[Sheuli Mala]

Chamatkar,blockbuster, bahut khoob.

[Monika.]

Zabardast aur jhakkas update. Ekdum mind blowing writing.

[Black Diamond]

Really extraordinary, outstanding and absolutely amazing writing. Your writing is worthy of reading again and again. Thanks a lot buddy.

[GoldenEye007]

Hot, erotic, exciting and enticing update!

[Jannat.]

wah! bahut hi garam aur behad hi erotic update!

[Isra Khan]

bahut badhiya aur bahut hi mast update

[Jarintasnim]

Vah vah vah bahut hi hot aur romance wala erotic update hai ye. Bahut hi maja aya yaar.
Aap ne bahut mast likha hai, bahut bahut maza aya padhke

[Priyankasharma]

Top class aur ekdom mast update

[Rattler]

Wow bro, superb.... too erotic an update it is really enjoyed the read, this was awaited with great eagerness indeed....

[Kacchi Kali]

Ekdum pagal kar diya aapne yaar. Ops! Kiya likhte hai aapne yaar! Ekdum lajawab aur mast. agla update ki liye besabree se intezar.

[Runa Laila.]

yaar aap ki lekhni ka kia kehna. Koyi jawaab hi nahin. Kamaal hai kamaal. Itni hot, itna sexy, itna erotic k mere paas shabd nahin hai k main kia kahun. Bhut bhut hi maja aya yaar

[3XXX]

 Bhut hi majedaar aur lajatdaar update hai ye. Samaan khada k khada reh gaya akhir tak. 

[Nusratfaria]

 Aap best ho yaar haan maanna padega k aap best of the best ho.

[Divya Shetty]

Awesome and stunning update
behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing writings

[Jamsbond]

fabulous hot erotica  

[Brutal Hunk]

"Bade hain?"
"Barson se... barson se mere yeh ubhaar pyaase tadap rahe the Vishal... tumhare in nirdayi haathon ne aaj inhein phir se zinda kar diya..."
"Haan Vishal... tumhare hain... tarsao mat mujhe... jo karna hai karo inke saath... "
"Sabr karo..."
"sabr ka phal... bahut meetha hota hai."
"Wahi to mein bhi chaahti hoon..."
"Mein bhi utni hi pyaasi hoon Vishal, jitne tum ho... shaam ko annexe mein poora hisaab-kitaab baraabar karenge."

The above-mentioned confession from Ayesha's subconscious mind is really surprising, insulting, humiliating, embarrassing but also unwanted and forbidden sexual pleasure and excitement for Sahil.
You are really a genius and brilliant writer to know very well how to make this story extremely hot erotic by adding such kinds of conversations. Please let Vishal to compel Ayesha to confess more such kinds of her subconscious mind's sexual fantasies.

Completely Agree ?

[BlackHorse]

Your brilliant and sophisticated writing has made this fantastic story extremely hot and erotic. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

[Rajeshawari Singha]

Fantastic fabulous superb update

[वफादार माँ]

Fantastic fabulous superb update:

[SSM18]

Thanks for all your comments, likes, and ratings. I am reading them, but I can't respond to all of them because it would make this thread too long and take time away from my writing. But rest assured, I do read your comments and emails. working on next update , maybe will be ready by weekend .

Waiting