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kia update likha hai ap ne yaar, kamaal hai ekdum kamaal ka writings
bahut hi majedaar aur chatpata kahaani hai yeh
bahut hi maja aya padhkar
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yeh kahani dhamaal machaane wali hai mujhe lagta hai
Hats off YAAR
aur aap ka bahut shukriya hamare liye itne ache kahaani ikhne ke liye
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(20-09-2026, 03:16 PM)Kartik69 Wrote: yeh kahani dhamaal machaane wali hai mujhe lagta hai
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aur aap ka bahut shukriya hamare liye itne ache kahaani ikhne ke liye
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Please add one chapter of mom learning smoking and getting addicted to it.
Please please. It will be more erotic.
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Vivek ne maa ko phir chumne ki koshish ki. Maa ne phusphusaya, “Himmat na karna.” Usne dwar dhakela, silli uthayi aur aakhir khola.
Pita wahan khade the, geele baal, safed banian aur chhoti patloon, kandhon par ek aur chhota kapda liye kyunki wait karke thak chuke the. Aangan ki taraf ek kadam liya aur turant Vivek dikha. Pita ruke.
Shak nahi tha. Sirf uljhan thi kyunki socha tha maa aangan saaf karti akeli milegi, kisi anjane purush ke bagal nahi. Aankhein maa se Vivek par gayin phir maa par.
“Oh,” pita ne kaha. Maa ka dil tez dhadak raha tha, par zabardasti swabhavik muskaan banayi. “Ranveer, kshama. Pehle samjhaana chahiye tha.”
Pita ne narmi se Vivek ki taraf ishara kiya. “Yeh kaun?” Maa ko samajh aaya yahi pal hai jab sab is par tikka hai kitni shaanti se uttar de.
“Yeh Vivek hain,” usne kaha. “Purane mitra. Vivek ji, yeh mere pati, Ranveer.”
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Vivek turant ghabraaye gupt atithi se ijjatdar mehman ban gaya. Garm muskaan di aur aage badha. “Ranveer! Aakhir. Tumhare baare mein bahut suna.”
Pita ka chehra lagbhag turant naram hua. “Suna?” poocha.
“Haan,” Vivek ne kaha. “Shobha ne kai baar zikr kiya.” Maa ne aadhe pal Vivek ko dekha, jaanti thi takniki taur par yeh sach tha.
Pita muskuraye aur haath badhaya. “Milkar khushi hui.” Vivek ne milaaya, “Mujhe bhi.”
Pita abhi uljhe the, par woh nirdosh uljhan thi jo snaan ke dauran anjane mehman ko aangan mein dekhkar aati hai. “To andar kaise aaye?” pita ne poocha. Vivek ne chikni tarah kaha, “Bahar ke aangan-dwar se.”
Pita faatak ki taraf dekhe. “Ah.” Maa ne jaldi joda, “Jab Vivek aaye main bahar thi, isliye ghar ke through nahi aaye.”
Us vyakhya ne pita ki uljhan ka ek hissa turant suljha diya. Pita ne sir hilaaya. “Yeh theek baithta hai.”
Phir aangan ke dwar ko dekha. “Aur dwar?” Maa uske liye taiyar thi.
“Kheenchkar band kiya kyunki laga abhi snaan chal raha hai aur bahar ka shor ghar mein na jaye. Band hote hi silli khisak gayi. Jaante ho woh silli kaisi hai.”
Pita ne silli dekhi aur sir hilaaya. “Haan, sach. Kehta rehta hoon ise badalna chahiye.” Maa lagbhag rahat ki saans chhodne wali thi.
Vivek ne madad se kaha. “Laga maine toda.” Pita hans ke bole, “Nahi, nahi. Woh tala mahinon se satata hai.”
Maa ne Vivek ko dekha. Usne sabse chhoti vijay-nazar di. Phir pita ko blauz par nishan dikhe.
“Shobha, wahan kya hua?” poocha. Maa ne turant neeche dekha jaise bhool hi gayi ho. “Oh! Dahi.”
“Dahi?” pita ne dohraya. “Haan. Gir gaya,” maa ne kaha. Pita nahi jaante the safed dag Chacha Vivek ka veerya hai.
Vivek ne hamdardi se sir hilaaya. “Kaafi zyada.” Maa ne use dekha, pita hans ke bole, “Dikh raha hai. Aksar gandagi karti hai.”
Maa bacha hua veerya-dag sadi se ponchti rahi.
Yeh lagbhag atyadhik poora tha. Praman maa ki vyakhya ke saath. Pita muskuraye, “Jaldbazi mein hamesha giraati ho.”
Maa ne lajjit muskaan di. “Jaanti hoon.” Vivek ne joda, “Kaha tha sookhne se pehle saaf kar lo.”
Pita gambhirta se sir hilaaye. “Sahi kehte hain. Dahi ka dag chhodo to gandh aati hai.” Maa dono purushon ke beech dekhi. Yakeen nahi aaya pita maa aur Chacha Vivek se aise bhole.
Paanch minat pehle dahshat thi pita dag dekhenge. Ab pita aur Vivek dhulai ki baat kar rahe the.
Main yeh sab andar se dekh raha tha, hansna rokna atyant kathin ho raha tha. Sabse ajeeb yeh tha pita mein sach-sach koi shak nahi. Har ajeeb vivaran ko ekdum mamuli vyakhya mil gayi.
Maa ka ghabraaya chehra asani se us lajja par daala ja sakta tha ki angochha bina wait karwaya. Pita ne phir maa ko dekha. “Par bataya kyun nahi koi yahan hai?”
Maa ruki. Iske liye thoda zyada savdhan uttar chahiye tha.
“Kahna chahiye tha,” usne maana. “Kshama. Tum angochha bula rahe the, Vivek abhi aaye the, dahi har jagah gir chuka tha, aur dwar sat gaya tha.”
“Sab ek saath hua,” woh jaari rahi. “Sochti rahi ek cheez niptaun phir dwar kholun.”
Pita dheeme hanse. “Aur main andar soch raha tha snaan ke baad patni ne kyun chhod diya.” Maa muskurayi, “Kshama, Ranveer.”
“Kah sakti thi, ‘Mehman hain,’” pita ne kaha. “Jaanti hoon,” maa ne kaha.
Vivek ne vinay se haath uthaya. “Aadha dosh sweekarta hoon.” Pita ne dekha, “Kis baat ka?”
“Sabse bure samay aane ka,” Vivek ne kaha. Pita hanse. “Yeh koi apraadh nahi.”
Maa lagbhag khans padi. Sambhav tha kuch veerya bahar nikal aata. Mujhe munh pherna pada.
Pita ne aakhir poocha, “To tum dono kaise jaante ho?” Maa ne kaha, “Varshon se. Kuch samay sampark toota, haal mein phir jude.”
Pita ne phir dekha. “Shobha, jaakar blauz badal lo.” Maa ne kaha, “Ek minat.” Phir pita ne Chacha Vivek ko andar bulaya. Pita pehle andar gaye, phir maa ne Chacha Vivek se kaha andar theek chalein, koi natak na karein.
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Us ajeeb dopahar ke baad pita aur Chacha Vivek ajnabi-se zyada der nahi rahe; kuch dinon mein pita unki baat aise karne lage jaise unhe apna purana mitra mil gaya ho.
Chacha Vivek chai ke liye aane lage. Pita ke saath baithak mein baithte, kaam ki baat, kabhi shaam tak ruke.
Pita ko unki sangat achhi lagti. Ek baar maa se kaha, “Vivek asal mein bhadra purush hain. Pehle bataana chahiye tha,” aur maa ne dheeme kaha, “Batane layak kuch khaas nahi tha.”
Woh vaakya mere sir mein tika kyunki jaanta tha batane layak usse bahut zyada hai jo pita kalpana kar sakein. Woh Vivek ko maa ke atit ka mitra dekhte the, nahi jaante the wahi purush hai jo unki pyari patni ko gupt chhod raha hai.
Kabhi, pita ke bolte, Vivek maa ki taraf dekhkar chhoti aankh maarta. Sirf tab jab pita bhatke hon.
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Maa turant nazar pher leti. Shuru mein chehra kas jaata jab aisa karta, jaise chetavani dena chahe anavashyak jokhim le raha hai.
Sach socha tha maa aakhir Vivek se nafrat karegi is sthiti mein daalne ke liye. Hamesha gambhirta se ijjat, vivah, prarthana aur rekha khinchne ki baat karti thi.
Par nafrat nahi ki. Yahi sabse zyada chakit kiya.
Ulte, dheere uski aadi ho gayi. Har pal nahi sochti thi, “Pati se vyabhichar kar rahi hoon,” kyunki sab ko chhote kaamon mein tod deti jo maaf karna aasan lage.
Sandesh sirf sandesh. Nazar sirf nazar, chai sirf chai, aur niji baatchit do purane mitron ki baat kahi ja sakti thi.
Kabhi-kabhi vivek ek saath laut aata. Ek baar rasoi ke kareeb dheeme Vivek se kaha, “Kabhi lagta hai yeh galat ho raha hai,” aur usne kaha, “Galat tab hua jab aangan mein mera ling choosne maana.”
Maa ghoori, “Isliye to rukna chahiye.” Vivek ne kaha, “Phir ruko,” par tarika chunauti jaisa tha kyunki dono jaante the pehle bhi doorii banane ki koshish ho chuki.
Lagbhag ek saptah sharirik kuch nahi hua. Na chumma, na chudai, na munh ka kaam, na aangan ka gupt pal, aur jab Vivek aata pita ke saamne lagbhag poora theek chalta.
Phir bhi chipak gayi nahi; sandeshon, nazron, intezaar aur niji baaton mein chali gayi.
Us dopahar woh savdhan doorii aakhir tooti. Pita baithak mein aaram se rajpatra padh rahe the, kabhi panna palatte lekh par kuch badbadaate, Vivek kareeb baitha tha aur maa bhojan leke bhojan-kaksh aur baithak ke beech chal rahi thi.
Maa ne Vivek ke saamne thali rakhi aur palat hi rahi thi ki usne nazar pakad li. Pita padhne mein poore doobe the, aur Vivek ne jaan-bujhkar chhoti aankh maari phir pal-bhar nazar us galeyare ki taraf ki jahan snaangrih tha.
Matlab mujhe bhi saaf tha. Waisi chup ishara jo kahe, “Wahan milo,” bina ek shabd ka jokhim liye.
Maa ne bhi turant samjha. Muskurane ke bajay aankh ghumayi, saaf chirchiraahat se, honth kase, palat gayi jaise soch rahi ho, “Tum itne gambhir nahi ho sakte.”
Vivek us pratikriya par lagbhag muskurane wala tha, par usi pal pita rajpatra se uthkar dekhe aur Vivek ne turant chehra badla. Galeyare ki taraf sahaj ishara karke kaha, “Snaangrih istemal karna hai,” aur pita ne bina shak haath hilaaya.
“Theek Vivek, wapas aana taaki aur baat ho,” pita ne kaha, aankhein pehle se rajpatra par utaarte. Vivek utha, galeyara chala, snaangrih ke dwar se aise gayab hua jaise isme koi ajeeb baat hi na ho.
Maa ne jaate dekha, par pehle us disha mein phir nahi dekha. Bhojan ke saath baithi, pita ke bagal khane lagi, thali par itni gambhirta se kendrit ki jaan-bujhkar laga.
Par dikha khane par sach-sach kendra nahi raha. Niwala leti, dheere chabati, thali dekhti, phir pal-bhar galeyare ki taraf jhaankti, khud ko pakadkar nazar pher leti.
Sir mein vivad chal raha tha. Ek hissa shayad soch raha, “Vivek ke peeche snaangrih nahi jaungi; pati yahin baithhe hain,” doosra poochhta kyun Vivek ne bulaane ki mehnat ki aur kya kehna chahta hai.
Ek aur niwala liya aur doordarshan-yantra ghoora bina dekhe.
Phir aankhein snaangrih ki taraf gayin, aur lagbhag socha ek aur vichaar aaya: “Agar jaun to Vivek ko phir protsahan. Agar rukungi to shayad nikalega khud se prasann.”
Phir khud se chirchi hui is soch par. Aasan par sarki, chamach par chawal liya, pita ko dekha, shayad yaad dilane ko pati kuch hi fut door baithhe dono par vishwas karte hue.
Isse faisla ho jana chahiye tha, hua nahi. Aur tees pal beete, maa ne phir galeyare ki taraf dekha.
Har baar chehre ka badlav dikha.
Ek aur chhota niwala khaya aur kuch der sochi. Kalpana ki khud se keh rahi, “Sirf jaakar kahungi aisa mat karo. Isliye nahi ja rahi ki usne maanga; chetavani dene ja rahi hoon.”
Yahi bahana aakhir sweekar kiya. Maa ne thali rakhi, ungliyan ponchin, khadi hui.
Pita ne rajpatra ke oopar se dekha, “Khatam?” Maa ne turant kaha, “Nahi, haath dho kar aur pani lati hoon,” us sahajta se jaise khade hone se pehle vyakhya taiyar thi.
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Pita ne sir hilaaya aur padhne lage. Maa ne mez se khali dhatu ka pyala uthaya taaki bahana aur pakka lage, aur mamuli chaal se galeyare gayi. Dekha bada nitamb chalte hilta.
Jaldi nahi ki, jo mujhe aur shak-bhari lagi. Jo sach-sach pani lene jaaye use itni mehnat nahi karni padti ki pani lene jaisi dikhe.
Snaangrih pahunchi to ek pal bahar ruki aur kandhe se baithak dekhi. Pita ka chehra abhi rajpatra ke peeche tha. Snaangrih ki taraf chalte peeche dekhti rahi.
Snaangrih ka dwar halka dhakela aur andar gayi. “Vivek?” Woh andar khada, uska wait karta.
Maa sirf itni ghusi ki baat ho sake aur turant bhaunhen tedi keen. “Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Buddhi chali gayi? Pati agle kamre mein baithhe hain.”
Vivek ne awaz giraayi, “Phir bhi tum aayi.” Maa khel-bhav se nahi, chirchiri lagii, “Aayi yeh kehne ki murkh mat bano, isliye nahi ki bulaya.”
“Phir kaho aur jao,” Vivek ne kaha. Maa ne bahen jakadin, phusphusaya, “Theek. Aankh mat maro, pati ke saamne ishare mat karo, aur yeh murkh sthitiyan mat banao.”
Vivek ne kuch pal dekha, “Dopahar bhar mujhe taal rahi ho.” Maa ne kaha, “Kyunki aise chalo to taalna hi chahiye.”
Dwar ki taraf palati, saaf irada nikalne ka. Vivek ne haath pakadkar galeyare mein kadam se pehle andar kheench liya, aur maa ne turant phusphusaya, “Vivek, ruko.”
Usne haath chhod diya, marzi ke khilaf nahi thaama, par koi hata nahi. Ek lambe pal saamne khade rahe, maa gusse dikhti, Vivek aisa jaise jaane uska gussa kisi aur se lad raha hai.
Phir Vivek jhuka aur chuma. Main andar se lagbhag hans pada kyunki maa poora rasta aisi dikhi jaise adhyapika kisi ko daantne ja rahi ho, par chumte hi jo bhashan riyaz kiya lagbhag gayab.
Chakit isse hua ki maa ne use hatane ki gambhir koshish bhi nahi ki. Haath pehle seene par rahe, lagbhag jaise rokegi, par rahi wahi aur kuch shant pal wapas chuma.
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Sthiti lagbhag hasya-janak thi. Pita sirf galeyare ke us paar rajpatra padh rahe the jab maa, jo pichhle paanch minat khud ko manati rahi sirf Vivek ko chetavani dene ja rahi hai, chetavani bhool chuki thi.
Vivek ne dono haath uske stanon par rakhe, phir mota nitamb pakda jab maa uski kamiz ka kinara thaame rahi. Uske hisse khel nahi tha; abhi dvandv dikha, jaise chumte hue bhi jaanti ho samay kitna galat hai.
Kuch pal baad maa ne achanak chumma toda. Sir snaangrih ke dwar ki taraf kiya aur suni.
Chehra bhav se savdhani mein badla. Dwar ki taraf thoda jhuki aur galeyare neeche dekha, jaanne ko pita ne notice kiya ya nahi woh zaroorat se der rahi.
Pita wahi the. Saamne rajpatra khula, aur jahan maa khadi thi shayad doosre panne ke palatne ki halki sarsarahat suni.
Maa ne saans chhodi aur Vivek ko dekha. “Yahi to na karne ko kaha tha,” phusphusaya.
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Vivek ne chhoti muskaan di, “Yeh bhi kaha tha yahan mujhe rokne aayi ho.” Maa ne bhaun tedhi keen, “Aayi thi.”
“Abhi yahan ho, mere haath tumhare bade nitamb par,” usne kaha. Maa chirchiraahat se dekhi kyunki jaanti thi iska koi achha uttar nahi.
Phusphusaya, “Pati baithak mein baithhe hain. Buddhi rakho.” Vivek ne kaha, “Itni buddhi hai jaanta hoon sach-sach chahti to abhi nikal jaati.”
Phir jab chhupa raha, pita ne mujhe bulaya, gussa aaya kyunki maa aur Chacha Vivek ka chumma dekhna jaari rakhna tha. Baithak gaya, unhone dekha aur pani lane ko bheja.
Pani laya aur jaldi wapas dekhne gaya. Pita ne parvah nahi ki, na poocha kahan ja raha hoon. Rajpatra padhte rahe. Jaise hi snaangrih jhaankne pahuncha, chakit hua maa ghutnon par Chacha Vivek ka vishal ling choos rahi thi.
Is baar poora munh mein sama gaya. Socha kaise manaya us pal pati ghar mein rajpatra padhte hue. Sach chakit tha yeh purush maa ko hamare hi ghar mein veshya bana raha hai.
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Awesome aur ekdum mast update dala aapne yaar
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Maa dabakar bolti rahi jab ling choosti rahi, “Tum hamesha sab kuch aasan bana dete ho,” aur Vivek ne kaha, “Kyunki kabhi-kabhi aasan hota hai. Dheere chooso meri pyari kulta...”
Phir usne phir sir pakda aur aur dhakela taaki poora ling nigal sake.
Is baar maa ne sirf pal-bhar hichkichaya, phir bhi ek haath jaanghon par rakha jaise kam-se-kam yeh bhram bana rahe ki jab chahe rok sakti hai.
Vivek ne chehre se khula baal hataaya aur dheeme kaha, “Tum mere baare mein sochti ho jab sochne se rokne ki koshish karti ho.” Maa ne ling chooste hue kaha, “Aham mat bano.”
“Yeh inkaar nahi tha, tum dheere meri kulta ban rahi ho,” usne kaha. Maa ne chetavani-bhari nazar di par choosti rahi.
Ek chhote pal Vivek ne sir jaghan ke kareeb thaama aur maa ne maathe ko uske jaghan se lagaaya.
Yeh uttejna se kam, us ajeeb parichay se zyada tha jo unke beech ban chuka tha, ehsaas ki guptata ne hi niji palon ko ghar ke sadharan niyamon se alag kar diya.
Phir vastav ek saath laut aaya. Woh nahi chahti thi Chacha Vivek munh mein gire. Maa jaldi uthi, ling munh se nikaala, turant seedhi hui aur phusphusayi, “Kaafi. Apni ashuddhata mere munh mein mat girao. Main pehle se bahut der ho chuki.”
Vivek kuch aur kehne laga, par maa ne haath uthaya. “Nahi. Tum ek minat aur yahin raho. Main pehle jaati hoon.”
Tab use yaad aaya woh khali pyala jo saath laya tha. Ek pal ghoora, lagbhag bhaybhit ki itni asani se wahi bahana bhool gayi jisne use galeyare tak laya.
Maa snaangrih se nikli, pehle rasoi gayi, pyala pani se bhara aur jaan-bujhkar ek ghoont liya. Phir baithak mein aisi chali jaise jiske saath bilkul kuch ajeeb na hua ho.
Par ek khaas chal hoti hai jab vyakti jaanta ho galat kiya aur achanak uske saamne khada ho jisse chhupa raha ho.
Har cheez ka bhaan ho jata hai—chehra, saans, haath kahan rakhe, kitni jaldi jawab de, even nazar hatana shak-bhara to nahi.
Maa zaroorat se zyada savdhani se baithi. Sadi ka kinara theek kiya, baal chhue, thali uthayi aur turant rakh di kyunki laga ek saath bahut kuch karna ghabrahat dikhega.
Phir bhojan liya aur doordarshan-yantra ghoorte chabane lagi. Pradarshan lagbhag manne layak tha, siway iske ki parde ko us ekagrata se dekh rahi thi jaise pariksha de rahi ho.
Pita ne kuch der baad rajpatra giraaya aur use dekha. “Der laga di,” kaha.
Maa ne turant dekha. “Kya?” poocha, bahut jaldi, phir sudharte hue, “Haath dhoye, phir pani yaad aaya, aur nal ke kareeb kuch cheezen sarkaani thin.”
Pita ne galeyare neeche dekha, “Aur Vivek? Woh tumse pehle snaangrih gaye.” Aadhe pal maa jaam hui.
Phir sambhali, “Jab guzri tab wahi the. Shayad itna khane ke baad pet satata ho.” Chhoti kandha-hilaayi, “Wapas aayein to poochhna; main kaise jaanun wahan kya kar rahe hain?”
Aakhiri vaakya lagbhag atyadhik raksha-bhari thi. Pita ne ek pal aur dekha, par khushkismati se shak se zyada vinod laga.
Ek minat aur baad Vivek lautaa. Maa ke ulta, chirchiraahat-bhari shanti se dikha.
Baithak aaya, asteen theek karta, “Kshama, ummeed se der ho gayi.” Pita hanse, “Patni pehle se bhojan par dosh daal rahi thi.”
Raat ko, pita sone ke baad maa Chacha Vivek ko sandesh bhejne lagi. Jaanta tha kyunki uska sandesh-yantra mere se joda tha, isliye jab uske khate par sandesh aate main baatchit ban-ti dekh sakta tha.
Riwaz anumanit ho gaya. Maa pita ke bagal leti, wait karti saans dheemi ho, kandhe se dekhti aankhein band hain ya nahi, phir doorbhash ki chamak giraakar likhti.
Kabhi har kuch sandesh ke baad rukti aur phir peeche dekhti. Woh jaanch dikhati thi samajhti hai chhupane layak kuch hai, chahe uska naam vishwasghat na le.
Phir pet ke bal palatti, doorbhash takiye ke kareeb rakhti, likhti rehti. Woh sthiti-badlav batata tha baatchit mein baith rahi hai, sirf ek-do uttar nahi de rahi.
Ek raat Vivek ne likha, “Tumhara pati kitna murkh hai, na chudai dikhi na ling choosna.” Maa ne kaha, “Unki aisi baat mat karo.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Sirf keh raha hoon vishwas karta hai jab main uski patni kha raha hoon.” Maa ne likha, “Isse tumhe ghamand nahi, burai mehsoos honi chahiye.”
Usne kaha, “Tum ho jo unke bagal sote hue mujhe likh rahi ho.” Maa likhna ruki, phir, “Jaanti hoon kahan hoon, Vivek.”
Usne likha, “Kya?” Maa ne kaha, “Haan, aur kabhi jo kar rahi hoon usse nafrat aati hai.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Nafrat tab tak jab tak sandesh band na karun.” Maa ne likha, “Yeh sach nahi.”
Usne kaha, “Phir doorbhash rakh do.” Maa kuch der nahi boli, par doorbhash bhi nahi rakha.
Tab samajhne laga kyun itni chipak rahi. Vivek guptata, dhyan, jokhim aur us ehsaas se jud gaya tha ki patni ki pehchaan ke bahar bhi chahiye jaati hai.
Maa ne varsh niyantrit, ijjatdar tarike se jeeyi. Vivek ke saath har paar ki rekha agli ko aasan karti kyunki ek cheez chhupaane ke baad doosri chhupana naya kshetra nahi lagta.
Yahi tarika tha jisse lagbhag nirlajj ho gayi bina nirlajj banne ka faisla kiye. Dohraav ne chot mandi ki, aur tark us chhavi ko bachata raha jo abhi khud ko achhi stree maanti thi.
Doosri raat Vivek ne likha, “Aaj mujhe lagbhag nahi dekha.” Maa ne kaha, “Pati wahan baithhe the.”
Usne kaha, “Yeh kabhi rok nahi paya ki notice karo.” Maa ne likha, “Tum atyadhik vishwasi ho rahe ho.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Kyunki shuru se unhe bhola diya.” Maa ne turant kaha, “Yeh mat kaho.”
Woh jaari raha, “Sochta hai chai aur baatchit ke anand ke liye aata hoon.” Maa ne likha, “Unhone ijjat di. Kam-se-kam uski ijjat karo.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Karta hoon. Keh raha hoon unhe pata nahi kya ho raha.”
Maa ne likha, “Yeh ghamand ki baat nahi.” Vivek ne kaha, “Na yeh ki jawab se pehle dekhna woh soye hain.”
Phir ruki. Phir likha, “Tum hamesha sab ko usse bura bana dete ho jitna hai.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Nahi. Sirf woh khulkar kehta hoon jiska naam tum nahi lena chahti.”
Ek aur baatchit thi jisse maa ka badlav aur saaf hua. Vivek ne poocha sab kuch khatam karne socha ya nahi, maa ne kaha, “Kai baar.”
Usne kaha, “Par karti nahi.” Maa ne likha, “Shayad kyunki jab rukne ka faisla karti ho tum phir aa jaate ho.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Aata hoon kyunki uttar deti ho.” Maa ne kaha, “Aur agar dena band karun?”
Usne likha, “Do din tikogi.” Maa ne kaha, “Sochte ho mujhe bahut jaante ho.”
Aadhi-raat ke kareeb Vivek ne achanak likha, “Snaangrih jao. Kuch kehna hai.” Maa ne kaha, “Nahi.”
Usne kaha, “Jao.” Maa ne likha, “Pati bagal soye hain. Bina kaaran nahi uthungi.”
Vivek ne kaha, “Phir kaho niji baat nahi karni.” Maa ne likha, “Pehle se niji baat kar rahi hoon.”
Usne kaha, “Theek se nahi. Har tees pal peeche dekhti ho.” Maa ne kaha, “Kyunki bagal pati soye hain, Vivek.”
Usne likha, “Yahi to. Kisi jagah jao jahan kandhe se dekhna band ho.”
Kai minat kuch nahi hua. Phir dekha maa ne pita ko ek baar aur dekha, dheere uth baithi, suni jaanne ko jaage to nahi.
Kuch pal wahi rahi, jaise aakhiri hissa abhi kehta palang par raho. Phir uthi, doorbhash saath liya, aur dheeme snaangrih chali.
Yeh pal uske badlav ko kisi bhashan se behtar samjhaata tha. Maa abhi jaanti thi naitik rekha kahan hai, par jaanna ab us rekha ko paar rokne ke liye kaafi nahi raha.
Snaangrih pahunchi aur dwar dheeme band kiya. Kai minat sirf khadi rahi doorbhash haath mein, ek uttejna liye jo khud ko bhi theek se nahi samjha sakti thi.
Darpan mein khud ko dekha aur phusphusayi, “Main kar kya rahi hoon?” Uljhan yeh thi ki vivek-wale uttar pehle se jaanti thi—doorbhash rakh do aur palang laut jao—phir bhi jab naya sandesh aaya turant patal dekhi.
Vivek ne likha, “Baith jao,” aur maa ne sandesh par bhaun tedhi karke likha, “Kahan?” Usne kaha, “Shauchalay ki baithak par,” aur maa ne pal-bhar patal ghoora, “Ab niyam kyun de rahe ho?”
Vivek ne kaha, “Kyunki khadi ho pati ke jagne ki chinta karti.” Maa ne likha, “Zaroor chinta hai. Bees fut door soye hain.”
“Phir baitho aur idhar-udhar mat chalo,” Vivek ne likha, aur maa ne aankh ghumayi, par ajeeb yeh ki baad mein shauchalay ki baithak dekhi. Likha, “Tumhare hukum se nahi baithungi,” Vivek ne kaha, “Theek. Isliye baitho ki tum chahti ho.”
Maa hichkichayi phir band dhakkan par baith gayi. Main lagbhag hans pada kyunki kai sandesh itni chhoti baat par vivad kiye phir wahi kiya jo usne kaha.
Vivek ko turant laga aur likha, “Baith gayi, na?” Maa ne kaha, “Shayad,” Vivek ne kaha, “Hamesha ziddi ho jaati ho jab jaanti ho main sahi hoon.”
“Ziddi isliye hoon ki tum satate ho,” maa ne likha. “Farq hai.”
Phir Vivek ne vishay badla, “Yaad hai aakhiri baar tumhari yoni chhodi?” Maa hili nahi aur is sandesh ko doosron se lambi der dekha.
Aakhir likha, “Shuru mat karo.” Vivek ne kaha, “Matlab yaad hai,” maa ne kaha, “Zahir hai yaad hai. Iska matlab nahi iski baat karo.”
“Kyun?” Vivek ne poocha. “Kyunki achha laga?”
Maa ki ungliyan doorbhash par ruki, phir likha, “Kyunki jaante ho aisi baat karke kya kar rahe ho.” Vivek ne kaha, “Yaad hai kitni jaldi anand mein karahi,” maa ne kaha, “Yeh baatchit ab band karo...”
Usne likha, “Hamesha dikhati ho jaise sakht yoni kamzor jagah nahi.” Maa ne turant kaha, “Koi kamzor jagah nahi,” Vivek ne kaha, “Phir use chhu kyun rahi ho?”
Woh sandesh sach mein chakit kar gaya. Maa ne neeche dekha aur paya padhte hue anjaane ek haath yoni ke bagal le aayi thi, jaldi uthaya aur doorbhash ghoora jaise Vivek deewar paar dekh sake.
Is hasya-janakta par dheeme hansa. Pita shaanti se soye the jab maa satae snaangrih mein doosre purush se moh-baat karti yoni chhuti.
Maa ne likha, “Kuch nahi chhu rahi thi,” Vivek ne kaha, “Ab chhu rahi ho.” Lagbhag lagaa use galat sabit karne ko zidd hai, par kuch pal baad ungliyan phir yoni par aayin. Raatri vastr bhi utar diya.
Yoni ke bagal anman se malte hue padhti rahi. Vivek ne likha, “Jab iske baare mein sochti ho hamesha yahi karti ho,” maa ne kaha, “Aise mat chalo jaise meri har baat jaante ho.”
“Sab nahi jaanta,” usne kaha. “Sirf jaanta hoon kis se vivad rukta hai. Sun raha hoon saans tez hai.”
Maa ne likha, “Kuch nahi rokta tumse vivad.” Vivek ne kaha, “Tumhari yoni rokti hai.”
Maa ne pal-bhar chehra ek haath se dhaka aur likha, “Tum asambhav ho.” Phir naya sandesh aaya: “Main bahar hoon.”
Maa ghoori aur turant likha, “Bahar kahan?” Vivek ne kaha, “Snaangrih.”
Maa itni jaldi uthi ki doorbhash girane wali thi. Likha, “Vivek, mazak band karo,” usne kaha, “Mazak nahi.”
Kuch pal sirf suni. Ghar lagbhag shant tha siway pankhe ki dheemi awaz aur shayankaksh ki kabhi-kabhi sarak.
Maa snaangrih ki khidki ki taraf bahut dheeme gayi aur kundi par haath rakha. Hichkichayi, phir sirf kuch ungal kholi.
Aankhein phailin kyunki Vivek sach-sach khada tha, safed banian aur kaali chhoti patloon pehne jaise jaldbazi mein bina theek kapde pehne bahar nikal aaya ho.
Maa ne dwar aur khola aur phusphusaya, “Buddhi poori chali gayi? Mukhya dwar jao. Hato! Koi dekh le.” Phir Chacha Vivek mukhya dwar gaye. Maa jaldi daudi dwar kholne.
Vivek muskuraya, “Tumhe bhi namaste.” Maa ne phusphusaya, “Yahan kya kar rahe ho? Aadhi raat hai.”
“Kaha tha theek se baat nahi ho paati,” usne kaha. Maa ghoori, “Yeh nahi kaha tha mere ghar aao!”
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