Adultery A husband's mistake - A wife's transformation

[harired]

Your are building the story great and keeping us hooked Eagerly waiting for next update 
Please post long updates and if possible more frequently

[RadhikaNayar]

Nicely progressing. Can't wait to read the romantic adventures between Romeo and Juliet. Please update soon

[Bloodylust]

Excellent update. You are turning up the heat so cleverly. Eager to know what actually happened. I guess He might have been decent with her. Everyone are taking advantage of her, Let him be an exception.
Just my opinion.

Good luck,
Sweet Swetha

[rahulishere]

Please share your feedback and suggestions.

[urssrini]

Please share your feedback and suggestions.

Hi Rahul,
Your story is too good, but you are giving a short story. after waiting 3 to 4 weeks. Either give us a big update for 3 weeks or a weekly one short update.
          This is my request. Thank you

[ChandruDelighty]

Hey Rahul

I started xossipy reading with your story husband's mistake.
It was superbly engaging. Your writing made me fall for Sukanya.
Intimate moments with sharath was so good.
Vimals crooked mind and his portion was so cinematic.

Later when after new thread was created..
I felt little less for me. Seeing Sukanya as college girl was little diminishing the plot.
But I felt you traversed through it nicely now.
With Praveen.. Sukanya might transform now.. Until now she is lovable wife of Raghav.

Good going..
Pl try to update frequently.
Sometimes longer breaks makes us less engaging towards the story.

Good Job Rahul.

[rahulishere]

Thank you @harired, @radhikanayar, @swetha, @urssrini, @chandrudelighty for your comments and feedback.

[rahulishere]

I will try to post updates more frequently. But as you know, I'm travelling back and forth on official assignments. However I'll try my best. I'll try to post an update today.

[rahulishere]

Hey Rahul

I started xossipy reading with your story husband's mistake.
It was superbly engaging. Your writing made me fall for Sukanya.
Intimate moments with sharath was so good.
Vimals crooked mind and his portion was so cinematic.

Later when after new thread was created..
I felt little less for me. Seeing Sukanya as college girl was little diminishing the plot.
But I felt you traversed through it nicely now.
With Praveen.. Sukanya might transform now.. Until now she is lovable wife of Raghav.

Good going..
Pl try to update frequently.
Sometimes longer breaks makes us less engaging towards the story.

Good Job Rahul.

Thank you so much for spending time to write a detailed feedback. I respect your opinion and agree with your points. It's always satisfying for a writer when he/she receives feedback, may it be positive or negative. I'll post an update today.

[rahulishere]

Update 54

Nithi began teasing Sukanya with that incident. Sukanya initially hated the taunt and warned her against it, but slowly she started to enjoy the tease.
Nithi: Hey tell me di. You did not even have a slight consciousness about all that he did? Not even vaguely?
Sukanya: No.
Nithi: How did you feel when he said about the incident?
Sukanya: Angry
Nithi: Only angry? Not even an iota of thrill?
Sukanya: Shut up. I was furious then.
Nithi: That’s ok dear. You were furious then. What about now?
Sukanya: Hmm… I wished I had some consciousness.
Nithi: Whatever. He’s a lucky dog. He got to see you naked. Don’t worry, you will also get a chance in return.
Sukanya: Hey, shut up.
Nithi: Just kidding di.
Sukanya: No. I actually saw him.
Nithi: What!!!
She shouted at the top of her voice. Sukanya felt embarrassed to admit it.
Nithi: Tell me di. What was it like? Length, girth, shape, color…
Sukanya: Hey, stop… stop. I don’t want to talk about it.
Nithi: That’s not fair. Come on tell me.
Sukanya: Alright. All I can say it is, it’s big.
Nidhi: Big or huge?
Sukanya: You are impossible. Alright. It’s huge.
Nithi: How huge?
Sukanya: Enough of questions. I’m not going to talk about it now.
Nithi: Whatever. You found your horse at last.
Sukanya: Won’t you shut up?
Sukanya felt light after she unloaded everything from her heart. She felt some unknown relief. But she decided to maintain a dignified distance with Praveen. They were hesitant to talk in the beginning, but slowly started to talk with restraint. Their relationship took a couple of months to reset to the normal stage, but eventually they put the incident behind. Everything was normal at college. Nithi stayed over Sukanya’s flat nearly alternate weekends. It was almost like the incident never happened. Sukanya and Praveen chatted like before with some subtle progress over the time.

WhatsApp Chat

Praveen: Hey, you know. They have announced regarding Cultural fest next month.
Sukanya: Yeah. I saw that in the notice board.
Praveen: Thinking of participating?
Sukanya: Don’t know.
Praveen: You are a star dear. You should. The Fest will be a different league if you participate.
Sukanya: You are too much.
Praveen: There is a dance competition. You should participate.
Sukanya: Huh! I’m not a dancer.
Praveen: Come on. Don’t be so humble. I know you are a very good dancer.
Sukanya: How do you know?
Praveen: I saw you dance in the pub, remember?
Praveen immediately regretted reminding the incident. Sukanya went silent. She did not respond for a few minutes. Praveen knocked himself on his head. For the past two months the incident was not even remotely mentioned.
Praveen: Hey, sorry to talk about it.
Sukanya: Actually, I’m sorry.
Praveen: Why are you sorry?
Sukanya: Don’t you know?
Praveen: About the slaps?
Sukanya: Yeah. I shouldn’t have done that. If you want you also slap me.
Praveen: Are you mad? I forgot most of it.
Both of them didn’t know then that, in the days to come, Praveen will slap her many more times, but not with his hand.
Sukanya: What do you mean by most of it? So, you still remember some of it?
She did not think before asking that question, but just as she send the message, she guessed what he would still remember.
Praveen: I remember that was the only time you graced my house with your presence.
Sukanya: Thank you Praveen. You are an honest person.
Praveen: Don’t say that.
Sukanya: Why?
Praveen: Because I have not been honest.
Sukanya: What are you not honest about?
Praveen: If I say that you might hate me.
She started to feel uneasy. Why would she hate him. Did he do something to deserve her hate?
Sukanya: Tell me.
Praveen: Ungh… Actually… I… remember cleaning you and then…
Sukanya: Ok… Ok… Now stop.
Sukanya: You dirty fellow. Why will you remember that?
Praveen: Because I do not control what to remember and what to forget. And I swear, I mean not ill intention.
She understood that it’s natural for any male with active hormones to feel the same way. She appreciated that he was honest about it.
Sukanya: Ok, ok. Now, let’s not talk about that.
She paused for a moment.
Sukanya: Tell me one thing. Nothing happened that I don’t know right.
Praveen: You don’t trust me?
Sukanya: I trust you. But you try to forget everything.
Praveen: The more I try to forget, the more I remember. Can you do me a favour?
Sukanya: Wh… what?
Praveen: Let my memories stay where they are. I assure you they won’t create any trouble for you.
Sukanya: I know you.
Praveen: And hey…
Sukanya: What?
Praveen: What are you wearing?
Sukanya: You rascal. I will slap you again.
She told jovially. Without their knowledge, this has been an ordinary question. It’s started playfully once in the flow of conversations and then it became casual. Their chat sometimes turned naughty. But they never crossed the limit beyond the chat.
Praveen: Tell me di.
Sukanya: Red nighty.
Praveen: Oh! Only red nighty?
Sukanya: Shut up. Shameless.
Praveen: No, I’m asking so that I can help you. I have a set of yours with me. Remember.
Sukanya: Return them to me.
Praveen: Then tell me.
Sukanya: Alright. Yes, only red nighty. Happy?
Praveen: Very happy.
Sukanya: I didn’t mean that. Return my items.
Praveen: You tell me what you want me to return, I will do it.
Sukanya: No need. You keep them with you, monkey.
Praveen: Thank you, Arabian horse.
Sukanya: Your parents are wasting money on your college. Female sex of a horse is called mare, not a horse.
Praveen: You are Arabian mare? Then I should be the horse.
As he said that his erect cock flashed in her mind. In the beginning she would feel embarrassed, but she got accustomed to the memory. She smiled.
Sukanya: Yes, you are indeed a horse.
Praveen: My dear Juliet.
Sukanya: What, my Romeo?
Praveen: Send me a selfie.
It had become quite normal for them to share selfies. She sent a selfie. She did not mind adjusting her dress. There’s nothing he hasn’t seen, she naughtily thought.



There was a pause.
Sukanya: Are you there?
Praveen: I’m here, but my heart is there.
Sukanya: Shut up rascal.
Praveen: You look so hot di. Really.
Such compliments have also become common between them.
Sukanya: Enough. Now, go to sleep.
Praveen: Won’t you ask for my selfie??
Sukanya: I know what state you would be in. So, no thanks.
Praveen: It is fair right. Might settle the score between us.
Sukanya: What do you mean?
Praveen: Nothing. Leave it. Just messing with you.
Sukanya: No, tell me.
Praveen: Hmm… I saw you. If you saw me, the scores will be level, you know.
Sukanya: No need to settle scores. Thank you.
She remembered the day when she saw his erect cock and felt ripples across her body.
Sukanya: Hey. I’ll ask you one thing. You should answer honestly.
Praveen: Yes. Shoot.
Sukanya: That night… What really happened? Tell me honestly.
Praveen: Everything?
Sukanya: Yes. I don’t remember anything. I want to know.
She remembered similar instance when Vimal was drunk and lost his consciousness. The incident occupied her thoughts. She remembered how she sucked his erect dick till he came. She shook off the memory as she always wanted to forget it. She was afraid something like that had happened to her.
Sukanya: From the dance.
Praveen was hesitant, but he agreed.
Praveen: Alright. I know you won’t like it. But I also do not want to carry the burden any longer.
He took his time to prepare himself to share an uncomfortable event.
Praveen: I played the music, and I asked you for a dance. As we danced, we started having champagne. In the flow of time, I lost count of how many shots we had. I believe, we had 5 shots each. Champagne usually shows the effect gradually. Don’t know how long it took, but without a warning you started to puke. You lost consciousness. Then I carried you to the bedroom. I laid you on the bed to find that the puke had spread all over your body, and partly over me. I was also a little high, but I reacted in an instant. Instinctively I quickly took off your top and your skirt. I noticed that vomit was all over your body. Even on your inners. I rushed to the bathroom and brought a bucket of water and a tower. I Wet the towel and tried to wipe it off your inners, but it only smeared all over. So, I took them off.
He paused as he sent the message. Sukanya was reading the message very carefully. Her body temperature began to rise and her heart rate increased. She began to sweat and but her body shivered. She took some time to read it carefully. She noticed that he had discontinued.
Sukanya: Then…
He again started typing. As she saw the notification that he was typing she was restless about what he would type. She waited with bated breath as he took his time typing the message. As she received the message she felt ripples in her body.
Praveen: I took them off and put them in the bathroom to be washed. I then returned to clean you. I wet the towel and looked at you, I felt dizzy. I actually felt that it was a dream. Not that I was wishing for it, but it felt surreal. I cleaned you up fully with the wet towel. I felt it was not appropriate to let you sleep in that condition. Hence, I rushed to the car and brought your dress. I was feeling high due to the running. I was also very nervous. With great difficulty I slipped your skirt, but in my condition the rest was very difficult. Hence, I left them by your side and immediately moved to the adjacent bedroom.
She took quite some time to read the message, but she felt that anyone in his situation would have taken advantage of her. She appreciated him for not doing so.
Sukanya: Thank you for maintaining decency. You are a genuine person. I’m proud of you.
Her trust in Praveen made him feel guilty that he let her make an upon based on half-truth. More than being happy of winning her trust, he felt guilty of deceiving her. With great hesitation, he typed a response.
Praveen: Your trust in me is killing me. I can’t live with the burden. I have to tell you the full truth.
Sukanya: What?!

[harired]

Hi Rahul

You mentioned in the latest update that Sukanya Praveen relationship took couple of months to reset, in the mean time what happened between Raghava and Sukanya. I request you to post the things happened between Raghava and Sukanya in the next update and then continue with Praveen Sukanya. I hope things get sorted out between Raghava and Sukanya

[rahulishere]

Hi Rahul

You mentioned in the latest update that Sukanya Praveen relationship took couple of months to reset, in the mean time what happened between Raghava and Sukanya. I request you to post the things happened between Raghava and Sukanya in the next update and then continue with Praveen Sukanya. I hope things get sorted out between Raghava and Sukanya

Sure Harired. I will surely add an update about the equation between Raghava and Sukanya

[harired]

Sure Harired. I will surely add an update about the equation between Raghava and Sukanya

Just want to know what was your initial thought about the equation between Raghava and Sukanya, did you think to skip it for now and to take it up later or you missed it. My thought, the story goes on interesting if the scenes between Raghava Sukanya and Praveen Sukanya goes parallel

[rahulishere]

Just want to know what was your initial thought about the equation between Raghava and Sukanya, did you think to skip it for now and to take it up later or you missed it. My thought, the story goes on interesting if the scenes between Raghava Sukanya and Praveen Sukanya goes parallel

I did not think of skipping. But didn't want to insert it in the midst of a flow. Nothing much will be mentioned about Raghava and Sukanya, but will let you know about the state of their relationship. Focus will be on Praveen and Sukanya. Few surprises in between.

[ChandruDelighty]

Good Going Rahul,

Intensity between Praveen and Sukanya is increasing,
But you didn't reveal the details of affair with whom Raghav is in..(Hopefully It could be a surprise too )
also is there any emotional ties between Husband and Wife bcoz the way Sukanya moved over was little fast.

I would appreciate if you propose the timeline for the next update, it would be perfect.

[rahulishere]

Good Going Rahul,

Intensity between Praveen and Sukanya is increasing,
But you didn't reveal the details of affair with whom Raghav is in..(Hopefully It could be a surprise too )
also is there any emotional ties between Husband and Wife bcoz the way Sukanya moved over was little fast.

I would appreciate if you propose the timeline for the next update, it would be perfect.

Details will be revealed at the apt time buddy. There are surprises. Don't want to spoil it. Will update the timeline once I check my project delivery calendar buddy.

[Vithavithama]

What happened to husband character

[rahulishere]

What happened to husband character

Husband character has less role here, for now. I'm glad someone is worried about her husband 

[harired]

Husband character has less role here, for now. I'm glad someone is worried about her husband 

Not Just One Most of us are worried

[rahulishere]

Not Just One Most of us are worried

That's really good to hear buddy. Honestly.