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Excellent. I hope after 1 /2 calls she herself chooses the full face show and then starts visiting clients in hotel. Muthu not knowing anything.
Another idea is in addition to this Saroja runs a adult film business where she will make Chitra do 1 film recording.
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You have wrote about your frustration on a post that nobody replies or adds suggestion and you will write on your own idea and pace. See, your story improved immediately. I will suggest you follow your heart, don't give too much weight on your readers idea.
I have seen this countless time authors loose their way by readers comments and suggestion.
Remember the list of idea you have posted earlier, making Chitra fat by eating a lot more, there were more ideas on that post. You can follow those. Muthu and Chitra falling in love maybe the weakest point of this story. Now that sarooja playing a main part of this story. Storyline now have a great potential. Good luck, you are doing great!!
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I thought the same love story between Muthu and chitra is weak part. We only reader's and we give only suggestion.its your ultimate decision which to be added or not. Now you can add more character add N number of scenes.