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RATI ne dekha ki abhi na baat Kar ke baad mei pitaji se baat karongi wo wapas mud ke bagh ke tubewell ki aur chalne hi waali thi ki usko ha ha ha ha ha ha ... Ki aawaj uske kaano Mei padi bas rati ko gussa as gaya koi kisi per nahi usper hasa aur usne apne baap ki di pistol apne lahenge ke Jeb se nikali aur mud Kar usne pistol saamne ki tho usko sadhu baba hi hasta Nazar aaya baaki sab usi tarah thye ...
Ch. MADHAV guruji ke pair dabaa raha tha, saare Goan wale aur mazdoor haath joor ke zameen Mei baithe thye aur Sadhu baba ki ankah khuli hui thi aur wo has rahein thye , rati me unki anko tej Dekh Kar khud hi pistol niche Kar li aur sar jhakh ke unke samne hath jod ke baith gayi aur boli babaji mujhe maaf Kar de meine apradh Kiya hai aap per pistol taan Kar ...
Baba ke face per muskan as gayi aur bole Meri aachi putri tu mere pass aaja . RATI uthi Nazar jhukti hui babaji ke pass ja Kar unko charnoo ko dekhte roone lagi aur boli sadhu mere Bhagwan mujh ko mafh kardo Mei apne kiye aur gusse per sharminda hun .
Baba Mei tere liye hi main itni door see aaya hun tujhe ye baat karne ki jis RAJVEER ka rishta tujko aaya hai to uss ke saath tujhe vivah karna hoga ...
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RATI aab bhi ro rahi this aur apna sar jhukye huye aur apna sir usne baba ke Charan Mei rakh Kar hila ke apni sahmati bataa di wo tyaar hai ...
Baba ne hooke ki 2-3 gud gud ki aur RATI ke sar per hath pher ke usko khada hone ke liya kaha , eo bechari kishori soobkhtye aur hichkiya lete huye apni gardan jukhakar aur haath jor ke khadhi ho gayi . Babaji bole putri tum niraash na ho aur mere taraf dekho per RATI abhi bhi soobkh rahi this aur gardan utha ke usne dekha to uska face Khushi se chamakne laga kyonki babaji usko Dekh Kar muskara rahe thye aur wo babaji ke tej ko , per bar Bina gawye usne hath jor diye aur apna see unke jhukha Diya ...
Sadhu RATI ko bole putri Mei tumse bhout Khush hun aur tumko sabh Khushi millegyi jiski tum hakdaar ho , tumahara janam is sansaar ke liye kalayan ke liye hua hai . Mei tum ko ek var deta hun Jo tum apne liye ya santaan ke liye ya uski santaan ke liye maang sakti ho ..
RATI ko kuch samj nahi as Raha tha phir wo boli Mahatma mujhe maaf karein Kya Mei phooch sakti Hoon aap koon hai aur mujh jaise aam larki se Milne aaye Hain ? ?..
Sadhu muskara ke bole mujhe tumare hoone wali beti ke bete me bhejha hai ....
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RATI apni phati hui ankhoon se sadhu baba aur apne baba ki taraf dekh rahi thi phir usko laga ki uske baba bagar uski taraf dekh Kar Sadhu baba ke pair dabaa rahein Hain , tabhi usko jhataka laga saare majdoor aur Goan wale bus hath jor Kar baba ko Dekh rahein Hain phir usne aas pass dekha to uski aankhien phatti ki phatti rahein gayi kyonki us 10 metre door ek tootaa(parrot) apne wings spend kiye ruka hua hei aur phir usne charoo tarf dekha sub kuch ruka hai bas uske pitaji ko chod Kar abhi bhi madhoshi ki haalat Mei guruji ke pair dabaa rahein Hain .
RATI sir jhukha Kar boli guruji aap sab phele jaise Kar dein . Guruji bole vardan to tum ne liya nahi tab Tak ye ruka rahyega , to samay na nust Kar ke bolo Kya vardan mangti ho ..
RATI Devi me kuch Socha aur mushkara ki boli guruji Meri ek beti hogi ? Aur uska beta hoga ? ???
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Guruji smile ke saath bole thatathsuu , beti tumne var maag ke sahi naaye Kiya hai ...tumhare upar Bhagwan hamesha Khush ho ...
Guruji apni jaagh see Uthker baaki abhi bhi samay rukaa hua tha ..
Beti aab hum chalte Hain .
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Sadhu Maharaj Kya aap vardan Bina hi chale jaa rahein Hain ????
Sadhu baba apni shakal per baarh baajte huye bole putri vardan to tum maang liya apni beti aur uske putre ke Roop Mei ...
RATI maandh maandh phali baar , yahen aane ke baad muskai aur bolo maafh karein sadhu Maharaj mein ne vardan kab maanga mein to sirf ye aap phucha ki Meri beti hogi uska beta hoga agar apka yahi vardan hai to Mei chamha mangti Hoon ...
Sadhu kuch samay vichaar ke baad bole putri tum vardan maang sakti per ab soch samaj ke mangna kyonki ye vardan ab tumhari prakisha layega ..
RATI soch Mei padgayi ki vardaan kis ke liye maangu apne liya , hone wale pati ke liye , apne pita ke liye ya apne hone wale baccho ke liye ...
Sadhu Maharaj bole putri Bina kisi vimlambh ke apna vardan mang lo nahin to mere jaane ka saamy ho gaya hai ..
RATI ke brain mei sirf guruji ka samay hi rah gaya aur boli guruji mujhe aap ye vardan de jab samay aaye to main aapko yaad Karon aap usko is vardan ki saari sakhti pradaan karein jisko Mei sabse jaada Pyaar karti hun .
Guruji muskara ke bole beti tune ye vardan apne liye nahi maanga , chal tujko ek mantra deta hun ki jab tujhe Mera vardan chaiye hoga dilse to tujhe u mantra bhi yaad aa jayega aur vardan bhi ... Thatatsuu
Guruji ke intna bolne see hi sab phele jaisa ho gaya
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RATI apne pitaji aur Goan wali ke saamye khadi thi aur nevdekha ki sab usko ghur rahein Hain to San per chilla ke boli agar kisi kamchoor ne abhi apna kaam nahi Kiya to usko apne ghaghere se pistol nikal Kar Hawaii for karke goli mardungi ...
Bus baagh Mei insane hi nahi pushu aur pareende Mei bhi khalbali much gayi aur sab majdoor kaam per aur Goan wale Jo ch. MADHAV ki choukhat per aaye the baag ke bhar intazaar Kar rahe thye .
Phale to Choudry MADHAV apni beti per Khush phir usko pistol Dekh Kar dukhi hua per bola kuch nahin , RATI boli baapu Meri Shaadi Kar do Mei tyaar ho tu jis se bolega raja ho ya fakir . Ch. MADHAV apni beti ki baat sunke Khush ho gaya aur usne apni beti ki Shaadi RAJVEER ke sath bahut haathi , ghore aur jewerat ke sath ki per RATI sabkuch apna attitude , apne rajsahi thaat , apna garoor bus wo apni sasural Mei ek aam vivahit stri ban gayi aur usne 4 bacchoo ko jaanam Diya 2 maare baacho ko bhi per maajal hai koi usko Dekh ke bol de yahi RATI Devi hai Choudry MADHAV SINGH ki ekloti beti crore ki Waris ...
RATI Devi aur RAJVEER ki family in next update
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i have a suggestion when u type the story first type in ms office or in word pad first and copy from it and paste in this so if server hangs also u would have backup then just copy from it and paste u will not loose time and content.
super begining continue the story like this only but in single update with large update
just my suggestion
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(07-07-2019, 12:21 PM)vkf Wrote: i have a suggestion when u type the story first type in ms office or in word pad first and copy from it and paste in this so if server hangs also u would have backup then just copy from it and paste u will not loose time and content.
super begining continue the story like this only but in single update with large update
just my suggestion
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Sorry for delay ..
NANAji ke FAMILY
NANAji RAJVEER SINGH age 58 yrs , ht 5'11"" . He is Zameendaar and Pradhan of his village.
NANIJI. RATI Devi age 52 yrs , ht 5 '7" , very beautiful upto this age , she is very fair like milk and good dancer , singer and artist which r very uncommon during that time for village women.
Her father is very big Zameendaar of 40 villages under him , her mother expired given birth to her and being only child her father raised her with all love and affection .
She loves two persons most one her first child (daughter) SAROO and next her daughter's first child MAHI .
RAJVEER and RATI have 2 sons and 3 daughters . their 3 child born dead but overall rati got pregnant for 8* times (7 ).
RATI and RAJVEER have 5 living children .
1) Eldest daughter SAROO (hero's mother ) age 35 yrs ht 5 ' 7 " very fair and most caring person in family . Her husband , children and family is whole world for herself and taking care of them .
SAROO husband .... Raj Singh ( hero's father ) Engineer, age 36 yrs ht 6 '2" very fair.
SAROO 's son ....(HERO) --- MAHI ( MAHARYAN ) AGE 18 YRS , Ht 6' 7" , very cute and innocent like his mother ,handsome and very fair complex . waiting for his 12th and engineering results.
Daughter - ANKITA ( ANI) age ** yrs , ht 5'8" very fair and cute, carbon copy of RATI Devi .
2) ASHUTOSH SINGH ( bade MAMA) 34 yrs age , ht 5 '10" saara zameen aur business sambhalte Hain .
KAVITA ( BADI Mami) age 33 yrs , ht 5'8" , color very fair , very shy and hard-working lady who take cares of all household works . she loves mahi as her son . have 2 children
daughter .... DOLLY age ** yrs
son. ..... Rahul * yrs
3) MANJU second daughter ( 1st masi of mahi) age 31 yrs, ht 5'3" , some what bulky side ( short ht and 80 kg wt) very fair and cute . loves mahi as her own son . she hated her sasural family members and loves maternal side members more. She even spend more time with in her mother' home. Her only daughter NEHA age ** yrs just like rati Devi very fair and naughty . For Neha his mousi son MAHI is everything her. Her brother , her role model and most important love of her life ( silent , secret) .
MAUSAji .... Devinder Singh age 40yrs , ACP crime branch in Lucknow .
4) SATEESH Singh ( chote Mama) age 28 yrs ht 6'1" , very simple and calm person , nice personality and computer Engineer , AGM in MNC in USA.
RITA SINGH (choti Mami ) age 30 yrs ht 5'9" ( 2 yrs elder than her husband) , very fair and dominant personality , PhD economics and Professor in University . her only son VASU * and * yr old. She is guide , mentor and guru of MAHI . Very high headed but loves mahi more than her family . Everybody respects her due to her intelligence and smartness and she always have more solutions for any problem . Rita taught MAHI yoga and meditations .
5) GEETA (3rd daughter of RATI and 2nd maasi of mahi ) age 21 yrs ht 5'11" , broad frame Bob cut hair wheatish color but very attractive features . Doing PG in arts but kusti and marital experts , unmarried, dominanting and aggressive in nature. Nobody have guts to face her angriness even her parents except one her love and Babu MAHI . MAHI for her is as her soul and peace with him she only behave as girl but infront of others is very much like "Chandi Geeta" . (Chandi is goddess of fear and demons killer )
RAJVEER and RATI others family members details will come as per situations and updates ..
NEXT UPDATE ABOUT GEETA ( CHANDI)
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Thanks for your support and patience .
From next update story start in full flow.
I will try to give 3 to 4 updates weekly and mega update on weekends.
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UPDATE 01
GEETA ( CHANDI her nick name )
Aaj se koi 21 saal phele ki baat hai , us time Rati Devi pregnant thi aur delivery ke liye apne bapu ke yahan aayi hui thi Saroo ke sath . delivery ka abhi ek hafta baaki tha . Usi time Thakur Govind jo rajveer ka dost tha apni bhen ke sath Ch. MADHAV SINGH ke pass aaya apni vidwah bhen ke sath jo us samay pet se (pregnant)thi jiska naam RANI tha . Rani ka pati army me tha aur mara gaya Shaadi ko 1 saal hi hua tha ki jab uske Marne ki kabhar aayi to uske sasural walone usko manhus kah kar nikal diya aur Rani ke baap aur doosre bhai logo ne aur Bhabhi ne usko apne ghar me panha na di ki kyonki uska manhus saaya unke praviar per bhi padega. Thakur Govind unmarried tha usne apni bhen ko apne sath lekar Ghar chor diya aur usko le kar Haridwar aa gaya yahan woh ek ashram se juda hua tha . Ek baar Haridwar me uski mulakat Rajveer aur Rati se hui (us time Rati ka 7th month chal raha tha ) aur apne bhen ke dukh or takleef ke baare me baatya to Rati boli woh apne pitaji se mil kar uska koi solution nikal legi . Uske baad Rati apne pitaji ke Guest House me govind aur Rani ka intzaam kar apni badi beti Saroo ko le kar apni delivery mayake me karwane aagayi. Uski delivery se ek week phele Rani bhi wahan aa gayi Govind ke sath plan ke hisab se . Undono ka Choudry ne dosri havelli per rukne ka intzaam kar diya taaki pata na chale .
Ek din shaam se Rati ko dard ho raha tha Choudry ne ek nurse aur doctor ka intzaam kar rakha tha, delivery raat me kabhi bhi ho sakti thi . raat ko 1 baje Rati ne ek bacchi ko janam diya jo maryt ( born dead) paida hui, Rati poori tarah ye kabher sun kar toott gayi aur roti roti MAHI !!!!!!MAHI!!!!! MAHI !!!!!!!chillane lagi poori hawelli me uski cheekh gunz rahi thi . Doctor ne usko neend ka injection de kar sula diya. Kareeb jab sab hall me beth kar gamgeen the tabhi Thakur Govind ek nokur ke sath raat ke 2 baje MADHAV ki hawelli phoucha aur bari dari awaaj me bola Choudry shahb Meri behen Rani ko bacha liyje . Sab apni jagah se khade ho gaye Choudry MADHAV ne phoucha hua kya hai , To Woh bola usko achanek se dard uth raha aur wo chilla rahi hai humko kisi doctor ke pass le jaana padega . MADHAV apne sath us doctor ko jo Rati ki delivery ki liye thi sath le gaye dusri havelli (koi 15 km door thi dosre gaav me) . Sab log wahen jaakar dekha ki ek daai aur maid uski seva kar rahein hain uski halat bahut serious aur dosri nokrani ek baache ko ek towel me lapet ke Rani ke pass la rahi hai . Doctor ekdum active ho gayi dai aur noukrani ko chod kar room ander se band kar liya . Dusri noukrani jo bahar thi govind ko boli larki hui hai . Thakur Govind apna sar juka ke beth gaya aur bola ab kya hoga. Choudry MADHAV SINGH bole uperwala sab theek karega . Govind bola aajtak mein ye aash lagye tha ki Rani ko beta hoga to uske sasural wale maan jaate unko pota mila ab to woh kabhi nahin manega. Apko pata hain na hamare khaandan ka jahan larki abhisaap aur beta suryavansi hota hai. Tabhi dai bahar aai aur boli doctor aap dono ko ander bula rahi hai . dono ander gaye doctor unko boli iski halat serious hai ye phali baar maa bani uper se khoon kam hai . mein injections dediya hain agar isko 1 ghante hosh na aaya to bachna muskil hai. Choudry bola Dr kya hospital le jaa sakte hain to woh boli jo hospital me hota woh yahin ho raha hai . bus isko hosh aajaye aap Bhagwan se pray kro . Govind kafi der apni bhen aur nayi bhanji ko dekh kar room ke bhar chala gaya . Choudry doctor ko hath jood kar bola isko bacha lo . Doctor boli Choudry shabh hum bhi apki tarah insaan hai Jo ho sakta hai mein treatment kar rahi baki uperwala bhi to hum sabke uper hain woh koi chamatkar dikha sakhta hai.
Tabhi koi Choudry shahb chilta hua hall me aaya Choudry aur Doctor bahar daur ke dekhe to driver ke sath unka nokar tha aur bola choti Malkin ki neend khuli woh chilla chilla ke MAHI !!!!MAHI !!!?MAHI!!!!! chillakar phir behosh ho gayi . Choudry saheb bole govind me jaa kar dekhta hoon tum yahan ka sambhalo .
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Idhar 10 min baad Rani ko ek fits sa pada aur woh duniya chodkar apni beti ko anaath kar ke chali gayi aur choti si bacchi bus rooye jaa rahi thi lagatar usko dai bahut kosish kar rahi thi usko chup karne me . Govind to apne bahen ki mout ka sunkar toott gaya aur usko lipt kar roo raha tha . Doctor usko boli khud ko sambhalo aur ish choti navjaat bacchi ka kuch socho thakur saheb , aaj meri doctory carrier me pheli baar hua ki ek tarf maa ne beti kho di dusri traf ek baachi be maa kho di . Thakur ko kuch dair baad Dr ki baat ka jhatka laga aur bola kya matlab Doctor boli RATI Devi kai bacchi maryt paida hui woh abhi bhi sadme me hain mujko aab usko bhi dekna hain. Tabhi thakur kuch soch Kar bola Doctor aap to baghwan ka dusra roop ho kya aap ish choti bacchi to maa ka pyar nahi degi . Doctor ekdum se boli thakur saheb mein shadisuda hun aur meri bhi ** saal ki beti hai Jo aap kah rahen hain woh nahi ho sakta mein isko 10- 15 din apne pass hospital me rakh sakti hoon per apko isko nayi maa dhoond ni hogi , please mujhe maaf karein.
Thajkur Govind ko apni galti ka ahsaash hua aur bole maafi chounga mein ish baachi ke liye Rati behen ki baat kar raha tha bechari dono abhagein hain, ek ko maa mil jayegi aur doosre ko beti aap kya bolti ho . Doctor ek baar ko to darr gayi Choudry MADHAV SINGH ka soch kar phir boli aap ko hi Choudry shahb se baat karni hogi ,baad mein apka iske liye support kar dongi agar aisa hua to mujhe bahut khushi hogi . Bus phir kya tha dono car me beth kar phouch gaye Choudry ki hawelli Jahan Rati har 20 mins me uthti aur dhard markar roti MAHI!!! MAHI !!!!chillati aur phir behosh ho jaati .
Karib 4:30 am ka waqt tha Rati ish baar sabko ghoor kar dekh rahi thi per khuch bole nahi rahi thi aur bistaar per bethi hui apni nighaa charoo aur ghum rahi thi, tabhi usne apne pass rakha paalna dekha to khali tha aur roti hui boli meri bacchi mujhko louta do chaiye mujhko maar do meri bacchi ko chod do .aur hath jodh kar boli !!!!MAHARYAN !!!!meri madad karo. mere MAHI !!! mere MAHI !!!
Tabhi awaaj aai ye rahi tumhari beti mein isko dusre room me check karne le gayi thi aur tumne hungama matcha rakha hain .Doctor ke haath apni choti si bacchi dekh kar apne haath phela kar usko apne doone hath jor kar usko apne pass aane ka kaha rahi thi . Doctor boli mein tumarhi beti tum ko jabhi doongi jab tum isko apna doodh pillaugi samjhi tabhi Rati khatak se straight baith gayi aur pillow usne apni lap per rakha aur maid se lekar paalne ka baache ka chota bistar lekar apni goadh me rakha tabhi Doctor sabko bahar jaane ka boli aur uski roti hui bacchi ko uski goad me choda , Rati etni der me apne chuchi ka nipple nikal liya aur nanehi si bacchi ke pass layi itne me usne apni maa ka nipple moh me daal ke choosna shura kar diya aur aab ish room se naa maa ki awaaj aa rahi thi na choti si bacchi ki . RATI apni beti ko ghoore ja rahi thi aur uske poore badan per ungli pher rahi thi . RATI aaj 7vi baar maa bani lekin aaj se phele aapni motherly duty karte huye itna santoosh nahin huya jitna aaj ho raha hai.( sab readers ko baata dun SAROO ki time per Rati Devi 4 din tak behosh hi thi so first time breast feading for her lovely and cute child she was feeling she never felt ) . After 40 mins not only mother and her lovely daughter slept but also Doctor leaving nurse in room come outside in hall where everyone is waiting for her , Doctor sat on single chair and ask for tea bus itna sunte hi Saroo ne daur laga di kitchen ki taraf aur khud chai baane lagi aur 10 min me woh doctor ko chai deti hui boli madam chai Doctor usko sar per hath pherti hui thanks beti ,Saroo ekdum se boli welcome madam . Doctor ne cup side me table per rakhi aur Saroo ko gale lagte huye boli Choudry shabh ye larki mujhe bohut acchi lagi jaise apki nayi Dheawti ( granddaughter) hai dono apka naam roshan karengi , meri car aur driver bula dijye mein bhi apni beti ko dekh lun woh ghar per intzaar kar rahi hogi .
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Mein dophar 2 baje aa jaungi , aur saroo ko boli apni choti bhen aur maa ka khaayl rakna meri pyari beti ,phir doctor chali gayi aur Choudry aur thakur ko sochta chod kar . Thakur bola Choudry shahb sabse phale dono dead body ka antimsankar kar de phir arram se baat kar paayenge . Choudry MADHAV SINGH bahut kuch phouchna chaata tha per usko bhi laga (kahi uski beti jaagh gayi aur usko pata chala ???nahin ... nahin mein aisa hoone hi nahin donga) aur phatak se bole chalo Thakur der ho rahi hai . Subha ke 8 baje tak saare kaam nipta kar kisiko khabar nahi lagne di . Choudry ne apni tizoori khol di aur sabh naukar se lekar nurse tak ke mouh rupye se bhar diye aur gharjtye huye hola agar kissi ka bhi mouh khula to uska saara khandhan jameen ki 6 ft under hoga . Unki baat khatam hotye hi Thakur Govind bola uske baad Mein jo tumhare khandhan me baach Raha gaya to usko tumse aur 6 ft jaida under gaadh donga samjhe meri taraf se tumhare praviar ko saal me ekmust rakam milti raheygi . Saare naukar aur mulazim even nurse also ek saath kasam kha kar bole .....hum ish pavirit bandhan ka raaj humesha apne dil me dafan rakhenge. Itne me RATI ke room se baache ke ronne ki awaaj sunai aayi , saare daur pere per SAROO gate ke agye daur ki hath rok ke khadi hogayi aur boli meri MAA meri choti bahen ko doodh pila rahi hai aap sab bahar ruken aur darwaja khol ke ander jaate hi darwaja baand ker apni maa aur choti bahen ke pass bistarki side khade hoker dono ko khushi se dekne lagi . RATI ka poora dhyan apni choti bacchi per tha usko apne pyar aur sparsh se dular rahi thi, tabhi Rati ko ahsaas hua ki koi uske kamre me hain sabse phele apni choti bacchi ko apne anchal se dhak kar phir SAROO ki taraf dekh Kar thandi saans le kar boli kya dekh rahi meri laado , Saroo boli ish dunyia ki sabse khoobsurth maa aur beti ko . RATI aaj kafi din muskayi aur boli meri doone beti lakho me ek hain per ye thodi color me dark hai , Saroo pat se boli maa per Nayan nakans aur chere ka tez bahut jaada hai , isko humko sabse chupa kar rakhna hoga. Phir usne us choti navjaat bacchi ko jo (aab apni maa ka doodh pee kar soo gayi thi ) apni goad me utha kar kaha aaj mein bahut khush hoon apni choti behen paakar mein iska naam GEETA rakhongi aur aab aap aur puri duniya meri behen aur meri beech nahi aayegi . RATI boli edhir de mujko usko soone de jab uth jaayegi to baat karna . hi hihi hi ?? Mein teri aur teri behen ke beech nahi bolongyi aur tune isko naam bhi de diya chal wohi naam rakhugi aab khush , saroo phir bed ke pass table per rakha Daliaa uthakar apni maa ko khilayi . Rati bister per lait kar boli Saroo meine tujhse kuch nahi maanga aajtak aaj maangti hun degi . Saroo boli maa kuch bhi mangle tu to meri jaan Hain . RATI boli kuch bhi ????
SAROO soch me padh gayi aur sochne lagi kahin maa uske khilaaf na maang le jisko meine itne somwar varat rakhkar paya( phir mann me boli please maa RAJ ko mat mangna baki sabh kuch tere uper nuchavaar kar dungi) aur aankh khol kar boli tu khuch bhi maang le vaada nahi todogi chaiye to jaan maang le . RATI uska mouh per hath rakh kar boli tu meri jaan hai mujhe woh nahin chaiye mujhe kuch aur vaada chaiye . Saroo ko laga pakka usko hi maang legi phir dil par pather rakh kar boli maangle aur sar jhukha li . RATI boli mujhe RAJ SINGH nahin chaiye. Saroo boli phir to tu khuch bhi maang le . RATI boli kuch bhi ??? SAROO boli MAA unke sath mera rishtey hone ke baad , mein sirf usi ka sapna daily apne pati ke roop me dekhti hoon bus usko chod kar kuch bhi maang lay. RATI badi majboot awaj me boli meri choti beti ka naam tune rakha aur tu boli tu iski dekh bhal karegi apni beti ki tarah palegi .????????
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Last part of update 01
Saroo ka vachan.....
SAROO gardan hilla hilla kar apni shamati de rahi thi . Tabhi Rati boli mujko bhi woh adhikaar teri pheli saantan per chaiye jo meine tujko waada karke diya aab tu bol . SAROO seedhi aur pyari larki thi aur innocent apne parivaar se pyar karne wali aur sabse jaada woh apni maa se pyar karti thi ,apni maa ki baat per woh boli maa Meri her santaan teri mangdharshan me palegi ....Per RATI ek dum uthkar beth gayi aur boli mein tujhse sabse jaada pyar karti hoon aur tujhse jaada usko joh teri khokh se phele janam lega , aab to tu vaada kar . SAROO boli maa mein tujshe jaada pyar kisi se nahin karti na hi teri koi baat talungi mein waada karti hun apne honewale pati ki kasam Meri pheli aulaad(child) per tera mujse jaada huk hoga. RATI ko aaj ek baat apne pita ki yaad aai tu apni beti ke samney kuch nahin , kyonki SAROO ne jo adhikaar izzajat ( request ) ke saath manga wahin uski MAA ne exchange me aur apne liye.
Tabhi SAROO darwaje per knock soon boli ek min , phir Doctor boli RATI ji apni ye beti mujhko de do bahut pyari baachi hai, to Rati boli doctor shaiba aap meri saari dhan doulat lelo meri dono beti mere praan hai. Doctor boli phir ye MAHI aur MAHARYAN kyon hai kyoki AAP uska naam baar baar le rahi thi. Tabhi SAROO boli doctor maa sahi khe rahi hain . Pheli RATI hasi doctor meri beti ko apni beti baana liya .
Tabhi Choudry MADHAV SINGH bole MAHARYAN aur MAHI hamere kulguru ke naam hai,so hum unke aapne sab subh karam aur vinti me unka naam lete hain.
Uske 2 din baad Doctor... Rati aur GEETA ka check up karke... jab woh Choudry MADHAV SINGH ki haweli se nikal Kar bhar aayi to ek nayi chamchati nayi CAR ko uske driver Jo uska phele driver tha safed uniform me chamak raha tha aur gate khol kar bola aayiye madam .Doctor boli ye kiski car hai , pheeche awaaj aayi Meri ANJU beti ki , Doctor ka dhyan is baat per nahi gaya ki nayi car usko milli but apne naam ke baad beti sunkar woh pighal gayi aur daur kar unke pass aakar boli pls ek baar aur beti bol dijiye , Choudry shahb bole aaj se tum Meri dosri beti aaja baap ke gale Lagja . Dr ANJU pyar ki bhooki thi moh mayaa ki nahin . Phir Choudry usko bole Meri nawassi ko jaldi le kar aaja aur sehar me Jo Mera Bangla hai aaj se tu wahan rahegi aur tere liye aab naya hospital baanwana hai , samjhi meri laado , ji pitaji, Choudry bole dobraa bol ....hi hi hi...pitaji , pitaji pitaji . chal jaldi jaa jaldi aaja. .......
SO FRIENDS THIS IS 1ST UPDATE
New Characters in story ------------
1) Thakur Govind ... RAJVEER old friend
2) Rani. ------- Thakur Govind's younger sister ( widow , husband armyman died on duty) Biological mother of GEETA
GEETA(popular as CHANDI her presence itself catch fear ) details will come later on.
3) Dr ANJU ---------- Choudry MADHAV SINGH 2nd daughter (adopted) after birth of Geeta
4) Dr ANJU's daughter ----- ???
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