Adultery Ananya - My beautiful wife
(6 hours ago)Hi kirak9484, Wrote: Your are the only person to know , story plot
I donot know why you are hear some others peoples suggestion...

My humble request, Please donot delte any portion of your story. 

I read your story start to still now, 
My pov its was too good , 

  If any changes your story , you will do , 
Donot intake too much  of dirty suggestions, 
May be its a virus kill your story plot ,,,

Your last update was great , 
Please do not do it again....


Thanks you bro ....
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(6 hours ago)kirak9484 Wrote: AUTHOR'S NOTE:::::     THE PREVIOUS PART WHERE ANANYA AND KOMALI WENT TO GOONS DEN. TOTAL

PART REMOVES..  GOON BANG BANG ANANYA PART EXCEPT .. REMAINING I AM CONTINUING STORY FROM

KOMALI CAME TO ANANYA HOUSE... AS USUAL (Due to many readers comments no need of Goon part. They

need only Vicky Rohan and Arjun part. So please remove that Fucking part... )

Very good decision
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The goon part seems little distracting. This like over planned. The original flow of viki and rohan is better. The way rajesh felt ananya behind the glass was mindblowing.
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Actually I didn't even read further once I understood the context from that part.
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