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Bro if you dont like the stroy please dont read at all, dont discourage writers its my humble request.
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Firstly, i have all rites to tell my comments...
Secondly i am not a legend or intellectual tat my comments can create hatrid for others towards the story...
Usually i use to msg my feedback to concern author... But today felt to say because I feel author have even chance right now to rectify his mistake because he has not deep dived into the story till nw....
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16-09-2026, 11:36 AM
(This post was last modified: 16-09-2026, 11:37 AM by Waseem990. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
agar tujhe nahi padna Hai to na par faltu ka bakwaas kar raha hai
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story is good, narrative is also good, pls continue.
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My sincere request. As all fingers are not same even some liked the story some may not. Even every author ask for honest review. For some comments let author decide to reply. I want to share my thoughts if hurts someone sincere ? sorry
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It's not unrealistic uma because everyone is different some women fall in a week some fall in a month it's not the same for all women
Let's just spread positivity
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Guys, I know this story also has some voyeuristic elements, and I understand that some parts may not feel completely realistic or logical.
This story was actually written a long time ago, and I recently found it again. I didn't want all the time and effort I had put into it to go to waste, so I decided to post it here.
At that time, I had read a Tamil story with a similar concept, which inspired me to write my own version in English. That's basically how this story started.
So I already know that this story may not follow perfect realism in every situation, and some parts may feel illogical to some readers. I'm simply posting it now because it is an old story that I had already written.
That's all, guys. Thanks for understanding and, most importantly, thanks for all the support. ❤️
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16-09-2026, 06:40 PM
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Wonderful update bhai..
Good to see you in another story and waiting for mom's village update too...
Its okay even in cinema extraordinary and unbelievable things happening.. its just a story
I read your all story.. one word to say your one of the best you just go with realistic but not super-realistic
And this is something different and good to read
the way you describe her face, neck, nighties which she wore hottest
You Make her a slut if you want.. but not make her to sleep with her son or everyone
Even though I personally believe your writing skill.
And I have seen it mom's village story..
Waiting for update in this story too
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learn to differentiate real wold vs reel word first!
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Next update when the story is wholesome
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16-09-2026, 10:05 PM
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Guys, as I mentioned earlier, this story was one of my first attempts at writing. So please don't expect perfect logic, realism, or a very well-developed storyline in every part.
I originally wrote this story mainly as an adult fantasy/entertainment story, rather than as a slow and steady, realistic story with a lot of character development.
I know that in reality, conservative Indian mothers would not easily get influenced or seduced by someone, and I understand why some readers may feel that certain parts of the story are unrealistic.
But as I mentioned earlier, this story is actually a remake inspired by a Tamil story I had read at that time. I was mainly taking that basic story and rewriting it in English. That's why some situations may not feel completely realistic or logical.
So please read it with that in mind and don't expect too much realism or logic from this particular story. ?
Thanks for understanding and for continuing to support the story. And if anyone has been uncomfortable or upset because of anything in the story, please feel free to contact me.
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(17-09-2026, 02:57 AM)Lousy1995 Wrote: Guys, as I mentioned earlier, this story was one of my first attempts at writing. So please don't expect perfect logic, realism, or a very well-developed storyline in every part.
I originally wrote this story mainly as an adult fantasy/entertainment story, rather than as a slow and steady, realistic story with a lot of character development.
I know that in reality, conservative Indian mothers would not easily get influenced or seduced by someone, and I understand why some readers may feel that certain parts of the story are unrealistic.
But as I mentioned earlier, this story is actually a remake inspired by a Tamil story I had read at that time. I was mainly taking that basic story and rewriting it in English. That's why some situations may not feel completely realistic or logical.
So please read it with that in mind and don't expect too much realism or logic from this particular story. ?
Thanks for understanding and for continuing to support the story. And if anyone has been uncomfortable or upset because of anything in the story, please feel free to contact me.
Ok... Thanks for setting expectation...
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Make it slow and create a love story between madhu and gautham
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Good story. Make her son cuck as you intented. Please update regular.
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Bro fantastic story kindly give us regular updates.?
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