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Romance Pati ki Hawas Aur Bibi ka Badla - Story of a innocent housewife's transformation
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(Is Kahani k sabki character fictional hai. Yeh kahani bs manoranjan k liye likhi gai h jiska uddeshya na toh kisi ki bhawna ko thes pahuchana h aur na hi kisi ko neecha dikhana. Agr kisi ko is kahani k kisi b part se dikkat h toh usko sudhara ja skta h.)

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Pankaj 38saal ka karib sadhe paanch feet ka tandrust gora chitta dekhne m handsome ek MNC m sales department m kaam krta hai. 12saal ki shadishuda jindagi k baad bhi Pankaj sex k liye hmesha taiyaar. Pr uski sex life, wife k thande behaviour ki vjh se ekdum bekaar thi. Offical tour p jb bhi jata toh call girls bula k apni hawas thandi krta.

Shalu 34saal ki graduate housewife. Sawa paanch feet ki lambai gora nikhra hua rang, masoom chehra, teekhe nain naksh, gulabi honth, badi aur gehri aankhe, lambe kale reshmi baal. 34D-28-36 ka jaanlewa figure, na jada dublinna zyada bhari- sahi jgh se bhari hue. Bholi bhali sanskari aurat jo apni pati aur ek bete k alawa din duniya dari se bilkul anjaan. Uski duniya bs uska ghr hi tha aur woh is ghr m bhtt sukhi aur khush thi.

Chapter-1

September end chal rha tha aur Pankaj sham ko thaka hara metro m dhakke khate hua jb ghr pahucha toh waha uski patni Shalu aur uske eklauta beta jo ki 10 saal ka hai Pankaj ka intzar kr rhe thay. Raat k jaise hi 8bje unke ghr ki bell bajti hai aur jb Shalu ja k darwaja kholti hai toh samne Pankaj apne kandhe p laptop bag liye thaka hara khada najar aata hai. Shalu smile krti hue uska laptop bag leti hai aur “aaj bht late ho gye aap?”

Pankaj ghr m ghuste hue “haa aaj meeting kuch jada hi lambi khich gai, Arnav kha hai?”
Shalu darwaja bnd kr k laptop bag ko dining table p rkh kitchen se pani ka glass liye bhr aate hue “Arnav toh apne room m baitha pdhai kr rha hai. Uske exam aane wale hai na.”
Shalu uske pass khadi thake hue Pankaj jo pyaar se nihar rhi thi. Pankaj ne pani piya aur glass Shalu ko dete hue “kab se hai uske exam?”

Shalu “10oct se suru ho k 17 ko khatam ho jyege, aaj college se aane k baad se jidd kr rha hai ki dushere holiday m usay ghumne jana hai.” Yeh sunn Pankaj Shalu ka hath pkd usay sofe p apne pass baithata hai aur bht hi pyaar se “Shalu tum janti toh ho yrr sare kharche pure krne m halat kharab ho jati hai aur ese m usay kaise ghumne le jye? Shalu pyaar se Pankaj k gaal ko sehlate hue “mujhe pta hai ji pr usko yeh baat kaise smjhaye, uske frnds ja rhe hai toh usay b jane ka mann hai.”

Dono baat hi kr rhe thay ki tbi Arnav apne room se bhr aata hai aur apne papa ko aaya dekh khush hote hue Pankaj k pass aata hai aur uske pass baith k “Papa aap kb aaye?” Pankaj apne chehre p muskaan late hue “bas abi thodi der phle hi aaya hu, aur btao tmhara pdhai kaisi chal rhi hai?” 
Arnav: pdhai toh achi chal rhi hai papa, aadhe se jada syllabus mera prepare hai.
Pankaj: tmhara mamma bta rhi thi ki tmhe vacation m ghumne jana hai?
Arnav; Haa papa mere frnds ja rhe hai.

Dono baap bete ko baatein krte hue sunn Shalu beech m boli “Arnav phle papa ko fresh ho jane do uske baad dinner krte hue plan krege vacation karege. Chaliye aap jldi fresh ho jaiye tab tak m roti pakati hu. Pankaj uth k apne bedroom m jata hai fresh hone toh wahi Arnav tv khol k dekhne lgta hai. Fresh ho k jb Pankaj dressing table k samne khade ho k baal bnane lgta hai toh uski najar samne rkhe hue ek black color k envelop p jati hai jisme golden color se likha hua tha “Mrs&Mr. Pankaj Sharma” Pankaj plt k dekhta hai toh woh envelop abi b bnd hota hai. Pr back side m same golden color se ek contact number likha hua tha. 

Pankaj ne utsukta se woh envelop open kiya toh usme unhe se swap party k liye invite aaya hua tha. Pankaj ka dimag ghum gya ki ese random uske ghr k address p yeh invite kaise aaya. Abi woh yeh sb soch hi rha tha tb usay achanak se yaad aaya ki aaj se 5-6mahine phle woh social media p swapping k bare m kuch jada hi content dekh rha tha. Us invitation card k sath ek type kiya hua letter bhi tha jisme sare terms and condition likhe hue thay. 

Pankaj bed p baith gya aur un terms and condition ko pdhna suru kiya. Usne card p mentioned date dekhi toh woh oct k lst weekend p thi. Us invitation se Pankaj k mann m lalach aane lga ki agr woh jata hai toh uske kisi dusri aurat k sath raat gujarne ka mauka milega, pr jaise hi usay Shalu ka dhyaan aata hai ki agr woh kisi dusri aurat k sath raat gujarega toh Shalu ko bhi kisi dusre mard k sath raat gujarni pdegi. Aur sbse bdi preshani thi Shalu ko iske liye raji krna kyuki Shalu bht hi sanskari aur darmik type ki aurat hai. Pankaj bht hi jada confuse ho jata hai ki kya kre aur kaise woh Shalu se is bare m baat kre. Woh abi yeh sb soch hi rha tha ki bhr se Shalu ki awaz aati hai “suniye khana lg gya hai aap aa jaiye.”

Shalu ki awaz sunn Pankaj us invitation card ko pillow k neeche chipa deta hai aur confuse mind k sath bhr aata hai aur dinning table p baith jata hai jha Arnav already baitha hua tha. Shalu dono ki plate m khana paros k khud b baith jati hai aur khana suru krte hue. 
Shalu”ha Arnav ab bolo kya keh rhe thay vacation k liye, kha jana hai tmhe vacation p?”

Arnav: “mummy mere sare frnds ja rhe hai vacation p siva mere, toh m bhi chahta hu ki hum sab is bar vacation k liye khi bahar chale.”
Pankaj ko shant baihta dekh Shalu “aap kyu chup hai aap bhi boliye kuch?”

Shalu ki baat sunn Pankaj apne dimagi khayalo se bhr aate hue “Shalu mera sir dard ho rha hai toh plzz kl baat kre?”
Shalu chaukte hue “abi toh aap ekdum theek thay achanak se kya ho gya?”
Pankaj(Jhunjhulate hue): “Plz Shalu abi nhi chain se khana kha lene do.”

Pankaj ko ese chhidhte dekh Shalu apna muh bnd kr leti hai aur ishare se Arnav ko bhi chup rehne ka ishara krti hai. Pankaj m mann m wohi swap party ko le k baatein chal rhi thi jha uska pura mann tha usko attend krne ka pr dusri trf usay pta tha ki Shalu ko raji krna bhtt hi mushkil hone wala hai aur Pankaj uski ki planning kr rha tha aur jb Shalu ne usay disturb kiya toh woh chidh gya.

Khair sbne shanti se dinner kiya aur fir Arnav apne room m chala gya aur Pankaj apne room aur Shalu dining table saaf kr kitchen samet k jb apne bedroom m pahuchi toh dekha ki Pankaj apne aankhe bnd kiye apna ek hath mathe p rkhe hue leta tha. Shalu ko lga ki uski pati ki jada tabiyat toh nhi kharab hai islye woh uske pass gai aur bht hi pyaar aur dheemi awaj m “sar m jada dard ho rha hai toh lao main sar dba deti hu. Pankaj ko yeh acha mauka lga Shalu se is bare m baat krne ka toh bht hi mari hue awaj m bola ki “haa yr dba do.” 

Shalu uske brabar m baithe hi wali thi ki Pankaj ekdum se bol pda “ese nhi yr tmhari godi m sar rkh k late na hai.” yeh sunn Shalu ko lga ki sayd Pankaj ka mood hai shaitani krne ka pr fir bhi uske sar dard ko dekh Shalu “theek hai baba late jao meri goad m, pr ek baat btao aaj tmhe meri goad m latene ka kya shauk chadha hai?”

Pankaj: “kuch nhi yr bs mann kr rha tha.”
Shalu apni side aa k bed p baith jati hai palthi maar k aur Pankaj sarak k Shalu ki goad m apna sar rkh k apni aankhe bnd kr leta hai toh Shalu bhi pyaar se Pankaj ka matha dbana suru kr deti hai. Thodi der dono k beech khamoshi rehti hai.

Pankaj aankhe bnd kiye hue “aaj jo black card aaya tha woh kaun dene aaya tha?”
Shalu sar dbate hue “koi aurat aai thi aur bol rhi thi ki aapko dene k liye.”
Pankaj apni aankhe khol k Shalu ki aankho m dekhte hue “tmne khola tha kya?”

“Nhi toh main kyu kholungi jb mujhe pta h ki woh aapke liye tha.” Shalu dono hath rokte hue Pankaj ki aankho m dekhne lgti hai jha usay kuch ajeeb si feeling aati hai.
Pankaj: “Tmhe pta hai kya hai usme?”
Shalu: “are mujhe kaise pta hoga ki kya hai usme jb maine usay khola hi nhi.”

Pankaj ne hath bdha k apne pillow k neeche se woh card nikal k Shalu k trf bdha diya toh Shalu ne jb padha ki usme kis liye invitation aaya hai toh uske pairo k neeche se jamen sarak gai aur woh “hawwww yeh kya faltu ka invite aaya hai? Maine suna toh tha pr mujhe yhi lgta tha ki yeh sb afwahein hai pr yeh toh sach m hota hai.”

Pankaj “ha yr yeh sach m hota hai aur iske alawa bht kuch hota hai duniye main.”
Shalu muh bnate hue “kuch bhi hota ho duniya main ussay hme kya mtlb hai, mujhe toh bs aapse aur is ghar se mtlb hai bs.”
Pankaj “Shalu duniya bht teji se bdl rhi hai aur hme duniya k sath chalna chahiye.”
Shalu yeh sunn gussa ho jati hai aur Pankaj ka sar apni goad se htati hue “bhad m gai duniya, koi kuch b kre pr main esa hargij nhi krugi.”

Pankaj jhujhulate hue “are yr tum kaun si duniya m jee rhi ho, are sbse bdi baat yeh hai ki hme invite aaya hai party k liye aur yeh hmare upr hai ki hum swap krte hai ya nhi. Yeh dekho isme saaf likha hua hai ki aap agr swap nhi krna chahte toh aapke upr koi jbrjsti nhi hai. Aap party attend kr k vaps aa skte hai.”

Shalu chhidhte hue “mtlb aap jana chahte hai is party main?”
Pankaj Shalu k muh se yeh sunn mann hi mann thoda khush hota hai aur apni tone ko normal kr pyaar se “ja k bs dekhna chahta hu ki ese parties m kya hota hai bs.”
Shalu “theek hai toh aap akele chale jaiye na, mujhe nhi jana.”
Pankaj “yr isme husband wife ko sath jana pdta hai akele entry allowed nhi hai.”
Shalu “maine saaf bol diya hai mujhe nhi jana hai bs ab main aur kuch nhi sunne wali.”

Yeh bolte hue Shalu apni side m late jati hai aur Pankaj ki trf peeth kr k. Shalu ko esa krte dekh Pankaj ko bhi gussa aa jata hai aur woh gusse m “tum rehna jindagi bhr gawar bn k, yeh nhi hota tum se ki jamane k sath chalo. Jiski soch hi choti ho usay aur kya umeed ki ja skti hai. Tmse shaadi krna meri jindagi ki sbse bdi bhul hai.”

Itna bol Pankaj gusse m bister se uth k room k bhr nikal jata hai pr Shalu Pankaj ki yeh baatein sunn roo pdti hai. Uski aankho se aansoo behna suru ho jate hai. Shalu takiye m muh ghusa k rooti hue kb soo jati hai usay pta hi nhi chalta hai. Wahi Pankaj gusse m bhr hall m sofe p late k sochne lgta hai ki itna acha mauka mila hai aur is gawar aurat ki vjh se hath se nikl jyega. Pankaj sochne lgta hai ki Shalu ese toh manegi nhi kyu na uska emotional blackmail kr k raji kiya 
jye. 

Pankaj aagay ki planning krte hue sofe m hi soo jata hai.

(Pankaj kya Shalu se haa krwa pyega?)

Kaisa lga aapko first chapter?Aapke suggestion ka swagat h?
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Awesome start
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Mast shuruwat
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Awesome bro but handsome pictures
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Please add hot gif and pic, awasome update
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Amazing start
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(16-10-2026, 09:59 PM)Hotgiri Wrote: Please add hot gif and pic, awasome update

I don't know how to add pics nd gifs
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(16-10-2026, 09:20 PM)couples. Wrote: Awesome start

Thanx a lot
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(16-10-2026, 11:23 PM)Samar78 Wrote: I don't know how to add pics nd gifs

when u are writing

below last mai niche there is  " quick replay"  usmai story ke update likho and usi mai niche there is a orange buttion below.. upload photos.

use that button to add photo or gif. 

remember only 10 photos in one post.. 

try that
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(17-10-2026, 11:44 AM)Bluee Wrote: when u are writing

below last mai niche there is  " quick replay"  usmai story ke update likho and usi mai niche there is a orange buttion below.. upload photos.

use that button to add photo or gif. 

remember only 10 photos in one post.. 

try that

Thanx a lot. I will definately try this
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Please don't make transformation fast. Transformation must be resisted be her on various angles and levels. The transformation should be explored psychologically, then physically.
It should be in thinking, approach, behaviour, way of talking, clothes etc. Husband should encourage it more and motivate her. 
Don't make husband totally negative character or wife totally bold soon. This will kill the story fast.
Wife should also realise that this is fun. After few badla revenge, she should also feel for her husband. Make there love a central theme. 
Also include her being conservative wearing modern Western clothes. Beach wear, club wear and also simple dresses. The contrast will make it more spicy. Best of luck.
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Awsome start
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Chapter-2
Agle din subh jb 6bje alarm bajta hai toh Shalu ki aankh khulti hai aur woh bister p uth k baithti aur bagal m dekhti hai toh Pankaj usay waha nhi milta hai toh Shalu ki lgta hai ki sayd washroom m ho pr jb woh washroom k darwaje k pass jati hai toh washroom bhr se bnd hota hai. Shalu ko thoda ajeeb lgta hai aur woh apne bedroom se bhr aati hai toh usay hall k sofe p Pankaj soota hua najar aata hai.

Pankaj ko waha sooya dekh Shalu ko bhtt bura lgta hai aur woh Pankaj k pass ja k uska kandhe pkd k hilate hue. “Suniya na.” pr Pankaj ki trf se koi reaction nhi aata toh Shalu is bar aur jor se hilate hue “Suniya na, uth jaiye subh ho gai hai.”

Is bar Pankaj aankhe kholta h aur samne Shalu ko khada dekh ganda sa muh bnate hue sofe se uth k khada hota hai aur bina kuch bole bedroom ki trf jane lgta hai toh peeche peeche Shalu b aati hai usko manane k liye.
Shalu: “are meri baat toh suniye na, abi b gussa hai aap?”
Pankaj Shalu ki baat ko ignore krte hue seedha washroom m ghus jata hai, wahi Pankaj ka yeh vyavahar dekh k Shalu ko ab aur bura feel hone lgta hai. Kuch pal toh Shalu wahi darwaje k pass khadi rehti hai pr fir usko ehsaas hota hai ki agr usne kaam nhi suru kiya toh Arnav k sath sath Pankaj ko b late ho jyega.

Shalu Arnav k room m jati hai aur washroom m ghus k subh k karyakaram nipta k bhr aati hai aur Arnav ko jga k seedhe kitchen m ghus jati hai. Kitchen m kaam krte hue Shalu sochti hai ki Pankaj ka gussa kaise shant kiya jye aur usko idea aata hai ki kyu na Pankaj k psnd ka nasta bnaye woh. Shalu jldi jldi Pankaj ki pasand ki aalu puri bnana suru krti hai aur ek trf chai chadha deti hai. Chai bna k woh 2cup m nikalti hai aur 1 cup le k apne bedroom ki trf chali jati hai jha Pankaj bed p baitha apne phone m lga hua tha.

Shalu Pankaj k pass jati hai aur bht hi pyaar se “abi tak gussa hai aap? Chai le lejiye.” Pankaj ek shabd nhi bolta hai aur na hi Shalu ki trf dekhta hai. Shalu bhi chup chap chai ka cup side table p rkh k vaps kitchen m aa jati hai aur pure mann se nasta aur dono ka tiffin bnane m lg jati hai.

7bje Arnav nha dho k taiyaar ho jb bhr aata hai toh Shalu usko nasta krwati hai aur woh college k nikl jata hai. 8bje Pankaj bhi taiyaar ho k bhr aata hai toh Shalu usko nasta deti hai pr Pankaj k chehre p abi bhi gusse k badal chahye rehte hai.
Shalu Pankaj ko grm grm puri dete hue “dekhiye maine aapki psnd ka nasta bnaya hai, aap kha k btao kaisa bna hai?”

Pankaj bina kuch jabab diye khana suru kr deta hai aur Shalu umeed m uske pass khadi rehti hai ki sayd apna psnd ka nasta kr k Pankaj kuch bole pr Pankaj Shalu ko puri trh ignore kr k nasta khatam krta hai aur apna tiffin utha k darwaje k bhr nikl jata hai. Shalu Pankaj ka yeh vyavahar dekh k andr hi andr aur jada dukhi hone lgti hai.

Pankaj jaise hi bhr aaya uske chehre p muskan aa gai kyuki usko lg rha tha ki uske is cold treatment ki vjh se Shalu sham tak gidgidate hue uski baat maan legi. Esa phli bar nhi ho rha hai, issay phle bhi Pankaj yeh trick use kr chuka hai apni baat manwane k liye. Ha yeh sach hai ki Shalu Pankaj ko jada der tak gussa nhi dekh pati thi, fir chahe glti Pankaj ki hi kyu na ho Shalu hi maafi maang k Pankaj ko mana leti thi.

Pankaj ka guess m ghr se nikalna Shalu ko guilt trip p bhej deta hai aur Shalu ghr ka kaam krte hue mann hi mann sochti hai ki kya sach m woh aaj bhi purane khayalo m jee rhi hai? Kaise log bina jaan pehchan k ek dusre se apni apni wife badal lete hai? Aur woh wife kaisi hoti hai jo apne husband ko chhod paraye mard k sath soo jati hai? Kya hi maja milta hoga un aurato aur aadmio ko esa kr k?

Ese hi hajar sawal uske mann m chalte rehte hai jb tak woh ghr k kaam khatam krti hai aur apna nasta le k jb apne bedroom m aati hai toh usko Pankaj ki side table p wohi black envelop rkha hua najar aata hai. Shalu naste ki plate ek side m rkhti hai aur woh black envelope utha k usay khol k andr rkhe hue card ko bhr nikal k dubara se dekhti hai jo uspe likha hua tha. Usko pura pdhne k baad jb woh envelop m dalne ja rhi thi toh usko woh term and condition wala paper najar aata hai.

Shalu ek ek kr bht dhyaan se sare term and condition pdhti hai aur usay pdh k Shalu ko pta chalta hai ki Pankaj jo keh rha tha woh sach keh rha tha. Uske dimag m aaya ki chalo maan lo ek bar ko woh chali bhi gai aur Pankaj swap k liye taiyaar ho gya tb woh kya kregi? Woh khud ko kisi paraye aadmi k samne bina kpdo k imagine hi nhi kr pa rhi thi. Shalu jisne aaj tak kisi bhi paraye mard ki trf aankhe utha k nhi dekha tha woh kisi anjaan paraye mard k samne nanga hona k bare m sapne m bhi nhi soch skti thi.

Shalu ne nasta krna suru kiya pr uske mann m yhi sb ghum raha tha. Shalu is sach ko accept hi nhi kr pa rhi thi ki duniya m ese bhi auratein hoti hai jo apne pati k alawa dusre mardo k sath apni mrji se soo jati hai. Nasta kr k Shalu ne apna phone uthaya aur uspe swapping k bare m search krne lgi. Internet ki duniya esi hai jha aap ek bar ghuso toh ghuste hi chale jate hai. Shalu ne alag alag site p swapping se relate podcast sune, research paper pdha, logo k confession sune uske baad bhi uska mann is sacchi ko manne ko taiyaar hi nhi ho pa rha tha. Aur inhi sb k chakkaro m usay pta hi nhi chala ki dupehr k 1bj gye hai.

Shalu ka dhyaan achanak se gadhi p gya toh Shalu hadbad k uthi aur kitchen ki trf bhaagi kyuki lunch ka tym ho rha tha aur Arnav k aane m bs 20 min bacha tha. Shalu ne jldi se veg fried rice bnaye apna aur Arnav k liye. Jb Arnav ghr m ghusa toh cooker m aakhri seeti bj rhi thi aur Veg fried rice ki mehak uski saaso m gai toh Arnav khush hote hue “mummy kya bna rhi hai bhtt achi khushboo aa rhi hai?”

Arnav ka chehra dekh Shalu k dimag m chal rhe sare sawal ek pal m gayb ho gye aur woh pyaar se muskurate hue “Veg fried rice bna rhi hu beta tu ja k jldi se muh hath dho k change kr le tab tak yeh ready ho jyega.

Arnav apne room m ghus gya aur karib 10 min baad jb bhr aaya toh Shalu uske liye lunch nikal rhi thi. Arnav ne dekha ki uski maa sirf ek plate lga rhi hai toh Arnav ne puch liya “Mummy aap nhi khaogi kya?”
Shalu: “Khaugi but baad main, aaj kaam itna jada tha ki m nha bhi nhi pai. Tu kha main bs nha k aati hu uske baad kha lungi.”

Itna bol Shalu apne room m gai aur apne

Aap sabhi ka bht bht shukriya is suruwat ko psnd krne k liye. M pics ka try Kiya but m option nhi mil pa rha h.
Yeh episode kaisa lga jrur se btaiyega taki m aur acha likh pau.
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