Adultery மல்லி என் மனைவி

[heygiwriter]

Bro, but "engal veetil ella naalum" scenario won't workout in my opinion with all 4 chilling together.

Your audience for this story can be classified as:

1. Cuck Gooners: People who want to see Rajeev as a Cuck and Gowtham as a dom and lifelong Malli getting pounded and Rajeev getting humiliated.
2. Pure Sex-scene Gooners: People who think Gowtham was right and as a bull Gowtham should have Malli as he is the one who will give them a lot of sex scenes to fap to this story. To them sex scenes matter more than emotions.
3. Pure Love Gooners: People who want Rajeev and Malli's love to win and no matter what, they want this couple to be happy and peaceful with their baby.
4. Story Fans: People who want a logical end to this wonderful story. The emotional fallout of whatever has happened wouldn't logically justify a "Everyone Chilling Together" ending. Everyone can be happy in their bubble with their own happy ending, but being happy together means that the entire journey has no emotional payoff, because the manipulation, betrayal and malice no matter for what reason, cannot be completely nullified for Rajeev and Gowtham to accept each other, nor an arrangement of woman-sharing coming into play = This is the exact spot where the story will cease to exist as a good story and will end on a Goon note.


Decision is yours, as much as the story is yours! I am pretty aware you know your audience and your own preference to write how you deem fit.

adhuku thanga writer nu oruthan irukaan :D ivanga ellarayum satisfy panni arusuvai koduthaa venamnu solvingalaa ? situation nu onna yen writer create panranga. :)

[sanju4x]

adhuku thanga writer nu oruthan irukaan :D ivanga ellarayum satisfy panni arusuvai koduthaa venamnu solvingalaa ? situation nu onna yen writer create panranga. :)

If I wanna answer selfishly, aama thala because I'm category 4 (Intha emoji saniyana vera kaanom.. ::Insert Crying Emoji::)

Jokes apart, I'll accept whatever you give us as the writer.

[Kettavan anal nallavan]

OXY let me explain. 

This is same Rajeev whose dick raised at thought of someone with Malli in very initial episodes. But as soon as he know the price of such fantasy he fought againts the idea and even started doubting.. but somewhere fate landed him in exact place. 

Malli nowhere intentended to make Rajeev to watch it. She was first tricked using situations around them, but rememebr she was bitten by the good man savior image of gowtham and she offered kisses, soon every advantages finally made her losse in the game. She was put into situation just to hide on fault, and it continued. 

Rajeev accepeted her state (the fake one) but he asked for boundary, Malli was conscious but we have gowtham who made it failed several times. Rajeev didnt delay it he immediately called it out. So Malli indeed stopped it. She honored Rajeev words. But Gowtham yet again sabotaged it this time his trick was he told its last of it, like farewell. So malli honored it like she doesnt want to hurt anyone she agreed for final farewell one. 

That's why she confidentally said lets go to our home, gowtham wont come in their life. She had given a clsure but unexpectedly she was pregnant. 

From Rajeev pov - He was against it, He agreed for her, He set boundary, it was not honored, so he decided to leave her or start his own way, but when he found malli is going to be parent, he decided to stick with her, but he was not ready to leave her go easy when he found she still had sex (farewell one) in his absence, as he doesnt know truth, he is here to punish. That is why he decided to hide the truth of him as real father.

From Malli POV - She fears standing as some cheating or a women in affair, so she decided to hide it by  enabling gowtham's further exploitation, once she started realizing this is taking different route she decided to stop it, she didnt bother to even hurt gowtham or his grandmother, but gowtham grandmothers health made her to agree for trip, where unexpectedly she was confronted by gowtham who emotionally speak about hw he it was unfair for him and need better closure, to not make him hurt, she decided to finish it there. Now she finished it and when she though all has ended well, she got pregnant and a new fear installed in her will ever Rajeev found about weeks or days of formation of baby. 

Rajeev exactly gonna punish her by keeping her in constant fear. thats why he hide the report. 

Now coming to main question : Will he accept her.  Yes he will, but it would take long route, a person who truly in love wont bare to see their loved ones suffering especially in their own hand. and who said malli is enjoying she suffers on her part. and hiding info is jst one percent of what he will do. He dont turn evil just to punish it and for Gowtham he will make sure to make gowtham feel how he felt. Againt nothing going to be cruel or villanism. Just a remember of what you sow will what you reap. However Vidhya will complicate it as she is the tool here. End of story. Malli and Rajeev will understand each other better than any and they will fix every wrong to right again.. ராஜ் இப்ப வரைக்கும் மல்லியை மணிக்க வாய்ப்புள்ளது. ஆனால் கௌதம மணிக்க வாய்ப்பில்லை கௌதமுக்கு எந்த மாதிரி தண்டனை கிடைக்கும். அவனோட company share எடுத்துக்கிறது மட்டும் அவனுக்கு போதுமா ராஜ் பட்ட துன்பங்களுக்கு இது மட்டும் உனக்கு போதுமா வேற எதுவும் கிடைக்காதா

[Secretspy2092]

Irukke boss.  :)

Heygi bro , Andha Bra scene explanation neenga explain pannala neneikiren . I read all the episode can't catch it . If you don't mind can you mention in the which episode of page .

[Steven Rajaa]

Will pati forgive gowtham when she knows the truth. She will think gowtham has become like his father. What she will do.

[Ironman0]

OXY let me explain. 

This is same Rajeev whose dick raised at thought of someone with Malli in very initial episodes. But as soon as he know the price of such fantasy he fought againts the idea and even started doubting.. but somewhere fate landed him in exact place. 

Malli nowhere intentended to make Rajeev to watch it. She was first tricked using situations around them, but rememebr she was bitten by the good man savior image of gowtham and she offered kisses, soon every advantages finally made her losse in the game. She was put into situation just to hide on fault, and it continued. 

Rajeev accepeted her state (the fake one) but he asked for boundary, Malli was conscious but we have gowtham who made it failed several times. Rajeev didnt delay it he immediately called it out. So Malli indeed stopped it. She honored Rajeev words. But Gowtham yet again sabotaged it this time his trick was he told its last of it, like farewell. So malli honored it like she doesnt want to hurt anyone she agreed for final farewell one. 

That's why she confidentally said lets go to our home, gowtham wont come in their life. She had given a clsure but unexpectedly she was pregnant. 

From Rajeev pov - He was against it, He agreed for her, He set boundary, it was not honored, so he decided to leave her or start his own way, but when he found malli is going to be parent, he decided to stick with her, but he was not ready to leave her go easy when he found she still had sex (farewell one) in his absence, as he doesnt know truth, he is here to punish. That is why he decided to hide the truth of him as real father.

From Malli POV - She fears standing as some cheating or a women in affair, so she decided to hide it by  enabling gowtham's further exploitation, once she started realizing this is taking different route she decided to stop it, she didnt bother to even hurt gowtham or his grandmother, but gowtham grandmothers health made her to agree for trip, where unexpectedly she was confronted by gowtham who emotionally speak about hw he it was unfair for him and need better closure, to not make him hurt, she decided to finish it there. Now she finished it and when she though all has ended well, she got pregnant and a new fear installed in her will ever Rajeev found about weeks or days of formation of baby. 

Rajeev exactly gonna punish her by keeping her in constant fear. thats why he hide the report. 

Now coming to main question : Will he accept her.  Yes he will, but it would take long route, a person who truly in love wont bare to see their loved ones suffering especially in their own hand. and who said malli is enjoying she suffers on her part. and hiding info is jst one percent of what he will do. He dont turn evil just to punish it and for Gowtham he will make sure to make gowtham feel how he felt. Againt nothing going to be cruel or villanism. Just a remember of what you sow will what you reap. However Vidhya will complicate it as she is the tool here. End of story. Malli and Rajeev will understand each other better than any and they will fix every wrong to right again.. 

Super explanation nanba

[Ironman0]

ஒரு சிலர் போடுற கமெண்ட் பார்த்த எரிச்சல் தான் வருது......
இவ்வளவு நடந்த பிறகு மல்லி கௌதம் கூட தான் சேர்ந்து வாழணும்னு சொல்றிங்க..... நம்மா லைஃப் லா கௌதம் மாதிரி எவனது வந்த இப்படி தான் எல்லாரும் எங்க இருந்தாலும் வாழ்கநு வாழ்த்திடு பொவின்களா.....
நீங்கள் எதிர் பாக்குற மாதிரி கதை இங்கே நிறைய இருக்கு...... அதா போய் படிங்க
இந்த மாதிரி கதைகள் ஒரு சில தான் வருது அதையும் கெடுத்து விடாதீங்க..... Company staff பாட்டி மட்டும் தான் மல்லிகு husband Gowthamnu தெரியும்..... வெளி உலகம் family and friends எல்லாரும் மல்லி ராஜீவ் தான் husband இருக்கு..... புதுசா ஒரு கதை நீங்களா எழுதாதீங்க

[Kala rasigan]

மல்லிய ராஜிவ் விலகினாலே, அது கௌதமின் அதிகாரப்பூர்வ வெற்றி, என்ன நடந்தாலும், மல்லி தவற உணர்ந்து , ராஜிவ்பிட்ட மன்னிப்பு வேண்டி இருவரும் வாழ்வதே சிறந்த முடிவாகும்

[ChandruDelighty]

OXY let me explain. 

This is same Rajeev whose dick raised at thought of someone with Malli in very initial episodes. But as soon as he know the price of such fantasy he fought againts the idea and even started doubting.. but somewhere fate landed him in exact place. 

Malli nowhere intentended to make Rajeev to watch it. She was first tricked using situations around them, but rememebr she was bitten by the good man savior image of gowtham and she offered kisses, soon every advantages finally made her losse in the game. She was put into situation just to hide on fault, and it continued. 

Rajeev accepeted her state (the fake one) but he asked for boundary, Malli was conscious but we have gowtham who made it failed several times. Rajeev didnt delay it he immediately called it out. So Malli indeed stopped it. She honored Rajeev words. But Gowtham yet again sabotaged it this time his trick was he told its last of it, like farewell. So malli honored it like she doesnt want to hurt anyone she agreed for final farewell one. 

That's why she confidentally said lets go to our home, gowtham wont come in their life. She had given a clsure but unexpectedly she was pregnant. 

From Rajeev pov - He was against it, He agreed for her, He set boundary, it was not honored, so he decided to leave her or start his own way, but when he found malli is going to be parent, he decided to stick with her, but he was not ready to leave her go easy when he found she still had sex (farewell one) in his absence, as he doesnt know truth, he is here to punish. That is why he decided to hide the truth of him as real father.

From Malli POV - She fears standing as some cheating or a women in affair, so she decided to hide it by  enabling gowtham's further exploitation, once she started realizing this is taking different route she decided to stop it, she didnt bother to even hurt gowtham or his grandmother, but gowtham grandmothers health made her to agree for trip, where unexpectedly she was confronted by gowtham who emotionally speak about hw he it was unfair for him and need better closure, to not make him hurt, she decided to finish it there. Now she finished it and when she though all has ended well, she got pregnant and a new fear installed in her will ever Rajeev found about weeks or days of formation of baby. 

Rajeev exactly gonna punish her by keeping her in constant fear. thats why he hide the report. 

Now coming to main question : Will he accept her.  Yes he will, but it would take long route, a person who truly in love wont bare to see their loved ones suffering especially in their own hand. and who said malli is enjoying she suffers on her part. and hiding info is jst one percent of what he will do. He dont turn evil just to punish it and for Gowtham he will make sure to make gowtham feel how he felt. Againt nothing going to be cruel or villanism. Just a remember of what you sow will what you reap. However Vidhya will complicate it as she is the tool here. End of story. Malli and Rajeev will understand each other better than any and they will fix every wrong to right again.. 

Thank you for your explanation Heygi.
You give time and effort for readers comments that is commendable.

I have only one question from the above.

Did Malli not enjoy being with Gowtham? 


Few incidents make me think otherwise, 

Initially,
When chaste wife (Malli) gave her bra to Gowtham to help him come out of his thoughts about GF.. does that not affect her married life. She didn't think like that I suppose. ( NO THOUGHTS ABOUT RAJIV HERE)

when she lied(hides Gowtham's request for kiss) to Rajiv and went to his home for his birthday and gave him midnight kiss.. I think she crossed her line there.. She hid that to Rajiv as well. (DIDNT THINK RAJIV WILL GET HURT)

Next day when Gowtham messaged Rajiv inducing Cuck Fantasy, she played along with Gowtham to hurt Rajiv.
After that she didn't even think in place of Rajiv why he slapped Gowtham when he saw her in delicate position. 
(HERE ALSO SHE DIDNT THINK WHAT RAJIV WILL GO THROUGH)

Also she know Rajiv is doubting her when she know he saw their fake sex event through the door keyhole.
(SHE COULD HAVE AVOIDED, BUT HER SOFT CORNER TOWARDS GOWTHAM MADE HER ACT AND GAVE MORE ACCESS TO HER BODY)

So above incidents, Malli could have avoided or atleast tried to explain to Rajiv if she thought about not cheating.

I feel she had more soft corner towards Gowtham initially than her husband.. 

Also she only challenged Rajiv that she will come back to him pure before going to business trip.. But she ended up otherwise and made Rajiv apologise to Gowtham.. ( HERE SHE MADE HER HUSBAND LOOK SMALL AGAINST AN INTRUDER)

Above scenarios and incidents have made Malli character bad I feel.

Not to speculate more, story is too engaging.. bcoz of this it made me think again and again. 

Please don't take it differently, if I have understood otherwise or commented unwanted.

[Ironman0]

Thank you for your explanation Heygi.
You give time and effort for readers comments that is commendable.

I have only one question from the above.

Did Malli not enjoy being with Gowtham? 


Few incidents make me think otherwise, 

Initially,
When chaste wife (Malli) gave her bra to Gowtham to help him come out of his thoughts about GF.. does that not affect her married life. She didn't think like that I suppose. ( NO THOUGHTS ABOUT RAJIV HERE)

when she lied(hides Gowtham's request for kiss) to Rajiv and went to his home for his birthday and gave him midnight kiss.. I think she crossed her line there.. She hid that to Rajiv as well. (DIDNT THINK RAJIV WILL GET HURT)

Next day when Gowtham messaged Rajiv inducing Cuck Fantasy, she played along with Gowtham to hurt Rajiv.
After that she didn't even think in place of Rajiv why he slapped Gowtham when he saw her in delicate position. 
(HERE ALSO SHE DIDNT THINK WHAT RAJIV WILL GO THROUGH)

Also she know Rajiv is doubting her when she know he saw their fake sex event through the door keyhole.
(SHE COULD HAVE AVOIDED, BUT HER SOFT CORNER TOWARDS GOWTHAM MADE HER ACT AND GAVE MORE ACCESS TO HER BODY)

So above incidents, Malli could have avoided or atleast tried to explain to Rajiv if she thought about not cheating.

I feel she had more soft corner towards Gowtham initially than her husband.. 

Also she only challenged Rajiv that she will come back to him pure before going to business trip.. But she ended up otherwise and made Rajiv apologise to Gowtham.. ( HERE SHE MADE HER HUSBAND LOOK SMALL AGAINST AN INTRUDER)

Above scenarios and incidents have made Malli character bad I feel.

Not to speculate more, story is too engaging.. bcoz of this it made me think again and again. 

Please don't take it differently, if I have understood otherwise or commented unwanted.

Nanba அதுக்கு தான் heygi மல்லிய குற்ற உணர்ச்சிலா இருக்க மாதிரி சொல்லிருபரு..... மல்லி என்னதான் கௌதம் கூட sex  பண்ணாலும் முழுமையா enjoy பண்ண மாட்டா.... 
மல்லி ஒவ்வொரு முறையும் ராஜீவ் ஏமாத்தும் போது ரொம்ப வேதனை படுற மாதிரி எழுதிற்பாறு.....
மல்லி நண்பன சந்தோஷத்துக்கு ராஜீவ்கும் அவளுக்கு ரெண்டு பேருகு தெரிஞ்சு தெரியாமலும் கஷ்டம் குடுத்துட்டு இருக்க.....
இதுல இப்போ வரையும் கஷ்ட படுறவிங்க ராஜீவ் மல்லி.....
எல்லாரையும் கஷ்ட படுத்தி சந்தோசம் அடைவது கௌதம்.....

[Kettavan anal nallavan]

ராஜ் அடஞ்ச முதல் வெற்றி மல்லி வயித்துல இருக்குற குழந்தை அது அவனோடது இதுதான் ராஜ் கடத்த முதல் வெற்றி இதே கௌதமோட ரசிகர்கள் எல்லாரும் தாங்கிக்க முடியலையே இனி வரப்போற எபிசோடு எல்லாத்தையுமே கெளதம் அடி மேல் அடி வாங்குற மாரி வந்த கௌதம் ஓட ரசிகர்கள் எப்படி தாங்கிக்குவாங்க தெரியலையே

[BlackSpirit]

Thank you for your explanation Heygi.
You give time and effort for readers comments that is commendable.

I have only one question from the above.

Did Malli not enjoy being with Gowtham? 


Few incidents make me think otherwise, 

Initially,
When chaste wife (Malli) gave her bra to Gowtham to help him come out of his thoughts about GF.. does that not affect her married life. She didn't think like that I suppose. ( NO THOUGHTS ABOUT RAJIV HERE)

when she lied(hides Gowtham's request for kiss) to Rajiv and went to his home for his birthday and gave him midnight kiss.. I think she crossed her line there.. She hid that to Rajiv as well. (DIDNT THINK RAJIV WILL GET HURT)

Next day when Gowtham messaged Rajiv inducing Cuck Fantasy, she played along with Gowtham to hurt Rajiv.
After that she didn't even think in place of Rajiv why he slapped Gowtham when he saw her in delicate position. 
(HERE ALSO SHE DIDNT THINK WHAT RAJIV WILL GO THROUGH)

Also she know Rajiv is doubting her when she know he saw their fake sex event through the door keyhole.
(SHE COULD HAVE AVOIDED, BUT HER SOFT CORNER TOWARDS GOWTHAM MADE HER ACT AND GAVE MORE ACCESS TO HER BODY)

So above incidents, Malli could have avoided or atleast tried to explain to Rajiv if she thought about not cheating.

I feel she had more soft corner towards Gowtham initially than her husband.. 

Also she only challenged Rajiv that she will come back to him pure before going to business trip.. But she ended up otherwise and made Rajiv apologise to Gowtham.. ( HERE SHE MADE HER HUSBAND LOOK SMALL AGAINST AN INTRUDER)

Above scenarios and incidents have made Malli character bad I feel.

Not to speculate more, story is too engaging.. bcoz of this it made me think again and again. 

Please don't take it differently, if I have understood otherwise or commented unwanted.

Come on man you taken good point here..

This is what I m saying when writter changed malli character to DUMP land say Gowtham using her so she bending.

Initially Author wants to write complete cheat story later he changed the story line.. she made malli as hypnotized kiddo.. ( Inbtwn the story)

You can clearly see the difference 

MALI IS THE ENABLER / ENCOURAGER FOR GOWTHAM.. ( No girl ll give bra for friend even he is saviour or god like person)

later some misup..

SHE BECAME HYPNOTIZED GIRL FOR GOWTHAM 

HOPE Atleast WRITTER will end the story to uncover this all to RAJEEV & PUNISH MALI THROUGH PUNISHING GOWTHAM WITH THE HAND OF MALI..

[heygiwriter]

Come on man you taken good point here..

This is what I m saying when writter changed malli character to DUMP land say Gowtham using her so she bending.

Initially Author wants to write complete cheat story later he changed the story line.. she made malli as hypnotized kiddo.. ( Inbtwn the story)

You can clearly see the difference 

MALI IS THE ENABLER / ENCOURAGER FOR GOWTHAM.. ( No girl ll give bra for friend even he is saviour or god like person)

later some misup..

SHE BECAME HYPNOTIZED GIRL FOR GOWTHAM 

HOPE Atleast WRITTER will end the story to uncover this all to RAJEEV & PUNISH MALI THROUGH PUNISHING GOWTHAM WITH THE HAND OF MALI..

How do you know i wanted to write complete cheat story did i mentioned anywhere? no one know expect an writer on what they had in mind.  Im wondering how you declare like you know exactly what i thought. except one story none of the storys had influced me in middle to change.

[Ironman0]

Nanba update pls

[saka1981]

How do you know i wanted to write complete cheat story did i mentioned anywhere? no one know expect an writer on what they had in mind.  Im wondering how you declare like you know exactly what i thought. except one story none of the storys had influced me in middle to change.

அவர் கதையின் 4-வது அல்லது 5-வது பதிவிலேயே நின்றுட்டார்னு நினைக்கிறேன். அவருடைய comments-ஐ பார்த்தா, மல்லியை முதலில் ரொம்ப brave-ஆ காட்டிட்டு, அப்புறம் அவளையே loose ஆக்கிட்டீங்கன்னு இப்போ வரைக்கும் சொல்லிக்கிட்டே இருக்கார்.

நீங்க மல்லி ஏன் இப்படியா மாறினா என்று எவ்வளவு விளக்கம் கொடுத்தாலும், அவர் திரும்பத் திரும்ப அதையேதான் சொல்லுவாரு. அடுத்தடுத்த பதிவுகளைப் படிச்சிருந்தா அவருக்கே புரிஞ்சிருக்கும்.

Heygi, நீங்க “சூரியன் கிழக்கில் உதிக்குது”ன்னு சொன்னா கூட, இவர் வந்து “பூமிதான் சுத்துது… சூரியன் இல்ல!”ன்னு சொல்லுவாரு போல!.

[ChandruDelighty]

Nanba அதுக்கு தான் heygi மல்லிய குற்ற உணர்ச்சிலா இருக்க மாதிரி சொல்லிருபரு..... மல்லி என்னதான் கௌதம் கூட sex  பண்ணாலும் முழுமையா enjoy பண்ண மாட்டா.... 
மல்லி ஒவ்வொரு முறையும் ராஜீவ் ஏமாத்தும் போது ரொம்ப வேதனை படுற மாதிரி எழுதிற்பாறு.....
மல்லி நண்பன சந்தோஷத்துக்கு ராஜீவ்கும் அவளுக்கு ரெண்டு பேருகு தெரிஞ்சு தெரியாமலும் கஷ்டம் குடுத்துட்டு இருக்க.....
இதுல இப்போ வரையும் கஷ்ட படுறவிங்க ராஜீவ் மல்லி.....
எல்லாரையும் கஷ்ட படுத்தி சந்தோசம் அடைவது கௌதம்.....

Athu unmai than.. 

Whenever Malli had sex with Gowtham, she could not control herself...(can be taken as Gowtham's fault for taking advantage of Malli's nature) and she felt like she cheated Rajiv after sex.

But what I mentioned is initially before resort incident.. When the three were friends all together.

Malli could have avoided kisses, but I remember Heygi mentioned she kissed him as a return for Gowtham's good nature and helped the couple during bad times..  

Bra incident and birthday kiss - made Malli character question mark at that moment I felt. 

If Gowtham was manipulator from that incident itself, then Malli again faltered by not following her husbands words before going to business trip.


That was the point when Rajiv started doubting his wife.. Malli's bra with Gowtham, Rajiv naturally doubted Gowtham not Malli, but later incidents only made him to doubt Malli.. Rajiv was true to his love I felt.

After resort incident, everything was Gowtham's wrong doing or manipulations..  Gowtham intentionally wanted to hurt Rajiv and humiliate him just because he heard Rajiv spoke about abducting the company shares..

Heygi has given explanation many times like Malli and Gowtham were friends and she did everything based on situation..

But those situation Malli didn't have control, that's what I feel.. she is too easy going with Gowtham..

I accept whatever he said, only this is Malli had soft corner towards Gowtham when he was friend.. 

In both cases, Rajiv was the one who got hurt.

But his lie about the fantasy to avoid Malli's confrontation was used by Malli and Gowtham..

I feel story is in right direction now.. 

Rajiv should show Malli who's he and whom she belong to.. .
Gowtham - 2 version .. 
Friend Gowtham - Had eyes on friends wife.. he failed there as a friend.
Manipulator - planned with Malli to make Rajiv cuck and utilised the opportunities to sleep with Malli.. 

So whatever be it, 4 person happy ending or blooming friendship with Gowtham will not do justice to Rajiv's humiliations..

Rajiv - should WIN in life.. 
Gowtham - should bear the punishment
Malli - should be made to feel Rajiv is her HUSBAND. She should be made to REALISE, whatever she did was WRONG and against HER LOVE FOR HER HUSBAND. 

Here no soft corner for Malli, but Rajiv can't punish Malli like he can for Gowtham.

BECAUSE RAJIV LOVED MALLI .. GOWTHAM DIDNT!!!

[ChandruDelighty]

AYYA HEYGI,

Epong next update kudupeeng...

Story la moolgi poi multiple angle ah thoughts varuthu.. please update with next chapter..

I have read your story only after completion, I feel I missed to read it on the go...

My heart would have come out with Jay - Nikitha Story..

Seekaram update kudunga Heygi.. :)

[BlackSpirit]

அவர் கதையின் 4-வது அல்லது 5-வது பதிவிலேயே நின்றுட்டார்னு நினைக்கிறேன். அவருடைய comments-ஐ பார்த்தா, மல்லியை முதலில் ரொம்ப brave-ஆ காட்டிட்டு, அப்புறம் அவளையே loose ஆக்கிட்டீங்கன்னு இப்போ வரைக்கும் சொல்லிக்கிட்டே இருக்கார்.

நீங்க மல்லி ஏன் இப்படியா மாறினா என்று எவ்வளவு விளக்கம் கொடுத்தாலும், அவர் திரும்பத் திரும்ப அதையேதான் சொல்லுவாரு. அடுத்தடுத்த பதிவுகளைப் படிச்சிருந்தா அவருக்கே புரிஞ்சிருக்கும்.

Heygi, நீங்க “சூரியன் கிழக்கில் உதிக்குது”ன்னு சொன்னா கூட, இவர் வந்து “பூமிதான் சுத்துது… சூரியன் இல்ல!”ன்னு சொல்லுவாரு போல!.

I never stopped reading i read all..
In this forum only few can have ability to write story with three or four characters othera comes up with big families so I loved the story as in writer POV. So i looked out each character sudden changes.

Mali encouraged Gowtham behaviour no girl do that giving bra kisses but she did and even hided it.

Second Rajeev insisted her Gowtham is not good but instead she beleived ok but at some point he hypnotized her. And gone completely blind state..

The story is going to end Still she is in blind state only.. 

Simple in one line

If Mali rewind everything that happened in her life.. sure she herself attend Counselling session to cure her state of MIND. Literally she is like clown... More than the Gowtham and Rajeev Author used her as clown come on man she is the கரு of this story You can simply put down her as like emotional prick...

Whatever happens is happened...

That why i requesting author to give respectful validating end for the Mali character & rajeev.. She should comes out of being emotional prick and see what really happened...

Don't want her to be hypnotized doll. 

[ChandruDelighty]

I never stopped reading i read all..
In this forum only few can have ability to write story with three or four characters othera comes up with big families so I loved the story as in writer POV. So i looked out each character sudden changes.

Mali encouraged Gowtham behaviour no girl do that giving bra kisses but she did and even hided it.

Second Rajeev insisted her Gowtham is not good but instead she beleived ok but at some point he hypnotized her. And gone completely blind state..

The story is going to end Still she is in blind state only.. 

Simple in one line

If Mali rewind everything that happened in her life.. sure she herself attend Counselling session to cure her state of MIND. Literally she is like clown... More than the Gowtham and Rajeev Author used her as clown come on man she is the கரு of this story You can simply put down her as like emotional prick...

Whatever happens is happened...

That why i requesting author to give respectful validating end for the Mali character & rajeev.. She should comes out of being emotional prick and see what really happened...

Don't want her to be hypnotized doll. 

Hi Blackspirit,


Heygi has already mentioned whoever did wrong will pay the price,

Also mentioned, as you sow, so you reap, this includes Malli as well, she will be made to realise her mistakes I believe...

But think Malli is main character or the story, I would say heart of the story. so lets not demon the character.. once story ends views might change.. so we need to wait and watch..

So lets wait and see how story unfolds.. 

we can't say author to do what we think it should be done like this or that.

Readers pov, we can tell this made this character look like this, but you cannot ask or tell author to change his perspectives and don't need to judge what he has planned.

After completion of story many may like or many may dislike the story.. that is fine.. 

As always, Writer brain has ULTIMATE AUTHORITY to decide what and how it is.

[saka1981]

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