAV ka office lag raha tha . Choudryshabh ne bheema se phucha kaam ho gaya . ji Choudryshab . bheema kisi ko sak nahin hona chaiye aur hum per aur humari beti per aanch nahin chaiye . Dr ANJU kuch jijhak kar boli kya mein kuch pooch sakti hoon pitaji?? Choudry ne usko dekha bolo Kya jaanna hai. anju boli heeraji aap un 4 kamino ke sath kya karoge . bheema usko dekha phir Choudry ki taraf to Choudry bole ki anju aab meri doosri beti hai Rati ke tarah aur aab uske hamare ghar ke har kaam aur raj jaanne ka poora hak hai. bheema bola ji Choudryshab phir anju ki taraf dekhkar bola Doctor sahiba aab woh charoo ish duniya me nahin hain unko unke kiye ki saaza mil chuki hai. room me shanti chaa gayi jab koi kuch na bola to Choudry bole Bhima jara 3 chai ka bol do . bheema room ke bhar chala gaya . Choudry apni chair se uth anju ke saath sofe per bethkar bole kya hua beti. anju boli pitaji meine nahin socha tha ki meri vajh se kisi jaan jaayegi. Choudry bole mujhe ek baat bolo agar wo tumhari aur tumhari beti ki jaan begar kisi vajh ke lelay.??? tab Kya kahogi. anju beti kabhi kabhi humko Zindagi me kadwe faisle lene padte hain. tum ko meine baacha liya , tumhare baad woh phir kitni ladies or girls ke saath karte. anju kuch der baad gheri saans lekar boli aap theek hi bole unjaise kameeno ki yahi saaza thi mujhe aur meri beti ko khuch ho jaata to mein kudko maaf nahin kar pati. Choudry bole anju aaj se ye jaanlo tum meri beti ho aur sabh bhool jayo ab tumko apna ye praviar ye karobaar aur naya hospital sambhalna Hain . anju boli mein aapko niraash nahin karongi . tabhi bheema chai le aata hai , Choudry bole kisi ko bol detaa , koi nahin aap log ko bhi baat karni thi. chai peete huye Choudry ne bheema aur anju ko instructions di hospital aur karobaar sambhalne ki. Choudry bole Bhima tum most trusted log anju ki security ke liye rakho aur jab anju ko koi paresani hogi woh tum ko call karegi. anju aur Rati kabhi bhi tumko jo bole tumko karna hoga. phir dono bheema ko vida kar andar hawelli me aa gaye . Dr ANJU aur SALONI aab Choudry MADHAV SINGH ke parivaar ka hissa thi aur undono ko legally apni beti aur granddaughter adopt Kiya.
Idher RATI aur SAROO ko nanhi baachi GEETA se furust nahi thi SAROO ko lagta tha jaise Geeta uski beti hai bhale janaam na diya ho. Geeta todhe wheatish color ki thi but uske naan naksh bahut sharp they chere per ek tej tha jo sabko uski taraf attract karta tha. RAJVEER kareeb Geeta ke janaam ke 10 din baad apne baki ke teeno bacche ASHUTOSH , MANJU or SATEESH ko lekar aaya . woh apne bhenoi ke case ke silsale me ,.'abad gaya huya tha . ye RATI aur Rajveer ki phali santaan thi jo nanhihaal me hui baaki baache rajveer ke Goan me huye. sab baache aur Rajveer Geeta ko dekh kar bahut khush they.
Choudry MADHAV SINGH ne RAJVEER ko sab suru se aakhri tak saari baat aur Geeta ka sach bhi bataa diya. Rajveer ko apni santaan khone ka dukh hua per usne maan liya ye Bhagwan ki daya hai Rati ko Geeta ke roop me apni beti mil gayi. rajveer Dr ANJU ke roop me ek saali ke tarah accept kar liya aur thanks bola ki usne jitni madad ki RATI ki.
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parivaar me rajveer ke alwaa Geeta ka sach sirf 3 aur log Choudry , Dr anju or SAROO hi jaante they. sab me milkar Rati ko naa batana ka faisla kiya . woh abhi maa bani thi uski abhi mental position koi sadma nahi sah sakti thi aur Geeta ko pakar woh bahut khush thi.
2 din baad rajveer rati aur baacho ko lekar apne Goan aa gaya aur Geeta ke janam ke do saal baad jab RATI apne maayke aayi to Choudry ne apni beti ko Geeta ka raj bataa diya , Rati kafi dukhi hui ki uske baap ne itna bada raaj usse chupaya . Choudry ne jab ye bata ki Dr anju , Rajveer aur Saroo bhi jaante Hain to woh aur jaada dukhi ho gayi aur wahan se uthkar chupchap apne room me chali gayi. woh bed par lait kar roo rahi thi . Choudry jaante they Rati bahut gusse wali hai usko normal hone me time lagega . Thodi der baad Saroo Geeta ko godi me lekar Rati ke room me aayi to apni maa ko bed ke sirhane se pith lagye gehri soch me dekha woh bed ki pass aayi to Geeta uski godi se utaar Rati ki goad me lait gayi aur uska blouse uper karne lagi , Saroo Rati ko ekdum gumsum dekh kar boli maa kya hua tujhe aise chup kyo hai , bolna. RATI ne kuch nahi boli ek baar saroo ko dekha phir apni goad me Geeta ko dekha jo uska blouse uper kar rahi thi per Kar nahi paa rahi thi aur bol rahi dudu dudu maa dudu . RATI ka seedha haath apne aap uske blouse per gaya usne neeche ke teen button aur right breast bhar nikala bas Geeta ko ishi ka intzaar tha woh jhat se apne nanhe haatho se choochi pakdi aur nipple per mooh laga doodh pine lagi . RATI ka hath uske sir per chal gaya usko puchkari aur saari se usko dakh kar doodh pilla rahi thi. uska saara gussa or dukh ud gaya . Saroo phir boli kya huya. kuch nahi hua yaha beth mere pass . saroo wahin uske ke pass beth gayi usne dekha uski choti behen maa ki goad me laiti doodh pi rahi hai aur apni right leg knee se neeche hila rahi hai baar baar . saroo boli maa yeh pair kyo hila rahi Rati boli jab bahut khush hokar doodh peeti hai to left leg per right leg rakh hilati rahti masti me aur mujhe kayi baar kaat bhi leti hain jaise bahut badi kahin ki Rani ho . saroo huskar hain Rani to Hain hum sabke dil ki. aur muskarate huye apne hoth per ungli rakh apni maa ko chup rahne ka ishara karti hai aur Geeta ki pair per gulguli Kar deti hai idhar Rati ke muh se siiiiiii ki awaaj niklti hai aur halki chapt geeta ke peeth per lagti hai . Saroo phir gulguli karti hai Rati Geeta ko dhamkar boli kaategi to doodh nahi pilungi . saroo ruk jaati hai aur kuch der baad Geeta uthkar phir godi ke doosri tarf late left breast se doodh peene lagti hai phir right per left leg chada hilane lagti . tabhi Saroo boli MAA tum theek hi khati ho ye to khud ko maharani humko apni dasi samajh rahi hain hi hi hi ... aur hasne lagti Hain. RATI boli Saroo Geeta ka raj kisi ko pata nahin chalna chaiye ye mujko waada kar . saroo " mein vaada karti hoon ki kisi ko nahin batungi apne pati ko bhi nahin".. Rati saroo ko apne se lagte huye Kay baat hai pati ki bahut yaad aa rahi Meri beti ko , abhi bus do mahine hai shaadi ko phir khub seva karna pati ki . ha ha ha. saroo sharma ke bhag jaati hai .Rati Geeta ko side me lita khud bhi uske pass lait kar Geeta ke sar per hath pher rahi thi . uske chere aur tez ko dekh kar uske dimple cheeks per kiss karti hai uski nose for eyes or forehead per. uske chote haath ko apne hath me lekar choomti hai aur uske utha kar apne uper lita uska sir apne breast per rakh Kar uski pith halke thapthapti rahti hai . RATI boli kyon kheta ye meri beti nahin hai yeah meri jaan hai ishne mujhe ek maa ki tarah pyar kiya jabse paida hui sirf mera hi doodh piya mera saara laad liya , meine bhi to isko apni ji jaan se paala hai duniya chaiye kuch kahe ye meri beti hai meri beti hi rahegi aur kisi ne mere ya meri beti ke khilaaf bola to uski khal me bhusaa bharwa dungi. Geeta sirf Meri beti hai aur mein kuch nahin sunna chati . bad me usne apne baap aur bhen anju ko bhi yahi samjha diya.
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Last part of update 02
SAROO ko uski MAA phele hi samjha di thi. ish tarah Geeta Rati or Rajveer ki beti hi rahi . SAROO apni maa ke room se daur kar apne room me aakar bed per lait gayi aur halka halka muskara ke mann me boli mujko jaldi apne pass bula lo RAJ ..........
new Characters in this UPDATE...
1) Dr ANJU Choudry .... adopted daughter of Choudry MADHAV SINGH. widow and have one daughter.
2) SALONI Choudry ... daughter of Dr ANJU
3) BHEEMA age 45 yrs ht 6'3" phelwan tha baad me parivaik dushmni me ek saath 10 logo ko kaat Diya . 14 saal jail me saaza kaat kar aaya to gunda ban gaya . saara area uske naam se kampta tha. Choudry MADHAV ne iski madaad tab ki jab koi iske saath na tha . jab jail me tha to iske parivaar ko Choudry ne care ki. tab se Choudry ki liye apni jaan be de sakta hai.
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So friends enjoy reading 2nd update
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Update 03 will come in night or tommorow .
In 3rd you will meet SAROO and others
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Jaldi se aarop ki shadi karwao.
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11-07-2019, 11:16 PM
NEXT Update in 15 mins , so don't commnts for 30 mis let me upload the update
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UPDATE 03
Saroo apne kamre me bed per laite woh purane din yaad ki uski Shaadi ki baat kaise aage bhadi .....
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SAROO
aaj se 22 saale phele ki baat hai
RAJVEER SINGH ke pita ,Choudry SURAJ SINGH ,bahut beemar the , unko pata tha ki ab jaada time unke pass nahi hai woh kuch hi mahino ke memhaan hain to apni akirhi ichha rajveer ke samne rakkhi ki apni aankho ke samne SAROO ki shaadi dekh kar mout aaye . ye sunker RATI Devi vichlit ho gayi usko laga uske sasur ke bajye yamraj ne uske pran maang liye . wo chaati to tabhi mana kar deti liken wo chup rahi tabhi uske pati ne uski aur dekha phir apne baap ki taraf aur wo soch mei pad gaya . uss time parivaar ka har member us hall numa bathak me mojood tha aur har koi rajveer aur rati ke chere ko hi dekh raha tha. rajveer ne ek baar aur apni patni ko dekha to usne palak jhuka ke rajamandi dedi per rajveer aaj apni patni ki baat per herian hua per apne ko sambhal kar bolo bapu jo aap chaate ho wahi hoga. Suraj Singh ke saath saath sab kush the sirf rati aur saroo ko chodkar per wo dono chup hi rahe , phir kya tha jab saroo us samay """"""" ki thi uske liye ladka dhoonda jaane laga . Dophar ko moka milte hi rati apne pati ko boli ek baat bolon to rajveer bola kya baat hai , rati apne bistar per beth kar Saroo ko awaj laga di sab kaam chodkar kamre mi aa . Saroo bhi foran apne maa baap ke kamre mei aakar khadi ho gayi RATI boli Saroo bahar kon kon hai usko phale hi pata tha aaj sabh praaviar wale uske sasur ke pass hain phir usne apne pati ko saroo se bulwaya kisi kaam ke bhanne se . SAROO boli koi nahi hai to rati usko apne aangan ka darwaja lock karke aane ko kaha . Aab raajveer ki samajh mei kuch kuch aa raha tha aur usko pata tha woh kya boleygi , Saroo ke aate hi usne apne kamre ka darwaja band karne ko kaha aur usne darwaja band kar diya. RATI ne ek gheri saans li aur boli Dekh RAJVEER(wo apne pati ko naam se bolti thi) meine aajtak ish Ghar ke kisi bhi faisle ya baat mei koi taang adaai ya koi baat jo tere gharke logo ko buri lagi ho kahi aur bolkar chup ho gayi. raajveer bola tune kabhi nahi kiya aisa per baat Kya hai...??
RATI boli apni is beti ki taraf dekh aur bol tu isko Pyar karta hai ki nahin to rajveer bola tera dimang kharabh hai jo tune aisa bolo mein saroo ko sab baccho me sabse jaada laad(Pyar) karta hoon aur saroo ko apne pass bolakar usko apne seene se laaga usko maathe ko chuma , to saroo bhi apne baba se chipk kar khil uthi usko pata tha ki uska baap uske liye puri duniya se lad sakta hai. RATI ne saroo ko apne pati se alag kar apne paas bitha liya aur uske sir par hath rakh kar boli saroo tu apne dada dadi ke yahan apne bahan bahiyo ko lekar chali jaa aur jabtak mei ya tera bapu na aye unko apne pass wahin rakhna kisiko bhi aane mat dena agar koi idhar aaye to unko meethai ke dukan se meethai dilwa dena. usne saroo ko kuch paise diye aur usko aankh dikha kar kaha samaj gayi .Saroo bahut khush hui meethai ka sun kar per thodi der baad apni maa ki badi badi aankh dekh Kar samajh gayi ye uski dhamki hai fir usne dhere se gardan hilla kar haan kaha aur chal padi apne bahi behen aur dada ki taraf .
Uske jaate hi rati bahar ja kar gate band ki phir apne kamre ka gate bandh kiya aur phir bistar per apne pati ke pass beth gayi taange latka kar usko dekhne lagi. RAJVEER jo bahot der se apni patni ki harakt dekh kar soch raha tha ki ye karna kya chaa rahi hai aur kyon. wo chupi tod ke bola kya hua hai chup kyon hai kuch boliegi bhi. RATI boli tum ne apne baap se saroo ki Shaadi ki haami kyon bhar di . RAJVEER bolo ye tu kya bol rahi hai aur palang se khada ho gaya phir bolo tunne bhi to ishara karke haan kahi thi to meine bhi bol diya . RATI baat kaatke boli agar Mein na karti to tu bhi na kar deta ??? bol bol tu bhi na kar deta . RAJVEER kuch sooch kar bola dekh mei saroo ki Shaadi itni jaldi nahi kar sakta abhi uski umer hi kya hai 10 pass karlegi tab koi ladka dekhonga ye meine socha tha per bapu ki jaldi aur Teri haan ke aage mei bhi chupchap rahkar haan bol diya magar ab Meri baat to kaan khol Kar sunn Mein saroo ki shaadi uske *baarsk*** ke baad karonga.
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Aur woh bhi kisi sarkari officer se samjhi , phir chaiye mera baapu ya tu kal mare ya aaj, Meine apni beti ko bhaut laad aur sammaan se paala hai aur uski Zindagi Mein barbaad nahi karoonga aur gussa ho kar darwaja khol kar bhar gallery mei matke se pani nikal kar peene laga .Aaj RATI Devi ko phali baar apne pati per pyaar aur naaz ayaa , usne sapno mei bhi nahi socha tha ki rajveer apni beti se itna pyar karta hai ushe laga aur mardo ki tarah rajveer bhi bete ko beti se jaada pyar karta hoga per uska saara concept bhi ulata ho gaya . unse socha rajveer apni beti ki shaadi apne jaise jamidar se karega per nahi usne rati ko bata diya ki uski beti kisi govt officer ki biwi banegi aur memsab khalaygi usper sabse badi baat wo saher mei raheygi goan mei nahin.woh bistar se khadi ho kar rajveer ke pass daudkar phouchi aur boli jaara Meri ek baat to sun le . rajveer pani ka lotta neeche rakh usko gussey se ghorta hua aur dhaad mar ke bola agar tere mooh se ek bol bhi phoota to teri gardan kaat ke naali me phenk donga aur usko dhakaa de kar nikal gaya.
RATI ko pata tha ki agar aab kuch boli to Jo uska pati kabhi usper gussa nahi karta saach mei uski gardan kaat dega aur chup apne kamre me aa kar bed per rest karne lagi. Kareeb ek ghante baad Saroo apni maa ke kamre mei aakar boli maa jalebi khayegi . RATI bistar per hi mudkar usko dekh kar boli kon laya hai , Saroo ,"bapu ne dilwai hain sab ko aur mein tere liye bhi le aai aur ye paise jo tunne diye". RATI samaj gayi aur halka muskara ke boli la idhar aaja bistar per khaate hain phir dono jalebi khaate huye baat karne lagi aur Saroo se usko andaaza ho gaya ki Rajveer aab gussa nahi hai.Phir saroo boli ,"bapu usko khud apni bullet per bitha kar legaya tha aur 5 kg jalebi aur samose pure praviar ke liye dilwaye ". RATI huste huye boli," tera bapu Teri shaadi ki baat hone ki khushi mei laya hoga" . SAROO tunk gayi aur boli ,"mein Shaadi nahin karoongi aur bapu bhi mujko bolo hai wo meri Shaadi Meri paadhi ke baad Meri murji se karega aur usne bola agar kisne meri Shaadi ki baat to uski gardan kaat kar Goan ki choupal per taang dega chaiye wo chaye tum ho ya dadaji" . ha ha ha ha ha aur saroo apni maa ko dekh kar hasne lagi per jaldhi uski hassi per break uski maa ke gusse wale chere aur ghoorti nigah ne laga di aur woh sahem gayi . Jo jalebi ka tukda uske haath mei tha woh neeche plate mei rakhkar gardan jhuka ke thodi kaapne lagi . phir bistaar per se uthkar dhere se bhaar jaane lagi to ek awaaj sun kar rukkar khadi ho gayi aur aawaj thi RATI Devi ki jise sunkar uske chaaro baache khade khade hi moot dein . RATI apne baachon se jitna ji jaan se Pyar karti thi utna hi discipline mei bhi rakhti thi , uske bacche apni maa ki baat kisi ke saamne nahi kaat sakte ye woh jaanti thi aur uski ek ghoorti nazar unke liye kafi thi.Rati apne baap ki bhale ekloti santaan thi bahut Ameer aur sammaan wali per apne sasural mei uski sakhtti aur discipline sirf apne baccho tak simith tha . Woh unki maa , guru aur protector thi uske liye doosre ke bacche kuch bhi karein per uske sabh baache ek adarsh aur disciplined life jiyengye .
!!! SAROOOOOOOO APNI JAAGH SE HILLI TO TERI DONO TAANG TOOD DUNGI !!!!
bus itna sunte hi Saroo ke Bhai bhen aur cousins jo bhar maaze aur masti maarte huye jalebi aur samose kha rahe thye wo apni apni plate lekar sarpat daur pade , unko malum tha rati sabse jaada Pyar saroo ko karti hai agar aaj saroo ko maar padi to koi nahi bachega . SAROO galti karti hi nahin thi aur kabhi ek ya do baar ki to usko ek do thappad maar kar rati khud bhi 2 din bhooki rahkar khudko saaza di sabko jhoot bolkar uska fast hai aur khoob roi bhi per saroo ko apni maa se lagaw tha usne khana sirf saroo ke jid karne per khaya. akhri baar jab usne Saroo per hath utha tha to usne Bhagwan se bolo tha ki wo kabhi Saroo per hath nahi uthayegi . Jab Saroo ko apni maa ki dhamki sunai padi uske saare toote udgaye aur thar thar kapne lagi aur usko laga uska pisaabh nikal gaya ho.
RATI Devi khadi hui aur uske pass aai aur boli agar tu ish jagh si hilli aur rooi to aaj mujhse bura koi nahi hoga . phir rati kitchen se chimtta (used for roti) utha ke layi aur kamar ke pheeche chupa kar andar aakar boli chal bistar per beth aur jalebi kha per Saroo hili bhi nahi to dobara apni maa ka order sunkar daur ker bistaar per bethkar jaldi jaldi jalebi khaane lagi bagar kuch sochkar. uski speed itni thi ki ek ***** lagta hai 2kg jalebi kha jayegi .uski halat dekh kar rati thaaka laga ki hassi hahaha hohoho haha apni MAA ko pagal ki tarah hasta dekher Saroo ruk gayi aur mooh me jalebi bhare usko aankh phar phar kar dekh rahi thi . RATI thodi der baad khud ko normal kar uske samne bistar per beth kar boli itne mei dar gayi abhi to meri gardan katawa kar apne baap se choupal per tangwa rahi thi . Saroo thoda kheez kar mouh ki jalebi satkar apna sar jhuka kar boli tu mujko maaf kar de maa mujko ye nahi bolna chaiye tha aur rone lag gayi itne per hi rati ka dil paseez gaya aur agye badhkar apni beti ko apne gale laga liya aur khud bhi roote huye boli mei bus tujko ched rahi thi . chal chup hoja nahin to thandi jalebi khani padegi aur dono maa beti hasne lagi . itne mei bhar aagan mei chaarpai ki niche chipaa SATEESH ( RATI Devi ka Chota beta ) bola maa jiji ko mat marna . ish per dono maa beti alag hui phir rati cheemta usko dikha ki boli per Teri aaj kher nahi bus inta sunte hi wo sarpat daur pada aur dono MAA beti phir se jalebi khaane lage aur baat karne lage . RATI boli tera bapu mujse naaraz hai to saroo boli nahi to wo to khud jalebi or samose dilwaya tha maa. chal chod ye sab aur ek baat ganth band le mein aur tera bapu tujhe padha likha hi teri shaadi ek rajkumar jaise sunder ladke se karenge . Tujhe paata haina ki hum dono ki laadli beti hai aur meri to tu jaan hai samjh gayi .Uske baad baaki parivaar or ristedaar saroo ke liye ladka dhoondte rahe aur rati aur rajveer kuch na nuksh ya kami nikal dete . Ishi dauran saroo ke dada ki death hogayi aur woh swargvasi ho Gaye. Uske baad dheere dheere time beetne laga aur RATI phir se pregnant ho gayi.uska 7th month chal raha tha uss time Saroo ***** ki hui to Rajveer aur Rati apne sath sirf Saroo ko leke Haridwar gaye Ganga nahne . Unlogo ko ek famous dharmshala jo gangaji ke kinaare thi usme stay karna tha . Wahin rajveer ko dusre Goan ka purana dosht Thakur GOVIND mil gaya jo ki usi dharmshala mei ruka hua tha aur bahut dukhi tha per apne face ko normal karne ki koshish kar raha tha . Sabki apas mei namaste hui phir unlogo ne govind se phucha to bolo mei bhi Ganga shnan ke liye aaya hun. Rajveer ne usko baad mei milne ka bol kar RATI aur Saroo ko le ke apne quater jo ki dharmshala mei permanent members ne banwaye huye hain ,RATI ke bapu ne both sara donation de kar banwa tha ye rajveer ko pata tha (per asal me ye poori dharmshala in Malkin Rati Devi thi) us taraf chal diya unke pheeche dharmshala ka nokar jo luggage lekar chal raha tha aur driver ek box lekar chal raha tha suitcase type .Uss dharmshala mei aise kuch 7 - 8 quaters banwaye hue thye Jo bade bade businessman aur Zameendaaro ke thye . woh hissa thoda dharmshala ke backyard mei tha . phele garden tha phir uske phiche quaters aur kareeb 300 metres ki doori per phiche ganga ka kinara tha . charoo trafh boundary thi aur ganga ki tarah jaane ke liye gate tha.
Saroo bahut Khush thi usko garden aur nadi ko dekh kar bahut aacha lag raha tha aur Haridwar ka mausam aur swach hawa uska maan moh rahi thi. Garden cross ker ke uski nazar saare quaters se hatkar ek double manzil numa Ghar ke tarah tha per padi jo baki quaters se sabse phiche aur Ganga ke kinare nazdeek padta tha . Uski separate boundary wall thi aur uske aage guard ek kursi per betha tha . Saroo ko laga ye to kisi bhout bade adami ka ya dharmshala ke Malik ka hoga . Woh charo aur sab dekhte huye chal rahi thi . Jab nokar aur driver saare quaters ko chod kar uss Bangla numa quaters ke agye rukkar ush guard se kuch bole woh daur kar uski maa ke aage jhuk kar pranam kiya uske baad uske bapu ko phir last me usko aage jhuk kar bola pranam choti mamshaebh . Saroo ekdum chonk gayi aur apne phiche murkar dekha koi nahi tha bus woh akeli thi uske maa baap agye gate per phouch gaye to uski maa guard ko bhadhur pukar ke bole chabhi laa kar gate kholo wo ekdum daur gaya aur maingate ka lock khol kar ander jaakar bangle ka gate khola . SAROO jaldi se daur kar apni maa ka hath pakar li to woh guard phir se usko bola pranam mamshaebh woh phir usko dekh kar chonk ke dekhne lagi aur apni MAA ka hath kas ke pakd liya. Ish baar RATI ne Saroo ko phir bhadhur ko dekha aur muskara ke apni beti ke sar pe hath pher ke boli bhadhur ye Meri sabse badi beti SAROO hai aur saroo ye tumhare bhadhur kaka unko namaste karo . Saroo boli pranam kaka uski awaj sun kar bolo jeeti raho beti bahut pyara naam hai apka aur bhout sunder ho . Saroo ne uske thanks ka aur apni maa se phuchi ye kiska quarter hai , uski MAA boli tumhare nana ka aur aab se tumhara aur ye quater nahi guest House hai.Saroo boli maa hum yahin rukkengye to uski maa boli haan . Bus phir kya tha saroo ne guesthouse ke ander daur laga di aur har cheez dekhne lagi . jab ground floor dekne ke baad usko stairs nazar aayi wo uper daur padi uper do room aur gangaji ki taraf poora open terrace tha woh wahse gangaji , phaadh aur haryali dekhne mei kho gayi per jub usko apne kandhe per ek hath chuha to ekdum dar ke palti or boli maa tune to mari jaan nikal di Mein kitna dar gayi uski MAA uske gulabi gaal per hath pher ke kaisa lag raha hai . woh boli bahut sunder and shaandar yahn se kitna acha nazara hai to uski maa boli ishse achha nazara wahn se dikhega aur apni ungli 2 room ke uper bani terrace ki taraf kar di . phir ek baar usne uper daur lagadi aur aab usko charoo tarfh ka nazar aa raha tha . bus woh 1 ghanta wahin ghumti rahi last mei ek 30 saal ki aurat usko boli mamshabh aap ko badi mamshabh bula rahi hain .Saroo neeche phuchi to uske NANAji dikhai diye unke sath do aadmi aur bhi thye per SAROO ko koi bhi nahin dekha siva apne nanaji woh daur padi cheektye huye Nanajiiiiii NANAjiiiiii aur ja unki goad mei beth kar lipt gayi aur uske nana uske sir per hath pher ker phuchkarte rahe . nanaji bole kaisi hai humari munni rani (saroo nick name is munni ) . Woh boli nanaji ye guesthouse apka hai to woh bole haan apna hain phir boli nanaji ye bhout achha hai . fir NANAji baki dono logo ke liye bole namaste karo usne dono ko namaste kiya phir nana se boli maa nee bulaya tha main unse milkar aati hun . Saroo phir uthker ush aurat ke sath ek room me chali gayi jahaan uski maa araam kar rahi thi bed per lait kar aur ek aurat uski maa ke pair dabaa rahi thi . woh checkte hue boli maa nanaji aaye hain . RATI devi ne naukrani ki tarfh deka aur boli ye wahan gayi thi to naukrani ne sar jhuka kar kaha mamshabh jab tak mein kuch bolti choti mamshabh daur kar bade shabh ki goad mei jaakar beth gayi mein kuch bol hi nahi paayi. Bus RATI ka paara char gaya aur woh dusri noukrani ko dur dekhel khadi ho gayi per tabhi ch. MADHAV SINGH room aakar Saroo ko bole hamuri munni tayar nahin hui . Saroo kabhi apne nana kabhi apni maa ko dekh rahi thi . RATI chup hogayi per gussa uski naak aur aankh se tapak raha tha . Choudry MADHAV Singh saraa majra samajh gaya aur hush kar bola rati tujhe yaad hai tu apne time per pistol taan di thi . Ab hadbandane ki bari RATI ki thi wo Jo uska gussa tha woh fur hokar sharam me badal gaya aur wapis apne bed per lait kar noukrani ki taraf dekha to wo uske pair dabane lagi . phir rati pyar se saroo ko boli jaa kaki ke sath aur tayar ho jaa aur jo meine naya suit aur jewer diye hain unko pehen kar aaja phir ghoom ne chalenge gangaji , ja jaldi tyaar hokar aa meri laado rani . Saroo ko kuch samajh nahi ayaa phele maa ka gussa phir pyar .
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