[29e5o.a7.9.]

It is always the old man and young hot woman stories that is kinky and super hot to read. Those are the ones that are topping the charts. The reason this story is No. 1 in the chart is simply because young Meera fooled around with her old boss in front of her husband. That was the beginning! and that is the whole kink part! and has been the recurring theme every part. Mr Shekhar, Mr Das and Desai all were older men! That's what made the story super hot! that's what sold the story! Let's not forget the roots!

Meera also fooled around with younger men, like those twins in the apartment i think... don't remember correctly but who remembers that!

Why should Meera go for only younger men? and that too only one character lol she not seeking some validation that even though she Milfy, she can still score young dick! She's not that mindset, Meera is the Queen!

I am not saying I am totally against young men, if it is written in correct way it can be erotic too! If the character is too perfect and handsome than Meera then it will be boring to read. Anyway I mean Krish can use them as fillers for the story but definitely not as a long term main character lol. That would be a blunder!!

But if the young man or boy is someone like a fat pig who has low self esteem and can't get girl on his own and Meera takes pity on him and in the process something develops between them!? then that's kinky and erotic to read!

I say we up the notch and go full throttle. Let her go for even more deprived people! Like Ankita mentioned earlier, let her not go for usual "people of power and money" Let her go for someone who never in their life can lay with a woman like that...

[123goat369]

At this point she will be becoming a whore with old or old deprived men I think... Yes all started with old men but truly started with Krish's friend Sunny right ? Even not fully done... Might not need rich powerful old men... But may be like Armaan or someone younger for Dynqmic... If it is going back to old men like Narender auncle it is very low for Meera, may be as a dream sequence for erotic stuff it can be good ... But not to the story itself...

May be we need both sides perspective also needed.. if Meera is lustfull then she is either whore sort of nymph...

[Paty@123]

Writer ji, start the story as per your schedule plz

[29e5o.a7.9.]

At this point she will be becoming a whore with old or old deprived men I think... Yes all started with old men but truly started with Krish's friend Sunny right ? Even not fully done... Might not need rich powerful old men... But may be like Armaan or someone younger for Dynqmic... If it is going back to old men like Narender auncle it is very low for Meera,  may be as a dream sequence for erotic stuff it can be good ... But not to the story itself...

May be we need both sides perspective also needed.. if Meera is lustfull then she is either whore sort of nymph...

Thank you for agreeing that Meera with Narender uncle is erotic stuff ;)

After reading three parts you guys still think Meera's some pious sanskari character. And now that she got entangled with older men then she's a whore? if so then the three persons she obsessed and slept with were all older men so by your logic doesn't that make her a whore already?

Why do you think Meera is not supposed to have lustful feelings at all, like she's some robo lol

[Sagar s]

At this point she will be becoming a whore with old or old deprived men I think... Yes all started with old men but truly started with Krish's friend Sunny right ? Even not fully done... Might not need rich powerful old men... But may be like Armaan or someone younger for Dynqmic... If it is going back to old men like Narender auncle it is very low for Meera,  may be as a dream sequence for erotic stuff it can be good ... But not to the story itself...

May be we need both sides perspective also needed.. if Meera is lustfull then she is either whore sort of nymph...

Luk bro old man stuff in story feels more erotic nd understandable
While younger stuff doesn't,t make any sense Meera will never fall for them bczz krish is also young nd very smart she doesn't,t need any other younger men nd if author tries to put younger men it downgrade the level of story it feels like any other story on xossipy
So my request is put narendar uncle type character on front it will embark the begining of a new saga 
Many reader will not read the story if old man nd old characters r not there

[123goat369]

Sagar bro and 29e50 bro...I see your points for older men... Think Meera is attracted to bigger size than Krish and better in bed rather age if you think ... Shekhar I accept old man, but Das and Desai are not sought by her first right ? Even Mr Thomas is old guy and He even tried to have sex with meets but she rejected right ?

Yes she kind of became a lust crazed whore but not fully right ?

Other men in her Life Sunny, Armaan she sought them and they are young. But like 1 time thing

Only exception is Ashish who has same size as Krish and then Train guy is not attraction, they are fantasies by krish and her lust have in.

With the Aquarium guy she is just looking for options.

I am not saying to progress story only, want the story and erotic part but old powerful Men are same story all over again... Want something different and Author Krish will make sure to entertain us all regardless of what he wrote

[Lucifer8797]

Guys author did such a splendid job in 3 chapters. I think it would be better if we do not pit pressure on him and let him wrote the story the way he want… that way we will get the best version of story… afterall we knew his capability…

[Sagar s]

Guys author did such a splendid job in 3 chapters. I think it would be better if we do not pit pressure on him and let him wrote the story the way he want… that way we will get the best version of story… afterall we knew his capability…

Yes leave this discussion for later after the first update

[Demeter]

I found the plot and structure of the story very interesting and it was written in a very realistic way. I enjoyed reading the story very much and I really appreciated it.

I would like to politely ask Krish (the author) to consider writing the sequel from the perspectives of Krish and Meera.
In my opinion, this would make the story more exciting, suspenseful and dynamic.

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Demeter

[29e5o.a7.9.]

No pressure guys. It is just a humble request to our beloved author ;) It's better to give suggestion and ideas now in the story formation phase, than when it's too late. Because now Krish can see if the suggestions and ideas can be implemented to the story. Later on even Krish can't do anything. Like when people loved Narender uncle's character but nobody gave proper feedback so he sort of left it at there and am sure at the climax phase, even his hands were tied to do anything about it.

So if you guys have suggestions pls do. As far as I know he's the most open and down to earth author I've ever seen.

[29e5o.a7.9.]

Luk bro old man stuff in story feels more erotic nd understandable
While younger stuff doesn't,t make any sense Meera will never fall for them bczz krish is also young nd very smart she doesn't,t need any other younger men nd if author tries to put younger men it downgrade the level of story it feels like any other story on xossipy
So my request is put narendar uncle type character on front it will embark the begining of a new saga 
Many reader will not read the story if old man nd old characters r not there

Absolutely agreed my friend!

[29e5o.a7.9.]

Sayar bro and 29e50 bro...I see your points for older men... Think Meera is attracted to bigger size than Krish and better in bed rather age if you think ... Shekhar I accept old man, but Das and Desai are not sought by her first right ? Even Mr Thomas is old guy and He even tried to have sex with meets but she rejected right ?

Yes she kind of became a lust crazed whore but not fully right ?

Other men in her Life Sunny, Armaan she sought them and they are young. But like 1 time thing

Only exception is Ashish who has same size as Krish and then Train guy is not attraction, they are fantasies by krish and her lust have in.

With the Aquarium guy she is just looking for options.

I am not saying to progress story only, want the story and erotic part but old powerful Men are same story all over again... Want something different and Author Krish will make sure to entertain us all regardless of what he wrote

123goat bro! first i like to say I admire your knowledge on the story. Like to have healthy discussion with people who has read all the parts of the story.

I agree on the Desai part. She was probably attracted to his tool more than him. She knows his tool is the only thing that can satisfy her. For me it was not about his age (even though he's older) that was hot it was rather how ugly that guy was. And how his cunning personality and his mind games that made him the perfect villain. Krish repeatedly focused how fat his lips were. I guess it was the contrast between them! His relentless nature to develop schemes after schemes to have Meera no matter the cost. He probably was the only person who major impact than any her early suitors. Desai almost broke her and brought out her "inner whore" !

Sorry for turning your reply into Desai appreciation post lol.

But apart from that she's not always about size. She's more turned on, when krish is turned on and love to partake in his fantasies. (And sometimes she hates that about krish too, like the train incident)

Tbh I want to see her go completely lust crazed once in a while! For me that's erotic af! I want to see who will be the next man that make her go completely out of control and not be conscious of her krish.

Sorry bro my memory is a bit hazy, may I know when that Aquarium guys comes?

See I also don't want only old man flings for Meera. Let there be mix of characters and their unique stories, I am sure Krish knows how to cook up weird crazy erotic stories around them. My only request is to have Narender uncle (or any other character like him) as one of them characters :)) He seem very commoner one among the apartment guy, not your typical old powerful men. 

Even when I was reading Piyush's part (when Desai was convincing Krish that he can convice Meera to sleep with Piyush) even that was erotic af! I thought that shit gonna happen fr. Piyush was I think fat or obese.

[123goat369]

Hi All, these questions are for either Krish or any expert on this story.. I was re reading it and have couple of questions hope someone can answer

1. In chapter 40 was there ever an answer by Meera ? I couldn't find any where, this is in the beginning of chapter 40 where Meera stays home evening and ask Krish about asking sleeping with Desai behind him. At that moment Meera says she did something intimate with Desai and doesn't tell Krish and when he asks more she say after Krish recovery, but this was never answered what was the intimate moment between Meera and Desai as we know they didn't have sex, just a Kiss.

2. Does any one know what was previous ending and what was changed please ? Around chapter 41 and 42 ... Krish bro said he changed few things how much does it change or impact


3. Did author mistake the time or Krish Lied about when he slept with Maithrei ? He did it after concert night but not after wedding night as he confess in chapter 50 to Meera, feeling why would he lie about that or is it honest mistake ?


Also I updated the chapter Number to page number below for future readers

Chapter 48 - 205 page
49 - 216
50 - 225
51 - 243
End

[123goat369]

123goat bro! first i like to say I admire your knowledge on the story. Like to have healthy discussion with people who has read all the parts of the story.

I agree on the Desai part. She was probably attracted to his tool more than him. She knows his tool is the only thing that can satisfy her. For me it was not about his age (even though he's older) that was hot it was rather how ugly that guy was. And how his cunning personality and his mind games that made him the perfect villain. Krish repeatedly focused how fat his lips were. I guess it was the contrast between them! His relentless nature to develop schemes after schemes to have Meera no matter the cost. He probably was the only person who major impact than any her early suitors. Desai almost broke her and brought out her "inner whore" !

Sorry for turning your reply into Desai appreciation post lol.

But apart from that she's not always about size. She's more turned on, when krish is turned on and love to partake in his fantasies. (And sometimes she hates that about krish too, like the train incident)

Tbh I want to see her go completely lust crazed once in a while! For me that's erotic af! I want to see who will be the next man that make her go completely out of control and not be conscious of her krish.

Sorry bro my memory is a bit hazy, may I know when that Aquarium guys comes?

See I also don't want only old man flings for Meera. Let there be mix of characters and their unique stories, I am sure Krish knows how to cook up weird crazy erotic stories around them. My only request is to have Narender uncle (or any other character like him) as one of them characters :)) He seem very commoner one among the apartment guy, not your typical old powerful men. 

Even when I was reading Piyush's part (when Desai was convincing Krish that he can convice Meera to sleep with Piyush) even that was erotic af! I thought that shit gonna happen fr. Piyush was I think fat or obese.

Its super healthy discussion and like to see other perspective and agree with you

Thank for compliments on my knowledge of the story, even I miss couple as my post above.

No problem on Desai appreciation.. old dude nailed Meera like no other so give him that... I see your point of the tool and her being more erotic 

The Aquarium guy is the one she goes on Date once and give him head, he is the one who rang Meera's other home when she is separated and was "wrong address"

Piyush I can see but Author told he will not fuck so may be not. I see narender auncle biew but highly doubt they go back to that apartment but like I said a dream sequence is erotic af

I will be honest my mind was fucked after reading, I re read this few time although not all chapters but few and few epiosdes
I even wrote my own version of epilogue to get it out of my system its in page 255, I am not good at erotic part

If this is starting again I only want erotic stuff not much on Dram but ending with Krish and Meera on Higher note

[29e5o.a7.9.]

Its super healthy discussion and like to see other perspective and agree with you

Thank for compliments on my knowledge of the story, even I miss couple as my post above.

No problem on Desai appreciation.. ild dude nailed Meera like no other so give him that... I see your point of the tool and her being more erotic 

The Aquarium guy is the one she goes on Date once and give him head, he is the one who rang Meera's other home when she is separated and was "wrong address"

Piyush I can see but Author told he will not fuck so may be not. I see narender auncle biew but highly doubt they go back to that apartment but like I said a dream sequence is erotic af

I will be honest my mind was fucked after reading, I re read this few time although not all chapters but few and few epiosdes
I even wrote my own version of epilogue to get it out of my system its in page 255, I am not good at erotic part

If this is starting again I only want erotic stuff not much on Dram but ending with Krish and Meera on Higher note

Thanks bro! I did not knew about the epilogue u wrote, I'll definitely check it out!

[amzad2004]

Love bond between krish and meera is the soul of the story. Meera won't sexually involved with anyone behind krish's back. She did it once with desai which almost cost her marriage. She learned her lesson. In part 4 she will involve with some one only for krish's kink. She will never take any risk to lose her husband and child. She did not feel any lust for any one. End of the part 3 with desai it was out come of the frustration actually. Now enough with the old man. Even old man involvement is not realistic coz an old man has bp, diabetes, heart problems, erection problem etc. That is why author krish should think about the young character angle as he is a classical erotic story writer not cheap sex story writer.Few mentally ill readers only want old man angle but rest of all readers want young man angle. Hope author krish will understand and will take the right decision.

[RCF]

1. In chapter 40 was there ever an answer by Meera ? I couldn't find any where, this is in the beginning of chapter 40 where Meera stays home evening and ask Krish about asking sleeping with Desai behind him. At that moment Meera says she did something intimate with Desai and doesn't tell Krish and when he asks more she say after Krish recovery, but this was never answered what was the intimate moment between Meera and Desai as we know they didn't have sex, just a Kiss.


2. Does any one know what was previous ending and what was changed please ? Around chapter 41 and 42 ... Krish bro said he changed few things how much does it change or impact


3. Did author mistake the time or Krish Lied about when he slept with Maithrei ? He did it after concert night but not after wedding night as he confess in chapter 50 to Meera, feeling why would he lie about that or is it honest mistake ?

1. It was a kiss and intimate touching and no sex, which still keeps the promise she made while Krish was recovering that no sex.  When the author rewrote the ending, that explanatory line from Meera seems to have been lost. 

2. 
Both versions share the same setup up to late Chapter 41: the Piyush test, the Jai secret coming out, the drilled holes, Meera's "once a whore" outburst, and Krish leaving the house. They split from there.

Original ending:

• Desai declares his love on his knees. Meera "chooses" him in front of Krish and sleeps with him with the door open, while Krish watches (One of the hottest sex and emotional one for Krish watching losing her to him in that episode, it broke many people originally)
  
• Krish spends the night at Parvati's. They come close to sleeping together, but he stops.
  
• If I recall correctly, Krish's recorder reveals that Meera's choice was a performance. She wanted Krish to stop loving her and move on, and she says on the recording: "I don't want Krish to learn how much I love him."
  
• At home, Meera tells Krish she still loves him and calls him "my destiny".
  
• Nidhi arrives and exposes Desai: he had blackmailed her into sex, and those "sounds" were her.
  
• Meera throws Desai out  and reconciles with Krish. 
  

Revised ending:

• Nidhi's confession is moved up to Ch42 after Desai's confession himself, and Meera largely forgives Desai.
  
• The couple try to go back to normal. Then the affair restarts in secret: the concert night, Ritu's wedding, Alpine Heights.
  
• Krish sleeps with Maithrei and nearly sleeps with Nidhi.
  
• Krish decides they should separate, and Meera agrees to leave with Desai after their 10th anniversary.
  
• On the anniversary night, Desai pulls Krish into a threesome. Meera realises Desai is just like Krish and leaves both of them.
  
• Epilogue: Krish goes on a pilgrimage. When he returns, Meera is pregnant with his child, and they reunite.
  

In the original ending, Desai is the villain who gets exposed and Meera turns back to Krish out of love before Nidhi even arrives.
In the revised version, Desai turns out to be a voyeur like Krish, Meera has a genuine secret affair with him, and the pregnancy brings the couple back together.

3. It's most likely the author's mistake. Krish usually tells the reader when he is lying to Meera and here his narration says he is gathering the courage to be more honest. There's no hint that he's deliberately changing the date.

~RCF

[123goat369]

1. It was a kiss and intimate touching and no sex, which still keeps the promise she made while Krish was recovering that no sex.  When the author rewrote the ending, that explanatory line from Meera seems to have been lost. 

2. 
Both versions share the same setup up to late Chapter 41: the Piyush test, the Jai secret coming out, the drilled holes, Meera's "once a whore" outburst, and Krish leaving the house. They split from there.

Original ending:

• Desai declares his love on his knees. Meera "chooses" him in front of Krish and sleeps with him with the door open, while Krish watches (One of the hottest sex and emotional one for Krish watching losing her to him in that episode, it broke many people originally)
  
• Krish spends the night at Parvati's. They come close to sleeping together, but he stops.
  
• If I recall correctly, Krish's recorder reveals that Meera's choice was a performance. She wanted Krish to stop loving her and move on, and she says on the recording: "I don't want Krish to learn how much I love him."
  
• At home, Meera tells Krish she still loves him and calls him "my destiny".
  
• Nidhi arrives and exposes Desai: he had blackmailed her into sex, and those "sounds" were her.
  
• Meera throws Desai out  and reconciles with Krish. 
  

Revised ending:

• Nidhi's confession is moved up to Ch42 after Desai's confession himself, and Meera largely forgives Desai.
  
• The couple try to go back to normal. Then the affair restarts in secret: the concert night, Ritu's wedding, Alpine Heights.
  
• Krish sleeps with Maithrei and nearly sleeps with Nidhi.
  
• Krish decides they should separate, and Meera agrees to leave with Desai after their 10th anniversary.
  
• On the anniversary night, Desai pulls Krish into a threesome. Meera realises Desai is just like Krish and leaves both of them.
  
• Epilogue: Krish goes on a pilgrimage. When he returns, Meera is pregnant with his child, and they reunite.
  

In the original ending, Desai is the villain who gets exposed and Meera turns back to Krish out of love before Nidhi even arrives.
In the revised version, Desai turns out to be a voyeur like Krish, Meera has a genuine secret affair with him, and the pregnancy brings the couple back together.

3. It's most likely the author's mistake. Krish usually tells the reader when he is lying to Meera and here his narration says he is gathering the courage to be more honest. There's no hint that he's deliberately changing the date.

~RCF

Thank you RCF bro for this.

1. Thank for this closure, yeah if its just that, it make sense. I am assuming it might be when they are outside at temple or party or in kitchen?

2. So originally it ended like that and no further chapters ? 
I like this one making Desai who he is a villain and good ending... But I can see why the Author extended and gave another ending... Which was good but left a hole as its rushed. Which also makes people asking for chapter 4...

3. That's what I thought on this, Thanks for confirming....

[RCF]

I would only say one thing without going into much debates after all this time....

Revised version had the better ideas and the original had the better execution.

~RCF

[123goat369]

Hi all. 
Sorry for keeping you and other readers waiting for so long. Life has been very busy with me. Couldn't help. And the wait will have to continue till December so that I can have a progress to show. Yes, I'm writing it. The part 4 is coming. As per my calculations it will have 20-30 chapters. I'm aiming to start in January, with weekly updates like my previous story. 
Thank you all, for commenting and showing love and support to my story. 
Love. Krish.

Hi Krish Bro...  If you still have chapter 41 and 42 before changes can you please add here or on separate thread, it sounds so erotic and we will not judge or discuss on this pleae bro... So we can see what its about

If possible you can ping me separately :)