My mother and the landlord (Slow burn, long read)

[saka1981]

I am not surprised, she will fall from grace more and more....

She will find drunken state as an excuse next morning for sure, saying we cannot control Azad when he is drunk. Sorry beta don't make a face, Sorry beta you have to see all that, Sorry beta one night of awkwardness is not going to break anything or a big deal....

Never ending nonsense of normalization of cringefest.

I am still reading this story to see if there would light at the end of tunnel, not for stupid sex between old uncle and aunties. Only reading for Sunny to see if he will grow spine or eventually end up on a chair before them watching...

The author seems to be taking the story in a direction where “Sunny should not have a spine.”. The next morning, Anjali will say exactly what you said. Sunny will listen to her while continuing to work, silently talking to himself in his mind.

[wxxxx]

I am not surprised, she will fall from grace more and more....

She will find drunken state as an excuse next morning for sure, saying we cannot control Azad when he is drunk. Sorry beta don't make a face, Sorry beta you have to see all that, Sorry beta one night of awkwardness is not going to break anything or a big deal....

Never ending nonsense of normalization of cringefest.

I am still reading this story to see if there would light at the end of tunnel, not for stupid sex between old uncle and aunties. Only reading for Sunny to see if he will grow spine or eventually end up on a chair before them watching...

Most readers of "xossipy" always look forward to exciting scenes. I sincerely apologize for disagreeing with the esteemed author, CoreMadness.

[Leo Arya]

I don't know why some readers are complaining... But the update is great & the story demands the scene... Keep it up bro

[CoreMadness]

I don't know why some readers are complaining... But the update is great & the story demands the scene... Keep it up bro

Hating the story vs hating the characters are not one and the same...former is complaining, latter is more being involved so you hate the mother and feel for the boy. 

Most of the readers who give feedback are the second category, no one hates the writing or excellent story telling.

[Leo Arya]

Hating the story vs hating the characters are not one and the same...former is complaining, latter is more being involved so you hate the mother and feel for the boy. 

Most of the readers who give feedback are the second category, no one hates the writing or excellent story telling.

Anjali thinks Azad came, took the packet & went downstairs.. But when Azad stayed, then there is no option left for her. .. Blaming her is an easy option & but think her condition is different..

[CoreMadness]

Anjali thinks Azad came, took the packet & went downstairs.. But when Azad stayed, then there is no option left for her. .. Blaming her is an easy option & but think her condition is different..

He will fuck her on stairs next, think her condition would be different too lol

[Leo Arya]

He will fuck her on stairs next, think her condition would be different too lol

If you don't like the part, then don't read this story.. Write your own way.... Lol

[Tea_Kadai_Boy]

Surprised with the recent story part happenings between Landlord and Anjali at her flat with Sunny standing outside. No doubt it is exciting, kinky, exhibitionist and great part in a normal sex story. But it is jarringly out of sync with the tone and temper of the story. It became a run of mill part. Maybe to satisfy the expectations of certain readers. Sunny character, which was in emotional dilemma in every aspect, became a normal character of a normal sex story. I expected sunny to tell the readers how Landlord fucks and deals his mother in some extra ordinary erotic way, but not in this degenerative way. Showing sunny explicitly before them as motherly cuckold didn't jell. Fucking her with whole flat building knowing didn't go with the suggestive narrative of the story. But I am certain the author will bring out some extremely great stuff, out of this normal part.

[Aragon]

The story is going great....
Waiting for the next part bro.

[CoreMadness]

If you don't like the part, then don't read this story.. Write your own way.... Lol

Blind man, did you read anywhere I said did not like the story. I was cursing the character not story, guess you don't know how to read...

[Leo Arya]

Blind man, did you read anywhere I said did not like the story. I was cursing the character not story, guess you don't know how to read...

The characters will not act according to your preferences; they will play according to the author's wishes... Such a Brainless man

[Ayush01111]

The characters will not act according to your preferences; they will play according to the author's wishes... Such a Brainless man

Why are you jumping its between writer and there readers who are you?

[Leo Arya]

Why are you jumping its between writer and there readers who are you?

Are you blind?? This guy named 'coremadness' started bullying me first.. Then I replied

[Aragon]

Why are you jumping its between writer and there readers who are you?

The coremadness first started the mocking, then Leo Arya rightly replied.

[Aragon]

One thing I must say those who are not liking the story.. Please leave the story.. A lot of readers like us like this story...
Waiting for the next part bro!!!

[Kratos12]

Dear Admin,


First, thank you for running the site so well; your effort is truly appreciated.

As you know, a dedicated "Incest and Other Stories"section was created so everyone could follow clear content guidelines. However, many stories that belong in that specific category are still being posted in the general sections.

You might be busy managing other areas of the platform, but we kindly request that you take some time to review and move these stories to their respective section.

We also appeal to all writers and readers to respect the site rules.

While some authors might initially worry about receiving fewer views by moving sections, keeping the platform organized benefits the entire community in the long run.

Thank you for your time and continued dedication to keeping the site structured.

[CoreMadness]

The characters will not act according to your preferences; they will play according to the author's wishes... Such a Brainless If you hate a character

Dumbass, if you hate a character doesn't mean I am asking character to be in a specific way or change it, its like I hate Gabbar Singh in Sholay so my expectation was for him to reform and not kill Jay, it only means that negative character for that role is written well lol 

Stupidity at peaks.

[CoreMadness]

Are you blind?? This guy named 'coremadness' started bullying me first.. Then I replied

Where did I bully you, you were the one who told me not to read the story If i did not like it. Who are you to tell me?

[CoreMadness]

The coremadness first started the mocking, then Leo Arya rightly replied.

I mocked the mother character and he couldn't take it...go back and read the comments. He was the one who first addressed my comments saying why are they complaining. I said I didn't complain, its hating character vs hating story ..totally different. you guys can't even read here properly. Also mind your goddamn business.

[CoreMadness]

Everyone here trying to defend the author, I get it but I am not mocking his skills or his writing. I did not even mock other's comments. When I say Anjali is turning into pure slut doesn't mean I don't want her to be a slut. There is no story if she doesn't transform....

Some one said Azad came to take packet and then changed his stance so Anjali doesn't have a choice, blaming her is easy...submission goes in multiple ways but the intent here is to keep her son outside the door and fuck landlord inside the room...so hating her is apt. Hating her doesn't mean I was asking author to write or change her in such a way for mother character...one asks not to read the story other says I mocked....Seriously lol

Anjali's transformation is written really well, all this while she is gaslighting her son so I was hating her...it means transformation for her into slut is written well. First understand what the comment is about before asking someone to not read the story if they don't like it. No one said here they do not like the story...can't even comprehend between discussion on story.