[Aragon]

The story is going good... Want to know what will happen when Azad returns from pune... Keep it up

[wxxxx]

Brief updates fail to satisfy the readers' underlying desires; they expect at least one compelling sexual scene in every update.

Sunny’s mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, gave the following fitting reply to Sunny’s disrespectful remarks: [“Just shut up, Sunny. It is none of your business what she says or what I do downstairs. I know what I am doing. You do not have to stand there and teach me every time something happens. Everybody in this building wants to give lessons. You too, now. Please stop it. And let me sleep.”]

Readers feel uncomfortable when any conflict arises between Sunny and his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma. They wish for Sunny to be fully supportive of everything his mother does, and they certainly do not want him to ever say anything disrespectful to her face.

We urge the esteemed, thoughtful, creative, and realistic author, "Authorsunny," to meet these expectations of the readers.

[mzafar]

I would like to thank the author, "Authorsunny," for the prompt updates. Sunny should refrain from saying disrespectful things to his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma—doing so only slows down the pace of the story. It would be better if Sunny were to agree with his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, on all matters. Furthermore, the readers would like to see some sexual scenes.

[Paty@123]

The above both comments have been commented by same person I belive

[Paty@123]

The story is running very slow, required to run bit faster pace with confrontation of son to the mother for her actions, and Sunni has to start an affair in the office

[saka1981]

Sunny was actually supporting Anjali, wasn’t he? Earlier, he even told her, “Please don’t go there, Mom.” Even now, he is only speaking up for Anjali when he says, “I don’t like the way Mom is talking to you.” If that’s the case, why is Anjali turning against Sunny?

It feels like she is taking out all the anger she has toward Ammi on Sunny instead. In the previous episode, she said, “Son, you are the person I love the most in this world.” But today, it has suddenly become, “Just shut up. It is none of your business.”

These days, whenever Anjali is overwhelmed by lust and anger, she seems to lose her sense of balance and struggles to think clearly. I’m really curious to see how Anjali is going to react tomorrow when she finds out that it was her son who bought the phone and gave it to her.

[wxxxx]

Paty@123 Wrote:

The story is running very slow, required to run bit faster pace with confrontation of son to the mother for her actions, and Sunni has to start an affair in the office

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wxxxx wrote:

If Sunny becomes deeply involved in a romantic relationship with a female colleague from his office, he will lose focus on the sexual activities taking place between his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and their landlord, Mr. Azad. Mrs. Anjali Sharma is 47 years old, and Sunny is 21. For the sake of the narrative, it is better if Sunny does not get involved with anyone else, as he is the story's protagonist. Readers want to hear about the sexual chemistry between his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and the landlord, Mr. Azad, through Sunny’s perspective—specifically, how he observes their intimate encounters from behind a door or through a crack, becoming intensely aroused to the point of ejaculation and reaching a state of extreme pleasure.

The story’s appeal will be enhanced—and it will be better received by readers—if it remains confined to these three characters: Sunny, his mother Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and the landlord, Mr. Azad. Introducing additional characters would only detract from the story's quality.

[baddu]

Update please

[SK369]

I want to find out what happened on Sunday before this Sunday comes to an end.

[Durga7777]

Next update ❤️

[Paty@123]

Update please

[Aragon]

Waiting for the update brother...

[Paty@123]

When is the next update writerji

[wxxxx]

The readers want Sunny to get the air conditioner installed by Sunday morning—hiring a different technician if necessary—so that the landlord, Mr. Azad, won’t be bothered by the heat when he arrives in the evening. The readers also want Sunny to buy a bottle of a good brand of liquor from a shop after the AC installation is complete, and on his way back, to pick up Durex Sensual Water-Based Massage & Intimate Lubricant (200 ml) and ten packets of condoms from a pharmacy. Sunny should then hand the liquor, Durex Sensual Water-Based Massage & Intimate Lubricant (200 ml) and the condoms to his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, and tell her that these items were brought to entertain their landlord, Mr. Azad.

This would tie back to the conversation that took place on Saturday night between the landlord’s mother and Sunny’s mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma:

"[Ammi’s eyes stayed on her. “I saw you when you were leaving. Near the gate. Full dressing. Hair, makeup, that black saree. The blouse was… open. From the back also, I think. Building has eyes, Anjali. Everyone would have seen you get into the car like that.”

Ma’s shoulders had gone still. She glanced at me, then back at Ammi. Colour had risen under the bite. “Ammi… the function had a dress code. Azad Sahab said the clothes should look proper. He chose the blouse. I wore what he asked.”

Ammi gave a short breath. Not quite a laugh. “So if tomorrow he says wear nothing and come down, you will wear nothing? Is that the rule now? He says, you do?”

Ma’s mouth opened. For a second no sound came. Then the words arrived tighter than before. “Ammi, what are you saying? Please. Sunny is sitting here. Do not talk like this in front of him.”

“So what?” Ammi said. She did not raise her voice. The chair creaked when she shifted. “He lives in the same room. He sees the marks on your neck.” "He hears the building. I am only saying what I saw with my own eyes. You did not look like a woman who has a grown son. You looked like those women who stand outside hotels and smile for photographs. I have lived in this building for thirty years. I know the difference.”

Ma’s eyes had gone wet at the corners. She did not wipe them. Her hands stayed clasped. “I wore what was required for one evening. If it was wrong, Azad Sahab can tell me himself. I am not going to sit here and discuss my clothes while my son is listening. Please, Ammi.”]"

Sunny felt embarrassed after overhearing the conversation between the landlord Azad Sahab’s mother and his own mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma. Upon returning home from Azad Sahab’s place, Sunny confronted his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, with some upsetting remarks. Mrs. Anjali Sharma was deeply annoyed by her son’s words. Yet, Sunny's mother Mrs. Anjali Sharma makes them happy by Sunny bringing a good brand of liquor, Durex Sensual Water-Based Massage & Intimate Lubricant (200 ml) and condoms for the landlord Azad Saheb setting everything aside, she pulled Sunny into an embrace and said, “My sweet son, I love you more than anything. The line stays—always.”

The conversation that had provoked Mrs. Anjali Sharma’s annoyance with her son is as follows:

"[Sunny sat on the edge of the mattress. Then, he said to his mother, Mrs. Anjali Sharma, “I told you not to go down. The landlord Azad Sahab’s mother talks to you as if you were hired for the day. I don’t like hearing that.”

Mrs. Anjali Sharma turned her head. Her earring caught the dim light filtering through the window grill. Her eyes were dry now, but her voice was sharp. “Just shut up, Sunny. It’s none of your business what she says or what I do downstairs. I know what I’m doing. You don’t have to stand there and lecture me every single time something happens. Everyone in this building wants to dish out lessons—now you, too? Please, stop it. And let me sleep.”

The words struck home. Sunny’s throat tightened. He looked down at the bedsheet between them. “I’m sorry, Ma.”]"

[Paty@123]

Plz next sir, and speedup the story sir

[baddu]

How we expect update

[baddu]

I think the author is not interested to continue to the story

[Authorsunny]

Chapter 30 - New Day
December 07, 2026

The light through the grill had already shifted to the fuller yellow of late morning when I opened my eyes. Sunday. Ma was in the kitchen. I heard the quiet way she moved—the vessel set down without a clang, water poured in a thin stream, the single scratch of a match. She had been awake long enough to fold the sheet on her side and pin her hair back with the old clip.

I sat up. She came out carrying two glasses of tea and set them on the folding table. The light-blue salwar kameez was on her again, the plain market one. The collar covered most of the bite; only the edge showed when she turned. She looked at me and the sharpness from last night was gone from her face.

“Good morning, beta. Tea is ready. I made it a little stronger. Come.”

I washed, changed my T-shirt, and sat. She had already drawn the second chair closer to mine. She pushed my glass toward me and rested her fingers lightly on the table near my wrist.

“Back is still the same?” I asked.

She drank first. “Yes. It catches when I stand. The marks are warm under the cloth also. I put cream after bathing. It settles for some time, then comes back.” She met my eyes. “Last night I should not have spoken to you like that. You only said what you heard from Ammi. I was carrying her words and they came out on you. That was wrong. I am sorry, Sunny.”

Her hand touched the back of my wrist, brief and familiar. “You do not have to answer. Just have the tea.”

We sat with it. She asked if I had any office work on the weekend. I said only a few mails. She asked whether the chocolate from downstairs had spoiled completely. I told her it had melted against the wrapper in my pocket. She shook her head once, small, and said she would clean it later so the ants would not find it. From the floor below came the sound of someone washing clothes on the landing. Ordinary Sunday.

The bell rang as she was drying the glasses.

She opened the door. A woman in a maroon uniform shirt and black trousers stood outside with a black kit bag and a folded massage table strapped to her back. Hair in a bun. ID card on a clip.

“Anjali Sharma? I am from Urban Company. You booked massage? Full body, one hour.”

Ma kept her hand on the door. “What? I did not book any massage.”

The woman turned her phone. “Mr. Azad booked it, madam. Your name, this address. He wrote lower back pain. Payment is already done. I am Kavita.”

Colour rose slowly in Ma’s face. She looked back at me, then outside again. “Ohh, he did not tell me. All right. Come in. It is a small flat.”

Kavita stepped inside and looked around the single room. “The portable table will not open here properly, madam. Too many things. Better we use your bed. I have my own sheet. I will spread it, do the work, remove it after.”

Ma turned to me. Her voice was quiet. “Sunny, can you please go and sit in the kitchen, beta? I did not know she was coming. Just for one hour.”

“Its okay, Ma. I will go to the kitchen.”

I went into the kitchen corner and pulled the thin curtain across as far as it would go. It did not close fully; a narrow gap remained near the edge, and the cloth itself was semi-transparent in the daylight. I sat on the low stool we kept there, phone in my hand. Through the curtain I could see the shape of the bed and the window light. Kavita was already shaking out a white sheet and spreading it over our bed, smoothing the corners.

“You can change, madam,” Kavita said. “Most ladies keep bra and panty. Or take a towel if you prefer. The oil is light but it can mark cotton. Whatever is comfortable for you.”

Ma went into the bathroom. I heard the kameez and salwar come off, cloth folded, a little water running. When she came out she had one of the bigger towels wrapped from beneath her arms to mid-thigh. She walked to the bed and sat on the edge of the white sheet. For a moment she held the towel closed with both hands. Then she loosened it. The towel dropped to the bed beside her. She was in the beige bra and matching panty. The bra was full, the straps sitting on her shoulders. The two red bands from the wired bra on Friday showed clearly beneath both cups, darker at the outer edges. The bite on the side of her neck was visible above the collarbone. Her skin looked warm in the light. She lay down on her stomach without looking toward the kitchen. Her breasts pressed into the sheet under the bra. The line of her back was bare.

Kavita warmed oil between her palms and started at the base of Ma’s neck, long strokes moving across the shoulders and down. From the gap in the curtain I could see the shine of oil spreading on Ma’s upper back and the steady movement of Kavita’s hands.

“Very stiff here,” Kavita said. “Both shoulders. And lower, near the waist. You have been doing a lot of standing work?”

Ma’s voice was muffled against the sheet. “Yes. Yesterday and the day before. It pulls when I get up. Sitting is better. Standing makes it worse.”

“Your husband has written it clearly in the booking,” Kavita said. Her thumbs worked along the sides of the spine. “Most people only select the package. He wrote ‘please take care of the lower back.’ And he chose the oil that is not too heavy. That is thoughtful.”

Ma was quiet and then gave a small giggle while the hands moved over her upper back. “He pays attention. I only mentioned it yesterday. Today you are here.”

“That is good to hear,” Kavita said. She poured more oil and moved lower, palms pressing carefully where the pain lived. Ma’s hand tightened once on the sheet. “After forty many men stop noticing these things. They think it is normal. Yours still took the time to book on a Sunday. You must be looking after him well also. These things usually go both ways.”

“I try,” Ma said. The oil had made her skin gleam.

I shifted on the stool. The semi-transparent curtain showed me the length of her back now shining, the dip of her waist, the way her hips rose slightly. The beige bra straps had loosened a little with the movement. Her breasts were crushed softly against the sheet. The skin of her back looked smooth and warm under the oil, catching the light every time Kavita’s hands passed. I felt myself thicken in my shorts. This was my mother on the bed we shared, in her bra and panty, another woman’s hands moving over her. The same body I had watched through gaps, the same weight I had felt against me when she hugged me yesterday morning. My cock pressed against the cloth. I kept still. Through the curtain the curve of her ass was clear enough when she shifted her legs. I thought of Azad’s hands on her two nights ago, the way she had sounded through the door. Now these hands were slower, professional, but the oil and the bare skin made the room feel smaller. My breathing had gone careful. I did not want the stool to creak.

Kavita worked in steady lines, outward from the spine toward the waist, then back. I could hear the soft sound of oil under her hands and Ma’s breathing growing slower. Through the curtain the white sheet and the curve of Ma’s shoulder were visible when Kavita shifted.

“Only one child?” Kavita asked. “The boy in the kitchen.”

“Only one,” Ma said. “He has just started working. New job. He is sincere and studious.”

“I noticed,” Kavita said. “He went inside without arguing. That is not common. You have raised him properly.” She moved to Ma’s right arm, lifting it and working from shoulder to wrist. “Does your husband travel often?”

“Yes, sometimes he has to go,” Ma answered.

Kavita made a small sound. She finished the arm and began on the left. “My husband is out the whole day also. When he returns he wants dinner and no talking. If I say my back is hurting he tells me to rest after the work is finished. So I stopped mentioning it. At least yours booked the service after you told him. That already means he heard you.”

Ma turned her face slightly on the sheet. “He is not always soft. He can be sharp at times.”

“Still,” Kavita said. She had reached Ma’s legs, working on the calves. Her hands moved slowly over the muscle, oil making the skin shine from knee to ankle. Ma’s legs looked full and soft. When Kavita pressed the sole of her foot, Ma’s toes curled and a small sound left her—half relief, half something else. “Ahh… there. That was tight.”

The sound went straight through me. I was fully hard now, the shorts tight. I could see the shape of her thighs, the way the oil caught on the curve of her calf. My hand stayed on my phone. I did not touch myself. Not with her ten feet away and the curtain only half hiding me.

They continued. Kavita asked how long they had been in the building. Ma said many years. Kavita said she lived farther out, in a smaller place, and the travel for bookings was long. Ma asked if she had children. Kavita said two, a girl and a boy, both in college. Ma told her Sunny used to eat his evening snack on the stairs coming home and then say he was still hungry. Kavita laughed and said her son did the same with whatever she packed. The talk stayed easy. Ma’s answers grew a little longer. She asked whether the oil was good for daily use. Kavita said it was better as a treatment oil, but she could suggest a lighter one for regular massage at home if Ma wanted.

“You can turn over now,” Kavita said. “I will do the front. Shoulders, arms, and stomach very lightly. Only where you are comfortable.”

Ma lifted herself on her elbows. For a few seconds she was fully visible from the side—beige bra, the heavy shape of her breasts, the panty low on her hips, the soft stomach, the red marks under the bra clear in the light. She settled onto her back. She did not glance toward the kitchen. Her breasts rose and fell with her breathing under the bra.

Kavita began at the collarbones with slow outward strokes. “There is a mark on the side of the neck,” she said. She smiled. “Looks fresh. You both enjoyed hard, it seems. Haha.”

Ma’s ears coloured. She gave a small laugh, playing along. “It happens. He… gets like that sometimes. It will go.”

“Good for you,” Kavita said lightly. “At least there is still that. Many women my age say it has stopped.”

Kavita worked across the shoulders and down the arms again. “Your skin is responding well to the oil. It is looking soft.”

A small smile touched Ma’s mouth.

Kavita then placed her palms lightly on Ma’s stomach and moved in gentle circles. “Some tightness here also. I am keeping it light. Tell me if you want me to stop.”

“It is fine,” Ma said. Her voice was lower. “You can continue.” A soft sound left her when the hands passed under the lower curve of her breasts. “Mmm… that is better.”

They spoke while Kavita worked. She asked if Ma cooked every day. Ma said yes, mostly. Kavita said she rarely got time because of the bookings and her children ate whatever was fastest. Ma asked about the colleges. Kavita answered. Ma said she used to worry about Sunny’s tiffin getting cold on the way to office now that he was working, and sometimes she still packed extra even though he told her not to. Kavita said that habit does not leave. The conversation moved without strain. Ma sounded more at ease. She even asked Kavita if most of her clients talked or stayed silent. Kavita said half and half, and that the ones who talked usually left feeling better. Every now and then Ma made a small sound—ahh when a knot released, a longer mmm when the pressure felt good on her thigh.

“Front of the legs also?” Kavita asked near the end. “Or is it enough?”

“The legs, please,” Ma said. “They have been heavy.”

Kavita worked along one thigh, then the other, firm and even. Oil shone on her skin from collarbone to shin. Ma’s eyes stayed on the ceiling. Once they moved briefly toward the curtain; I looked down at my phone. She looked away.

When the legs were done Kavita moved back up. She looked at Ma’s chest and lowered her voice. “Do you want me to massage here also?” She nodded toward the breasts. “Many ladies ask. It helps with the heaviness.”

Ma glanced toward the kitchen curtain. I kept my head down, thumb moving on the screen. She whispered something I could not catch. Kavita leaned closer. They both looked my way again. I did not lift my eyes. Ma whispered once more. Then Kavita nodded.

The next time I looked through the gap, Kavita was standing with her back partly toward the kitchen. Ma’s beige bra was lying on the floor. Kavita’s hands were on Ma’s bare breasts, oil shining on the full, heavy shape of them. The dark nipples were already tight. Kavita’s palms moved in slow circles, lifting the weight, thumbs passing over the nipples.

“Perfect size,” Kavita said quietly. “And still firm. What do you do to keep them like this at your age? Most women lose shape.”

Ma’s breath caught. “Ahh… nothing special. Just… uhhh… they have always been like this.”

Kavita pinched one nipple lightly between finger and thumb. Ma’s back arched a little off the sheet. “Ahh—Kavita…”

“Sensitive,” Kavita said, smiling. “That is good. You should get this done more often. It releases the nerves. Helps with pain everywhere. Breast massage is actually very good for sexual health also. Blood flow.”

She continued, both hands working, squeezing gently, circling the nipples until they stood darker and tighter. Ma’s sounds were soft but clear—small uhhs, longer mmms, one sharp ahh when Kavita rolled both nipples at once. I was painfully hard behind the curtain. My hand had moved to the front of my shorts without me deciding. I pressed once, then stopped, afraid the stool would shift.

“I also do yoni massage,” Kavita said, still working. “But that is only in the centre, not at home. Charges are higher. Special room, more time. It is for deeper release. Some women come once a month. If you are interested I can give you the number.”

Ma’s voice was breathless. “How… how much? And what exactly… ahh… do they do?”

Kavita explained in a low voice while her hands kept moving—oil, pressure, careful circles lower on the breasts, then back to the nipples. Ma listened, asked two more questions, her chest rising faster. When Kavita finally lifted her hands, Ma’s breasts were fully bare, gleaming, nipples dark and swollen. The bra still lay across the floor.

“You should feel some relief by this evening,” Kavita said, louder now. “Drink water. Avoid heavy work today. And please rate the service on the app.”

“Thank you, Kavita. You made it comfortable. And you talked. It did not feel like only work. I was nervous because I have not done this before.”

Kavita took the note. “Lie down like this for at least thirty minutes Madam. Do not wipe the oil. Do not wear clothes yet. Let it absorb. That is when it works best. I will go.”

She packed her kit. Before leaving she stepped toward the kitchen curtain, looked through the gap at me, and smiled. “Your mother is resting. She has not worn her clothes yet. The oil needs time. Wait another half hour before you come out.”

I nodded. She looked at me a second longer, the smile still there, then turned and left. The door closed. Her steps went down the stairs.

Through the curtain I could see Ma still on the bed. The towel was across her hips now. Her breasts were bare, heavy and shining with oil, nipples still tight. The beige panty was on. Her eyes were closed. One hand rested on her stomach. The white sheet beneath her was marked with oil. She had not moved to cover herself yet. The room was quiet except for the fan and her slow breathing.

I stayed on the stool behind the curtain for a long moment after the door closed. My cock was still fully hard, straining against the shorts, the head sensitive where it pressed into the cloth. The whole hour had been like that. From the first time the towel dropped and I saw her in the beige bra and panty, the red marks under her breasts, the bite on her neck, I had thickened. When Kavita’s hands moved over her shining back and hips, I had gone completely stiff. Every small sound Ma made—those soft ahh and mmm when the pressure found a knot—had pulsed straight into me. I had sat there with my hand on my phone, not touching myself, afraid the stool would creak or she would turn her head and see the shape of me through the thin curtain. Now the room was quiet and she was still lying there, and the hardness had not eased at all. It ached. I could feel the wet spot already forming at the tip inside my shorts.

Through the gap I looked at her properly. She had not covered her chest. The towel lay across her hips and upper thighs. Her breasts were bare, heavy and full, resting a little to the sides with their own weight, the skin gleaming with oil from collarbone to the soft undercurve. The nipples were still dark and tight from Kavita’s fingers. The red bands from the wired bra showed clearly beneath them. Her stomach rose and fell slowly. One arm was bent, hand resting near her navel. Her hair had come loose from the clip and spread on the white sheet. The bite on her neck looked darker against the oiled skin. She looked used. Not the way she had looked after Azad—marked and messy—but soft, open, the oil making every line of her body catch the light from the grill.

My hand moved without me deciding. I pressed the heel of my palm over the front of my shorts and stroked once, slow, through the cloth. The pressure made my breath catch. I did it again, watching the way her breasts shifted with each breath. This was the same body that had hugged me yesterday morning, the same breasts that had pressed against my chest through the thin nighty. Now they were bare and shining ten feet away, and she thought I was still sitting quietly in the kitchen not looking. I stroked a little faster, the fabric dragging over the head. Heat built low in my stomach. I kept my eyes on the dark nipples, on the soft inner curves, on the way the oil had pooled slightly in the hollow of her throat.

A small snore left her. Then another. Even, the way she snored when she was deeply asleep after a long day. Her hand on her stomach did not move. The snoring continued, steady.

I stood. The stool made no sound. I stepped closer to the curtain until the cloth brushed my chest. From here the gap showed me everything more clearly. The smell of the oil was stronger—coconut and something warmer, mixed with the scent of her skin. I could see the fine sheen across her breasts, the way one nipple pointed slightly more than the other, the soft crease where the undercurve met her ribs. My cock throbbed against my palm. I took my phone from my pocket with my free hand, angled it through the gap, and took a photo. The screen showed her breasts, the oiled skin, the bra still lying across her stomach. I took another, lower, catching the shine on her thighs. A third of her face turned to the side, eyes closed, mouth slightly open with the snore. My hand kept stroking through the shorts the whole time, slow so the sound would not carry. The wet spot had spread. I was close. I locked the phone, slipped it back into my pocket, and stayed there another minute, breathing through my mouth, watching her chest rise and fall while I pressed and stroked and tried not to finish standing up behind the curtain.

I stroked faster, short presses through the cloth. Every time her chest rose with the snore, the oiled weight of her breasts shifted and the dark nipples caught the light. The smell of the oil was thick. My balls drew up. I watched the soft underside of one breast and came hard into the shorts. Wet heat spread under my palm in thick spurts. I kept stroking through it, teeth closed, eyes fixed on her bare chest until it eased.

My legs felt unsteady. I stepped back from the curtain, wiped my palm once on the side of my T-shirt, and returned to the low stool. The shorts were soaked at the front, sticking to me. I sat for a minute, breathing through my nose, listening to her even snoring. Then I lowered myself to the kitchen floor, back against the wall beneath the counter, legs stretched out. The tile was cool through the thin cloth of my shorts. The wet patch pressed cold against my skin now. I closed my eyes. The smell of the oil still hung in the air. Her snoring continued, steady and soft from the other side of the curtain. Sleep came quickly.

[wxxxx]

Readers are captivated by the author's fresh, thoughtful approach in "Chapter 30 - New Day (December 07, 2026)" from the story "My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)."

[mzafar]

An outstanding update. Readers are impressed by the remarkable creativity of the author, "Authorsunny."