[Kasif]

[Fatima Hussain]

Ammi Fatima

[Fatima Hussain]

Parwez


Ayesha


Zoya



Usman

[Vik88]

Great start

[Kerry Watson]

Absolutely marvelous and fabulous start.

[Kerry Watson]

The villain must be a number one badmash, randibaj,magibaj, a sexual pervert and a hardcore criminal who will have a monster uncut black dick and which is at least 10.5 inches long and 4.5 inches thick and his age must be over 50.

Yes

[Syed Azeem]

Waiting for your update

[SweetSonali]

ashadaran start

[Jarintasnim]

ekdum lajawab shuruwat

[Jarintasnim]

The villain must be a number one badmash, randibaj,magibaj, a sexual pervert and a hardcore criminal who will have a monster uncut black dick and which is at least 10.5 inches long and 4.5 inches thick and his age must be over 50.
 agree

[Kasif]

Awesome, amazing and superb update

[Fatima Hussain]

Chapter 1

Aaj Friday ka din tha. Friday yaani Juma, hamare liye ibadat ka ek khaas din hota hai. Waise toh hamare ghar ka har din subah jaldi shuru hota hai. Ghar ke sabhi log Fajr ki ibadat ke liye jaldi uth jaate hain. Uske baad Ammi ghar ki saaf-safai mein lag jaati hain aur Zoya Baji nashta taiyaar karti hain.

Aam dino mein mujhe aur Abbu ko subah 8 baje tak madarse pahunchna hota hai. Abbu madarse ke head hain aur main bhi wahin taleem hasil karta hoon. Hamare jaane ke baad Ammi ghar par mohalla ki ladkiyon ko Urdu ki taleem deti hain.

Lekin Juma ke din hamare madarse mein chhutti hoti hai. Isliye aaj ghar mein subah ki bhaag-daud nahi thi. Nashta bhi roz ke muqable thoda der se hi taiyaar hota tha.

Main apne kamre mein so nahi raha tha, balki computer table par baithkar game khel raha tha. Headphones kaan par lage hue the aur meri nazrein computer screen par jami hui thi. Main game mein itna mashgool tha ki mujhe waqt ka bilkul andaaza nahi raha.

Tabhi mere kamre ka darwaza khula.

Ammi andar aayi. Unhone khoobsurat sa suit-salwar pehna hua tha aur sar par dupatte ko achhe se veil ki tarah sambhala hua tha. Ek haath mein paani ki balti aur doosre haath mein pocha tha. Unke aate hi kamre mein unke ittar ki halki si khushboo phail gayi.







Ammi ne andar aate hi mujhe computer par game khelte dekha. Unke chehre par narazgi saaf nazar aane lagi.

Ammi: Usman! Tumhe bas game khelne ke alawa aur kuch soojhta bhi hai ya nahi? Har waqt game, game aur game! Subah se computer lekar baith gaye ho.

Main: Ammi, bas thodi der se khel raha tha. Aaj toh Juma ki chhutti hai.

Ammi: Toh kya chhutti ka matlab ye hai ki poora din computer ke saamne baithe raho? Ye nahi ki subah uthkar thodi exercise kar lo, bahar jogging kar aao. Jab dekho tab kursi par baithe rehte ho.

Main: Ammi, mujhe ye exercise-v exercise karna bilkul pasand nahi hai. Mujhse nahi hota ye sab.

Ammi: (Narazgi se) Haan, tumhe pasand toh bas computer chalana hai. Zara apni sehat ka bhi khayal kar liya karo. Mujhe aur apni baji ko dekho, subah-subah ibadat ke baad ghar mein hi exercise karti hoon. Thodi der walk aur stretching kar leti hoon. Isi wajah se apne aap ko fit rakhti hoon.

Main: Ammi, aapko pasand hai toh aap kiya kijiye na. Mujhe kyun daant rahi hain?

Ammi: Isliye daant rahi hoon kyunki tum meri baat sunte hi nahi ho. Aise hi baithe rahe toh tum bhi apne Abbu ki tarah jaldi boodhe ho jaoge. Zara unki haalat dekho. Ab toh unse thoda sa bhaari kaam bhi nahi hota. Har waqt thak jaate hain. Tum bhi unhi ki tarah ho jaoge.

Ammi ki ye baat sach bhi thi. Abbu ki sehat ab pehle jaisi nahi rahi thi. Unka jism pehle se kaafi kamzor ho gaya tha. Thoda sa chalne-phirne par bhi jaldi thak jaate the. Madarse mein bhi zyada tar apne AC wale office mein baithkar kagaz-patron aur zaroori daftar ke kaam hi sambhalte the. Bhaari kaam karna ab unke bas ki baat nahi rahi thi.

Ammi ne poore kamre par ek nazar daali. Meri kitaabein mez par bikhri hui thi, bed par chadar idhar-udhar padi thi aur kuch kapde bhi kursi par rakhe hue the.

Ammi: Aur ye dekho apna kamra! Kitna ganda karke rakha hai. Kahin se lagta hi nahi ki ye kisi insaan ka kamra hai. Tum jaante toh ho na mujhe safai kitni pasand hai. Mujhe bilkul pasand nahi ki ghar mein koi is tarah gandagi phaila kar rahe.

Itna kehkar Ammi ne balti ek taraf rakhi aur mere kamre ki safai mein lag gayi. Pehle unhone mez par bikhri meri kitaabein ek jagah jamaayin. Phir bed ki chadar theek ki aur takiye ko bhi sahi jagah rakha.

Main: Ammi, maaf kar dijiye. Ainda aisa nahi hoga. Main khud apna kamra saaf rakha karunga.

Ammi: (Mujhe ghurte hue) Bas, ab zyada baatein mat banao. Pehle jaakar munh-haath dho lo, fresh ho jao. Phir saath mein nashta karte hain.

Main: Ji Ammi.

Main computer band karke apni kursi se utha aur bathroom ki taraf jaane laga.

Tab tak Ammi meri almari ke paas pahunch gayi thi. Unhone almari kholi, usmein se mera ek saaf kurta-pajama nikala aur bade saleeqe se mere bed par rakh diya.

Ammi: Usman, ye kurta-pajama pehen lena. Aur apne kapde bhi aage se sambhal kar rakha karo.

Main: Ji Ammi, theek hai.

Jaate-jaate meri nazar ek baar phir Ammi par padi. Woh ab bhi jhuk kar farsh poch rahi thi. Unka suit unke badan par tight nahi tha, magar unke jism ki gardayi figure saaf jhalak rahi thi. 44 saal ki umar mein bhi Ammi kaafi fit thi. Pet bilkul flat tha, kamar patli thi aur unke haath-pairon mein koi dheelapan nahi dikhta tha. Subah-subah exercise karne ki aadat ne unhe apni umar se kaafi younger bana rakha tha. Unke body se ab bhi wohi ittar ki mehek aa rahi thi, jo kamre mein faili hui thi. Woh mehek ajeeb si sukoon deti thi.

Main bathroom mein gaya aur darwaza band kar liya. Pehle maine apna kurta utara aur hanger par laga diya. Phir shower on kiya. Garam paani ke neeche khade hote hi Jaise thakan nikalne lagi ho jism se..Mai fir sabun apne badan per lagaya aur thodi dair baad pajame ke andar haath daala taaki sabun laga kar apne lund ko saaf kar sakun.

Haath lagaate hi mujhe apne lund ka ehsaas hua. Woh sirf 4 inch ka tha chhota aur patla sa ..Tatte bhi zyada bade nahi the. Mujhe hamesha se yahi lagta tha ki har aadmi ka lund itna hi hota hoga. Mainne kabhi kisi ko nanga nahi dekha tha, na hi kisi dost ne is baare mein baat ki thi. Meri koi aisi gandi company bhi nahi thi jo mujhe mutth maarna sikhati. Isliye mainne kabhi is cheez ko seriousli nahi liya tha. Bas abhi haath se pakad kar ache se sabun lagaaya aur paani se dho liya.



Nahane ke baad main tauliye se sukha hua. Ammi ne jo saaf kurta-pajama bed par rakha tha, maine wahi pehen liya. Mirror mein ek nazar dekha normal sa ladka, thoda sa dubla, lekin theek-thaak dikhta tha ..Phir main darwaza khol kar neeche ki taraf nikal gaya.

[Kasif]

Just awesome and absolutely wonderful writing. Yes, please keep writing like this way.

[Kuntilanak]

Bahut bahut mast, mazadar aur faadu story.

[Tut's Skeleton]

Wow! Excellent!! Really wonderful and marvelous writings

[wetpussy]

Bahut badhiya story

[Runa Laila.]

बेहद शानदार और रोमांचक कहानी!

[Shehnaz Begum]

bahut badhiya kahaani

[Fatima Hussain]

Thanks

[BlackHorse]

Lovely and fantastic writings! Eagerly waiting for the introduction of the Villain.