[naruto9211]

No words can describe your story ?

[AK0047]

Almost 30 pages of word document are still ready but the next statement make the story either this or that. Its an erotica, i have tried to keep it as close to reality as possible giving every possible chance of shag to each male or female reading my posts. But now you guys need to decide what can be done ahead. Help me out here. Also, i have 100s of images and videos for attaching here but i dont know why its not working anymore. I am unable to upload them inside the posts.

Please like and rate parts you like.

Goated comeback after being offline for few days 

Addition of Images will be cherry on top

[Rexd_101]

Almost 30 pages of word document are still ready but the next statement make the story either this or that. Its an erotica, i have tried to keep it as close to reality as possible giving every possible chance of shag to each male or female reading my posts. But now you guys need to decide what can be done ahead. Help me out here. Also, i have 100s of images and videos for attaching here but i dont know why its not working anymore. I am unable to upload them inside the posts.

Please like and rate parts you like.

Hi,
I am someone who is new to the story compared to many of the fellow readers. But I love this story!

You mentioned that the story can go from one of two directions from here. Not sure if there are two options. Please let me know if I understood that correctly, so can help you better.

Coming to the latest update - the scenes surrounding Bhola and Simran are amazingly written. I loved the part where Bhola does things with Simran behind Ravi’s back the most! Even the dynamic of Bhola stamping some sort of authority on Simran is nice! The stuff with lesbian couple preeti and her wish for pregnancy - I’m all for it.

The jeevdhatu saga - that kind of brings it more towards fantasy. It’s a good way to say that Bhola has to fuck these women to treat them, but it feels unrealistic. Compared to preeti or simran’s situation this part of the story line is hatke. NOT that It’s BAD. Just different.

Like I said - if you can tell us what the two directions you’re thinking - we can assist better. I am excited that you already have 30 pages worth of stuff written up already! Looking forward to reading it irrespective of where the story goes!

Keep up the amazing work!
Cheers!

[doodhwale_bhaiya]

Goated comeback after being offline for few days 

Addition of Images will be cherry on top

I will try to add images and gifs

[doodhwale_bhaiya]

Hi,
I am someone who is new to the story compared to many of the fellow readers. But I love this story!

You mentioned that the story can go from one of two directions from here. Not sure if there are two options. Please let me know if I understood that correctly, so can help you better.

Coming to the latest update - the scenes surrounding Bhola and Simran are amazingly written. I loved the part where Bhola does things with Simran behind Ravi’s back the most! Even the dynamic of Bhola stamping some sort of authority on Simran is nice! The stuff with lesbian couple preeti and her wish for pregnancy - I’m all for it.

The jeevdhatu saga - that kind of brings it more towards fantasy. It’s a good way to say that Bhola has to fuck these women to treat them, but it feels unrealistic. Compared to preeti or simran’s situation this part of the story line is hatke. NOT that It’s BAD. Just different.

Like I said - if you can tell us what the two directions you’re thinking - we can assist better. I am excited that you already have 30 pages worth of stuff written up already! Looking forward to reading it irrespective of where the story goes!

The story started as a Bhola centric dramaand his cock. But i am now more interested in making Simran our drama queen. She has lots of possibilities here. So thats one thing whether to make it just Bhola centric or Simran, our cow the main character here.
Then there is the question of making it a semi cuckold story or not. Semi, as in he does allow a few things, notices a few things etc, because making it just cheating seems less voluminous. So i was thinking about something. I dont want to disclose completely here.

But i took a long time to give the latest update. I was shifting houses, changing jobs etc. And hence this one took a backseat. But behind all those things i was continuing the story bit by bit. So that would have seriously angered a few readers. I apologize for that. But its not in my hands.

Btw the jeevdhatu thing does mean some drama which i also think amalgamating reality with fiction. But its necessary for one last tine to make the pussy the main showstopper here rather than the cock. History has seen the pussy to rule the earth, rather than the dick. So i am quite made up in my mind to make Simran more important here. For that jeevdhatu needs to come forward one last time.

[Rexd_101]

The story started as a Bhola centric dramaand his cock. But i am now more interested in making Simran our drama queen. She has lots of possibilities here. So thats one thing whether to make it just Bhola centric or Simran, our cow the main character here.
Then there is the question of making it a semi cuckold story or not. Semi, as in he does allow a few things, notices a few things etc, because making it just cheating seems less voluminous. So i was thinking about something. I dont want to disclose completely here.

But i took a long time to give the latest update. I was shifting houses, changing jobs etc. And hence this one took a backseat. But behind all those things i was continuing the story bit by bit. So that would have seriously angered a few readers. I apologize for that. But its not in my hands.

Btw the jeevdhatu thing does mean some drama which i also think amalgamating reality with fiction. But its necessary for one last tine to make the pussy the main showstopper here rather than the cock. History has seen the pussy to rule the earth, rather than the dick. So i am quite made up in my mind to make Simran more important here. For that jeevdhatu needs to come forward one last time.

These are all valid options for future storylines . Semi cuckold would be a nice addition. 

Please  please don’t go towards full cuckold / humiliation. 

[dickrider]

My sincere apologies for doubting you

The latest updates are as good as the initial one's

I would like to request one thing keep the story only Bhola and Simran centric without addition of semi cuckold angle there are so many cuckold stories already available on this platform, the kink Simran gets doing all this behind her husband's back is what you can explore further

Let Simran open up and satisfy her sexual desires with Bhola, make her roam naked around the house whenever she's home alone with Bhola, Keep Ravi busy with his Korean Clients for few days so that Bhola and Simran gets enough time alone at home.

And most importantly for Bhola Simran should always be his 'BHABHI', never let him call her by name

[Rangabaashyam]

How does jai know simran is mistress of bhola. He is visiting first time.

[Sankamithira]

Already simran is slave of bhola. If bhola fuck jai wife she can come out of slavery of his father but she will fall in slavery of bhola. What a fool jai is.

[lustyman69]

Almost 30 pages of word document are still ready but the next statement make the story either this or that. Its an erotica, i have tried to keep it as close to reality as possible giving every possible chance of shag to each male or female reading my posts. But now you guys need to decide what can be done ahead. Help me out here. Also, i have 100s of images and videos for attaching here but i dont know why its not working anymore. I am unable to upload them inside the posts.

Please like and rate parts you like.

Great update bro, looks like you are back on the track. Keep posting, can't wait for next update.   

[sexvrgame]

I came so hard after a long time!!!!
what an update...

let Bhola become more dominant and Bhabhi become more submissive - Bhola's slave... not let Rai become cuckold who knows but a cuckold who desires...

[doodhwale_bhaiya]

How does jai know simran is mistress of bhola. He is visiting first time.

Where? Let me chk again

[Dpdpxx77]

Awesome fantasies updates
One of the best stories of the forum

[Givemeextra]

Please update next what happened

[poorangyan]

Outstanding story.

[doodhwale_bhaiya]

Update will take sometime. Not all readers have given suggestions yet. I believe some new stuff may be suggested which clicks. Waiting for some more time.

[steverichi]

The story is really amazing. Great build up and then the main part. The sudden transformation for Bhola is slightly rushed but I am sure that it would be part of larger game. You should continue the story centered around simran and make it more like an awakening for her. Priti should be someone who pushes her towards this by showing that she is selfness and wants her friend to be really happy and prosperous explore. Before making it cuckold story, I suggest send Ravi to South Korea for a week or so and let both simran and bhola be completely free. That time to be used in unleashing there desires not just at home but outside. Keep the fear of getting caught as that will make it more exciting. Let them behave like teenagers in love. Keep the pregnency and jeevdhatu at the back. Let her have fun and be happy. And then she should offer bhola to priti. Then bring the cuckold story and close the loop on mother jeevdhatu and other things.

[Rexd_101]

Waiting for update!

[Rexd_101]

Waiting!

[themaskeditor]

Update will take sometime. Not all readers have given suggestions yet. I believe some new stuff may be suggested which clicks. Waiting for some more time.

Well written story, I would suggest that you can go thru the comments, reviews and suggestions, but continue the story based on your thought process and visualisation.

Thanks for your efforts.