Adultery மல்லி என் மனைவி
HeyBro

You are not twisting the story now, you created the cyclone in this story.

Marvellous style with dangerous Gambling, But our heart (Heygi) believes this is not a Gambling of Rajeev, it is a crucial move to Broke Gautam completely with a great lesson to Malli as both Gautam and Malli never remembered Newton's 3 Law for their whole life.
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கண்டிப்பா ராஜீிவ் முட்டாள் ஆவான் மறுபடியும் மல்லியா இழப்பான். கதை அப்படிதான் போகும்னு தோணுது. உங்க பழைய ஆங்கில கதைகள் அந்த மாதிரி தான் முடிந்தது. So மல்லிக்கு உண்மை தெரிஞ்சு ராஜீவை சீப்பாக நினைத்து கௌதம் பக்கம் சாய்வா, வித்யா ஆல்ரெடி சாஞ்சுட்டா. பார்ப்போம் எங்க கொண்டு போறீங்கனு.
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போங்க bro..... intrest கொறஞ்சருச்சு உங்க கதையில்...revenge எடுப்பான் அவனை கடைசிளை சேத்துவச்சிருவன் அப்படி தான் போகுது...
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(09-10-2026, 06:53 PM)மேஜிக் Wrote: போங்க bro..... intrest கொறஞ்சருச்சு உங்க கதையில்...
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My humble suggestion to all Friends,

Don't force your own ideas to Author, every one have different vews and ideas it will never resemble with each others.

Already author going in a great style (90℅ readers likes his style and twist). So please wait and watch, already author handling the characters carefully, so I suggest don't interubt him.
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See may be just stay with me and travel with this story for few more chapters. There is a high octance space may be emotionally or on the line. I will stop the story there. because with everyone mindset of this,  indha story adhuku mela move aana, its will be like im throwing stone on the water. 

no worries i will jump to saranya story and start fresh one. .. but idhu avlodhaan nu nenaikren. 
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thriller revenge family wholesome story
vera ragam
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(09-10-2026, 07:08 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: See may be just stay with me and travel with this story for few more chapters. There is a high octance space may be emotionally or on the line. I will stop the story there. because with everyone mindset of this,  indha story adhuku mela move aana, its will be like im throwing stone on the water. 

no worries i will jump to saranya story and start fresh one. .. but idhu avlodhaan nu nenaikren. 
 Hi Heygi , continue the stories as what you planned actually , some viewers purposely posting unwanted comments to make you stop the story .

Please continue the story for your orginal readers.....

If they don't get what they expect , they can read other stories....
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and im trying to stay honest with what i conceived in my mind. audience expectation nu story maathi eludhura aalu naan illa. so provoke pannina appadi pogamaatar apadinu idea edhachum irundha it wont work here. neenga apadi pannum podhu. 

i will just get demotivated. edhuku inga varanum 
nee enna eludhunaalum disappointed adhu idhu nu solla dhaan poranga.

xossipy la nallavela delete button nu onnu illa. 

sorry to say this i have this issue, i admit. i cannot take too much harsh reaction or feedbacks that looks very offending to me.  

oru point mela indha aaluku vera velai illa. idhe dhaan pannuvanu register aachuna, that day i will permanently run away from Xosippy, adhu andha pattam vanga naan inga varala
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Expecting your next update nanba....
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(09-10-2026, 07:06 PM)Ironman0 Wrote: Heygi already sollitarey Malli return varum pothu kaila pudi vegama adi nu athu namaku illa bro Rajiv ku....
Story end la athan nadakum.... Malliku ipo varaium gowtham mela konjam love iruku future la innum strong agum.... Solla mudiyathu malli gowtham kuda sex pannitu vanthu Rajiv ah nakka kuda vidulam

adhaan unake ella kadhaiyum top to end theriyume. 
edhuku ini naan eludhi time waste pananum 
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(09-10-2026, 06:32 PM)Ironman0 Wrote: Ada pongaiya Rajiv ku ipo varaium revenge eduka thuppu illa..... 
Challenge vacha epadi irunthalum gowtham than win panuvan 3varusam kulanthai kuda jolly ah vaala arambichuruvan Gowtham.....
Rajiv kadaisi varai kulanthaiku appanu solla matan.....
Malli onnu mudivu pannikuva Rajiv ku kulanthai kudukavum thuppu illa pottila win pandrathu kum vakku illa real pottainu....
Peruku Rajiv ah purusana vachu kitu Gowtham kuda enjoy panna arambichuruva 
Rajiv kaila puduchutu engal veettil ella naalum karthikainu pattu paduvan.....
Heygi Gowtham character ku sombu thukalam ivloo lam thuka kudathu

adhu enna thuppu illa adhu illanu varthai. 

nee naan build panna charactera dhaana ipadi solra. 


Ennoda ella storylayum ennoda charactera provoke panramaadhiri pesavenamnu evalo time solradhu. 
fun comments vera indha maadhiri comment lam venumnu panra maadhiri dhaan iruku. 
provoke paniye aganum. 
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(09-10-2026, 07:08 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: See may be just stay with me and travel with this story for few more chapters. There is a high octance space may be emotionally or on the line. I will stop the story there. because with everyone mindset of this,  indha story adhuku mela move aana, its will be like im throwing stone on the water. 

no worries i will jump to saranya story and start fresh one. .. but idhu avlodhaan nu nenaikren. 


Heygi Bro 


It is not fair if you stopped this in this junction, for few negative thinkings. 

 Most of the readers likes (6,27,963 Likes in a short period) your story. 

So, You have to rethink about your genuine readers and followers. 

Please ignore unnecessary things  and concentrate as you are 

I hope you will reply for my views
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(09-10-2026, 07:17 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: adhaan unake ella kadhaiyum top to end theriyume. 
edhuku ini naan eludhi time waste pananum 

Heygi bro , you are not writing story for him .

You do for your audience , still if you think you got offended by the invaluable comments who are purposely doing to demotivate you ...

Then you can take your call, Your mental peace comes first than others ....

Thanks bro ...
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Don't get tension , writing is writer's privilege. So stay in your path
Lead the story as you wish. It is just a story.
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We need to report the person who is purposely making nuisance here and spoiling the curve of the story ...

Disturbing the Author and making to stop the story....
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(09-10-2026, 07:31 PM)Secretspy2092 Wrote: We need to report the person who is purposely making nuisance here and spoiling the curve of the story ...

Disturbing the Author and making to stop the story....

Buddy I fully agree with your suggestion. 

I too request the genuine readers, please report that person who purposely demotivating the Author without any genuine reasons.
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தலைவரே, ஒரு கதாசிரியருக்கு மட்டுமே கதையை எங்கு எப்படி நகர்தனும்னு அதிகாரம் இருக்கு. இது உங்க கதை உங்க இஷ்டப்படி எழுதுங்க. ஒரு நல்ல கலைஞன் எந்த விமர்சனத்தையும் காதுல வாங்காம அவனோட சிந்தனைய மட்டுமே படைப்பில் காட்டணும். நீங்க மிகச்சிறந்த கலைஞன். டார்ச் அடிபதினால் சூரியனுக்கு கண்ணு கூசாது. வாசகர்கள் அவங்க விருப்பம் விமர்சனம் வைப்பாங்க அதான் அவங்க வழக்கம். அதுவும் தவறு கிடையாது.

சக கலைஞ்சனா சொல்றேன் உங்க படைப்பை நீங்க எழுதுங்க. அவ்ளோதான். Response நல்லா இருக்கோ இல்லையோ அதைப்பத்தி கவலைபடாதீங்க.
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(09-10-2026, 07:06 PM)Ironman0 Wrote: Heygi already sollitarey Malli return varum pothu kaila pudi vegama adi nu athu namaku illa bro Rajiv ku....
Story end la athan nadakum.... Malliku ipo varaium gowtham mela konjam love iruku future la innum strong agum.... Solla mudiyathu malli gowtham kuda sex pannitu vanthu Rajiv ah nakka kuda vidulam

Bro 

 I don't want to hurt you personally by giving these comments

If you are having stuff and energy why shouldn't you are not writing your stories with your own thinking? 

Most of the readers and author too feel you are purposely giving Indecent comments to demotivating the Author to stop this story! 

This is not a good feel everyone. I hope you understand what I want to say.
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Heygi..
Why you are doing this to us.

Please don't stop like this.
You never know how many times I refresh this thread for any updates.

It is your story and your thoughts. You have all the right to do whatever you think.

Don't think bad about reader's mindset.

Here you are the captain of the ship. No one can stop or change your thoughts..

Please continue.

Yappa Rajiv fans gala.. Konjam amaithiya irungo..inum storyla neraya iruku.. Heygi ah kadupethi stop panni vitrathenga..

Already couples experiment story pathila nikuthunu varutha pattutu iruken..

Heygi. Please continue with your flow..

One suggestion to Rajiv fans.. Even I'm..
Pl leave this thread if you dont like this story.
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