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Sotorkoho

Bro please give a link of this updated story on the original story thread so that people can get to know about the continuation of the story that has been updated by you. Thank you.

girrich9486 · 13-10-2026, 10:05 PM

(13-10-2026, 09:13 PM)Sotorkoho Wrote: Bro please give a link of this updated story on the original story thread so that people can get to know about the continuation of the story that has been updated by you. Thank you.

Thanks bro... I did I paste part 1 link

Nainaboss · 13-10-2026, 11:40 PM

Your writing is very good just few suggestions make the scenes more hot and use more images which depicts the scenes in the story. Keep it up. Waiting for more early updates.

girrich9486 · Yesterday, 10:00 AM

(13-10-2026, 11:40 PM)Nainaboss Wrote: Your writing is very good just few suggestions make the scenes more hot and use more images which depicts the scenes in the story. Keep it up. Waiting for more early updates.

Thankyou bro. Sure

Sumadhan

Awesome update bro
try to add more mrunal pics

girrich9486 · 8 hours ago

(13-10-2026, 11:40 PM)Nainaboss Wrote: Your writing is very good just few suggestions make the scenes more hot and use more images which depicts the scenes in the story. Keep it up. Waiting for more early updates.

Thankyou bro

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