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(22-09-2026, 06:16 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: Meantime lets have a small fun feedback. 

How do you want the story to get a closure ? or what do you wish :)

[Please avoid extreme thing, yes they will pay for their act, but my stories i prefer to end with a more positieve... even if that is sexual..or quite contradicting to star. Yup i wont split them:D ... but we have 4 people here., 3 main figures.   the characters are human first, lets just wish  them happiness and peace at the end for them :) ]


Don't take it as Criticism you spoiled Mali character in btwn the story..
You shown her as an intelligent girl but in the mid she is projected as a clown & fool of the story..!

Make her as Intelligent girl the story should be end up with her decision only whether it cruel or tarnish end but what i want is...

Rajeev Punishment on Mali is to be giving punishment for Gowtham in Mali her own hand ( Like choosing love or friendship ) I hope that will make judgement for her character.. she should comes out of clownism thing / fool things..

Anyway What ever you write but don't spoil Mali character again for the sake of the story. Don't do that.! 
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Ada popa ippadi posukunu akitiye. Avan uyira kuduthu othan nee ennana rajeev pilla nu sollitiye
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மல்லி கையால கவுதம் தண்டனை அனுபவிக்கணும். நண்பன் என்று சொல்லி மோசம் செய்தவன் அதற்கான பலனை அந்த நண்பன் (மல்லி ) மூலமே அடைய வேண்டும்.
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(22-09-2026, 10:22 PM)Vithavithama Wrote: மல்லி கையால கவுதம் தண்டனை அனுபவிக்கணும். நண்பன் என்று சொல்லி மோசம் செய்தவன் அதற்கான பலனை அந்த நண்பன் (மல்லி ) மூலமே அடைய வேண்டும்.

சரியான பதிவு நண்பா
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(22-09-2026, 07:49 PM)BlackSpirit Wrote: Don't take it as Criticism you spoiled Mali character in btwn the story..
You shown her as an intelligent girl but in the mid she is projected as a clown & fool of the story..!

Make her as Intelligent girl the story should be end up with her decision only whether it cruel or tarnish end but what i want is...

Rajeev Punishment on Mali is to be giving punishment for Gowtham in Mali her own hand ( Like choosing love or friendship ) I hope that will make judgement for her character.. she should comes out of clownism thing / fool things..

Anyway What ever you write but don't spoil Mali character again for the sake of the story. Don't do that.! 

You are right bro...
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Indru Update undaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Thalaivaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Heygi.. Epo next update.. Inoru varam lam thangathungayya..:)
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(23-09-2026, 12:22 AM)ChandruDelighty Wrote: Heygi.. Epo next update.. Inoru varam lam thangathungayya..:)

I too feel so, Heygi Bro

If possible give the update soon
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Waiting for your hot update nanba
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I hope the lesson doesn't hurt Malli too much mainly because:

1) Stress during pregnancy can cause miscarriage.
2) Stress during developmental phase of the foetus can cause limited supply of oxygen leading to developmental issues in the child.
3) Also, pregnant women deserve to be forgiven as long as they're remorseful. Men don't go through physical pain or changes of labor, so Malli should probably learn while she is still given love by Rajeev.

Take your time Heygi brother, rest well. You've given a devil-streak of updates over 2 days that it should ideally last a month, but you've asked only for a week's break. Please rest up and return whenever you're ready.
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Gowtham fans disappointed
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Child is rajeevs
No revenge needed.
She had given herself to Gowtham
Nothing can change
Let them be in same house
Let malli decide with whom she wants the night
Rajeev respect malli decion
She will be wife of both
Pati and malli family won't know
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True love requires sacrifice

True love requires sacrifice not necessarily giving up love forever, but being willing to protect the other person’s dignity, future, and peace even at personal cost.

Rajeev may truly love Malli, but the circumstances have pushed him into an impossible position. He worked hard to build the business and deserves to enjoy the results of that effort. Instead of Goutham going to Paris, Rajeev should take charge of the business and go there to expand what he created. That would give him the recognition and success he has earned.

At the same time, Malli’s public image has become deeply entangled with Goutham’s. In the office and outside it, everyone believes Malli is Goutham’s wife and professional partner. The staff have seen them together, accepted that story as truth, and now many people also believe Goutham is the father of Malli’s unborn child. For Rajeev—who is actually responsible for the pregnancy—this would be a painful and humiliating situation. His fatherhood, relationship, and dignity are being erased in front of everyone.

A painful exchange of roles

The future may bring even more complications. Goutham could manipulate the situation and ask Malli to remain with him, perhaps using family pressure, emotional blackmail, the pregnancy, or some other twisted justification. Malli may agree, not because she no longer loves Rajeev, but because she feels trapped by circumstances, guilt, or a need to protect her family.

It also seems possible that Goutham is trying to win Malli’s family over by presenting himself as the responsible man. the man willing to accept her pregnancy, stand by her publicly, and provide security. In contrast, Rajeev may be painted as a failure or an irresponsible person, despite being the child’s real father. That would be a cruel betrayal of Rajeev’s role in Malli’s life.

In that situation, Rajeev’s most difficult but most dignified choice may be to let Malli stay with Goutham and focus on rebuilding his own life through the business. Not because Goutham deserves to “win,” but because Rajeev should not have to keep begging for a place in a story where everyone else has already rewritten the truth.

Why Malli staying with Goutham could work

Goutham loves Malli intensely—perhaps obsessively—and he would likely care for her and the child with great protectiveness. Patti is also there, which could provide Malli emotional support and family stability. If Malli remains with Goutham, she may be safer from public shame and social scrutiny, especially when the world already believes Goutham is the child’s father.

This would create a striking reversal:


Rajeev - Emotionally tied to Malli but denied public recognition - Successful businessman, independent, rebuilding his life

Goutham - The outsider trying to claim Malli’s life - The man living with the consequences of claiming Malli and her child

Malli - Torn between genuine love and social pressure - Protected publicly, but carrying the emotional cost of her choices
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Vidya - A possible secondary presence - Rajeev’s path toward a new family and a different future

Rajeev and Goutham would, in a sense, exchange places. Goutham would get what he thinks he wants—Malli beside him—but he would also inherit all the emotional consequences, distrust, and unresolved truth surrounding the pregnancy. Rajeev, meanwhile, would lose Malli physically but regain professional identity, self-respect, and eventually a chance to live without constantly being humiliated.

The delayed truth

The most dramatic revelation would be for Malli to discover the truth about the pregnancy several years after the child is born—perhaps around five years later, through an unavoidable medical situation such as a blood group discrepancy, genetic test, transplant compatibility issue, or another family-health emergency. Got the idea after reading
https://indianexpress.com/article/cities...-10887939/

That revelation should not be treated casually. It would destroy the foundation of the life everyone built around a lie:

- Malli would realize that Rajeev was the child’s biological father all along.
- Goutham would have to confront the fact that he accepted—or helped create—a false public narrative.
- Rajeev’s sacrifice would finally become visible to everyone.
- Malli would have to face the price of choosing security, pressure, or appearances over the man who loved her sincerely.
- The child would become central to the emotional conflict, so the story would need to treat the child’s wellbeing with sensitivity rather than using the child merely as a plot device.

By then, Rajeev could have moved forward with Vidya and become the father of another child. That would make the revelation even more painful: Malli may finally understand what she lost only after Rajeev has learned to live without her.

The emotional justice

Some viewers may dislike this idea because it means Rajeev and Malli do not immediately end up together. But this is not about punishing Malli or rewarding Goutham. It is about consequences.

Goutham should not be allowed to take Malli’s place in Rajeev’s life without carrying the burden of that choice. Malli should not be able to remain unaware forever of who truly stood by her. And Rajeev should not be reduced to a man who silently accepts humiliation while others claim his work, his relationship, and even his child.

Rajeev sacrificing Malli would not mean that his love was weak. It would mean his love was strong enough to step away when staying would destroy his self-respect. He can take over the business, go to Paris, build a meaningful life, and allow Goutham to live with the reality of the world he created.

In the end, the greatest twist would be this: Goutham may appear to have won Malli, but Rajeev would be the one who truly regains himself.

Heygiwriter, these are inputs from a reader who admires your writtings heartfully...
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(23-09-2026, 06:41 AM)Jayam Ramana Wrote: Child is rajeevs
No revenge needed.
She had given herself to Gowtham
Nothing can change
Let them be in same house
Let malli decide with whom she wants the night
Rajeev respect malli decion
She will be wife of both
Pati and malli family won't know

நல்லா இருக்கு உங்க life style ah
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கௌதம் எப்பயும் ராஜ் மேல ஒரு பொறுமை இருந்துட்டு தான் இருந்துச்சு ராஜ் மேல மல்லி காட்டுன அன்பு பாசம் தனக்கு யாரும் இல்லனு ஒரு எண்ணம் தனக்கும் அந்த பாசம் வேணும் அப்படின்னு அவன் நினைச்சான் அது தான் மல்லியா அடையனும் வெறி அவனுக்கு வந்துச்சு மல்லிகை உண்மைய காதலிச்சிருந்தானா ராஜ் மல்லியா பிரிக்கிறதுனால மல்லி கஷ்டப்படுவான் தெரிஞ்சு அவங்கள விட்டு விலகி இருப்பான். ஆனால் மல்லி கஷ்டப்படுவதை பற்றி அவனுக்கு எந்த கவலையும் கிடையாது ஆரம்பத்துல கஷ்டப்படுவா அப்பறம் அவளை சரி பண்ணிடலாம் என்கிற ஒரு எண்ணத்தில் தான் மல்லிகை அடையனும்னு நினைச்சான் ஆனா மல்லி இப்ப வரைக்கும் ராஜ் மேல காட்டுற பாசம் அது நீ கெளதம் புரிய மாட்டேங்குது இப்போ வித்யா ராஜ் மேல பாசம் காட்டுவா அவ கூட குளோசா இருக்கிற மாரி அப்படி நடிச்சா கூட வித்யாவை தனக்கு சொந்தம் ஆக்கிக்கணும் அப்படின்னு கௌதம் நினைப்பான்.



உண்மையிலேயே மல்லி மேலே உண்மையா காதலிச்சு இருந்தால் வித்தியா பக்கம் போக மாட்டான். ஆனால் அவன் உண்மையிலேயே மல்லியே அடையணும் அதை வைத்து ராஜ பழி வாங்கணும் ராஜா யாரு இருக்க கூடாது என்கிற எண்ணம் மட்டும்தான் அவனை ஆள் மனசுல பதிஞ்சிருக்கு இப்போ அவன் ராஜ் கிட்ட இருந்து வித்யாவையும் பிரிக்க முயற்சிப்பான் . மல்லி எப்படி முயற்சி பண்ணி திட்டம் போட்டு அடைந்தானோ வித்தியாக்கும் அதேபோல் முயற்சிப்பான்
இது நடந்தால் கௌதம் ஓட உண்மையான சுய ரூபம் மல்லிக்கு தெரிய வரும்.
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(23-09-2026, 08:20 AM)oxy.raj Wrote: True love requires sacrifice

True love requires sacrifice not necessarily giving up love forever, but being willing to protect the other person’s dignity, future, and peace even at personal cost.

Rajeev may truly love Malli, but the circumstances have pushed him into an impossible position. He worked hard to build the business and deserves to enjoy the results of that effort. Instead of Goutham going to Paris, Rajeev should take charge of the business and go there to expand what he created. That would give him the recognition and success he has earned.

At the same time, Malli’s public image has become deeply entangled with Goutham’s. In the office and outside it, everyone believes Malli is Goutham’s wife and professional partner. The staff have seen them together, accepted that story as truth, and now many people also believe Goutham is the father of Malli’s unborn child. For Rajeev—who is actually responsible for the pregnancy—this would be a painful and humiliating situation. His fatherhood, relationship, and dignity are being erased in front of everyone.

A painful exchange of roles

The future may bring even more complications. Goutham could manipulate the situation and ask Malli to remain with him, perhaps using family pressure, emotional blackmail, the pregnancy, or some other twisted justification. Malli may agree, not because she no longer loves Rajeev, but because she feels trapped by circumstances, guilt, or a need to protect her family.

It also seems possible that Goutham is trying to win Malli’s family over by presenting himself as the responsible man. the man willing to accept her pregnancy, stand by her publicly, and provide security. In contrast, Rajeev may be painted as a failure or an irresponsible person, despite being the child’s real father. That would be a cruel betrayal of Rajeev’s role in Malli’s life.

In that situation, Rajeev’s most difficult but most dignified choice may be to let Malli stay with Goutham and focus on rebuilding his own life through the business. Not because Goutham deserves to “win,” but because Rajeev should not have to keep begging for a place in a story where everyone else has already rewritten the truth.

Why Malli staying with Goutham could work

Goutham loves Malli intensely—perhaps obsessively—and he would likely care for her and the child with great protectiveness. Patti is also there, which could provide Malli emotional support and family stability. If Malli remains with Goutham, she may be safer from public shame and social scrutiny, especially when the world already believes Goutham is the child’s father.

This would create a striking reversal:


Rajeev - Emotionally tied to Malli but denied public recognition - Successful businessman, independent, rebuilding his life

Goutham - The outsider trying to claim Malli’s life - The man living with the consequences of claiming Malli and her child

Malli - Torn between genuine love and social pressure - Protected publicly, but carrying the emotional cost of her choices
|
Vidya - A possible secondary presence - Rajeev’s path toward a new family and a different future

Rajeev and Goutham would, in a sense, exchange places. Goutham would get what he thinks he wants—Malli beside him—but he would also inherit all the emotional consequences, distrust, and unresolved truth surrounding the pregnancy. Rajeev, meanwhile, would lose Malli physically but regain professional identity, self-respect, and eventually a chance to live without constantly being humiliated.

The delayed truth

The most dramatic revelation would be for Malli to discover the truth about the pregnancy several years after the child is born—perhaps around five years later, through an unavoidable medical situation such as a blood group discrepancy, genetic test, transplant compatibility issue, or another family-health emergency. Got the idea after reading
https://indianexpress.com/article/cities...-10887939/

That revelation should not be treated casually. It would destroy the foundation of the life everyone built around a lie:

- Malli would realize that Rajeev was the child’s biological father all along.
- Goutham would have to confront the fact that he accepted—or helped create—a false public narrative.
- Rajeev’s sacrifice would finally become visible to everyone.
- Malli would have to face the price of choosing security, pressure, or appearances over the man who loved her sincerely.
- The child would become central to the emotional conflict, so the story would need to treat the child’s wellbeing with sensitivity rather than using the child merely as a plot device.

By then, Rajeev could have moved forward with Vidya and become the father of another child. That would make the revelation even more painful: Malli may finally understand what she lost only after Rajeev has learned to live without her.

The emotional justice

Some viewers may dislike this idea because it means Rajeev and Malli do not immediately end up together. But this is not about punishing Malli or rewarding Goutham. It is about consequences.

Goutham should not be allowed to take Malli’s place in Rajeev’s life without carrying the burden of that choice. Malli should not be able to remain unaware forever of who truly stood by her. And Rajeev should not be reduced to a man who silently accepts humiliation while others claim his work, his relationship, and even his child.

Rajeev sacrificing Malli would not mean that his love was weak. It would mean his love was strong enough to step away when staying would destroy his self-respect. He can take over the business, go to Paris, build a meaningful life, and allow Goutham to live with the reality of the world he created.

In the end, the greatest twist would be this: Goutham may appear to have won Malli, but Rajeev would be the one who truly regains himself.

Heygiwriter, these are inputs from a reader who admires your writtings heartfully...
புரியல bro..... நண்பன்நு நம்பி விட்டதுக்கு பொண்டாட்டி புள்ளையா அவன் கிட்ட கொடுத்துட்டு..... தொழில்ல பெரியால் ஆகி யாருக்காக புடுங்க போறன் ராஜீவ்..... 
கௌதம்கு இதே மாதிரி புது லைஃப் ஸ்டார் பண்ண முடியும்..... But உண்மையா love பன்றவிங்கள பிரிச்சு ஒரு ஏமாத்து காரன் கிட்ட கொடுத்துட்டு... ராஜீவ்வ கைலா புடிச்சுட்டு போக சொல்லுறீங்க நல்லா இறுக்கிய உங்க கருத்து...... அவன் அவன் லைஃப்லா இப்படி தான் எல்லாரும் இருப்பின்களனு தெரியல..... Writter Frist ye சொல்லிட்டாரு ராஜீவ் மல்லி பிரிய மடங்கானு..... எத நினைச்சு இப்படி கருத்து பதிவு பண்றீங்கனு தெரியல..... 95 episode உங்க கௌதம்கு சாதகமா தான் வந்துருக்கு..... 0ru 3 episode ராஜீவ்கு சாதகமா வந்த உடனே  பொருக்கல..... இனி இந்த story smooth ah போக விட மாட்டிங்க.....
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(23-09-2026, 08:20 AM)oxy.raj Wrote: True love requires sacrifice

True love requires sacrifice not necessarily giving up love forever, but being willing to protect the other person’s dignity, future, and peace even at personal cost.

Rajeev may truly love Malli, but the circumstances have pushed him into an impossible position. He worked hard to build the business and deserves to enjoy the results of that effort. Instead of Goutham going to Paris, Rajeev should take charge of the business and go there to expand what he created. That would give him the recognition and success he has earned.

At the same time, Malli’s public image has become deeply entangled with Goutham’s. In the office and outside it, everyone believes Malli is Goutham’s wife and professional partner. The staff have seen them together, accepted that story as truth, and now many people also believe Goutham is the father of Malli’s unborn child. For Rajeev—who is actually responsible for the pregnancy—this would be a painful and humiliating situation. His fatherhood, relationship, and dignity are being erased in front of everyone.

A painful exchange of roles

The future may bring even more complications. Goutham could manipulate the situation and ask Malli to remain with him, perhaps using family pressure, emotional blackmail, the pregnancy, or some other twisted justification. Malli may agree, not because she no longer loves Rajeev, but because she feels trapped by circumstances, guilt, or a need to protect her family.

It also seems possible that Goutham is trying to win Malli’s family over by presenting himself as the responsible man. the man willing to accept her pregnancy, stand by her publicly, and provide security. In contrast, Rajeev may be painted as a failure or an irresponsible person, despite being the child’s real father. That would be a cruel betrayal of Rajeev’s role in Malli’s life.

In that situation, Rajeev’s most difficult but most dignified choice may be to let Malli stay with Goutham and focus on rebuilding his own life through the business. Not because Goutham deserves to “win,” but because Rajeev should not have to keep begging for a place in a story where everyone else has already rewritten the truth.

Why Malli staying with Goutham could work

Goutham loves Malli intensely—perhaps obsessively—and he would likely care for her and the child with great protectiveness. Patti is also there, which could provide Malli emotional support and family stability. If Malli remains with Goutham, she may be safer from public shame and social scrutiny, especially when the world already believes Goutham is the child’s father.

This would create a striking reversal:


Rajeev - Emotionally tied to Malli but denied public recognition - Successful businessman, independent, rebuilding his life

Goutham - The outsider trying to claim Malli’s life - The man living with the consequences of claiming Malli and her child

Malli - Torn between genuine love and social pressure - Protected publicly, but carrying the emotional cost of her choices
|
Vidya - A possible secondary presence - Rajeev’s path toward a new family and a different future

Rajeev and Goutham would, in a sense, exchange places. Goutham would get what he thinks he wants—Malli beside him—but he would also inherit all the emotional consequences, distrust, and unresolved truth surrounding the pregnancy. Rajeev, meanwhile, would lose Malli physically but regain professional identity, self-respect, and eventually a chance to live without constantly being humiliated.

The delayed truth

The most dramatic revelation would be for Malli to discover the truth about the pregnancy several years after the child is born—perhaps around five years later, through an unavoidable medical situation such as a blood group discrepancy, genetic test, transplant compatibility issue, or another family-health emergency. Got the idea after reading
https://indianexpress.com/article/cities...-10887939/

That revelation should not be treated casually. It would destroy the foundation of the life everyone built around a lie:

- Malli would realize that Rajeev was the child’s biological father all along.
- Goutham would have to confront the fact that he accepted—or helped create—a false public narrative.
- Rajeev’s sacrifice would finally become visible to everyone.
- Malli would have to face the price of choosing security, pressure, or appearances over the man who loved her sincerely.
- The child would become central to the emotional conflict, so the story would need to treat the child’s wellbeing with sensitivity rather than using the child merely as a plot device.

By then, Rajeev could have moved forward with Vidya and become the father of another child. That would make the revelation even more painful: Malli may finally understand what she lost only after Rajeev has learned to live without her.

The emotional justice

Some viewers may dislike this idea because it means Rajeev and Malli do not immediately end up together. But this is not about punishing Malli or rewarding Goutham. It is about consequences.

Goutham should not be allowed to take Malli’s place in Rajeev’s life without carrying the burden of that choice. Malli should not be able to remain unaware forever of who truly stood by her. And Rajeev should not be reduced to a man who silently accepts humiliation while others claim his work, his relationship, and even his child.

Rajeev sacrificing Malli would not mean that his love was weak. It would mean his love was strong enough to step away when staying would destroy his self-respect. He can take over the business, go to Paris, build a meaningful life, and allow Goutham to live with the reality of the world he created.

In the end, the greatest twist would be this: Goutham may appear to have won Malli, but Rajeev would be the one who truly regains himself.

Heygiwriter, these are inputs from a reader who admires your writtings heartfully...

Bro if you don't mind, I just want to a simple question

What is reply about her child to Malli's family and her brother?

 She cheated both Rajeev and her brother that she planned a cheating drama to hide her first fuck and her marks also she aroused for Gautam to get a hard fuck?
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(23-09-2026, 09:49 AM)RaviKumar3026 Wrote: Bro if you don't mind, I just want to a simple question

What is reply about her child to Malli's family and her brother?

 She cheated both Rajeev and her brother that she planned a cheating drama to hide her first fuck and her marks also she aroused for Gautam to get a hard fuck?

மல்லி ஏமாற்றவில்லை.... ஏமாற்றுவதற்கு தூண்டப்பட்டிருக்கிறாள்.
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(23-09-2026, 08:20 AM)oxy.raj Wrote: True love requires sacrifice

True love requires sacrifice not necessarily giving up love forever, but being willing to protect the other person’s dignity, future, and peace even at personal cost.

Rajeev may truly love Malli, but the circumstances have pushed him into an impossible position. He worked hard to build the business and deserves to enjoy the results of that effort. Instead of Goutham going to Paris, Rajeev should take charge of the business and go there to expand what he created. That would give him the recognition and success he has earned.

At the same time, Malli’s public image has become deeply entangled with Goutham’s. In the office and outside it, everyone believes Malli is Goutham’s wife and professional partner. The staff have seen them together, accepted that story as truth, and now many people also believe Goutham is the father of Malli’s unborn child. For Rajeev—who is actually responsible for the pregnancy—this would be a painful and humiliating situation. His fatherhood, relationship, and dignity are being erased in front of everyone.

A painful exchange of roles

The future may bring even more complications. Goutham could manipulate the situation and ask Malli to remain with him, perhaps using family pressure, emotional blackmail, the pregnancy, or some other twisted justification. Malli may agree, not because she no longer loves Rajeev, but because she feels trapped by circumstances, guilt, or a need to protect her family.

It also seems possible that Goutham is trying to win Malli’s family over by presenting himself as the responsible man. the man willing to accept her pregnancy, stand by her publicly, and provide security. In contrast, Rajeev may be painted as a failure or an irresponsible person, despite being the child’s real father. That would be a cruel betrayal of Rajeev’s role in Malli’s life.

In that situation, Rajeev’s most difficult but most dignified choice may be to let Malli stay with Goutham and focus on rebuilding his own life through the business. Not because Goutham deserves to “win,” but because Rajeev should not have to keep begging for a place in a story where everyone else has already rewritten the truth.

Why Malli staying with Goutham could work

Goutham loves Malli intensely—perhaps obsessively—and he would likely care for her and the child with great protectiveness. Patti is also there, which could provide Malli emotional support and family stability. If Malli remains with Goutham, she may be safer from public shame and social scrutiny, especially when the world already believes Goutham is the child’s father.

This would create a striking reversal:


Rajeev - Emotionally tied to Malli but denied public recognition - Successful businessman, independent, rebuilding his life

Goutham - The outsider trying to claim Malli’s life - The man living with the consequences of claiming Malli and her child

Malli - Torn between genuine love and social pressure - Protected publicly, but carrying the emotional cost of her choices
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Vidya - A possible secondary presence - Rajeev’s path toward a new family and a different future

Rajeev and Goutham would, in a sense, exchange places. Goutham would get what he thinks he wants—Malli beside him—but he would also inherit all the emotional consequences, distrust, and unresolved truth surrounding the pregnancy. Rajeev, meanwhile, would lose Malli physically but regain professional identity, self-respect, and eventually a chance to live without constantly being humiliated.

The delayed truth

The most dramatic revelation would be for Malli to discover the truth about the pregnancy several years after the child is born—perhaps around five years later, through an unavoidable medical situation such as a blood group discrepancy, genetic test, transplant compatibility issue, or another family-health emergency. Got the idea after reading
https://indianexpress.com/article/cities...-10887939/

That revelation should not be treated casually. It would destroy the foundation of the life everyone built around a lie:

- Malli would realize that Rajeev was the child’s biological father all along.
- Goutham would have to confront the fact that he accepted—or helped create—a false public narrative.
- Rajeev’s sacrifice would finally become visible to everyone.
- Malli would have to face the price of choosing security, pressure, or appearances over the man who loved her sincerely.
- The child would become central to the emotional conflict, so the story would need to treat the child’s wellbeing with sensitivity rather than using the child merely as a plot device.

By then, Rajeev could have moved forward with Vidya and become the father of another child. That would make the revelation even more painful: Malli may finally understand what she lost only after Rajeev has learned to live without her.

The emotional justice

Some viewers may dislike this idea because it means Rajeev and Malli do not immediately end up together. But this is not about punishing Malli or rewarding Goutham. It is about consequences.

Goutham should not be allowed to take Malli’s place in Rajeev’s life without carrying the burden of that choice. Malli should not be able to remain unaware forever of who truly stood by her. And Rajeev should not be reduced to a man who silently accepts humiliation while others claim his work, his relationship, and even his child.

Rajeev sacrificing Malli would not mean that his love was weak. It would mean his love was strong enough to step away when staying would destroy his self-respect. He can take over the business, go to Paris, build a meaningful life, and allow Goutham to live with the reality of the world he created.

In the end, the greatest twist would be this: Goutham may appear to have won Malli, but Rajeev would be the one who truly regains himself.

Heygiwriter, these are inputs from a reader who admires your writtings heartfully...

Altogether it's is different thought process.. 

Gowtham is not in love with malli wholeheartedly. He needs only sex from her..
 He needs to bed her from day 1.but controlled himself.

Malli loves Rajiv even when she is in bed with Gowtham.. (through her conversation it can be seen).

If this is what the story ends.. Whatever Rajiv achieves in business he needs to live away from his own child.. Will that not hurt him.

Gowtham will claim malli and rajivs child as his unknowingly.. But may be in future after 45 or 50 yrs if he finds out.. What are the consequences.. Whether that would cause any pain for him.. Rajiv child will face the turmoil.. And malli will face humiliation infornt of her child..

Child cant think Gowtham as father and will consider mom is a cheater.. What is the child thought process..
One can not hide the truth for entire lifetime. Child will some day find Rajiv is the father.. Gowtham is manipulator..

Then that child will become like Gowtham in future .

What may come.. True love should always stay together 

Gowtham should get punished in different way.. 
Rajiv should win finally.. 


Still malli is legally wedded wife of Rajiv.. 
Both malli and Rajiv family knows this. 

If Gowtham has true love.. Then he should make malli divorce Rajiv and marry her.
That is very tough as per the story plot unless Rajiv makes malli hate him. 

Gowtham has already stated he is not fit for marriage life.

But I still think if this way story ends.. Then it would really make Rajiv life miserable.

He lost his wife and child to cheater Gowtham.
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